Dragonfly X
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Well, just read that other one, didn't like it, and IMA MAKE MY OWN 
Btw this is when Naruto has Sage Mode, and Sasuke has the MS
Naruto walked, impatient as ever, wanting to quickly find Sasuke to force him to come back. With him, a highly trained team of trackers, including Kakashi and other ANBU wearing their masks. They had been tracking Sasuke ever since Tsunade gave the order that at this point, Sasuke is a criminal, it is either Konoha jail, or execution at the hands of another nation. So they had started the daunting task of trying to find a Uchiha trained by a man that was considered to be the best Sannin and evil to the core.
Finally, after a week, they picked up a faint trail. Sasuke was moving west and quickly. To some unknown destination. They followed it for 2 more days, finally closing in on him. Kakashi and Naruto told the ANBU trackers to stay back, as the fight was out of their league and fighting wasn't their specialty. Naruto and Kakashi then stealthily walked through the brush, Naruto, being clumsy, snapped a twig, and out of nowhere, a kunai came and embedded itself in Kakashi's leg, with only his quick reflexes stopping it from hitting his chest, as he had jumped at the last minute. Kakashi fell down, and Naruto screamed out "Kakashi-sensei, are you alright?!"
He replied "Watch out Naruto, Sasuke will not give up easily, you have to fight him alone."
With his advice, Naruto advanced, hearing Sasuke's piercing voice all around him, whispers warping through the underbrush, at times coming from directly in front of him, and other times seeming so distant Naruto could barely discern what was said. He walked into a clearing, with Sasuke staring at him from the ray of sunlight shining down, illuminating the area.
Sasuke looked at him with pure hatred in his eyes and said "You know you have come here for nothing, you and Kakashi will both die here, and I will become that much stronger" with his voice rising to a shout.
Naruto replied "There is still hope for you, you are not entirely evil, and me and you were liked brothers,
"Give up Naruto, I will avenge my clan, and my brother, you will all pay!" he shouted fiercely.
"Fine, then I will bring you back dead..." Naruto said sadly, while using Kage Bunshin No Jutsu, creating 2 clones on either side of him. After that, he re-summoned a clone collecting natural energy. And started using Sage Technique: Spiralling Serial Spheres which he started running at Sasuke when it completed. Sasuke countered with Chidori Current, standing his ground while Naruto halted his assault. When Naruto saw that the Chidori Current had stopped, he ran forward, shoving both of the Rasengan into Sasuke. But it exploded, proving only to be a clone. Naruto saw a shadow from above, and jumped just in time to avoid a Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique. Naruto, having both of his clones hit by the fire, jumped up and used Rasengan, shooting towards Sasuke, who used Chidori, and they collided. The resulting explosion created debris that was whirling around, making it difficult to see. All of a sudden, as Naruto fell back down, he suddenly was stabbed by a Chidori Spear, which then expanded, stabbing out of his body. He coughed, then it was shown to only be a clone.
With the leaves still swirling in the air, creating the perfect oppertunity, Naruto, a safe distance away, summoned Gamabunta. And looking around, spotted Sasuke looking at him again. With a quick jump, Sasuke was perched on a nearby treetop. Saying "You've improved Naruto, but not nearly enough, with the death of my brother, I have gained a new technique, far more powerful than anything you have, I have the ultimate eye, the Mangekyou Sharingan!" And as it activated, he quickly said "Amaterasu, and closed his eye, aiming at Naruto. Naruto, quickly realizing the power of that technique, having remembered it when Itachi used it to escape the toads stomach, desummoned Gamabunta, and summoned a clone, who threw him down onto the ground, while the clone was burnt by the black flames. His natural energy began to get low, so he re-summoned another clone, and quickly started to power up Fuuton: Rasenshuriken. He threw it at Sasuke, and as it got nearer and nearer, Naruto started to avert his eyes, assuming that he would not survive. Naruto, after the debris had settled, looked around, and with an amazed look, found himself looking at Sasuke's complete Susanoo, firing a bolt at him. He barely dodged, and the bolt barely hit the upper shoulder, causing a bad injury preventing him from moving the arm too much.
