Naruto Uzumaki the Avenger Chapter 1

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Chap. 1
Walking up the lonely corridor once again, for what seemed like the infinite time, onto the broken down dusty staircase, where with every climb his heart grew heavier. Remembering his dream………… “some day I will be acknowledged, I will be respected, some day I WILL BE LORD NAUTO UZUMAKI, ……….HOKAGE.!”
Finally reaching his destination in the old apartment building, Naruto being a little small for his age was barely at eye level with the door knob, he reached to open. Walking inside with his heart heavey and confused mental composure after just hearing the news from the man who claimed the title of the third hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi. The ‘third’ and the village elders decided to tell him of his past since it is only right that he knew his parents will. Naruto sitting down thinking about what he heard.

FLASH BACK FROM THE STORY THE THIRD TOLD HIM

An anbu black opp shinobi burst trough the window of the hokage office, outfitted in a black Capri’s pants, red vest which was coved by grayish green torso armor plating, with his face covered by the mask of a lion’s face; white with yellow markings. He exclaimed, ‘Lord hokage the nine tailed fox appeared out of nowhere and attacked the village.’ “What the nine tailed fox, evacuate the village NOW!!!” The hokage immediately rounded up a squad of jonnin and anbu members to try and lure the fox away from the village, they set traps and attacked it with everything they had but nothing seemed to work. Everyone started wondering where is the fourth hokage who was serving as kage simultaneously with the third.

A top the head of the figure of himself engraved in a mountain appears the Fourth Hokage Minato Namikaze. The fox immediately notices him as if it was awaiting his appearance or as if the person who summoned it was waiting for him. The third knew someone had summoned it because of the way it appeared out of thin air. The fox fired a menacing ball at the fourth, but he used some space time barrier technique to transport the blast to another location. Then all of a sudden it seem as though another figure appeared atop the mountain, and in a flash of yellow they were both gone, leaving the third an his men to fight the fox alone.

Many fine ninjas where being killed and injured in the short space of time the fourth was absent. He suddenly reappeared on his summoning Gamabunta the chief toad of Mount Myōboku, a reddish brown giant toad wearing a blue happi coat equipped with traditional ninja short sword. The fourth’s summoning grabbed the fox which was about to launch a menacing ball at them they then soon disappeared in a yellow flash. The menacing ball’s blast was seen about a mile off in the 9 O’clock direction. By the time the third an his men reached the area where the blast was seen all that was left were two dead bodies and a new born baby. The baby had a seal mark on its stomach that baby was Kanoha’s new Jinjuriki Naruto Uzumaki son of the Forth Hokage and Knoha’s second Jinjuriki.

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Chap. 2 - Meeting the Fox

Naruto now thinking about his parents, the third told him everything he knew about his parents, about why he didn’t have his father last name, in order to protect him from whoever took the fox out of his mother, Kushina Uzumaki. Kushina was a former member of the uzumaki clan of the whirlpool country, which was destroyed in war after she moved to kanoha to be the next Jinjuriki for the nine tailed fox, even though she was a kunoichi (female ninja). Kushina was of the Uzumaki clan, a people who were gifted with extremely resilient strong chakras. Kishuna’s chakra was even more special, it had the ability to subdue the nine tailed fox, hence the reason why she was chosen. He knew third told him why he thought his father sealed the fox within him, which was for him to be able to protect the village from the fox in future by being its container and possibly defeat the one who tried to destroy the village in the first place, assisted by the fox’s power.

Naruto knew that he had to carry out his father’s last wish; he could no longer be the fool who ran around the village pulling pranks and causing mischief. He looked to his left as tears uncontrollably fell from his eyes, looking at the medium sized box the third gave him, claiming it was all he could find of his parent’s belongings that he thought they would want their son to have. Naruto silently tried to build up the strength to look in to the box before falling to his knees under theweight of his now heavy heart, he couldn’t do it. Observing through the window above his bed perched on a tree was the one everyone knew as Lord Jariya Toad Sage of Myōboku, but Naruto knew him as….’Pervey Sage.’ The sage dressed in his long red armless open robe which coverd ah smaller robe of muss green over a black netted under garment with black pants, look on at naruto’s release of emotions. He was concerened because he had a lot to do with the third’s desition to tell naruto the truth, he wanted to tell naruto himself but the third taught it was is job to do so fearing Jariya would reveal too much to the boy.

Suddenly Naruto felt as if he was slipping into a dream everything just getting darker, but this was no ordinary darkness, some how he felt it, it was going through every pore in his body, but he didn’t feel scared. A light appeared as he realized the presence of zero gravity, a face strated to appear out of the light as it turned from a white glare to a bright red glaze. The face was not of human origin, a white smile of with demonic fangs was the first thing he saw followed by the blood red eye’s, pupils with a snake like slit. The entire face suddenly appeared it was a giant demon fox looking even more evil with the black band stretching from its eyes to its ears. “Are you not afraid asked the giant fox,.” “ No, no I ‘m not Naruto replied timidly, are you’re the nine tailed fox” Naruto asked. ROOOOOOOAAAAAAAR !!!! I do all the questioning here, and as for your question yes I am the nine tailed fox,’ King of all the tailed beast and king of fire. I am the one that attacked your village 15 years ago and…… Shut the hell up!!!! Naruto interrupted. You will answer to me your in my body which means you have to obey me and live by my rules. Or else what the fox replied. You are responsible for the death of my parents; iruka sensei’s parents and all those people dying, ‘well are you’?

