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Chap.3
The fox’s tone suddenly change to a more calm submissive state as he replied “I am the nine tailed fox a figure of my caliber has no reason to lie, so I expect you to believe me when I say I was being controlled by someone.
“Who is it, the one who controlled you….. the one who made you kill those people?” Naruto asked……………..
“Madara……. Uchiha” the fox replied.
Naruto remembered the stories he heard of this Madara Uchiha, he remembered the tails of his evil ways, he reminded him of Itachi Uchiha the brother of his best friend Sasuke Uchiha. Naruto began to feel rage develop within him, the more rage he felt the more powerful the fox’s presence became. Mean while from the outside Jariya saw what seemed to be a red orange bubbly cloak complete with one tail and fox like ears, begin to envelop Naruto. Immediately Jariya knew what it was, it was the chakra of the nine tailed fox surrounding Naruto and protecting him, able to enhance his strength and recovery rate. It wasn’t the first time Naruto was taken over by the fox.
“This is dangerous” Jariya said, he pulled out a piece of paper with a marking on it that said Absorb and Release. Jariya then jumped through the window and tried to place the tag on Naruto, whose eyes opened to a blood red rather than the usual sky blue. This seemingly possessed Naruto then struck at Jariya with his right hand, Jariya quickly dogged. Naruto jumped through the window with the box the that the third had given him and ran toward the hills with blinding speed, not even Jariya could follow. Naruto after reaching a far ways off from kanoha powered up a Giant Vermillion Rasengan and slammed it into the ground. The sound and sight of the blast traveled for miles, even Jariya heard it all the way from kanoha and started moving toward it.
After dust and debris settled and rage subsided Naruto began to walk aimlessly in the forest. He heard a voice which playfully lead him on saying ‘Hey you kid over here, I can give you what you want come on.’ Naruto followed the voice to a cave at the bottom of a steep cliff outside the opening he saw a figure, a male. ‘Maybe it’s this guy who called out to me’, Naruto taught to himself. On reaching closer Naruto saw the man in full description, He looked a lot like the fourth Hokage with his yellow spiky hair but about Jariya’s age. He wore a black fitted long sleeved turtle neck, covered by a gold plated torso and shoulder armor resembling the First Hokage’s, and black Capri pants completed with silver shin guards. The man said in a joyful manner high there my name is Mirrano what’s yours, Naruto hesitantly told the man his name. ‘Naruto huh,’ the man replied, he told Naruto he is going to make some roasted potatoes and offered him some. Naruto with his belly in hand as usual didn’t refuse the offer, it wasn’t ramen but it would do.
“Interesting power you have there, are you the nine tail Jinjuriki”, Mirrano inquired. Naruto looked puzzled wondering how he knew of the nine tails, Naruto just simply replied ‘yes, yes I am. ‘There was something on Naruto’s mind, he wondered why was Mirrano dressed like that it looks as though he is ready for a battle. Upon closer observation of the man’s armor Naruto saw scratches and dents also bruises on his face. Before Naruto could question him two kunai with paper bombs attached landed between the pair, they both evaded the explosion by jumping in opposite directions. Then two ninja identically dressed in black hooded cloaks with anbu hunter masks, which bore the Otogakure symbol on them. The two ninja began to fight with Mirrano it is at that moment Naruto saw something about Mirrano that shocked him, it was as though everything just froze. Naruto was brought out of his daze when a third ninja attacked him out of nowhere, dressed identical to the first two.
Naruto thought to himself he had to finish this quickly although he didn’t know who they were or what they wanted, he just knew they were intending to kill. The Oto Ninja jumped in front of Naruto and started performing hand seals, and slammed his hand into the ground calling his jutsu ‘Earth style Mud casket. A trail of mud ran along the ground from the ninja’s hand to Naruto and covered him from his feet to his neck. The Oto ninja smirked as he said ‘I expected more from a Leaf ninja, as he called out his final jutsu, ‘Fire Style Mud Trail Explosion.’ Fire trailed up the mud detonating it as it went along then finally detonated the mud which supposedly surrounded Naruto. The ninja then turned to walk way and scratch what used to be his head as his decapitated head fell to the ground, he saw his own death, seeing his body drop drop to the floor. Naruto looked over to Mirrano’ battle as he saw one of his opponents was already dead to, Naruto was determined to finish this quick. The final Oto ninja was just about to perform a jutsu ‘Water style Water Balloon Explosion.’ Rasengan!! A hole was blasted through his chest, Mirrano watched in amazement at Naruto ferocity, he was so cold so unconcerned that he just took away two lives, it was a trait unfound in young leaf ninja. Mirrano thanked Naruto who he was being very careful to keep calm Naruto looked like he wasn’t finish killing. “Naruto you saved me if I was hit by that jutsu the water would of forcefully entered my body and exploded, I owe my life to you……….. now let’s eat” Mirrano said with a smile.