As he heard Sasuke laughing, he knew that there would be no mercy, so he quickly summoned another clone, and powered up Sage Art: Ultra-Big Ball Rasengan, jumping toward Sasuke and the malevolent chakra surrounding him. With a well aimed blow, he hit Susanoo square in the ribs, causing them to shatter and Susanoo to go away. Sasuke, with bloody eyes, jumped back, cringing in pain that emenated from his eyes. Sasuke and Naruto both knew they only had the chakra left for a couple more techniques, so Sasuke, using shuriken, forced Naruto to jump to the canopy, when he used Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique. Naruto jumped, and the attack missed him completely. Naruto knew Sasuke was setting up a powerful technique, so he summoned another clone and quickly had another Rasenshuriken. He then threw it at Sasuke. Who could only watch in horror as the orb hit the ground next to him, quickly expanding, even as he jumped back, overtaking him.
Naruto was basically out of chakra, so his sage mode dissipated, and he was convinced he had finished Sasuke, nevertheless, he wouldn't make the same mistake twice, and scanned the area for any sign of him. When he saw a figure emerge from the dust, he couldn't believe his eyes. It seemed Sasuke had used Susanoo at the last second, minimizing the damage. But it was Sasuke, and he had a chidori in his hands. And he screamed "This is the ultimate lightning technique, undodgeable, and no one can survive it, this is KIRIN!" and suddenly the lightning in the sky went crazy, and a figure emerged from the clouds. Roaring in anger, it was directed towards Naruto, and faster than a blink of an eye, it was upon him, destroying the surrounding area.
The silence was overwhelming, Naruto felt fire in every fiber of his body, and he was burnt on his hands and feet. From Sasuke's point of view, it seemed as the technique worked perfectly, the clone Naruto summoned to use the Rasenshuriken was lying on the ground, and Naruto was slowly climbing to his feet, clearly mortally wounded. With his last bit of energy, he climbed to his feet, coughed blood, and fell down in the dust. And the minute he hit the ground, it exploded, showing the trademark sign of a clone. Sasuke's eyes widened as what turned out to be the real Naruto rised up, and used Rasengan, slowly walking towards Sasuke, who fell to his knees, having exhausted his chakra reserves. He slowly approached, and when he was hovering above him, Rasengan in hand, he merely said, "I'm sorry." As he slammed the Rasengan down onto his chest, killing him instantly. Naruto, severly weakened, barely remembered the ANBU trackers emerging from the underbrush, keeping him from falling, and starting to apply medical aid to him. All he could think about, was the lonely boy, sitting by the pier, somehow warped so much by hatred and revenge, lying there, dead, yet another victim of pain...
Authors note: I worked reasonably hard on this, be nice pwease I know there are some things that don't make sense, just accept it lol
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Btw this is when Naruto has Sage Mode, and Sasuke has the MSNaruto walked, impatient as ever, wanting to quickly find Sasuke to force him to come back. With him, a highly trained team of trackers, including Kakashi and other ANBU wearing their masks. They had been tracking Sasuke ever since Tsunade gave the order that at this point, Sasuke is a criminal, it is either Konoha jail, or execution at the hands of another nation. So they had started the daunting task of trying to find a Uchiha trained by a man that was considered to be the best Sannin and evil to the core.
Finally, after a week, they picked up a faint trail. Sasuke was moving west and quickly. To some unknown destination. They followed it for 2 more days, finally closing in on him. Kakashi and Naruto told the ANBU trackers to stay back, as the fight was out of their league and fighting wasn't their specialty. Naruto and Kakashi then stealthily walked through the brush, Naruto, being clumsy, snapped a twig, and out of nowhere, a kunai came and embedded itself in Kakashi's leg, with only his quick reflexes stopping it from hitting his chest, as he had jumped at the last minute. Kakashi fell down, and Naruto screamed out "Kakashi-sensei, are you alright?!"
He replied "Watch out Naruto, Sasuke will not give up easily, you have to fight him alone."
With his advice, Naruto advanced, hearing Sasuke's piercing voice all around him, whispers warping through the underbrush, at times coming from directly in front of him, and other times seeming so distant Naruto could barely discern what was said. He walked into a clearing, with Sasuke staring at him from the ray of sunlight shining down, illuminating the area.
Sasuke looked at him with pure hatred in his eyes and said "You know you have come here for nothing, you and Kakashi will both die here, and I will become that much stronger" with his voice rising to a shout.
Naruto replied "There is still hope for you, you are not entirely evil, and me and you were liked brothers,
"Give up Naruto, I will avenge my clan, and my brother, you will all pay!" he shouted fiercely.
