Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 09] "A Leaf that Blows in the Wind."

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Hey guys! Here's the new chapter! decided to make 2 chapters in a row this weekend...Might do a double chapter or a normal one around the weekday...In other words, Enjoy!
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Kurama put's his trust in Naruto to do what he can too control this boys power, as Naruto's team reaches the gate of Sunagakure a long time friend appears waiting.



?: It's about time you got here.....Uzumaki Naruto.

Naruto: Gaara!?

Hikaru's eyes widen as he see's the Red spikey haired man wearing His casual Sand Gourd........But much Larger then his usual, He is also wearing his regular Kazekage hat and robes.

Hikaru: *So this is the 5th Kazekage...Subaku no Gaara.....*

Gaara shuffles to his right staring down at
3 Genin and one Jonin


Gaara: Are these you're students?

Naruto: Yes!, Allow me to Introduce: Haru Uzumaki, Yuki Ayano and Hikaru Kasai

Gaara: Another Uzumaki!?

Naruto: I thought that too, I thought I was the only one in the Leaf.

Gaara: Oh I see...

Gaara: In other words I'll tell you the details in my mansion.

The group and Gaara walk through Sunagakure to get to the mansion...As they do Gaara explains what has happened over the past 10 years.

Gaara: Over the years the Allied Shinobi Forces and I helped strengthen a bigger army for our village..Our village is now one of the top villages.

Gaara: Now people from different clans possesing different Kekkai Genkai's come here...Too become shinobi or become part of the village

Gaara: After the war I've decided to add a Motto to our village

Naruto stops shocked and looks at Gaara with a intent look

Naruto: Motto!?

Gaara: A leaf that blows in the wind is like a Ninja that fights with resolve.

Naruto becomes shocked but then smiles.

Gaara: Alright were here, I'll explain further details

As they walk in to the mansion, Gaara sits in his seat as the 5 Konoha ninja stand in the middle of the room respectively

Song:

Gaara: After the Akatsuki was terminated a new organization has been established so far we have no information of what there motives are or the organizations name.....But this group is not filled with elite members...rather then normal shinobi...But it may have a few Elite shinobi.

Naruto: A new organization!?

Suddenly a shadow moves swiftly away from them

All: !?

Suddenly Sunagakure starts to shake violently with fear and trembles

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Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 08] "A Leaf that Blows in the Wind."

Not bad. I would suggest lengthening your chapters, as these are a bit too short. If you plan on making them this short, fill them with detail and conversation, it will lengthen them considerably.
 

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Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 08] "A Leaf that Blows in the Wind."

Not bad. I would suggest lengthening your chapters, as these are a bit too short. If you plan on making them this short, fill them with detail and conversation, it will lengthen them considerably.
I'm trying to make the chapters at manga-level so I can make room for more chapters so people don't have to mark every dialogue they are at.
 

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Re: Naruto Tensai Gaiden: [Part: 08] "A Leaf that Blows in the Wind."

Basically I'm trying to keep my chapters like the amount of pages you see in a naruto chapter, But yeah I'll try to make it longer.
Hm, but you see, the manga has drawings. A story should be longer, much longer. I understand where you are coming from, I'm just giving you constructive criticism. ^_^
 
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