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This is the third chapter everyone, so please tell me how it is 
Sasuke, How are you feeling now? " i can feel itachi's strength flowing through me, i am much stronger now, Konoha WILL suffer for itachi, "as sasuke says this he smiles evilly. "very good, however you need to rest for some more time, the eternal Mangekyou sharingan will not be at full strength for a while longer, Neither will you." as tobi says this, he activates his sharingan and see's sasuke's chakra growing even darker. "fine madara but i WILL be the one to kill naruto, remember that " And upon saying that sasuke vanishes into the black dark, back into his resting area.
white Zetsu, I want you to keep an eye on sasuke with one of your clones.
zetsu splits in 2 and hides himself in the hideout silently as tobi walks with the real white zetsu. " i suppose i Should retrieve the rinnegan Before the war starts from Nagato's corpse." Upon saying this Tobi uses his unknown Jutsu and shifts dimensions to the hidden rain village's outskirts
"this would have been so much easier had Nagato only completed his mission and not betrayed the akatsuki" Upon his arrival Konan appears before tobi.
"Tell me where to find Nagato's corpse so i can retrieve the rinnegan" Konan remains simply silent still glaring at him. "Looks like you wont just tell me where the rinnegan...Where Nagato is hidden." Konan threateningly responds by saying " I knew you would come and i have been waiting to finally finish you off" I wont go easy on you just because we used to be allies...understand? "Yahiko founded the akatsuki and The Rinnegan belongs to Nagato, his eyes dont belong to you either" konan yells "Ha wrong on both my dear, since you are going to die, ill enlighten you. i am the one who encouraged yahiko to form Akatsuki, AND i gave Nagato the Rinnegan"
Konan charges at Tobi with her paper and he is about to warp as he realizes she mixed in paper bombs with herself " Ill drag you down to hell along with me!" They both emerge after, Tobi's arm destroyed and the part of his mask in front of his eye destroyed". Suddenly a HUGE wave of paper appears. "i prepared all six hundred billion paper bombs for you, you can only remain intangible for about 5 minutes! This is where you end!" They all start to explode. "Nagato's,and Yahiko's will has been passed down to Naruto! I WONT LET YOU RUIN IT MADARA!!" She screams in fury, 10 minutes later, she falls on one knee in exhaustion.
"I never thought i would need so much chakra for it, but i think Madara is finally..."
"Dead right?" Madara Steals the last words from her as she is completely shocked of his being alive.
Tobi then stabs her and she questions him being alive as he tells her , " the power of the uchiha that can only be used by someone possessing both the Senju and Uchiha DNA known as Izanagi, the eye that uses this loses its light forever in return for the short power to connect illusion and reality". Madara explains to her "But...you can't have the sage of six paths power... How??"
" i guess i can tell you a little of my history and technique since you are a former ally... you atleast earned that." madara says this drawing out the word former.
He Tells her all about it as She is completely stunned by this news
Madara then uses a Genjutsu on her and forces her to reveal the location and she dies after the genjutsu ends. "Finally i have found it... even in betrayal you smile at me mockingly." Tobi closes Nagatp's eyes Then warps the body and himself as he returns to the hideout to claim the rinnegan.
Chapter 2:
Chapter 1 :
NEXT time! chapter Four: The BEING with the Two Dojutsu. The War begins and A New pain??
Sasuke, How are you feeling now? " i can feel itachi's strength flowing through me, i am much stronger now, Konoha WILL suffer for itachi, "as sasuke says this he smiles evilly. "very good, however you need to rest for some more time, the eternal Mangekyou sharingan will not be at full strength for a while longer, Neither will you." as tobi says this, he activates his sharingan and see's sasuke's chakra growing even darker. "fine madara but i WILL be the one to kill naruto, remember that " And upon saying that sasuke vanishes into the black dark, back into his resting area.
white Zetsu, I want you to keep an eye on sasuke with one of your clones.
zetsu splits in 2 and hides himself in the hideout silently as tobi walks with the real white zetsu. " i suppose i Should retrieve the rinnegan Before the war starts from Nagato's corpse." Upon saying this Tobi uses his unknown Jutsu and shifts dimensions to the hidden rain village's outskirts
"this would have been so much easier had Nagato only completed his mission and not betrayed the akatsuki" Upon his arrival Konan appears before tobi.
"Tell me where to find Nagato's corpse so i can retrieve the rinnegan" Konan remains simply silent still glaring at him. "Looks like you wont just tell me where the rinnegan...Where Nagato is hidden." Konan threateningly responds by saying " I knew you would come and i have been waiting to finally finish you off" I wont go easy on you just because we used to be allies...understand? "Yahiko founded the akatsuki and The Rinnegan belongs to Nagato, his eyes dont belong to you either" konan yells "Ha wrong on both my dear, since you are going to die, ill enlighten you. i am the one who encouraged yahiko to form Akatsuki, AND i gave Nagato the Rinnegan"
Konan charges at Tobi with her paper and he is about to warp as he realizes she mixed in paper bombs with herself " Ill drag you down to hell along with me!" They both emerge after, Tobi's arm destroyed and the part of his mask in front of his eye destroyed". Suddenly a HUGE wave of paper appears. "i prepared all six hundred billion paper bombs for you, you can only remain intangible for about 5 minutes! This is where you end!" They all start to explode. "Nagato's,and Yahiko's will has been passed down to Naruto! I WONT LET YOU RUIN IT MADARA!!" She screams in fury, 10 minutes later, she falls on one knee in exhaustion.
"I never thought i would need so much chakra for it, but i think Madara is finally..."
"Dead right?" Madara Steals the last words from her as she is completely shocked of his being alive.
Tobi then stabs her and she questions him being alive as he tells her , " the power of the uchiha that can only be used by someone possessing both the Senju and Uchiha DNA known as Izanagi, the eye that uses this loses its light forever in return for the short power to connect illusion and reality". Madara explains to her "But...you can't have the sage of six paths power... How??"
" i guess i can tell you a little of my history and technique since you are a former ally... you atleast earned that." madara says this drawing out the word former.
He Tells her all about it as She is completely stunned by this news
Madara then uses a Genjutsu on her and forces her to reveal the location and she dies after the genjutsu ends. "Finally i have found it... even in betrayal you smile at me mockingly." Tobi closes Nagatp's eyes Then warps the body and himself as he returns to the hideout to claim the rinnegan.
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NEXT time! chapter Four: The BEING with the Two Dojutsu. The War begins and A New pain??
