Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XXVI

[naruto kyuubi]

dude it was really intense, i loved this chapter specially the way koji and kankuro was talking heart to heart. though ryoko is doing more damage than help

 

[~Uzumaki~]

Things I liked-
The training session between Koichi and Ryoko apart from how well you described it(which was totally awesome), I like that Koichi doesn't just stand there like a certain no-eyebrow shinobi I know, his taijutsu added to his stamina and the sand make him more dangerous than Gaara at the same age. Koji's training in the dark was really cool too, the whole fighting while not seeing reminded me a bit of Zabuza and his 'Silent Killing'. I'm hoping Maiyuri lives. I'm also hoping Koichi goes bijuu crazy again but kills bad guys. Again, Ryoko's dad is such a *rants profanities*

Things I didn't like-
Ryoko only using swords, she needs to diversify her skill set, maybe a little genjutsu, a little ninjutsu. With her father putting so much pressure on her, one would think she would be more well versed in different fields, Koji is good in tai, nin, gen, med nin and even fuinnjutsu as he attempted to restrain a berserk Koichi(again, I see the fanboyism dude lol xd)

Overall good chapter.

 

[Reborn]

Things I liked-
The training session between Koichi and Ryoko apart from how well you described it(which was totally awesome), I like that Koichi doesn't just stand there like a certain no-eyebrow shinobi I know, his taijutsu added to his stamina and the sand make him more dangerous than Gaara at the same age. Koji's training in the dark was really cool too, the whole fighting while not seeing reminded me a bit of Zabuza and his 'Silent Killing'. I'm hoping Maiyuri lives. I'm also hoping Koichi goes bijuu crazy again but kills bad guys. Again, Ryoko's dad is such a *rants profanities*

Things I didn't like-
Ryoko only using swords, she needs to diversify her skill set, maybe a little genjutsu, a little ninjutsu. With her father putting so much pressure on her, one would think she would be more well versed in different fields, Koji is good in tai, nin, gen, med nin and even fuinnjutsu as he attempted to restrain a berserk Koichi(again, I see the fanboyism dude lol xd)

Overall good chapter.

I planned on Koichi becoming a mix between Naruto, Gaara and a little of Lee and Gai in some senses. I love what I've done with Maiyuri's character, she feels hatred for Jinchuuriki as well and I kinda made her like a Kurenai character, out of sight for a great chunk of the series.

I don't remember when I bring her up again.

Ryoko becomes more versitile. What I'm trying to do is to show everybody's general strong suit of skillsets. I use Koji's genjutsu more so then his puppetry and everything. Ryoko you know has summonings and Fuuton techniques. You'll see her more versitile later when she.............

Trust me, you'll see a fanboism for Koichi soon and trust me, Koji will begin looking more fodder soon enough....well kinda long in the series. You'll see, I don't do him like Itachi every bit where he's undefeated I'm not a troll.

You'll love Ryoko's dad later

 

[~Uzumaki~]

I planned on Koichi becoming a mix between Naruto, Gaara and a little of Lee and Gai in some senses. I love what I've done with Maiyuri's character, she feels hatred for Jinchuuriki as well and I kinda made her like a Kurenai character, out of sight for a great chunk of the series.

I don't remember when I bring her up again.

Ryoko becomes more versitile. What I'm trying to do is to show everybody's general strong suit of skillsets. I use Koji's genjutsu more so then his puppetry and everything. Ryoko you know has summonings and Fuuton techniques. You'll see her more versitile later when she.............

Trust me, you'll see a fanboism for Koichi soon and trust me, Koji will begin looking more fodder soon enough....well kinda long in the series. You'll see, I don't do him like Itachi every bit where he's undefeated I'm not a troll.

You'll love Ryoko's dad later

An OP Koichi...that would be most awesome. I would love to see all their developments...this whole loving Ryoko's dad...I don't think its possible >_>

 

[Flash]

Koji now sounds like Itachi.....don't care what they think about me....I want them to be safe......