Naruto's Dimensional Children

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Naruto's Dimensional Children

Chapter 1

Inoruto Namikaze

In the Land of the Fire there is a village named Konoha but in this village is a blonde girl that loves flowers almost as her fashion. She'd guess it's in her genes since her clan owns the Yamanaka's Flower Shop. After Inoichi told her to get some flowers from a place that's is close to the Apartment complex before the villagers ruined it again. Ino was about to asked why would villagers destroy someone's hard work in the garden but when she'd saw her dad's stared. Ino knows what that stare means. It means your'll find out there and get your behind out the door now. So Ino grabbed a weaved wood basket to put the flowers in her family store.

At one of the run down apartments she'd finds a 50 Purple Roses, 80 Green Roses, 200 Red Roses, 100 White Roses, 8 Yellow Roses, 40 Orange Roses , one Black rose, Ten Brown roses and 6 Blue Roses underneath a Cherry Blossom tree by a river. So she went to gather them just as her father told her to do so but she'd heard some one crying owing from the other side of the tree. She'd only could see a part of a blonde hair. Ino drop her basket and ran over to the person who was crying. When she got to the other side of the tree she'd was shocked to see the Konoha's loud mouth, hyperactive and unpredictable ninja. Naruto Uzumaki crying his soul and heart out.

Ino went over and sat next to Naruto. For couple of moments passed by before Ino asked, "Naruto what's wrong?" Naruto stuttered, "Sasuke killed Sakura. In returned I'd killed him. I'd have no team and no girl to love. I'm also thinking of gave up on my dream of becoming Hokage." That last part shocked Ino to her heart. Ino said, "That's was your dream since Academy days." Naruto replied, "It's wasn't' my first dream at all. My first dream is to have Sakura-chan as my wife. I'd was also consisted of named our kids after Sasuke and you."

Ino was shocked that Naruto was future man. She'd chuckled and she'd said, " You know that I'd also lost my loved too and my best friend as well." Ino help Naruto up and asked, "Naruto would you help me pick these flowers before we get caught." Naruto said, "It's okay These are my flowers. After I'd killed my best friend who killed my loved. The only things I'd heard now are Naruto-kun. You BAKA I'd loved you or Dobe thanks for being my best friend. After I'd got arrest for killing the last Uchiha. I'd guess I'd locked myself into the apartment. Only Shizune, Sai, Tsunade, Iruka, Kakashi, Yamato, Konohamaru and Ayame was a warred of my arrest.

After few months went by for Naruto's likely but this day is will change Naruto's world for the good. Naruto running down the street but at the same time Ino was heading the same way as Naruto was coming from. All suddenly they bumped into each other their lips crashed into each other. After Ino got off of Naruto and help him up as well. She'd told him she was sorry when she'd knows that he's wasn't around. She'd blushing.

After Naruto asked her on a date and few months of dating. He'd purposed to her and two years later they got married. After that two years later Ino was pregnant with twins.

Around the twins' twelve birthday's was their worse birthday. Naruto told Ino long time ago about a dimensions that Rookie 9 can't go to the another dimensions but the children of the Rookie 9 are allowed to do so. I'd found a dimension that No body from the Rookie 9 died yet. So We'll have to see both out kids into that dimension. Kabuto got more powerful not even the ten tailed beast could even beat him. Inoruto went into the Dimension but Inoichi wants to stay with his parents. So he'd died with his parents. Kyuubi's chakra was engulf of Inoruto giving him the Sage and the control. Kabuto was angry that now he'd can't get the Kyuubi.

Meaning while Naruto's and Sakura's dimension. Tsunade and Shizune was walking in towards Team 7's training grounds but the fate had different plan for Blonde Hokage. Tonton oinked that caught Shizune's and Tsunade's attention. Shizune looked at Tonton and the pig motion to them to look up. Tsunade saw a young light blonde boy.

Tsunade jumped up and caught the fallen boy. So they took the boy to the hospital.

After Tsunade place the boy into a hospital room and check him out. She'd went to her hospital office. She'd was wondering if who this boy is. Shizune came into the Office and said, "You won't guess who the mysterious boy is related to."Shiznue place the boy's wallet on Tsunade's desk. Tsunade open the wallet and was shocked and asked, "How can Naruto and Ino have kids?" Shizune said, "While you were gambling. I'd over heard some ninjas that comes from other Dimensions. So I'd guess this proves that there are Dimensions."

Tsunade asked, "That got me wondering what other Naruto's dimension kids might end up in this time dimension?"

Shizune asked, "How would Hinata-san, Sakura-san and Ino-san would react to this boy Tsunade-sama?"

Tsunade said, "I'd also wondering how Naruto will react to this news as well? Shizune get me Ino and Naruto here now."

Shizune went to get Ino and Naruto. She'd didn't look where she was running and she'd bumped into Naruto and Sakura. Shizune said, "Naruto-kun the Hokage summoned you." Then she'd looked to Sakura and asked, "Sakura-san could you get Ino-san. The Hokage also summoned her as well. " Sakura said, "Okay I'll get her for Hokage." So Shizune took Naruto back to the Hokage's tower but they stand outside the door of the Hokage's office. Ino and Sakura arrived. All four of them went into the Hokage's office.

Naruto asked, "What's is it old granny?"

Hokage said, "You and Ino should come. If you want to come too Sakura-san?" Sakura just nodded her head.

So Tsunade and Shizune leaded Naruto, Ino and Sakura to the hospital.

After 5 ninjas arrive at the mysterious boy's hospital room. Those five ninjas went into. Tsunade said, "This boy is a new breed of ninjas. He'd came from other dimension."

Naruto asked, "What does this have to do with me and Ino?" Shizune said, "I'm glad you asked Naruto-kun."
 

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too fast paced starting at the middle part....
you need to pace it better...
you were going slow then all of a sudden you seemed to want to cram all the info into as little space as possible....
it makes the reader have a hard time in trying to understand.
your story has potential so as long as you improve your writing style and check your spelling
 
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