Naruto, the sharingan saga

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Naruto – the sharingan saga

Chapter 0

“10 years have past since the 4th ninja world war ended ,its because of those great sacrifices we are living peacefully we can’t just let their sacrifices go in vein, as we can see the hatred among the ninja’s have started causing pain again, so we can’t just sit here and have these meetings. This is the right time for us to form a alliance again before its too late”, said Konohamaru attending the kages meeting in village of light.
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Starting with theme song:

.Main characters:
1. Hinato uzumaki-son of Naruto uzumaki & Hinata hyuuga.
2. Ryan uchiha- son of Sasuke uchiha & Karaki natara.
3. Maimi haruno- daughter of Rock lee & Sakura haruno.
4. Shinara- daughter of Shikamaru & Timari
5. Laira na – daughter of Gaara & Shishi na
6. Dorgan – younger brother of Laira na
7. Kakashi hatake.
8. Shikamaru.
9. Sasuke.
10. Rock lee.
11. Sakura haruno.
12. Konohamaru.
13. Neji hyuuga
14. Sai.
15. Killerbee.
16. Kabuto yakushi.
17. Hinata hyuuga.
18. Yamato.
19. Gaara.
20. Harsh hyuuga.


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Far somewhere in konoha,

“Hey why are you late don’t you know that we are leaving 6 am in the morning for are new mission, just 10 minutes are left” said Maimi to Ryan sitting under the shade of a banayan tree...
“Why do you think he will waste 10 minutes to go their, it’s just a matter of seconds” said Hinato jumping down from the tree.

“Huh! Let’s go!” said Ryan looking towards the way.
(They all ran towards their sensei waiting for them)
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Ryan: so, what’s it Sai sensei.

Sai: we are going in the western forests of village of snakes, there is a place called Stone Mountain we have got info that Kabuto yakushi is their somewhere.
(After the fourth ninja world war the some villages name have been changed, some are newly formed)

Maimi: and,what!!!(Fearfully) we are going to hunt him down?, it will be an 'S' level mission, we can’t……….

Sai: calm down we have to just check if theirs any truth in this report or not plus if something happens, don’t you believe in your friend we will definetly take a safe escape (thinking: ~ yeah! If we are not directly in front of him)

Hinato: lets! Go do it!!
 
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hi! everyone,
please reply with how do u like my new fanfic(first), i will definitely post the next chapters, hope you all like it.
please comment.
 

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Why isn't Naruto in it? you should proably add a list of the people who died in the fourth ninja war as well. besides that, It's pretty good.
well! i was thinking to make its first chapter pretty large & detailed ya in quality too, but no one seems to b liking my story base what i have done.
does anybody have idea of how to make this reach at good public level...............& ya thanks for comments
 

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Hmmn, I don't see Naruto in the list. But I think this will be good. I'd like to see how Sai would be as a teacher. :)
Just a little note about their and there. When you mean a place, use there. Their - refers to people. :)
Aside from that, hmmmn, I think I'd like to see more.
You are free to criticize mine, too. Hehehehe. (Weaving Destiny)
 
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Nawt bad but im nawt understanding whyy you put Killer Bee in diz...i highlyy doubt he will be doin anythhing in duh real manga in the hidden leaf village....and if he does i asume it will be brief.
 
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