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Sasuke stands at Sakura's grave, his black eyes turn red with the sharigan. he begin let tears flow out of his eyes. tears that can only be of true sadness and pain. he looks back at the time he was child and how the girls fought over him... he then begins to walk away.
Sasuke *It... it will never matter how much i mourn her. she will never come back, i should've copied edo tensei when i had the chance three years ago* (he thinks to himself in anger)
*the night is young over Kohana and Naruto and Hinata are having a great time on their date*
As Sasuke wallows in pity and despair. Naruto and Hinata are on top of the Hokage mansion enjoying a feast with all their friends and Hinata's remaining family. Naruto forms a Kagabushin.
Naruto "Hey guess what guys. i think you will remember this especialy you ebisu" (he begins to make another handseal.
*the crowd gasps as the clone transforms into a women only hidden by cloud.*
Ebisu "Na Naruto!!! SAMA! damn you! (his nose begin to bleed more as the women nears him)
Everyone begins to laugh at Ebisu embrassment. Naruto then steps to the railing. he looks at the moon, he closes his eyes and sighs a peaceful breath. all is well all is well.... except for sasuke Uchiha. for he has now gone to the secret Uchiha hide out to train and enters Sasunoo mark 2.
*Electric crackle*
Sasuke AWWWWWWW! (he screams launching many chidori senbon at his targets.)
Somthing begins to unravel in his mind... how much he misses sakura... how much he wanted her to be here now. then it happens he snaps... his rage re awakens and he violently swings his two swords around the hide out. destroying the area around him. amataseru begins to form on Susanoo as his rage increases. Sasuke thinks he sees madara in one of the target and burns it with Amatersuara the flames crackle upon hitting the target and begin to burn to hulking matter of dust. he then points to the darkend skies that is expose from his battle with itachi and brings forth Karin. he looks at this jutsu and looks towards a group of makeshift targets. he launches it and he forms another seal this time its coated in amatersaru flames and as it hit instead of exploding it spreads lightning across the ground while spreading the flames as well.
Sasuke die... die .... die DIEEEEEEE!!!!!!! (he shouts in anger, thinking of when sakura saved him Madara.)
"Thanks sakura... for everything."
the last words he said to her before she died... echo through his mind, he remebers when he also kissed as she layed dying from the wound how madara mocked him tortured his soul... made his heart.... colder than winters night. tears flow out of his eyes... his skin begins to feel like cold and brittle ice. he begins to sob and yell
Sasuke DAMN YOU!!!! DAMN YOU MADARA!!!!!!!! DAMN YOU OROCHIMARU!!!!!! (he yells in rage)
*lightning begin to crackle even harder*
During the war madara was sealed but... Orochimaru escaped along with Sakura's amlet a necklace she worn in the battle. he said "How intresting and took only me looking at weak pig to find it." then he ripped it from her neck while madara bound sasuke. he can still her last dying gasps for air... the pain... the pain it hurts more than any blade can ever do.
he slowly calms down... his tears fade away and he begin to look on the ground right there in front of him was a cherry blossom. he picked it up and held. however its leaves fell from it and he saw them fludder in the wind. he begins to walk aimlessly around the compound. now he de activates the sharingan, he looks towards where the cherry blossom was. there stands a dark haired man with red eyes.
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have nice day NB also...
here is a spoiler for my book that is now at 23,000 words out of 84,0000 i am done with almost 35% of my book but this spoiler is from a latter chapter.
Sasuke and your are?
??? i am your savior Uchiha.
Sasuke i don't need no savior
The man draws his Katana out so does sasuke.
??? i never re-called it being a optional obligation.
Sasuke GO TO HELL
*lightning crackle*
??? been there... was lord... done that.
They charge at each other and their Blades. collide
credits
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Chapter 2 with the clap of thunder sasuke's elegy.
Sasuke stands at Sakura's grave, his black eyes turn red with the sharigan. he begin let tears flow out of his eyes. tears that can only be of true sadness and pain. he looks back at the time he was child and how the girls fought over him... he then begins to walk away.
Sasuke *It... it will never matter how much i mourn her. she will never come back, i should've copied edo tensei when i had the chance three years ago* (he thinks to himself in anger)
*the night is young over Kohana and Naruto and Hinata are having a great time on their date*
As Sasuke wallows in pity and despair. Naruto and Hinata are on top of the Hokage mansion enjoying a feast with all their friends and Hinata's remaining family. Naruto forms a Kagabushin.
Naruto "Hey guess what guys. i think you will remember this especialy you ebisu" (he begins to make another handseal.
