nickuchiha25
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ok guys so here it is...now about who dies...i ve changed my mind a 1000 times between two persons and then i thought "if i kill that guy no naruto exists after that" and thats why i decided on killing someone else and thats why there wont be an epic death like jiraiyas...however if you read it well you ll get who i was about to kill.
Chapter 7: furious
Naruto gets out of kyuubi mode.
Naruto: now let’s go and rock them all!!!
Bee: settle down ya fool!! Biju dama isn’t the only weapon a bijuu has, yo.
Kakashi: he is right Naruto…last time the kyuubi destroyed the whole village without using the bijuu dama.
Hachibi: Naruto it’s like my octopus whirlwind and ink sealing. All the bijuu have some unique attacks depending on their form and chakra. If you master them you will really be on the same level with Bee. But that’s something that only the kyuubi can teach you.
Naruto: leave it to me uncle Bee.
Naruto moves towards a deserted place to train. He visits the kyuubi in his mind.
Kyuubi: what do you want brat?
Naruto: stop bluffing I know that you have already heard everything.
Kyuubi: I gave you my form and that should be enough. What do you want from me?
Naruto: I want you to be my comrade!!
Kyuubi: (shocked and depressed, remembers both kushina and uzumaki mito asking him the same thing…then thinks of himself whining about people).
Kyuubi: I’ve always been feared or used as a tool. Same thing with you. Do you think that if you hadn’t done all these things for them, they would appreciate you?? Come to your senses Naruto who was there to help you when you were crying, when you were lonely?!?!?! You were always willing to sacrifice everything for them…they would never die for you!!!
Naruto: you are wrong. Who do you think they want to protect in this war? Thousands have already died for me!!! And that’s not all there is to it. Yes I risked my life countless times and that’s why I earned their appreciation, but that’s how things are…nothing is gained for free…have you ever tried to change?
Kyuubi: I am bored of you…if I teach you these jutsu will you leave me alone?
Naruto: no!!! I will never leave you alone until I save you from the darkness you are within!!!!
Kyuubi: (shocked) fine…there are three jutsu that you can master at your current level.
Crushing roar.
Ultimate release.
Mighty fang.
Kyuubi: during crushing roar you concentrate chakra to your mouth and release it in a roar that destroys any form of chakra that comes against you. This is my defense against jutsu. Mighty fang is a strike that can destroy gaara’s shield in an instant. Finally, the ultimate release-you concentrate chakra for one minute in every part of your body and once you release it earthquakes and tsunamis shall rage upon the enemy.
After 2 days of training.
Naruto: I am ready now.
Kakashi: great Naruto. Now remember don’t enter full mode right from the start, it would be to our advantage if the enemy doesn’t know about that until the time is right.
Naruto: roger that!!!
Elsewhere.
Kabuto: edo tensei!!!
All the zombies are back. Tobi joins the battlefield as well.
Naruto, Bee and Kakashi head to the battlefield.
The five kages take on Madara once more.
Naruto and the others meet up with Tobi.
Naruto enters kyuubi mode (chakra mode).
As he approaches tobi he forms a rasenshuriken.
Tobi rushes to him but suddenly he instantly changed direction!!!
Tobi: (come, just one touch).
He moves towards Bee with an amazing speed!!
A little before he touches him something kicks him back so hard that the mask cracked. It was Gai in gates mode.
Gai: now you shall feel the full power of youth!!
Tobi: hahahaha…what?
Gai: ultimate tiger fist!!
Tobi tries to dodge it but Gai hits him fatally!! Tobi bleeds from everywhere and Gai lands a second strike leading tobi far away from the others. The mask is completely broken!!
Gai: you!!!
Tobi disappears using teleportation
Naruto: wow you beat him to a pulp bushy brows sensei!!
Kakashi: we have to treat your injuries since I bet this thing was the 7th gate…
Gai: well…not quite…
Kakashi: what don’t tell me that you used the 8th gate?!?!?!?
Gai: it was necessary Kakashi…otherwise Bee-san would have been captured…
Gai collapses
Gai: everyone I want to tell you something
Suddenly lee approaches crying as he understands what’s going on.
Gai: Kakashi…you…you’ve always been my rival, which means that you are almost my equal, so…don’t you dare die!!
Kakashi: roger that (crying)
Gai: lee I may not live forever but at least I ll die young so you ll never get to see my power of youth dying…
Lee: (barely talks) yes sir…
Gai: finally you Naruto…although you are not smart you are the only one who is able to surpass all previous hokages…
Naruto: (crying) you can count on me!
Gai: finally I want to tell you all something…tobi is…
Collapses before finishing the sentence.
Naruto: roaaaaaaarrrrrrr
Transforms to full kyuubi mode.
