naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty ch6 part 1 a promiss to keep

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ok if you do not read the past chapters you will be left lost this is a linear series one event follows one after another

past chapters
chapter1 :
chapter2 : betrayel
chapter 3 awakining
chapter 3 part 2 sasuke and sakura's escape
chapter 3 part 3 awaken uzumaki naruto
chapter 4 a god falls
chapter 4 part 2 a belief
chapter 5 departure

naruto what is this place
he stares in awe of the beauty of the temple
kikyo this is were the very first shinobi were taught by us including izanagi and me
she points to the middle of temple. naruto heads to the middle
naruto what now?
she walks into the temple. the other divines set by closely and watch
kikyo place your hand on the ground as if in a summoning jutsu and let chakara flow into the ground
naruto places his hand on the ground, he then lets chakara flow out of it. suddenly the place lights in a blaze of light blinding the other divines
kikyo what the * looks in shock * NARUTO!
naruto is engulfed by the light, she runs to stop the ritual but the other divines hold her back.
amaroshi KIKYO STOP! you know whats happening if his soul is pure he'll live
uzugaki steps back and watches as naruto enters bijuu mode level 2
uzugaki what power *he whispers*
gonzo *come on kid* AMAROSHI!
amaroshi looks back at him
amaroshi WHAT
gonzo points to the light
gonzo LOOK!
amaroshi lets go of kikyo and looks on in amazement
kikyo KURAMA!
kurama burst out of naruto
kurama let him go you scu.....
he looks on in amazement
kurama kikyo
kikyo looks back at kurama, then gazes back toward naruto
kikyo go back in him
he does what he is told and re enters naruto's body as it still baths in light, suddenly the light is asorbed into naruto's body, it begins to fall to the floor
kikyo NARUTO!
she runs catching him at lightning speed, as she does naruto wakes up and opens his eyes
ashi so he was pure but why is his iris golden
naruto gets up
naruto what was that?
he can barely stand
amaroshi your part one of introduction. anyway we thought you were going to die the light was intense more intense than izanagi's ever was.
naruto looks in the ground and see his iris gold then they gold back to their natural blue
naruto what happened to me
naruto looks at them
kikyo do you have nine tailed beast
naruto yes
she throws him the scroll. As naruto looks in the scroll his eyes transform into the gold iris color they were just moments ago
ashi im surprised you can read that so who agrees he's ready
naruto ready for what
amaroshi to become a divine
naruto walks toward them, but they motion their hands to stop him
naruto i thought you wanted me here to help me to reform the juubi
amaroshi all in do time naruto
kikyo anyway as long as you are here you may not tell what you do to the outside world. 2nd you may not make contact with your friends
naruto*flashback: no matter were and how far ill be there for you hinata* what?
gonzo im afraid that many people will seek power of the divines so we must keep to our selves. when you are done with your training you may leave
kikyo if you are caught with any contact then you will be severly punshied. now that concludes the rules
naruto stands dumb founded he can not belief what he just heard
amaroshi anyway tommrow you start training with uzugaki
uzugaki steps forward
naruto what will he train me in
uzugaki warps behind naruto
uzugaki how to awaken elements in your body or specificaly lightning
they all begin to walk away except for kikyo. at first she stares at him then she leaves

*later that same night*
naruto i know your there come in
ashi look i know what your planning. frankly i don't care about the rules either but i would wait a couple of months before doing so.
naruto gets up and looks ashi in the eyes
naruto whys that
ashi because i know what your going to do i recongnize teleportation jutsus from a mile away and that formula on the ground warps to a specific person
naruto how- how do you know
ashi because i taught izanagi the same warp jutsu, im guessing your father has a simular one right.
naruto turns to the seal on the ground and back to ashi
naruto yes so what
ashi pats naruto on the back
ashi technically the clan i created can use a tool free version in other words im your great, great, going back 400 years grandfather.
naruto how are you even alive
he turns to see the mountains out of naruto's window
ashi because me being a divine grants me a very long live span i still got 300 years left. the oldest person to die here was 2000 years old, ergo the very first divine
naruto get to the point
he looks at naruto
ashi in 3 months you would have learn how to control lightning chakara and also water chakara, basically you will learn all 7 elements to master levels
naruto im not here for that there is a war going on between the damiyo and us i must stop it!
he looks in naruto's eyes
ashi 3 months time flys you know but love is eternal. i know what you want to do i agree so in the next three months for your one point five years of training you will premitted by me to visit your friends and family.
naruto thank you * he whispers*
ashi no not yet if your found out you are on your own
he walks out of the room
naruto *i want go back on my vow i will be there for my friends and you*

time skip:p 3 months
uzugaki kikyo now!
kikyo water style grand water dragon vortex
naruto warps out of the way and launchs 3 clones in kyuubi mode at kikyo
uzugaki lightning style: grand storm
several lightningbolts from the sky hit the kyuubi mode clones including the bijuu naruto. they all disappear
uzugaki WHAT!
naruto his high above them in bijuu level 2
naruto lightning style: hendori
several lightning streams come the tips of naruto fingers, all of them head straight for uzugaki
uzugaki not bad
he barely dodges them only to see a fist in his face
naruto you need to look were your going next time
uzugaki is sent flying through several trees, until he hits a rock
uzugaki* damn he's gotten good lets see if he can take kikyo on* NOW!
naruto huh?
a wave of water the size of a hill comes rolling across the battlefield
naruto water style: sprialin drill
naruto forms three arms of water and forms a rasangan in each of them the water launches threw spining tendrils of the water at the wave
kikyo you can't stop the wave with that!
naruto jumps into the air, the tendrils penitrates the wave
naruto im not planning on it
suddenly shocked by the horror she sees the tendrils of water come out at of the wave in breakneck speeds, she has no time to block the water wraps around her and she is pinned as the water thickens.
kikyo beaten at my own game huh? i call todays practice adue
naruto roger
he transforms back to his base form
naruto are both of you ok
kikyo nods her head
kikyo yes i am amazed. your one of the fastes people to get down and use the water style: squid grab in just a few days. I might be calling you master in a few days
naruto laughs
naruto what about uzugaki * he shouts*
there is a slight pause
uzugaki HELL NO! I THINK YOU BROKE MY RIBS YOU LITTLE JERK!
naruto can barely hold a straight face
naruto IM he he IM ha ha ha SORRY!
naruto burst out laughing
amaroshi someones having a good day huh kikyo
she turns to face her master
kikyo yes he is * izanagi how did win against him in the after life*
ashi well tommrow he starts training with me on ying yang control and gonzo on earth and fire style jutsu
naruto starts heading to towards the temple, when arrives he crashes in his room and waits for ashi to keep his promiss
*later that night when all the divines are asleep*
ashi naruto its time lets go
naruto shows him the seal, they both weave the tiger seal
naruto quiet when we get there i do not want to wake her up. im just going leave everyone a sign i was here
naruto teleports first but ashi does not follow suit,
ashi release the seal dissolves, now my plan in acts for my lord. MUHAHAHA!
he sends several lights into the sky, he then shouts
ashi NARUTO HAS LEFT!

*in mount myoboku*
naruto warps right in fukushima's house, everyone is asleep
naruto * strange why as master ashi come yet*
he walks into the hall way

ch6 part 1 end
next ch6 part 2 a battle for freedom

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