*the crowd gasps as the clone transforms into a women only hidden by cloud.*
Ebisu "Na Naruto!!! SAMA! damn you! (his nose begin to bleed more as the women nears him)
Everyone begins to laugh at Ebisu embrassment. Naruto then steps to the railing. he looks at the moon, he closes his eyes and sighs a peaceful breath. all is well all is well.... except for sasuke Uchiha. for he has now gone to the secret Uchiha hide out to train and enters Sasunoo mark 2.
*Electric crackle*
Sasuke AWWWWWWW! (he screams launching many chidori senbon at his targets.)
Somthing begins to unravel in his mind... how much he misses sakura... how much he wanted her to be here now. then it happens he snaps... his rage re awakens and he violently swings his two swords around the hide out. destroying the area around him. amataseru begins to form on Susanoo as his rage increases. Sasuke thinks he sees madara in one of the target and burns it with Amatersuara the flames crackle upon hitting the target and begin to burn to hulking matter of dust. he then points to the darkend skies that is expose from his battle with itachi and brings forth Karin. he looks at this jutsu and looks towards a group of makeshift targets. he launches it and he forms another seal this time its coated in amatersaru flames and as it hit instead of exploding it spreads lightning across the ground while spreading the flames as well.
Sasuke die... die .... die DIEEEEEEE!!!!!!! (he shouts in anger, thinking of when sakura saved him Madara.)
"Thanks sakura... for everything."
the last words he said to her before she died... echo through his mind, he remebers when he also kissed as she layed dying from the wound how madara mocked him tortured his soul... made his heart.... colder than winters night. tears flow out of his eyes... his skin begins to feel like cold and brittle ice. he begins to sob and yell
Sasuke DAMN YOU!!!! DAMN YOU MADARA!!!!!!!! DAMN YOU OROCHIMARU!!!!!! (he yells in rage)
*lightning begin to crackle even harder*
During the war madara was sealed but... Orochimaru escaped along with Sakura's amlet a necklace she worn in the battle. he said "How intresting and took only me looking at weak pig to find it." then he ripped it from her neck while madara bound sasuke. he can still her last dying gasps for air... the pain... the pain it hurts more than any blade can ever do.
he slowly calms down... his tears fade away and he begin to look on the ground right there in front of him was a cherry blossom. he picked it up and held. however its leaves fell from it and he saw them fludder in the wind. he begins to walk aimlessly around the compound. now he de activates the sharingan, he looks towards where the cherry blossom was. there stands a dark haired man with red eyes.
end-
have nice day NB also...
here is a spoiler for my book that is now at 23,000 words out of 84,0000 i am done with almost 35% of my book but this spoiler is from a latter chapter.
“Its… it’s an ember… but fresh.” Kitsune said to me, we look at Blaze he is perfectly still. We feel the wind and realize that it is blowing away from my old home camp, I look at Kitsune and she nods her head and begin to run off towards it. I run along the forest ground which is covered in leaf, it is beginning to become fall in our lands… but this heat is definitely a flame. We are just a few miles away from my old camp. I see a body lying on the ground as I run by it I realize it is one of the guards but wearing a Lukian military uniform. His sword is still sheath but he has a arrow in his back. “My god… please… please do not let any rumors be true.” I pleaded silently. I smell the smell of burning flesh; I just hope it’s not human. Of course my luck is in tatters now a days, I see a smoke column begin to rise.
I reach the top of nearby small tree and see the cabins burn, I shudder at the thought of who attack. Then I see a man looking at a squad of soldiers. He flicks his arms in a huge swipe and suddenly the soldiers that were standing before fall and keel over. I am stunned to see them begin to burn.
I reach the top of nearby small tree and see the cabins burn, I shudder at the thought of who attack. Then I see a man looking at a squad of soldiers. He flicks his arms in a huge swipe and suddenly the soldiers that were standing before fall and keel over. I am stunned to see them begin to burn.
Sasuke and your are?
??? i am your savior Uchiha.
Sasuke i don't need no savior
The man draws his Katana out so does sasuke.
??? i never re-called it being a optional obligation.
Sasuke GO TO HELL
*lightning crackle*
??? been there... was lord... done that.
They charge at each other and their Blades. collide
credits
Creator: Chris/ Izinagi54
Co creator: Killer Vison, Uzumaki Antonia
this is and has been a loyal NBFNP
(Naruto Base Fan Novel Production.)
may your dreams be there to guide you as you dare waken another day into this land.
Co creator: Killer Vison, Uzumaki Antonia
this is and has been a loyal NBFNP
(Naruto Base Fan Novel Production.)
may your dreams be there to guide you as you dare waken another day into this land.
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