Naruto: I am going to kill that bustard!!!
the kyuubi unleashed!! next chapter: (havent decided on a title yet...i ll let you guys know as soon as possible
)
Chapter 7: furious
Naruto gets out of kyuubi mode.
Naruto: now let’s go and rock them all!!!
Bee: settle down ya fool!! Biju dama isn’t the only weapon a bijuu has, yo.
Kakashi: he is right Naruto…last time the kyuubi destroyed the whole village without using the bijuu dama.
Hachibi: Naruto it’s like my octopus whirlwind and ink sealing. All the bijuu have some unique attacks depending on their form and chakra. If you master them you will really be on the same level with Bee. But that’s something that only the kyuubi can teach you.
Naruto: leave it to me uncle Bee.
Naruto moves towards a deserted place to train. He visits the kyuubi in his mind.
Kyuubi: what do you want brat?
Naruto: stop bluffing I know that you have already heard everything.
Kyuubi: I gave you my form and that should be enough. What do you want from me?
Naruto: I want you to be my comrade!!
Kyuubi: (shocked and depressed, remembers both kushina and uzumaki mito asking him the same thing…then thinks of himself whining about people).
Kyuubi: I’ve always been feared or used as a tool. Same thing with you. Do you think that if you hadn’t done all these things for them, they would appreciate you?? Come to your senses Naruto who was there to help you when you were crying, when you were lonely?!?!?! You were always willing to sacrifice everything for them…they would never die for you!!!
Naruto: you are wrong. Who do you think they want to protect in this war? Thousands have already died for me!!! And that’s not all there is to it. Yes I risked my life countless times and that’s why I earned their appreciation, but that’s how things are…nothing is gained for free…have you ever tried to change?
Kyuubi: I am bored of you…if I teach you these jutsu will you leave me alone?
Naruto: no!!! I will never leave you alone until I save you from the darkness you are within!!!!
Kyuubi: (shocked) fine…there are three jutsu that you can master at your current level.
Crushing roar.
Ultimate release.
Mighty fang.
Kyuubi: during crushing roar you concentrate chakra to your mouth and release it in a roar that destroys any form of chakra that comes against you. This is my defense against jutsu. Mighty fang is a strike that can destroy gaara’s shield in an instant. Finally, the ultimate release-you concentrate chakra for one minute in every part of your body and once you release it earthquakes and tsunamis shall rage upon the enemy.
After 2 days of training.
Naruto: I am ready now.
Kakashi: great Naruto. Now remember don’t enter full mode right from the start, it would be to our advantage if the enemy doesn’t know about that until the time is right.
Naruto: roger that!!!
Elsewhere.
Kabuto: edo tensei!!!
All the zombies are back. Tobi joins the battlefield as well.
Naruto, Bee and Kakashi head to the battlefield.
The five kages take on Madara once more.
Naruto and the others meet up with Tobi.
Naruto enters kyuubi mode (chakra mode).
As he approaches tobi he forms a rasenshuriken.
Tobi rushes to him but suddenly he instantly changed direction!!!
Tobi: (come, just one touch).
He moves towards Bee with an amazing speed!!
A little before he touches him something kicks him back so hard that the mask cracked. It was Gai in gates mode.
Gai: now you shall feel the full power of youth!!
Tobi: hahahaha…what?
Gai: ultimate tiger fist!!
Tobi tries to dodge it but Gai hits him fatally!! Tobi bleeds from everywhere and Gai lands a second strike leading tobi far away from the others. The mask is completely broken!!
Gai: you!!!
Tobi disappears using teleportation
Naruto: wow you beat him to a pulp bushy brows sensei!!
Kakashi: we have to treat your injuries since I bet this thing was the 7th gate…
Gai: well…not quite…
Kakashi: what don’t tell me that you used the 8th gate?!?!?!?
Gai: it was necessary Kakashi…otherwise Bee-san would have been captured…
Gai collapses
Gai: everyone I want to tell you something
Suddenly lee approaches crying as he understands what’s going on.
Gai: Kakashi…you…you’ve always been my rival, which means that you are almost my equal, so…don’t you dare die!!
Kakashi: roger that (crying)
Gai: lee I may not live forever but at least I ll die young so you ll never get to see my power of youth dying…
Lee: (barely talks) yes sir…
Gai: finally you Naruto…although you are not smart you are the only one who is able to surpass all previous hokages…
Naruto: (crying) you can count on me!
Gai: finally I want to tell you all something…tobi is…
Collapses before finishing the sentence.
Naruto: roaaaaaaarrrrrrr
Transforms to full kyuubi mode.
Naruto: I am going to kill that bustard!!!
the kyuubi unleashed!! next chapter: (havent decided on a title yet...i ll let you guys know as soon as possible
)
