[Fantasy] Naruto Triton CH. 5

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Chapter 5
Title: Escape

[Gret and Sasuke walk over to some other prisoners.]

Gret- A new ally has joined us, friends.

Sasuke- My name's Uchiha Sasuke.

???- Sasuke!? It's you!

[Suigetsu comes out.]

Sasuke- Suigetsu!

Suigetsu- So we'll all work together to bust outta here huh!?

Gret- Here's the plan, there is a guard out here, two guards inside watching us. There are 5 guards on top of the roof.

Sasuke- Got it.

Gret- Sasuke we'll distract the guards. You take out the guard over there by the door. Wear his uniform and get the key for us.

[A few men are throwing rocks at the windows.]

[The guards see this and are rushing inside in order to get out to the prisoners.]

Gret- This is your chance Sasuke!

Suigetsu- Go!

[Sasuke punches the guard and bangs his head against the wall. He puts on the uniform and has the guard wear his prisoner clothes.]

[The guards come out]

Guard- You damned prisoners!

Sasuke- This prisoner appears to be hurt. Take him inside.

Guard- Yes Lieutenant.

[The guards pick up the prisoner and take him in. Other guards are beating some prisoners.]

Gret- Your alias is now Lieutenant Heinz. Go inside and get the key for the gates.

[Sasuke goes inside.]

Sasuke- I want the key for the main gates.

Sergeant- Why so sudden, Lieutenant Heinz? General Gunther has told us to keep the gates closed until he is done with Naruto.

Sasuke- I need the gates open. The General has requested a supply transportation.

Sergeant- Alright. [Hands Sasuke the key.]

[Sasuke inserts the key into a special lock, the mechanical gate opens.]

[Sasuke leads the prisoners out to the gate.]

Gret- You did it, my friend!

Prisoner- We're free!!

[A giant demon dog is standing outside of the gate, growling.] {Growl}

Gret- That's General Gunther's pet! Run men!

[Every one begins running. The dog devours most of them.]

[Sasuke knifes a guard and picks up his assault rifle. The assault rifle appears like an MP5, but is a little bigger. It has a laser sight.]

Sasuke- We'll take this monster down!

[Sasuke shoots the dog in the eye and it bleeds!]

Chapter End
 

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You're rushing things. I suggest writing more details and not making thins just like, "I need a key. Don't try and figure out why so suddenly and foolishly believe me for a simple reason"

It needs work is all I'm saying
 

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You're rushing things. I suggest writing more details and not making thins just like, "I need a key. Don't try and figure out why so suddenly and foolishly believe me for a simple reason"

It needs work is all I'm saying
its gonna get more complex soon
 
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