Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XV

[Reborn]

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Good chap bro, good chap.
Edit: just read the above comment about how you want more comments about your work.
Alright, this was an informative chapter, I'd like more details on the destroy a bijuu part and I foresee Sage of the Six Paths relation in the future, you potray things the way Kishimoto usually does which is really awesome especially the Gaara Kankuro part. Koichi's reaction to the sealing was very realistic and kudos to you there, if I were to have any complaints, it would be about the fact that Jinchuuriki are still treated like scum, somehow I see Naruto doing something about that and the fact that Ichigo, a supposedly hated jinchuuriki was not previously known to Koji and Koichi since usually even the smallest child knows that they are to hate a jinchuuriki for no logical reason.

I kept the idea of how the link works a secret until a later chapter, much later in fact however you'll understand it when I do. Like you said, I'm trying to portray things the way Kishimoto would.

Well my concept for the story came before Naruto began doing all the stuff that made him known so if I changed the dynamics of a Jinchuuriki to what it is now, it would harm my intentions for the charactesr in a way. Also what you say about the Jinchuuriki being known, look at how unbalanced and uncontroled Ichigo was. It's like having a Nuke weapon that doesn't work and that's your ownly weapon you have. You have to play the image that it's working fine and also with Gaara, he doesn't want people to give him the ridicule.

Nobody would've known about Koichi had he not lost control in the first place. It was to protet the Jinchuuriki from teh ridicule

 

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Great chapter