Mirrano carefully sat down not taking his eyes off Naruto who just stood there in a menacing state. “Mirrano during your fight I saw you use a power a power unique to a particular endangered clan of the hidden leaf, I saw you use…….. Sharingan. Who the hell are you and how do you know of the nine tails!!” Naruto shouted in the most blood chilling of ways. With his Kyuubi cloak forming.
Chap 4
“Its no use hiding my true self to you anymore, I have two titles; my full name is Mirrano Namikaze.” Naruto’s threatening demeanor changed to that of surprise and suspicion, Mirrano continued. “My second and true title which I was forbidden to use is Mirrano………….. Uchiha.” Naruto was speechless, he stood there confused but not dropping his guard for a second, he was about to speak but decided to let Mirrano continue.
Mirrano began to explain, “my father was a former member of the Uchiha clan, Misano Uchiha and my mother was a kinochi of the Namikaze clan. Back in those times it was forbidden for Uchiha to have relations outside the clan, my father didn’t want word of his love affair or even far worse my birth to be spoken. My mother understood her situation and choose to live on the outskirts of the village until I was about 3yrs of age then she came back to the clan. The Namikaze were not as secretive and harsh as the Uchiha, so they accepted me also my mother’s foolish excuse of a runaway romance gone bad. I trained in the ninja arts under my clan, I was always a little above an average level, until something changed. My mother and I was taking a walk home after some diplomatic duties in another land, when we were attacked by two rouge ninja. We fought with everything we had but we were out classed in every way, my mother was killed right before my eye’s protecting me. That’s when my Sharingan was awakened, this new power allowed me to barely escape with my life after killing one of the ninja.
Of course I didn’t know what this power was, it was only during training with my clan I activated it again; the elders quickly noticed the oddity and brought me before our leader and my step father Ikazuchi Namikaze, this man was the grandfather of the Forth Hokage. From that moment on my training was done only under supervision of our clan’s elites.”
“Wait Mirrano you said your step dad was the fourth’s grand dad” Naruto said sounding much more calm than before, almost happy.
“Yes Naruto the fourth is the son of my younger step brother Inabikari Namikaze, why.”
“Because I am the son of the fourth…….. and we are family.” With that Naruto needed to hear no more he fell to his knees, head bowed and tears flowing. Mirrano looked on in disbelief, ‘what are the odds of that, I’m a grand uncle.’
One Week Later
Naruto began to stay with Mirrano he felt compelled to because it was his only known family to him. They began to exchange their stories, Naruto even told him the painful story of how his parents died. Mirrano became very close even as close as him and Jariya not that he forgot about Jariya he was just glad to have found family. One day whilst the two where relaxing at a hot spring Naruto asked why were those three Oto ninja chasing after him. Mirrano said instead of telling you just look into my Sharingan and see for yourself. Before Naruto could even say anything he was in Mirrano’s mind reliving his experience. Naruto saw what was Mirrano jumping through some trees in his golden battle armor looking as though he was closing in on something or someone. A clearing was coming up, Mirrano stopped right before the clearing looking at someone who appeared to be with two others. On closer observation he saw the person Mirrano was observing that person was Orochimaru the other of in the distance appeared to be kabuto and a dark blue haired boy about his age with the Uchiha symbol on his back the two appeared to be tranning.
Dog, Ox, Rabbit…… Chidori Current!!!
With that the boy with the Uchiha symbol destroyed about 16 boulders hurled to him at random by Kabuto, with a large guided discharge of lightning.
“ Very well ‘Sasuke’ Why don’t you and Kabuto go back to the hide out let me take care of this.”
With a large discharge of lightening Sasuke and Kabuto were gone.
Mirrano knew this was his chance, Mirrano jumped down from his tree slaming his hand into the ground.
