Need help with chorus

[NaruAwesome]

so far this is my chorus to my song but i can't think of what to add now

CAUSE I STILL LOVE U

AND I DON’T KNOW WHAT I’LL DO

WE CAN BE ROMEO AND JUILET

TEENS IN LOVE, WITHOUT A CLUE or teens in love, (JUST ME AND U )


tHE LOVE THAT WE HAD
IS THE TYPE THAT WILL ALWAYS LAST
CAUSE like ROMEO AND JUILET
We will love each other to the end

ohhhh.....

we'll love each other until the end

keep loving each other to the end

 

[wridacule]

we should kill ourselves togetheeeeeerrrrrrrr xd

 

[Legendfox]

hmm pretty nice what genre does this fall in? I'm thinking of a line I write songs myself

 

[markdabomb22]

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[Gobi Bryant]

Our love will last forever.

It is pretty basic but if the the song is sung like i think it is in my head with a vocalist then just have them break down the line and hold forever alittle

 

[Legendfox]

try "we need each other really bad" I listen to a lot of genres but since you wrote this in cap locks I couldn't help but picture screaming vocals lol

 

[NaruAwesome]

hmm pretty nice what genre does this fall in? I'm thinking of a line I write songs myself

kinda pop and rap

 

[NaruAwesome]

try "we need each other really bad" I listen to a lot of genres but since you wrote this in cap locks I couldn't help but picture screaming vocals lol

well, pretend like its not being screamed

 

[LEGENDARY NINJA]

u can go kill urself
and i'll just watch u
i dont even giv a dam
even kill ur mutha 2

 

[NaruAwesome]

u can go kill urself
and i'll just watch u
i dont even giv a dam
even kill ur mutha 2

you're such a troll that there is no point in giving u - rep.

 

[Legendfox]

how about this then,
tHE LOVE THAT WE HAD
IS THE TYPE THAT WILL ALWAYS LAST
CAUSE like ROMEO AND JUILET
We will love each other to the end

sounds good and goes with the lyrics

 

[NaruAwesome]

how about this then,
tHE LOVE THAT WE HAD
IS THE TYPE THAT WILL ALWAYS LAST
CAUSE like ROMEO AND JUILET
We will love each other to the end

sounds good and goes with the lyrics

awesome bro, thx

 

[NarutoFactoid]

so far this is my chorus to my song but i can't think of the last line to finish it

CAUSE I STILL LOVE U

AND I DON’T KNOW WHAT I’LL DO

WE CAN BE ROMEO AND JUILET

TEENS IN LOVE, WITHOUT A CLUE or teens in love, (JUST ME AND U )


tHE LOVE THAT WE HAD
IS THE TYPE THAT WILL ALWAYS LAST
CAUSE like ROMEO AND JUILET

You need a song. You try to write
At this rate it'll take all night
I'll break this down and make it simple
Teens in love, lets pop a pimple.
Without a clue? You ask for help?
That sounds true enough ya little whelp.

These days its crappy if you can't write your own song
You gonna give me the rights or do me wrong

Romeo and juliet. I agree with the guy above.
Go kill yourselves or least make some love.

-fin

 

[Legendfox]

so far this is my chorus to my song but i can't think of what to add now

CAUSE I STILL LOVE U

AND I DON’T KNOW WHAT I’LL DO

WE CAN BE ROMEO AND JUILET

TEENS IN LOVE, WITHOUT A CLUE or teens in love, (JUST ME AND U )


tHE LOVE THAT WE HAD
IS THE TYPE THAT WILL ALWAYS LAST
CAUSE like ROMEO AND JUILET
We will love each other to the end

ohhhh.....

we'll love each other until the end

keep loving each other to the end

There ya go haha XD