MayonakaUchiha
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Chapter 1: The unknown Akatsuki member
Note: The story takes place in the beginning of the 4th Shinobi War, before the fight Tobi vs Naruto and Killer Bee takes place.
Third person's POV:
The ground was trembling as the joint Shinobi army and the Zetsu clone army were violently fighting on the battlefield. Blood splattered everywhere, and it was not a pretty sight. At least for those who actually watched it.
A little farther away from the place of terror, a lone bird was flying in the sky. The bird was huge and looked like an eagle, except it had black and some purple feathers. No, this was no ordinary bird- The creature landed on the tallest tree branch it could find and gazed at the blood-filled battles. But, suddenly, the bird began to transform. It transformed into a human, a woman.
The woman was probably in her late twenties, judging by her appearance. She had dark purple hair with a bang that covered her left eye, and her visible eye was colored deep green. The woman was dressed in a black cloak that covered the rest of her body. She was muttering something to herself, quietly.
“Just as I expected...”
The woman had a faint smile on her face, almost like she was thrilled by watching blood splatter. She closed her eye, and after a while she opened it again. It was as she felt movement in the forest beneath her. In an instant she was on the forest floor, running. She was being followed by two mysterious shadows. The shadows were stalking her through the forest, almost leading them into the battlefield. But at the end of the forest, only a few meters from the fierce battles, the female stopped. She had from long ago scented the followers and where turning to confront them, face to face.
“I know you’re there. Come out and show yourself, Tobi.”
A masked man came out from the shadows and stopped a couple of meters away from her.
“So you found out, huh? I’d expect nothing less from a former member of Akatsuki.”
The woman was gazing at Tobis mask, in his left eye he had a sharingan, and in the other he had a rinnegan.
“Long time no see, Mayonaka.” Tobi said from underneath his mask.
‘So you finally got your rinnegan, after all these years’, Mayonaka thought as her smile grew bigger.
“What do you want Tobi? Aren’t you supposed to be chasing the Hachibi and the Kyuubi?”
“There’s plenty of time for that, my dear.” Tobi spoke from behind her back this time; “We just wanted to ask you some simple questions, that’s
all…”
Mayonaka already knew what he was going to ask- her face expression turned serious as she put her bang behind her ear, revealing her left eye. The eye was closed. There was something different about it, though. The skin around it had a dark gray color, and there were also some purple lines that looked like scars under her eye.
Quickly, Mayonaka disappeared and appeared again a few meters away from where Tobi now were standing. She was quiet. Tobi was quiet. All they could hear was the screaming and fighting coming from the battlefield. Mayonaka regained her smile again, and her eye slowly opened.
“If you want my eye... You’ll have to fight me!”
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So, what do u think? Shall I continue with this story or not? This is the first fanfic I've ever written so please give me critisism on how I can improve.
Also do mind that english is not my mother tongue.
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