Naruto: Shichiyo Gaiden XLII

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Oh and another thing, I never mention anything significant or "cheesy" just once ;) lil spoiler for you there.
 

Bodhisattva

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Ooh! I'll keep that in mind. And btw, no offense intended by the word "cheesy". I think you're doing a great job!
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I'm pretty sure you already know what i think of your FFs or your writings in general (as stated on your new FF), so I don't need to add much other than that the flow of your story and the sentence structure is superb, and you're definitely in my consideration this month ;)!
 
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