naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty chapter 5 part 3 naruto's light

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IZINAGI54 AND HINATA020 PRODUCTION!!!!!!!!!!!!

this very long because im going off for about 4 days so not until saturday will there be a new release.

warping: naruto term in my fanfic for very high speed movement untracebel
()= type of voice
*= censor or thoughts
show= music or pics

is long but wroth it :D
Arc 1

















(with music)

Arc 2 chapters









chapter begins now


*in naruto's dream*

black waves of chakra come out of naruto's body. he looks towards his friends and raises his hands to reach them he touches lee. he crumbles to dust and he tries to reach for garra who explodes splashing blood on naruto. the blood warm and naruto's tears gather it as it falls down his cheeks

naruto stop it (in silent tone)
kazumo naruto give in naruto... you could stop all of this with my power.... (in sadistic tone)
naruto never... never you hear me i'll never give....
kazumo naruto look up (in a happy tone)

naruto looks to see sakura and sasuke nailed to a pole. kazumo naruto levitates them down to naruto. sakura has tears in her eyes... sasuke is struggling to get free.

sasuke naruto help us! (he screams)
kazumo naruto ha ha ha look at helpless they are naruto.... (in laughter)
kazumo naruto WEAK!, PATHETIC, AND VERY POOR EXCUSES ON WHY I EVEN TRIED TO STOP MY OWN KIND (he yells out)

he raises his katana and slices sasuke. he crumbles to dust but blood stains the katana. kazumo naruto licks it and swallows the blood of the katana. he smiles and looks at sakura. kazumo naruto rubs her stomach near the womb.

naruto I'LL KILL YOU! (he screams)
kazumo naruto there lies the problem.... (in a sadistic voice)

he brings up his blade and plunges into sakura and she crumbles into dust. naruto looks on in sadness and hate. kazumo naruto smiles

naruto YOU BASTARD (he yells)
kazumo naruto UNLEASH YOURSELF (he screams)

the black chakra streams pour out of naruto's body they lash like serphant tails hitting the ground naruto body turns from pure tanish white to yellow and black aura around him his eyes remain normal.

kazumo naruto WHY!... WHY! DO YOU FIGHT YOURSELF (he yells)
naruto I WON'T LET YOU TAKE THEM FROM ME (he yells in agony)

naruto begins to repress the darkness that a the piece of kazumo's chakra has created in him. naruto doubles over from the pain

kazumo naruto DIE!
naruto HOW ABOUT YOU FIRST!

they both scream at eachother and slam into each other, naruto and kazumo naruto are sent flyin. naruto forms hand seals and launches blades of sharp wind and they cut kazumo naruto. naruto then slams him to the ground and beats his face to a bloody pulp.

naruto rot in hell (he screams)

naruto forms a gaint rasangan in his hands and slams it into kazumo naruto and he looks at the torn body in the smoke

naruto how'd like that.....
kazumo naruto actually very much (he says aloud)

naruto's looks at his shoulder kazumo naruto's face appears and spreads to half his face

kazumo naruto look at that location were you hit me with that technique.

naruto looks to see hinata's torn body lie on the ground... naruto's rage builds up like a tee pot on a stove. naruto forms a rasangan in his hands and points it at his face. he begins to move it toward his face

*in the physical world*

hinata naruto! (she yells)
naruto *hinata*

naruto comes out of his trance and sees a fully charged bijuu rasangan just 2 feet from his face. he looks at her tears forms in his eyes. his eyes are bloody red and cracked. he has not had sleep in days. he jerks away from hinata's gaze and looks at him self in a mirror. his appreance the red eyes and the yellow outline in his eyes signify his divine mode but .... darker


naruto im becoming a demon hinata... look at my eyes they... im dying on the inside (he says sadly)
hinata your not dying naruto kun.... i won't let it happen (she says kindly)

naruto's eyes turn back into their natural blue and he looks into hers. His eyes form tears. he slams his head against the wall in the wooden room.

naruto i can't control it anymore hinata... the chakra of kazumo even though it's mere fraction less than 10%, it's taking over me. (he yells in pain and saddness)

naruto it begs me to slaughter, to feed my rage and hatred. That i thought i was done with... (he screams some more)

hinata na-naruto (in sad voice)

naruto i've saved everyone... no one can save me from this it just keeps coming back and back. it wants me to kill you and everyone else first... hinata please stay away from me (he yells in agony)

naruto curls up into a ball and tears flows into the pillows from his eyes. hinata reaches for naruto. he gets up and looks into her eyes. her beautiful lavender eyes. her face and his come closer until they kiss. naruto pulls away and looks at her again

naruto hinata i... (nervous)
hinata love you (she says in a calm voice)

naruto kisses her again and they rub on eachother. naruto's hands stroking her back. hinata's rubbing his hands. naruto's lips move from hers and to her neck.

hinata naruto... (she sighs)

naruto and her fall onto eachother. they roll around kissing and rubbing each other naruto moves up and down her neck. two lovers that not even the god of demons could break apart that is their love. naruto moves back to her lips. they kiss very tenderly. like two needles with threads interwhine their destinies combine.

naruto hinata..... marry me (he sighs)

hinata looks at him her face turns red as a tomato and her skin hot to the touch she lets out a few tears.

hinata yes... i'll be your wife (she says happily)

they rolled around a bit more like water going in a flow a graceful movement of lovers and love it self. naruto forms wind chakra in his hand and blows out the candles in the room. a few minute later naruto and hinata sighed and moaned into the night.

end <3<3<3<3<3
 

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ok for the record im going offline for 2 days im having surgery done on my abset tooth. please forgive me mods if i mistakenly crossed the border on the love scene. R&C
 
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