Naruto series improvement (your thoughts)

[Legendary Saiyan]

• Origin of how Uzumaki started/splitting from Senju

• Hashirama and Madara actually around about 1000 years ago so there would have been about 50 Hokage in Konoha.

• Naruto interacting with Kurama more and Kurama would tell Naruto how he came to hate humans.

• Naruto having second thoughts about being Hokage since he starts to think why would he protect the same people that hated him for being a jinchūriki.

• Naruto learning more about his clan and maybe find the cure of that curse seal.

• Naruto having Wind and Water jutsu (maybe a little Lightning due to his father) to add for his repertoire.

• Sasuke not being easy to be manipulated (such as destroying Konoha) and Itachi telling him the truth that he did not kill the Clan but framed and had to leave and used a fake memory with his Tsukuyomi to give Sasuke a drive of hatred as his final words.

• Sakura getting over Sasuke and working on being a better medical ninja surpassing Tsunade, having Earth as an affinity and maybe summon moles when she, Naruto, and Sasuke become the new Sannin.

• Jiraiya actually teaching Naruto more things on being a ninja rather than working on controlling Bijuu Chakra.

• Naruto and Hinata actually interacting and falling in love instead of that "Because I love you!" and "dies".

• Minato and Kushina fall in love when Kushina is being bullied too far in the Academy and Minato defending her in front of everyone instead of some cliché hero thing.

• Kakashi being more cold hearted when in ANBU and regrets being a goof when Naruto leaves with Jiraiya and Sasuke leaving for Orochimaru.

• Naruto traveling to the other 4 Villages (Kirigakure, Iwagakure, Kumogakure, Sunagakure) and making some connection. For example, Naruto reminds Ōnoki of someone he knew despite Naruto having a resemblance to The Yellow Flash. Or A (Ē or Ei, 4th Raikage) respecting Naruto despite the past tension from the potential war from Kumo and Konoha during the Hyuga incident.

• Fourth Ninja War would have been about Kiri enacting war on Suna and Konoha comes to the rescue. Iwa coming in attempting to rid of the son of the Yellow Flash. Kumo in order to get some Hyuga. Naruto getting his first kills on some ninja that attempted to either rape or kill Hinata.

• Fifth and final Ninja War on Obito on getting rid of every Ninja to create "Real Peace" rather than this Moon Genjutsu Plan.

• Obito turning evil not over Rin but the Uchiha Clan forcing him out while killing his grandmother for being against disowning Obito. Kakashi regretting being nicer instead of harsh to Obito. Rin having an emotional breakdown to the point she committed suicide, furthering Kakashi's emotional distress.

• Jiraiya secretly got a random woman pregnant when he was 24 ( same age as Kakashi and other Jōnin) and named him Naruto. Naruto meets him when in Mount Myōboku.

• The Rookie 12 are at age 21 at the 5th Ninja War arc.

• Kakashi has a daughter from some woman he met that died of birth. Kakashi dies during the war leaving Naruto,Sakura, or Sasuke to take care of the baby.

• Naruto being a pseudo-Sage and defeating edo Madara and the Juubi, splitting them back to the Bijuu.

• Ending would be the inauguration of Naruto being the 7th Hokage with Hinata, who is 6 months pregnant.



What would you guys suggest?

 

[BlacLord™]

50 Hokage? And who would create the personalities and ability sets for these extra 45?

 

[Legendary Saiyan]

50 Hokage? And who would create the personalities and ability sets for these extra 45?

Madara and Hashirama founding Konoha and the current Hokage and it's only been over 100 years. I'd like it if they wery more ancient like a thousand years or so. It's not like Kishi would name all the other 45.

 

[A$AP Wap]

It improved but it started to drop after the Pain arc

 

[Legendary Saiyan]

It improved but it started to drop after the Pain arc

Exactly. But the only things that seem to be wrong is how Naruto doesn't have that much character in him besides changing bad people and spamming Rasengan. There has to be more than that.

 

[Madara the Solo King]

Explain Kaguya's Origins in detail.

 

[BlazeRelease]

50 Hokage? And who would create the personalities and ability sets for these extra 45?

Oh and the predicament that would be the great stoned faces.

 

[Madara the Solo King]

Exactly. But the only things that seem to be wrong is how Naruto doesn't have that much character in him besides changing bad people and spamming Rasengan. There has to be more than that.

Naruto might be one dimensional but his personality in NV is the most respected one in the world.

 

[Legendary Saiyan]

Explain Kaguya's Origins in detail.

Kaguya being corrupted by the fruit when she began doubting on giving chakra to these ninjas, telling her sons to stop her before becoming the Juubi. Hagoromo seals her, splitting her instead of being the jinchūriki of said Juubi. Black Zetsu is created of her hatred and manipulated the Uchiha, creating 10000 years of never ending war. Naruto gets eaten by Juubi and meets Kaguya and she tells Naruto her story and her sons rather than Hagoromo doing that reincarnation bullshit.

 

[awesomeseimei]

In my personal opinion:

- chakra origins being less "aliens" and more natural;

- less supporting characters, more development for remaining ones;

- less NaruJesus stuff (or at least more subtlety with Ninshuu);

- more on-screen development for bonds such as Naruto and Sasuke's.

 

[Madara the Solo King]

Madara and Hashirama founding Konoha and the current Hokage and it's only been over 100 years. I'd like it if they wery more ancient like a thousand years or so. It's not like Kishi would name all the other 45.

When you said this, it makes me wonder the lifespan of a Hokage considering there were only 7 so far.

 

[Legendary Saiyan]

When you said this, it makes me wonder the lifespan of a Hokage considering there were only 7 so far.

You bring a good point on that. Some could last 20-30 years. Some even 10. The average is around 20 years. So anything over or less (6 or 7 years the least. I probably should have thought on this more since this would have all those stone faces like what Blaze said.

 

[Haloguy2710]

Some are very good points, and some I don't necessarily agree with. For example, I doubt Kakashi would want a family due to his tragic past.

 

[Legendary Saiyan]

Some are very good points, and some I don't necessarily agree with. For example, I doubt Kakashi would want a family due to his tragic past.

Sadly, I have to agree. I think maybe instead of a random woman, Shizune attempts to warm his heart or something.