"Fine, then I will bring you back dead..." Naruto said sadly, while using Kage Bunshin No Jutsu, creating 2 clones on either side of him. After that, he re-summoned a clone collecting natural energy. And started using Sage Technique: Spiralling Serial Spheres which he started running at Sasuke when it completed. Sasuke countered with Chidori Current, standing his ground while Naruto halted his assault. When Naruto saw that the Chidori Current had stopped, he ran forward, shoving both of the Rasengan into Sasuke. But it exploded, proving only to be a clone. Naruto saw a shadow from above, and jumped just in time to avoid a Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique. Naruto, having both of his clones hit by the fire, jumped up and used Rasengan, shooting towards Sasuke, who used Chidori, and they collided. The resulting explosion created debris that was whirling around, making it difficult to see. All of a sudden, as Naruto fell back down, he suddenly was stabbed by a Chidori Spear, which then expanded, stabbing out of his body. He coughed, then it was shown to only be a clone.
With the leaves still swirling in the air, creating the perfect oppertunity, Naruto, a safe distance away, summoned Gamabunta. And looking around, spotted Sasuke looking at him again. With a quick jump, Sasuke was perched on a nearby treetop. Saying "You've improved Naruto, but not nearly enough, with the death of my brother, I have gained a new technique, far more powerful than anything you have, I have the ultimate eye, the Mangekyou Sharingan!" And as it activated, he quickly said "Amaterasu, and closed his eye, aiming at Naruto. Naruto, quickly realizing the power of that technique, having remembered it when Itachi used it to escape the toads stomach, desummoned Gamabunta, and summoned a clone, who threw him down onto the ground, while the clone was burnt by the black flames. His natural energy began to get low, so he re-summoned another clone, and quickly started to power up Fuuton: Rasenshuriken. He threw it at Sasuke, and as it got nearer and nearer, Naruto started to avert his eyes, assuming that he would not survive. Naruto, after the debris had settled, looked around, and with an amazed look, found himself looking at Sasuke's complete Susanoo, firing a bolt at him. He barely dodged, and the bolt barely hit the upper shoulder, causing a bad injury preventing him from moving the arm too much.
As he heard Sasuke laughing, he knew that there would be no mercy, so he quickly summoned another clone, and powered up Sage Art: Ultra-Big Ball Rasengan, jumping toward Sasuke and the malevolent chakra surrounding him. With a well aimed blow, he hit Susanoo square in the ribs, causing them to shatter and Susanoo to go away. Sasuke, with bloody eyes, jumped back, cringing in pain that emenated from his eyes. Sasuke and Naruto both knew they only had the chakra left for a couple more techniques, so Sasuke, using shuriken, forced Naruto to jump to the canopy, when he used Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique. Naruto jumped, and the attack missed him completely. Naruto knew Sasuke was setting up a powerful technique, so he summoned another clone and quickly had another Rasenshuriken. He then threw it at Sasuke. Who could only watch in horror as the orb hit the ground next to him, quickly expanding, even as he jumped back, overtaking him.
Naruto was basically out of chakra, so his sage mode dissipated, and he was convinced he had finished Sasuke, nevertheless, he wouldn't make the same mistake twice, and scanned the area for any sign of him. When he saw a figure emerge from the dust, he couldn't believe his eyes. It seemed Sasuke had used Susanoo at the last second, minimizing the damage. But it was Sasuke, and he had a chidori in his hands. And he screamed "This is the ultimate lightning technique, undodgeable, and no one can survive it, this is KIRIN!" and suddenly the lightning in the sky went crazy, and a figure emerged from the clouds. Roaring in anger, it was directed towards Naruto, and faster than a blink of an eye, it was upon him, destroying the surrounding area.
The silence was overwhelming, Naruto felt fire in every fiber of his body, and he was burnt on his hands and feet. From Sasuke's point of view, it seemed as the technique worked perfectly, the clone Naruto summoned to use the Rasenshuriken was lying on the ground, and Naruto was slowly climbing to his feet, clearly mortally wounded. With his last bit of energy, he climbed to his feet, coughed blood, and fell down in the dust. And the minute he hit the ground, it exploded, showing the trademark sign of a clone. Sasuke's eyes widened as what turned out to be the real Naruto rised up, and used Rasengan, slowly walking towards Sasuke, who fell to his knees, having exhausted his chakra reserves. He slowly approached, and when he was hovering above him, Rasengan in hand, he merely said, "I'm sorry." As he slammed the Rasengan down onto his chest, killing him instantly. Naruto, severly weakened, barely remembered the ANBU trackers emerging from the underbrush, keeping him from falling, and starting to apply medical aid to him. All he could think about, was the lonely boy, sitting by the pier, somehow warped so much by hatred and revenge, lying there, dead, yet another victim of pain...
Authors note: I worked reasonably hard on this, be nice pwease I know there are some things that don't make sense, just accept it lol
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