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chap. 1
walking up the lonely corridor once again, for what seemed like the infinite time, onto the broken down dusty staircase, where with every climb his heart grew heavier. Remembering his dream………… “some day i will be acknowledged, i will be respected, some day i will be lord nauto uzumaki, ……….hokage.!”
finally reaching his destination in the old apartment building, naruto being a little small for his age was barely at eye level with the door knob, he reached to open. Walking inside with his heart heavey and confused mental composure after just hearing the news from the man who claimed the title of the third hokage, hiruzen sarutobi. The ‘third’ and the village elders decided to tell him of his past since it is only right that he knew his parents will. Naruto sitting down thinking about what he heard.

Flash back from the story the third told him

an anbu black opp shinobi burst trough the window of the hokage office, outfitted in a black capri’s pants, red vest which was coved by grayish green torso armor plating, with his face covered by the mask of a lion’s face; white with yellow markings. He exclaimed, ‘lord hokage the nine tailed fox appeared out of nowhere and attacked the village.’ “what the nine tailed fox, evacuate the village now!!!” the hokage immediately rounded up a squad of jonnin and anbu members to try and lure the fox away from the village, they set traps and attacked it with everything they had but nothing seemed to work. Everyone started wondering where is the fourth hokage who was serving as kage simultaneously with the third.

A top the head of the figure of himself engraved in a mountain appears the fourth hokage minato namikaze. The fox immediately notices him as if it was awaiting his appearance or as if the person who summoned it was waiting for him. The third knew someone had summoned it because of the way it appeared out of thin air. The fox fired a menacing ball at the fourth, but he used some space time barrier technique to transport the blast to another location. Then all of a sudden it seem as though another figure appeared atop the mountain, and in a flash of yellow they were both gone, leaving the third an his men to fight the fox alone.

Many fine ninjas where being killed and injured in the short space of time the fourth was absent. He suddenly reappeared on his summoning gamabunta the chief toad of mount myōboku, a reddish brown giant toad wearing a blue happi coat equipped with traditional ninja short sword. The fourth’s summoning grabbed the fox which was about to launch a menacing ball at them they then soon disappeared in a yellow flash. The menacing ball’s blast was seen about a mile off in the 9 o’clock direction. By the time the third an his men reached the area where the blast was seen all that was left were two dead bodies and a new born baby. The baby had a seal mark on its stomach that baby was kanoha’s new jinjuriki naruto uzumaki son of the forth hokage and knoha’s second jinjuriki.

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nice story dude but naruto is konoha's third jichuriki not second 1'st jinchuriki was shoudaime hokake's wife second was naruto's mothes and third is naruto but aside from that your story is awesome keek em coming
 
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Chap. 1
Walking up the lonely corridor once again, for what seemed like the infinite time, onto the broken down dusty staircase, where with every climb his heart grew heavier. Remembering his dream………… “some day I will be acknowledged, I will be respected, some day I WILL BE LORD NAUTO UZUMAKI, ……….HOKAGE.!”
Finally reaching his destination in the old apartment building, Naruto being a little small for his age was barely at eye level with the door knob, he reached to open. Walking inside with his heart heavey and confused mental composure after just hearing the news from the man who claimed the title of the third hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi. The ‘third’ and the village elders decided to tell him of his past since it is only right that he knew his parents will. Naruto sitting down thinking about what he heard.

FLASH BACK FROM THE STORY THE THIRD TOLD HIM

An anbu black opp shinobi burst trough the window of the hokage office, outfitted in a black Capri’s pants, red vest which was coved by grayish green torso armor plating, with his face covered by the mask of a lion’s face; white with yellow markings. He exclaimed, ‘Lord hokage the nine tailed fox appeared out of nowhere and attacked the village.’ “What the nine tailed fox, evacuate the village NOW!!!” The hokage immediately rounded up a squad of jonnin and anbu members to try and lure the fox away from the village, they set traps and attacked it with everything they had but nothing seemed to work. Everyone started wondering where is the fourth hokage who was serving as kage simultaneously with the third.

A top the head of the figure of himself engraved in a mountain appears the Fourth Hokage Minato Namikaze. The fox immediately notices him as if it was awaiting his appearance or as if the person who summoned it was waiting for him. The third knew someone had summoned it because of the way it appeared out of thin air. The fox fired a menacing ball at the fourth, but he used some space time barrier technique to transport the blast to another location. Then all of a sudden it seem as though another figure appeared atop the mountain, and in a flash of yellow they were both gone, leaving the third an his men to fight the fox alone.

Many fine ninjas where being killed and injured in the short space of time the fourth was absent. He suddenly reappeared on his summoning Gamabunta the chief toad of Mount Myōboku, a reddish brown giant toad wearing a blue happi coat equipped with traditional ninja short sword. The fourth’s summoning grabbed the fox which was about to launch a menacing ball at them they then soon disappeared in a yellow flash. The menacing ball’s blast was seen about a mile off in the 9 O’clock direction. By the time the third an his men reached the area where the blast was seen all that was left were two dead bodies and a new born baby. The baby had a seal mark on its stomach that baby was Kanoha’s new Jinjuriki Naruto Uzumaki son of the Forth Hokage and Knoha’s second Jinjuriki.


Dude this is the actual story from the manga...
 

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Dude this is the actual story from the manga...
Dude I know that part was from manga that is where my story starts from, The kyuubi attack but you would notice that it is the third hokage who is telling the story in the other chapter, and he told it to naruto himself. The story then takes a totally different path.

Just relax dude
 
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