Naruto Shippuden Chapter 658: "Madara finally..."

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This is a sequel to my previous chapter,if you would like to see it,go to the link below:



*Madara's head gets hit by the bijuu dama thrown by Naruto*

*Madara stands without a head for 5 minutes,but the head doesn't regenerate*

Naruto: I think we did it!

*suddenly Madara comes out of the ground in front of his beheaded clone*

Tsunade: *shocked* We won't succeed if we leave Naruto to finish the job!We all have to attack him at once!

Shinobi: Yeah!

Madara: *grins* Hmm,you of all people should shut your mouth more.How will you defeat me if the Juubi stops you?

*Madara performs a hand seal and the Juubi comes out of his belly*

*the Juubi starts transforming into a giant flower,aiming at the moon*

Madara: And how may I ask will you defeat me in 10 minutes?If the flower blossoms,the eye inside it will reflect the moon and the Infinite Tsukuyomi will begin!

*everybody looks at the flower*

*Yin notices the giant flower in the horizon*

Yin: Has he already started?

Yang: Brother,before this all comes to an end...I must tell you something...

Gaara: Everybody,we need to cut that flower from the ground immediately!We have only 10 minutes to do that!

Hashirama: Quick!Let's go!

*everybody starts cutting the flower's base*

Yin: Brother,from the beginning you were the closest person and the one I always loved.

*Naruto hovers at Madara with two bijuu damas*

Yin: I loved you even more than father..

*Madara hovers towards Naruto with a bijuu dama rod*

Yin: And when father hid the truth away from you...

*Naruto destroys the rod and aims for Madara's chest*

Yin: I almost cried...

Raikage: 5 minutes left!Do not falter,or else your lives will be proven useless!

Yin: And now,finally standing in front of you...

*Naruto hits Madara in the chest and Madara flies away*

Yin:I will tell you one thing...

Yang: What?

Yin: I will always be your brother and more importantly...

Yin: I will always love you...

*Yin dies*

*Yang looks in surprise and sheds a tear*

Yang: What have I done?

*meanwhile at the other battle*

Naruto: I need to finish him off,while he's regenerating,otherwise I will never end this stupid fight!

Shinobi 1: This flower is thick as hell,how are we supposed to cut this apart?

Shinobi 2: If you've got time to whine about it,then hurry up!Madara said we have about 10 minutes,before we hit the bucket!

*Rock Lee hits one of the flower's roots with his leg and breaks it*

Rock Lee: That's it!Guy sensei,everybody,don't attack the base,aim for the roots!We'll cut it apart easier!

Guy: Good thinking,Lee! *thinking* Lee,I think even in the most desperate of times that you've surpassed me,even though you can't master the art of ninjutsu...

Tenten: There's a lot of roots to cut apart!I don't think we'll make it!

Hinata: Don't lose hope,Tenten!

Sakura: Shannaro!!! *cuts apart two roots at once*

Shikamaru: There's a total of 34 roots...by the time we cut 20 of them,we will have 54 seconds left...and then what about Naruto?Is he done yet?

Sasuke: *cutting apart a root* Hmph,this should be over soon.

Ino: So we have some progress!Now the only thing left is to win this war!

Shino: I am not scared of the Tsukuyomi.Why,you ask?Because I believe in Naruto and everybody else,unconditionally.

*Naruto jumps at Madara with a final blow of RasenShuriken*

*Naruto pulverizes Madara completely*

Naruto: Now to go help the others!

*Naruto jumps in and starts tearing the roots apart*

Shikamaru: Naruto!So he defeated Madara!He's not even cutting the roots,he's just tearing them apart!At this rate,we will be done in 5 minutes!

Mei: Don't use water jutsu to cut away the roots!That way we will give more energy to the flower and make it blossom faster!

Raikage: If we electricute the flower,we will speed up the process and make it blossom faster too!

Gaara:But maybe cutting away the roots isn't the answer!If I use my sand jutsu and cover the flower in sand and then the Mizukage shoots out clay on the sand and hardens it,we can stop the flower from blossoming!

Mei: But the problem is that we need to use wide range jutsus that don't even cover up half of the flower!

Gaara:In that case we will have to pick up the pace!

*the flower slowly starts blossoming and the eye is slowly exposing itself*

Hashirama: Five minutes left!We need to strengthen up!

Orochimaru: *using snakes to cut apart the roots* I guess this will be over soon.

Sasuke: *slashes 5 roots at once with his Susano'o* Almost done!

Naruto: *finishes off the last root* HAAA!

*everybody lands on the ground as the flower trembles down to the ground*

Everybody: Wohooh!

Yang: What?They took down the flower?!?I need to and settle this!

Next chapter,the flower has finally fallen and Naruto reaches his last obstacle towards the title Hokage!

To be continued...
 
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Booooooooorrrringgggg!!!!
I find your replies to be more boring than my chapters.You continuosly comment with no effort just to put down my content.But just for ahead of time,keep it to yourself.Comment if you have something worth commenting,otherwise go for a walk outside. :)
 

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I find your replies to be more boring than my chapters.You continuosly comment with no effort just to put down my content.But just for ahead of time,keep it to yourself.Comment if you have something worth commenting,otherwise go for a walk outside. :)
Im just messing with you ,your predictions are amazing keep it up:yay:
 

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Im just messing with you ,your predictions are amazing keep it up:yay:
Wow,sudden change of heart?Whatever,good to know.I can't afford to constantly update every single person who enjoys these "predictions" *cough* FANFIC SERIES *cough*,so if you could just try to keep up I would be greatful.
 
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