Need Improvement II

[Vision]

R&R
Unofficial Spar
All out
No stealing of any kind
No Sub/Kai
Mid Range
Open grassy field, nothing surrounding the area, no water source
Saeko In Sig
Post bio and you start
Open


Note: My last Improvement spar was really nice. Was a lot of fun and replied to each others moves promptly. That is what I'm looking for and have msn ready to explain each others moves when needed. If you are going to just post a few moves and take days to reply don't bother replying to this thread. Thanks.
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[Gutsy]

Bio:

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Here you go Vision who starts?

 

[Vision]

Chaning the rules from All out to No CJ/CE/CW/CFS

You go first.


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[Gutsy]

(Conversation/speech does not interupt in time frame)

Azami: "Hello.... are you ready to fight..."

*As I see I pull out two scrolls which I put on the ground and i then place one hand on each summoning two tigers made of fire which quickly sprints towards you wrapping around you and exploding on impact*

Spoiler

(Katon Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hitora Bakufu) - Fire Release Summoning Technique: Fire Tiger Explosion
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user summons a tiger made of flames from a scroll, directing it towards the target, and attaching itself onto the target and explode causing massive damage on detonation making it similar to a paper bomb.

x2

*Right as the tigers are moving towards you, I slam my hand into the ground release a small earthquake throwing you off balance at the time where the tigers jump to attack you*

Spoiler

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

 

[Vision]

(Conversation/speech does not interupt in time frame)

Azami: "Hello.... are you ready to fight..."

*As I see I pull out two scrolls which I put on the ground and i then place one hand on each summoning two tigers made of fire which quickly sprints towards you wrapping around you and exploding on impact*

Spoiler

(Katon Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hitora Bakufu) - Fire Release Summoning Technique: Fire Tiger Explosion
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user summons a tiger made of flames from a scroll, directing it towards the target, and attaching itself onto the target and explode causing massive damage on detonation making it similar to a paper bomb.

x2

*Right as the tigers are moving towards you, I slam my hand into the ground release a small earthquake throwing you off balance at the time where the tigers jump to attack you*

Spoiler

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

Saeko: Silly rabbit, tricks are for kids!

Soon as saeko see's the scroll pulled out, she immediatly brace for an attack. Once the fire dragon emerge, Saeko quickly performs a single hand seal and shoots out a wave of flames towards the dragon which meets in the middle.

Spoiler

(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.

Soon as the flames are released, Saeko release a highly pressurized wind behind the fire to cope with what appears to be another fire dragon headed straight for her.

Spoiler

(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.

All combined so that the fire itself englufs the dragon and as my combination jutsu is wide and high, you would still need to defend from some of the fire that is headed your way.

Then I quickly move my location, just because I want to move location and stay within mid range from you

Spoiler

(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

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[Gutsy]

Saeko: Silly rabbit, tricks are for kids!

Soon as saeko see's the scroll pulled out, she immediatly brace for an attack. Once the fire dragon emerge, Saeko quickly performs a single hand seal and shoots out a wave of flames towards the dragon which meets in the middle.

Spoiler

(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.

Soon as the flames are released, Saeko release a highly pressurized wind behind the fire to cope with what appears to be another fire dragon headed straight for her.

Spoiler

(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.

All combined so that the fire itself englufs the dragon and as my combination jutsu is wide and high, you would still need to defend from some of the fire that is headed your way.

Then I quickly move my location, just because I want to move location and stay within mid range from you

Spoiler

(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

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Azami: "These are no tricks... sweetie..."

*As the Fire Annihilation is coming towards me, I exhale a huge fireball after performing a single handseal, this fireball will stop your weakened fire and still travel in a weakened state towards you as it will explode into a maelstrome of fire upon impact*

Spoiler

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.

*As the fire is on it's way towards you, I notice your exact position as I perform another set of hand seals, where as I slam my hand into the ground where as I form two gigantic sections of earth which wil then crush you from two sides*

Spoiler

(Doton: Ganban Kyu) - Earth Release: Bedrock Coffin
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Rat hand seal, the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.

*While this is happening, I stand beside my Ninken watching everything happening*

 

[Vision]

Azami: "These are no tricks... sweetie..."

*As the Fire Annihilation is coming towards me, I exhale a huge fireball after performing a single handseal, this fireball will stop your weakened fire and still travel in a weakened state towards you as it will explode into a maelstrome of fire upon impact*

Spoiler

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.

