Naruto-Tōchaku: Introduction

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Sukai: Sukai, the son of the Legend Kakashi Hatake. He is currently 14 years of age. Throughout his life he has had trouble seeing. He also has had trouble making friends given his Paper white hair. His eyes are also special, for they inherited the genes of the implanted sharingan. He still has not unlocked it, but someday he hopes to achieve the special eyes. He has mastered Lightning style jutsu and has many variations of it. His father has taught him many skills with lightning such as Raikiri, Lightning clone, lightning beast running jutsu, and his own variant Nusun enerugī Jutsu. This makes it so the opponent is unable to release energy by disrupting the electric pulses in their heart. This technique is very deadly considering it shuts down there heart for a few minutes.

Kumo: A 13 year old girl born by Hinata and some unknown shinobi has the eyes of her mother. She is a well rounded girl with a great family. She has learned many of the Hyuuga techniques, in memory of her uncle Neji. She is a hard worker and makes friends easy.

Sutā: Suta is a 15 year old man with a past unknown. Sukai is very suspicious of him and never lowers his guard. the leaf ninja do not know who his parents are. Nobody knows much about him. He has a very unorthodox fighting style, which he uses to catch his opponents off guard. He uses many fire style variations.


Side characters:
Kakashi Hatake
Hinata Hyuga
Naruto Uzumaki
Sasuke Uchiha
Tsunade Senju


Introduction: Farewell...

Naruto: I cant believe she's actually gone... after all these years. Granny... *Sob sob*
Sasuke: Naruto.. Man up. Shinobi aren't suppose to show emotion.
Naruto: I know but..
Sakura: Dont argue! You know she wouldn't want you to be mourning over her. Just stop and go home.
Sakura begins to weep.
Sasuke: Tsk.. I'm going.

~Its been 14 years since the war~
Everyone is in peace and settled down.. our heroes from the past have kids of their own. Naruto and sasuke are Co-Kages of the Alliance. Having 2 Kages has been an efficient way of running the alliance, given one is kind and compassionate and the other, ruthless and aggressive. Kakashi has brought back the police force to keep everything, like petty crime and Terror organizations in order. He's about 44 years of age. After the war he took Obito's Sharingan, so through him his friend could still see through his eyes, even through death. He has trained the eyes to their full potential, and also uses them more efficiently so they don't completely drain his chakra.

Sukai: Hey Kumo! You feel like going and training for a bit? With my Father there of course.
Kumo: *Sigh* Sure.. Lemme just see if Suta wants to tag along, okay?
Sukai: Whatever.. you know what your doing. Meet me at the training ground at around 3, okay?
Kumo: Alright. I'll ask My mother if it's okay if I skip dinner. Bye!
~Just then, Suta comes down from the shadows of a tree~
Suta: *Tsk.. they're troublesome fellows.* "I'll go with you Sukai, to keep you safe and whatnot."
Sukai: Psh..
Suta: -Smirks- Well, shall we move along?


Authors Note:
I hope you guys will want to read more! Give me tips on what I could improve on. Next chapter will be longer taking in the fact this is the intro.
 
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Main Characters:
Sukai: Sukai, the son of the Legend Kakashi Hatake. He is currently 14 years of age. Throughout his life he has had trouble seeing. He also has had trouble making friends given his Paper white hair. His eyes are also special, for they inherited the genes of the implanted sharingan. He still has not unlocked it, but someday he hopes to achieve the special eyes. He has mastered Lightning style jutsu and has many variations of it. His father has taught him many skills with lightning such as Raikiri, Lightning clone, lightning beast running jutsu, and his own variant Nusun enerugī Jutsu. This makes it so the opponent is unable to release energy by disrupting the electric pulses in their heart. This technique is very deadly considering it shuts down there heart for a few minutes.

Kumo: A 13 year old girl born by Hinata and some unknown shinobi has the eyes of her mother. She is a well rounded girl with a great family. She has learned many of the Hyuuga techniques, in memory of her uncle Neji. She is a hard worker and makes friends easy.

Sutā: Suta is a 15 year old man with a past unknown. Sukai is very suspicious of him and never lowers his guard. the leaf ninja do not know who his parents are. Nobody knows much about him. He has a very unorthodox fighting style, which he uses to catch his opponents off guard. He uses many fire style variations.


Side characters:
Kakashi Hatake
Hinata Hyuga
Naruto Uzumaki
Sasuke Uchiha
Tsunade Senju


Introduction: Farewell...

Naruto: I cant believe she's actually gone... after all these years. Granny... *Sob sob*
Sasuke: Naruto.. Man up. Shinobi aren't suppose to show emotion.
Naruto: I know but..
Sakura: Dont argue! You know she wouldn't want you to be mourning over her. Just stop and go home.
Sakura begins to weep.
Sasuke: Tsk.. I'm going.

~Its been 14 years since the war~
Everyone is in peace and settled down.. our heroes from the past have kids of their own. Naruto and sasuke are Co-Kages of the Alliance. Having 2 Kages has been an efficient way of running the alliance, given one is kind and compassionate and the other, ruthless and aggressive. Kakashi has brought back the police force to keep everything, like petty crime and Terror organizations in order. He's about 44 years of age. After the war he took Obito's Sharingan, so through him his friend could still see through his eyes, even through death. He has trained the eyes to their full potential, and also uses them more efficiently so they don't completely drain his chakra.

Sukai: Hey Kumo! You feel like going and training for a bit? With my Father there of course.
Kumo: *Sigh* Sure.. Lemme just see if Suta wants to tag along, okay?
Sukai: Whatever.. you know what your doing. Meet me at the training ground at around 3, okay?
Kumo: Alright. I'll ask My mother if it's okay if I skip dinner. Bye!
~Just then, Suta comes down from the shadows of a tree~
Suta: *Tsk.. they're troublesome fellows.* "I'll go with you Sukai, to keep you safe and whatnot."
Sukai: Psh..
Suta: -Smirks- Well, shall we move along?


Authors Note:
I hope you guys will want to read more! Give me tips on what I could improve on. Next chapter will be longer taking in the fact this is the intro.
If anyone is viewing this, here are the other chapters.






 
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