[Action] Naruto War Arc - Chapter 1- The strongest arrive!

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Hey everyone, so I've decided to write the Naruto war arc from my perspective. There would be some similarities to Kishi's plot, but I would try to add whatever I wanted Kishi to do. I would continue from the 4 Hokages arriving at the battlefield.
Minato arrives in a flash, as he successfully deflects the TBB towards the ocean. He apologizes to his son for being late. Meanwhile, Madara feels an adrenaline rush, his expression so evil, that someone could just die by looking at his face. He feels the excitement flowing through his lifeless Edo body. It was almost like he waited for this day, for a re-match with the man he hated the most! On the other side, the alliance is taken by shock as they realize it's the two fastest ninjas ever, and the renowned God of Shinobis. They wonder as to who resurrected them. They feel relieved to see them, as they knew, that Madara was a type of shinobi, whom they never fought in their whole lifetimes. *psssh* , a sound emerges, as Minato powers up to his KCM. Looking with shock and excitement, Naruto feels proud, as he wonders how his father managed to gain this powerup. "I'm here, Naruto, you've done great, my son." Minato smiles, as his smile changes into a serious expression.

On the other side, Madara lunges towards Hashirama, as he powers up his Perfect Susano'o. "It's been some time, since I've seen this, heh" , Hashirama remarks, as he weaves hand seals and prepares his Wood Dragon. And, in an instant, he gets into Sage Mode, and lunges toward Madara.

Meanwhile, in the Kamui dimension, Kakashi and Obito fall, as the force of their respective Kamuis, makes them land with a crash. Getting up, Kakashi asks Obito to re-consider and join Naruto's side, telling how Naruto was like him, and wanted to achieve peace. Obito, with a serious face, remarks that Naruto's words are just mere illusions, as the real world was tainted. Simultaneously weaving handseals, Obito shouts, "(Katon: Bakufū Ranbu) Fire Release: Blast Wave Wild Dance", as Kakashi simultaneously releases a pillar of water countering Obito's Katon jutsu. ( Suiton: Suijinchū ) - Water Release: Water Encampment Pillar.

Obito activates his Rinnegan, as he pushes Kakashi away from him. Picking himself him, Kakashi doesn't attack anymore, as he couldn't bring himself to kill his former friend. Remarking that Rin's death was not his fault, Kakashi looks at Obito with a tired face, as Obito says that he knew the truth behind the attack, and says that Rin was a mere catalyst to the war he's started. Activating his Sharingan, he puts Kakashi under a genjutsu showing how his heart was empty and there was nothing there. Kakashi finally gives up, and powers up his kunai with lightning to pierce through Obito. Obito simultaneously uses Mokuton branches to pierce through Kakashi's chest, as both men lose significant blood and fall back .

In the real world, Minato throws Kunai all around Madara and prepares several Rasengans using his chakra arms. Madara smirks and undisturbed, just stands there.

On the other side, Obito puts Kakashi under a genjutsu and shows him some shocking truths as he looks in utter disbelief that Rin was the host of the 3-Tails. Still, in the genjutsu, he sees a small glimpse of a man, who seems like Madara???!


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Heck, I'm doing something similar. (What-If Naruto). There's nothing wrong with liking stuff still happening in the current maga and thus adding them to your story. The important thing is that it isn't just a carbon copy but your own thing.
 

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Heck, I'm doing something similar. (What-If Naruto). There's nothing wrong with liking stuff still happening in the current maga and thus adding them to your story. The important thing is that it isn't just a carbon copy but your own thing.

Pretty cool mate. I would like to read your fanfic.
 
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