*As the fire is on it's way towards you, I notice your exact position as I perform another set of hand seals, where as I slam my hand into the ground where as I form two gigantic sections of earth which wil then crush you from two sides*

Spoiler

(Doton: Ganban Kyu) - Earth Release: Bedrock Coffin
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Rat hand seal, the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.

*While this is happening, I stand beside my Ninken watching everything happening*

As I land from moving out of my previous location, I notice you counter the fire that you really didn't have to counter with anotehr fire towards an empty area.

Saeko: Really???

Then I notice the earth beneath me trembling a little bit and then 2 rocks form, then suddenly as it is about to trap and kill me I release lightning on the ground and break apart the rocks as they are headed towads me.

Spoiler

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

I then make sure I don't lose track of you.

Spoiler

(Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someones chakra. Using these technique sensors can tell when the enemy is approaching and can easily track down targets. (Techniques activation lasts 5 turns)
Note: Can only be used by bio with sensory ability

Saeko: Again!

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[Gutsy]

As I land from moving out of my previous location, I notice you counter the fire that you really didn't have to counter with anotehr fire towards an empty area.

Saeko: Really???

Then I notice the earth beneath me trembling a little bit and then 2 rocks form, then suddenly as it is about to trap and kill me I release lightning on the ground and break apart the rocks as they are headed towads me.

Spoiler

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

I then make sure I don't lose track of you.

Spoiler

(Chakra Henkanshi no Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the ability to feel chakra. The technique allows the user to concentrate and detect someones chakra. Using these technique sensors can tell when the enemy is approaching and can easily track down targets. (Techniques activation lasts 5 turns)
Note: Can only be used by bio with sensory ability

Saeko: Again!

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Azami: "Alright let's see how this works...."

*Azami throws a smoke bomb on the ground as she creates a single clone next to her, and while they are standing in the smoke the real Azami transforms into an exact copy of her Ninken*

Spoiler

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

*As you would have a hard time knowing which one is the real Ninken and probably think the real one was the one in the smoke which simply stands back, waiting for your move, while the two Ninken jumps into to attack you one Ninken (Azami) jumps first front with her teeth and claws straight towards your chest, while the real Ninken jumps over Azami and attacks your head simultaniously*

 

[Vision]

Azami: "Alright let's see how this works...."

*Azami throws a smoke bomb on the ground as she creates a single clone next to her, and while they are standing in the smoke the real Azami transforms into an exact copy of her Ninken*

Spoiler

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

*As you would have a hard time knowing which one is the real Ninken and probably think the real one was the one in the smoke which simply stands back, waiting for your move, while the two Ninken jumps into to attack you one Ninken (Azami) jumps first front with her teeth and claws straight towards your chest, while the real Ninken jumps over Azami and attacks your head simultaniously*

As I am able to cosntantly sense you and notice your chakra level, I also see you throw down the smoke bomb. Then I visually see that there are two dogs and what appears to be you. However I can sense your actual chakra into a dog. Also no chakra levels are present in the form of you and the other dog's chakra levels are quite different than yours. Which figures I know which one you are. However you both are attacking me and I completly ignore the clone thats standing behind you. As you jump towards me, I notice the fire that was created earlier. As the smoke is created off of that through my fire jutsu, I can freely manipulate the smoke as I wish. In your mid flight or movement towards me, I manipulate the smoke to come over from the side and grab the both of you and binding you in place.

Spoiler

(Enmaku Rō no Jutsu) - Binding Smoke Prison Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user can manipulate their smoke to wrap around the opponent with a minimal level of physical power and prevent them from moving.
Note: Can only be used by a smoke user.

Once done so and your bound, I start to let you down on the ground slowly however soon as you are near the ground I make pillars to shoot out from underneath you, launching you and your dog next to your clone. Then the clone disappears as well as you returning to your real form.

Spoiler

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

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[Gutsy]

As I am able to cosntantly sense you and notice your chakra level, I also see you throw down the smoke bomb. Then I visually see that there are two dogs and what appears to be you. However I can sense your actual chakra into a dog. Also no chakra levels are present in the form of you and the other dog's chakra levels are quite different than yours. Which figures I know which one you are. However you both are attacking me and I completly ignore the clone thats standing behind you. As you jump towards me, I notice the fire that was created earlier. As the smoke is created off of that through my fire jutsu, I can freely manipulate the smoke as I wish. In your mid flight or movement towards me, I manipulate the smoke to come over from the side and grab the both of you and binding you in place.

Spoiler

(Enmaku Rō no Jutsu) - Binding Smoke Prison Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user can manipulate their smoke to wrap around the opponent with a minimal level of physical power and prevent them from moving.
Note: Can only be used by a smoke user.