‘Earth Breaker Jutsu’, crumbling the ground under Orochimaru’s feet who then jumped upward to save himself.
“Don’t think you getaway that easy, Fire style Fire pillar jutsu!!!” Dense pillars of fire shot up at Orochimaru from the ground who dogged it.
“ So you want to play rough huh Mirrano very well, Wind Release Great break Though !!” A large current of air shot out from Orichiaru turning Mirrano’s fire attack back on him with ten times the power. Mirrano Doged it but slightly burnt his left foot when he jumped to the right. The two then stood on their newly created battle ground staring at each other sizing each other up.
“Why have you come hear Mirrano, did you come to offer your body to me? After all you know how desperately I want an Uchiha body and if I kill you who would know, I would be able to walk around without anybody knowing a thing.”
“I came here to kill you Orochimaru you want my body so badly then you have to kill me first, Sharingan!!!”
“Hmm the Sharingan so you’re finally getting serious Mirrano, Ten Thousand Snakes Wave Jutsu!!”
With that Oruchimaru released a wave of brown snakes from his mouth crawling on the ground toward Mirrano.” Speed Release Jutsu!!!” With that Mirrano’s chakra began flowing aggressively, increasing his speed tenfold. Mirrano dogged the snakes with ease by jumping up in the blink of an eye, he then went straight for Orochimaru hitting him with a supersonic knee. He then began to pummel Orochimaru. Orochimaru realized he was not properly able to defend himself due to the fact his body was weakening, it was almost time to change bodies. He knew he had to do something and fast, tijutsu was out of the question, due to Mirrano’s super speed and Sharingan. Orichimaru managed to escape by moving slightly to Mirrano’s blind side taking a kick to edge of his shoulder spiraling him off some distance.
Mirrano was forced to cancel his speed tech due to the massive amounts of chakra it uses. Orochimaru didn’t waste the opportunity he used a summoning technique to summon three masked Oto ninja. The four then began to attack Mirrano together. A Sannin and 3 anbu level ninja were too much for Mirrano who then began to retreat. Orochimaru stayed behind while the three summoned ninja gave chase.
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Chap.3
The fox’s tone suddenly change to a more calm submissive state as he replied “I am the nine tailed fox a figure of my caliber has no reason to lie, so I expect you to believe me when I say I was being controlled by someone.
“Who is it, the one who controlled you….. the one who made you kill those people?” Naruto asked……………..
“Madara……. Uchiha” the fox replied.
Naruto remembered the stories he heard of this Madara Uchiha, he remembered the tails of his evil ways, he reminded him of Itachi Uchiha the brother of his best friend Sasuke Uchiha. Naruto began to feel rage develop within him, the more rage he felt the more powerful the fox’s presence became. Mean while from the outside Jariya saw what seemed to be a red orange bubbly cloak complete with one tail and fox like ears, begin to envelop Naruto. Immediately Jariya knew what it was, it was the chakra of the nine tailed fox surrounding Naruto and protecting him, able to enhance his strength and recovery rate. It wasn’t the first time Naruto was taken over by the fox.
“This is dangerous” Jariya said, he pulled out a piece of paper with a marking on it that said Absorb and Release. Jariya then jumped through the window and tried to place the tag on Naruto, whose eyes opened to a blood red rather than the usual sky blue. This seemingly possessed Naruto then struck at Jariya with his right hand, Jariya quickly dogged. Naruto jumped through the window with the box the that the third had given him and ran toward the hills with blinding speed, not even Jariya could follow. Naruto after reaching a far ways off from kanoha powered up a Giant Vermillion Rasengan and slammed it into the ground. The sound and sight of the blast traveled for miles, even Jariya heard it all the way from kanoha and started moving toward it.
After dust and debris settled and rage subsided Naruto began to walk aimlessly in the forest. He heard a voice which playfully lead him on saying ‘Hey you kid over here, I can give you what you want come on.’ Naruto followed the voice to a cave at the bottom of a steep cliff outside the opening he saw a figure, a male. ‘Maybe it’s this guy who called out to me’, Naruto taught to himself. On reaching closer Naruto saw the man in full description, He looked a lot like the fourth Hokage with his yellow spiky hair but about Jariya’s age. He wore a black fitted long sleeved turtle neck, covered by a gold plated torso and shoulder armor resembling the First Hokage’s, and black Capri pants completed with silver shin guards. The man said in a joyful manner high there my name is Mirrano what’s yours, Naruto hesitantly told the man his name. ‘Naruto huh,’ the man replied, he told Naruto he is going to make some roasted potatoes and offered him some. Naruto with his belly in hand as usual didn’t refuse the offer, it wasn’t ramen but it would do.
