naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty ch 8 childern of gods

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(im going to be fairly honest age 14 and up only because it contains a little bit of sexual situations)

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*sasuke hops on several trees carrying naruto body*

sasuke damn man you need to lay back off the ramen other wise you'll be as fat as chouji

chouji looks at him with a angry face

chouji what you just say...... *it clicks* ILL KILL YOU

sasuke easly dodges his attack

sasuke calm down man we are almost at hq

they arrive at the mountains several medical ninja take both hinata and naruto's body

sasuke will he be all right

mednin we don't know.

*sasuke walks away soon he ends up at a spring in the mountains*

*rusel in the bushes*

sakura sasuke... im sorry i wanted to tell you but i.....

he walks over to her, he hugs her passionatly

sakura sasuke?

sasuke then lets go and tears form in his eyes.

sasuke WHY DID YOU NOT TELL ME!

sakura looks at him stunned

sakura i could'nt

sasuke sobs

sasuke WHY..... were you afraid i run, that i might abandon everyone again out of fear

sasuke turns his back on her...

*2.5 months earlier flash back*
*fukushima's house*

sasuke hears crying down the hall way, the smell of candles burning

sasuke thats coming from sakura's room

he walks and peeps in she is praying for those lost

sakura forgive me i was not... not strong enough.

she weeps harder

sakura LADY TSUNADE!

she sobs intensly, she crashes hands in the ground the boards reinforced with chakara

sakura GEIRA!!

she stops and she goes into fidal position

sakura anyone around me keeps dying, why must everyone must carry my burden on them.

sasuke swings open the door

sasuke THATS NOT TURE!

tears formed in his eyes

sasuke ITS MY FAULT IF I HAD NOT DONE WHAT I DID 3 YEARS AGO NONE OF THIS WOULD HAPPEN

she looks at him weeping

sasuke I COULD'VE BEEN WITH YOUR MASTER IN THE FIGHT WITH MADARA, I COULD HAVE STOP THE LITTLE GIRL FROM DYING

he collaspes on his knees

sasuke AWWW, AWWWWW! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!

sasuke pounds his hands on the ground, and sobs uncontrolable cries

sasuke everynight i see their faces even you and naruto's face dying all of you wanting revenge

he takes out his tanto, points it toward his stomach

sakura NOOO!

she launches her self at him, he barely nicked him self, sasuke struggled

sasuke please sakura i can't take it anymore i hurt you more than anyone else, i tried to kill you

sakura pulls the tanto out of his hands

sakura sasuke, SASUKE! look at me don't ever do that again please PLEASE!

sasuke looks at her

sasuke why are you keeping me alive i have not caused nothing but torture and pain and.....

sakura hugs him

sakura because i love you and you dying as well as naruto will kill me.

sasuke raps his arms around her, the tears have stopped. the grasp of each other grows tighter

sakura sasuke

sasuke kisses her and she kisses him back passionatly. they both roll around on the floor a little bit before sasuke's komino comes off and the lights go off

*2 hours later :p*

sasuke sakura?

she stares back at sasuke, now cuddled in the bed they share.

sakura yes?

sasuke wraps his hand around her

sasuke i will always be here don't worry i will

they share a kiss

*end of flash back*

sakura SASUKE PLEASE ITS YOUR CHILD

sasuke shocked turns around

sasuke I know i am not leaving you behind

he gets on both knees

sasuke sakura haruno of the leaf, i would be honored to take you as my wife

sakura looks stunned

sakura sasuke what are doing

sasuke gets up and takes both of her hands

sasuke im not going another day with you carrying my child and me not there

sakura has tears in her eyes

sakura i will take you as my husband

sasuke hugs sakura tightly. they kiss passionatly, they then hold hands and walk back to the ninja hq

*in naruto's room he's now awake*

naruto sasuke, sakura how everything going were is hinata

they look at eachother.

sasuke she still is in a coma.

naruto tries to get up but falls on the floor

sakura naruto....

they show concern over their faces

naruto please take me too her

they pick him up and help him walk, they are in hinata's room

naruto looks down on her

naruto i will get you out of there

his fist tightens

naruto i can't i just can't leave you like this

he has tears flowing in his eyes

naruto its my fault

*bam* naruto head is hit hard not by sakura but sasuke

sasuke stop complaining

sakura looks shocked

sakura what the hell

sasuke shoots i got this look

sasuke you are uzumaki naruto, master of the tailed beast savior of the world and yet you complain

naruto was close to choking sasuke when he rushes over to her.

naruto i want to be with her sasuke, more than anything its my fault if i rebuffed like i did before she would not be near death.

sasuke naruto the one technique you use to meld with kurama. you know fox style: harmony bliss

naruto nods

sasuke can you use it to bring hinata back out of a coma

naruto forms the hand seals he then closes his eyes and puts one hand over hinata's head and heart

*inside hinata's mind*

a beautiful place appears inside naruto's vision, a forrest near a village not just any village the hidden leaf,

naruto so this is your dream hinata the leaf village rebuilt and restored.... hinata

she sees him runs to him

hinata Naruto!

she hugs him

hinata what are you doing here

she looks around and sees naruto glowing

hinata are you de .... dead

naruto shakes his head

naruto no im not, i have come to take you back.

she grabs naruto's hand

hinata forgive me naruto kun.

he holds her tight, and kissess her

naruto i have

a bright flash sends hinata back to the physical world with naruto.

*hinata's room*

naruto hinata

she hugs her a she awakes

hinata naruto kun

she tries lift her hands but she cannot, she falls back to sleep

naruto can you give me a minute

sasuke and sakura both leave the room a bright flash occurs in the room, naruto steps out

sasuke what happened

naruto looks at him

naruto i sealed some of kurama's power in her

sasuke looks stunned

sakura why

naruto points to her room

naruto kurama chakara can help not end up back here or worse

they both walk naruto back into his room.

naruto thank you

naruto looks at sasuke and sakura but he detects another chakara source

sasuke naruto we have....

naruto nods

sakura somthing to tell you

sakura rubs her stomach

sakura im preganant

naruto almost past out

naruto HUH? HOW?

sakura hits him in the dome

naruto AWWW!

sakura my god 3 months with the divines and still hard headed

sasuke looks at her

sasuke we are getting married soon naruto and i like you to stand there as my honored friend

naruto points his finger at the them

naruto i will sasuke but please hold off until hinata can walk

they both nod

end of ch8 part 1

next chapter at 5:00pm est
 
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i know its very long but this chapter is about love and romance between the other main characters

this has been a izinagi and hinata020 production im very proud to work with her and have her as my assisstant and student thank you hinata020 may this partnership be long\


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