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My Sonnet so far

A. There was a king far away called Lemon King
B. He was the richest man in town
A. He had a party and had a lot of bling
B. Until one day the government tracked him down

C. All the people in town began to look shock
D.
C.
D.

E.
F.
E.
F.

G.
G.


Got any ideas?
 

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. There was a king far away called Lemon King
B. He was the richest man in town
A. He had a party and had a lot of bling
B. Until one day the government tracked him down

C. All the people in town began to look shock
D.Even the kids and animals were sad
C.The Lemon King was behind a lock
D.In the end it turns out he was bad

E. Then a new king came to town
F. far more awesome and rich
E. and told people to shut up and eat this round jk ( He was big, fat and some what round)
F.He was a father and brother to king Lich

G.balls
G. idk


lmao
 
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. There was a king far away called Lemon King
B. He was the richest man in town
A. He had a party and had a lot of bling
B. Until one day the government tracked him down

C. All the people in town began to look shock
D.Even the kids and animals were sad
C.The Lemon King was behind a lock
D.In the end it turns out he was bad

E. Then a new king came to town
F. far more awesome and rich
E. and told people to shut up and eat this round jk ( He was big, fat and some what round)
F.He was a father and brother to king Lich

G.balls
G. idk


lmao

Hmm thats one nice Im just trying to make it funny :p
 

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Need help on Sonnet
My Sonnet so far

A. There was a king far away called Lemon King
B. He was the richest man in town
A. He had a party and had a lot of bling
B. Until one day the government tracked him down

C. All the people in town began to look shock
D. As they took him away
C. Until he returned, they watched the clock
D. They did this every day

E. But as it went on, it began to seem
F. That the guy won't return
E. They thought upon their dreams
F. But away, these slowly burned

G. The King unhappy with jail, began to make a spectacle
G. He sat in his cell and screamed
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Need help on Sonnet
My Sonnet so far

A. There was a king far away called Lemon King
B. He was the richest man in town
A. He had a party and had a lot of bling
B. Until one day the government tracked him down

C. All the people in town began to look shock
D. As they took him away
C. Until he returned, they watched the clock
D. They did this every day

E. But as it went on, it began to seem
F. That the guy won't return
E. They thought upon their dreams
F. But away, these slowly burned

G. The King unhappy with jail, began to make a spectacle
G. He sat in his cell and screamed
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wow that is awesome
 
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