“Interesting power you have there, are you the nine tail Jinjuriki”, Mirrano inquired. Naruto looked puzzled wondering how he knew of the nine tails, Naruto just simply replied ‘yes, yes I am. ‘There was something on Naruto’s mind, he wondered why was Mirrano dressed like that it looks as though he is ready for a battle. Upon closer observation of the man’s armor Naruto saw scratches and dents also bruises on his face. Before Naruto could question him two kunai with paper bombs attached landed between the pair, they both evaded the explosion by jumping in opposite directions. Then two ninja identically dressed in black hooded cloaks with anbu hunter masks, which bore the Otogakure symbol on them. The two ninja began to fight with Mirrano it is at that moment Naruto saw something about Mirrano that shocked him, it was as though everything just froze. Naruto was brought out of his daze when a third ninja attacked him out of nowhere, dressed identical to the first two.
Naruto thought to himself he had to finish this quickly although he didn’t know who they were or what they wanted, he just knew they were intending to kill. The Oto Ninja jumped in front of Naruto and started performing hand seals, and slammed his hand into the ground calling his jutsu ‘Earth style Mud casket. A trail of mud ran along the ground from the ninja’s hand to Naruto and covered him from his feet to his neck. The Oto ninja smirked as he said ‘I expected more from a Leaf ninja, as he called out his final jutsu, ‘Fire Style Mud Trail Explosion.’ Fire trailed up the mud detonating it as it went along then finally detonated the mud which supposedly surrounded Naruto. The ninja then turned to walk way and scratch what used to be his head as his decapitated head fell to the ground, he saw his own death, seeing his body drop drop to the floor. Naruto looked over to Mirrano’ battle as he saw one of his opponents was already dead to, Naruto was determined to finish this quick. The final Oto ninja was just about to perform a jutsu ‘Water style Water Balloon Explosion.’ Rasengan!! A hole was blasted through his chest, Mirrano watched in amazement at Naruto ferocity, he was so cold so unconcerned that he just took away two lives, it was a trait unfound in young leaf ninja. Mirrano thanked Naruto who he was being very careful to keep calm Naruto looked like he wasn’t finish killing. “Naruto you saved me if I was hit by that jutsu the water would of forcefully entered my body and exploded, I owe my life to you……….. now let’s eat” Mirrano said with a smile.
Mirrano carefully sat down not taking his eyes off Naruto who just stood there in a menacing state. “Mirrano during your fight I saw you use a power a power unique to a particular endangered clan of the hidden leaf, I saw you use…….. Sharingan. Who the hell are you and how do you know of the nine tails!!” Naruto shouted in the most blood chilling of ways. With his Kyuubi cloak forming.
Chap 4
“Its no use hiding my true self to you anymore, I have two titles; my full name is Mirrano Namikaze.” Naruto’s threatening demeanor changed to that of surprise and suspicion, Mirrano continued. “My second and true title which I was forbidden to use is Mirrano………….. Uchiha.” Naruto was speechless, he stood there confused but not dropping his guard for a second, he was about to speak but decided to let Mirrano continue.
Mirrano began to explain, “my father was a former member of the Uchiha clan, Misano Uchiha and my mother was a kinochi of the Namikaze clan. Back in those times it was forbidden for Uchiha to have relations outside the clan, my father didn’t want word of his love affair or even far worse my birth to be spoken. My mother understood her situation and choose to live on the outskirts of the village until I was about 3yrs of age then she came back to the clan. The Namikaze were not as secretive and harsh as the Uchiha, so they accepted me also my mother’s foolish excuse of a runaway romance gone bad. I trained in the ninja arts under my clan, I was always a little above an average level, until something changed. My mother and I was taking a walk home after some diplomatic duties in another land, when we were attacked by two rouge ninja. We fought with everything we had but we were out classed in every way, my mother was killed right before my eye’s protecting me. That’s when my Sharingan was awakened, this new power allowed me to barely escape with my life after killing one of the ninja.
