NarutoBase Rap

[Desanto]

Join our Rap group, their are a lot of pretty good rappers on the base.. myself included

 

[Forest]

Join our Rap group, their are a lot of pretty good rappers on the base.. myself included

Myself included too

 

[SasukeTheEmo]

lol'd @ the monosyllabic rhymes.
You're gonna need multis to improve your flow and lyricism.
If you're struggling to rhyme certain words, then use half-rhymes along with assonance and internals.
You might wanna change up the typical rhyme scheme of ABAB as well.

Analyse verses from guys like AZ, Aesop Rock, Gift of Gab, Pharaoahe Monch, Elzhi etc. It will help you a lot.

 

[SonictheHedgehog]

lol'd @ the monosyllabic rhymes.
You're gonna need multis to improve your flow and lyricism.
If you're struggling to rhyme certain words, then use half-rhymes along with assonance and internals.
You might wanna change up the typical rhyme scheme of ABAB as well.

Analyse verses from guys like AZ, Aesop Rock, Gift of Gab, Pharaoahe Monch, Elzhi etc. It will help you a lot.

Multis don't really make you lyrical so I fixed that for you. It does have to do with your flow though.

Still better than 30% of the rappers.

That's stupid and trite.

 

[SasukeTheEmo]

Multis don't really make you lyrical so I fixed that for you. It does have to do with your flow though.

Yeah it does.
It helps you craft better rhymes, which will inadvertently improve lyricism.

 

[SonictheHedgehog]

Yeah it does.
It helps you craft better rhymes, which will inadvertently improve lyricism.

That still has more to do with flow. Lyricism focuses more on what's inside the actual raps. If you look at it from a standpoint of lyrics in general then yeah.

 

[NarutoB]

**** this base shit, I can't respect you fanboys
Stuck in places between adult and child, you group of man boys
Itachi wanks apart of a cult that's wild, acting like you're hype off some damn roids
Sit down and go play with your Superman toys, let the big kids discuss
Why Madara beats him in fisticuffs, and all you Sasuke worshipers aren't shit to us
Maybe they'll calm down when they dicks get sucked
Red bar me, all the females here are faking than some dead Barbies
Even the mods said sorry for banning me, for posting all that porn outlandishly
Doin' 'em dirty is what trolls can't stand to see


-Love NarutoB