Once done so and your bound, I start to let you down on the ground slowly however soon as you are near the ground I make pillars to shoot out from underneath you, launching you and your dog next to your clone. Then the clone disappears as well as you returning to your real form.

Spoiler

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

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Azami: "Damn you.... I will beat you...."

*I slowly stand up again looking at you closely while examining your stance and now that I know your capable of manipulating smoke and as I am in mid range from you still, I stand beside my Ninken again. I create a sword of Water in my left hand as I look at you for a second*

Spoiler

(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.

*Right as the sword is forming on my arm, I jump onto my Ninken and then he sprints towards you at high speed, and as my Ninken jumps forward to slash you down with his claws, I jump off and make a front flip over you while slashing downwards with my water blade upon you, and as I land facing your back, I gather wind chakra into my right hand as I create blades of wind which i send towards you in a rapid motion*

Spoiler

(Fūton: Jūha Shō) - Wind Release: Beast Wave Strike
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A powerful technique of wind nature chakra that can cut and slash through any material. The user activates it by summoning chakra in his right hand, and then swipes a slicing chakra wave which appears to be controlled by the users will and thoughts. They are also able to use the technique in a rapid-fire, successive motion creating up to three cresent blades of wind.

 

[Vision]

Azami: "Damn you.... I will beat you...."

*I slowly stand up again looking at you closely while examining your stance and now that I know your capable of manipulating smoke and as I am in mid range from you still, I stand beside my Ninken again. I create a sword of Water in my left hand as I look at you for a second*

Spoiler

(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.

*Right as the sword is forming on my arm, I jump onto my Ninken and then he sprints towards you at high speed, and as my Ninken jumps forward to slash you down with his claws, I jump off and make a front flip over you while slashing downwards with my water blade upon you, and as I land facing your back, I gather wind chakra into my right hand as I create blades of wind which i send towards you in a rapid motion*

Spoiler

(Fūton: Jūha Shō) - Wind Release: Beast Wave Strike
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A powerful technique of wind nature chakra that can cut and slash through any material. The user activates it by summoning chakra in his right hand, and then swipes a slicing chakra wave which appears to be controlled by the users will and thoughts. They are also able to use the technique in a rapid-fire, successive motion creating up to three cresent blades of wind.

As I can sense what is going on within your chakra levels and concentrating on water, I notice that your making a blade made of water. Then I quickly release some lightning bolts aimed towards your water sword before it's fully materializes. Thus as your hold the water in your hands it would shock and some what paralize you. Not long though as it's only a jolt of lighting. But enough so that you can't perform the moves that you said you did.

Spoiler

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

Saeko: AGAIN!

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[Gutsy]

As I can sense what is going on within your chakra levels and concentrating on water, I notice that your making a blade made of water. Then I quickly release some lightning bolts aimed towards your water sword before it's fully materializes. Thus as your hold the water in your hands it would shock and some what paralize you. Not long though as it's only a jolt of lighting. But enough so that you can't perform the moves that you said you did.

Spoiler

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

Saeko: AGAIN!

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Azami: "ARGH!!!"

*As I'm paralyzed for a moment, I pull out my Katana holding it in my right hand, as I begin to sprint towards you while releasing wind based chakra into my katana making it even stronger while I sprint towards you prepared to fight you my Ninken runs by my side*

Azami: "Your annoying me!!"

*As I say this, I run in to slash you across the chest while my Ninken jumps over me to bite your head and smash you into the ground*

 

[Vision]

Azami: "ARGH!!!"

*As I'm paralyzed for a moment, I pull out my Katana holding it in my right hand, as I begin to sprint towards you while releasing wind based chakra into my katana making it even stronger while I sprint towards you prepared to fight you my Ninken runs by my side*

Azami: "Your annoying me!!"

*As I say this, I run in to slash you across the chest while my Ninken jumps over me to bite your head and smash you into the ground*

As you get back and start running at me, I notice the movements of you are your so called pet. As I sense that your dog is jumping, I quickly calculate where he will be. I stand still until he jumps then in one swift motion, I throw my Katana at his direction aimed around the neck. With his momentum and my katana's force, he will not have time to react, thus he will be impaled by the katana. However I never forget my real foe. As I threw the katana, chakra was applied to my feet. Thus as releasing the katana I have also dashed towards you direction. However before we meet and your dog still in the air, I create a pillar from the ground launching myself over you. Grabbing my katana from the dog and do front flips until we are back at mid range. Then I turn and look at you while the dog is bleeding and dying next to you.

Spoiler

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

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