Of course I didn’t know what this power was, it was only during training with my clan I activated it again; the elders quickly noticed the oddity and brought me before our leader and my step father Ikazuchi Namikaze, this man was the grandfather of the Forth Hokage. From that moment on my training was done only under supervision of our clan’s elites.”
“Wait Mirrano you said your step dad was the fourth’s grand dad” Naruto said sounding much more calm than before, almost happy.
“Yes Naruto the fourth is the son of my younger step brother Inabikari Namikaze, why.”
“Because I am the son of the fourth…….. and we are family.” With that Naruto needed to hear no more he fell to his knees, head bowed and tears flowing. Mirrano looked on in disbelief, ‘what are the odds of that, I’m a grand uncle.’
One Week Later
Naruto began to stay with Mirrano he felt compelled to because it was his only known family to him. They began to exchange their stories, Naruto even told him the painful story of how his parents died. Mirrano became very close even as close as him and Jariya not that he forgot about Jariya he was just glad to have found family. One day whilst the two where relaxing at a hot spring Naruto asked why were those three Oto ninja chasing after him. Mirrano said instead of telling you just look into my Sharingan and see for yourself. Before Naruto could even say anything he was in Mirrano’s mind reliving his experience. Naruto saw what was Mirrano jumping through some trees in his golden battle armor looking as though he was closing in on something or someone. A clearing was coming up, Mirrano stopped right before the clearing looking at someone who appeared to be with two others. On closer observation he saw the person Mirrano was observing that person was Orochimaru the other of in the distance appeared to be kabuto and a dark blue haired boy about his age with the Uchiha symbol on his back the two appeared to be tranning.
Dog, Ox, Rabbit…… Chidori Current!!!
With that the boy with the Uchiha symbol destroyed about 16 boulders hurled to him at random by Kabuto, with a large guided discharge of lightning.
“ Very well ‘Sasuke’ Why don’t you and Kabuto go back to the hide out let me take care of this.”
With a large discharge of lightening Sasuke and Kabuto were gone.
Mirrano knew this was his chance, Mirrano jumped down from his tree slaming his hand into the ground.
‘Earth Breaker Jutsu’, crumbling the ground under Orochimaru’s feet who then jumped upward to save himself.
“Don’t think you getaway that easy, Fire style Fire pillar jutsu!!!” Dense pillars of fire shot up at Orochimaru from the ground who dogged it.
“ So you want to play rough huh Mirrano very well, Wind Release Great break Though !!” A large current of air shot out from Orichiaru turning Mirrano’s fire attack back on him with ten times the power. Mirrano Doged it but slightly burnt his left foot when he jumped to the right. The two then stood on their newly created battle ground staring at each other sizing each other up.
“Why have you come hear Mirrano, did you come to offer your body to me? After all you know how desperately I want an Uchiha body and if I kill you who would know, I would be able to walk around without anybody knowing a thing.”
“I came here to kill you Orochimaru you want my body so badly then you have to kill me first, Sharingan!!!”
“Hmm the Sharingan so you’re finally getting serious Mirrano, Ten Thousand Snakes Wave Jutsu!!”
With that Oruchimaru released a wave of brown snakes from his mouth crawling on the ground toward Mirrano.” Speed Release Jutsu!!!” With that Mirrano’s chakra began flowing aggressively, increasing his speed tenfold. Mirrano dogged the snakes with ease by jumping up in the blink of an eye, he then went straight for Orochimaru hitting him with a supersonic knee. He then began to pummel Orochimaru. Orochimaru realized he was not properly able to defend himself due to the fact his body was weakening, it was almost time to change bodies. He knew he had to do something and fast, tijutsu was out of the question, due to Mirrano’s super speed and Sharingan. Orichimaru managed to escape by moving slightly to Mirrano’s blind side taking a kick to edge of his shoulder spiraling him off some distance.
Mirrano was forced to cancel his speed tech due to the massive amounts of chakra it uses. Orochimaru didn’t waste the opportunity he used a summoning technique to summon three masked Oto ninja. The four then began to attack Mirrano together. A Sannin and 3 anbu level ninja were too much for Mirrano who then began to retreat. Orochimaru stayed behind while the three summoned ninja gave chase.
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Now what do you guys think there are more chapters where that came from.
Let me know what you think...... too much action to little action...more content too much content and stuff like that.