naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynast ch3 awakining part 2 preveiw and poll

[izinagi54]

ok this is the preview also in the preveiw the links to part 1 of the chapter then ch2 ch1 will be here a poll will be held too see what chapter is doing better or worse past chapters in the sieries are at the bottom
here is the spoiler
name of the chapter: sasuke and sakura's flight

sasuke: Hey what the hell are you doing
damiyo nin: under the authority of the damiyo you and naruto have become 1st priority extermanation
sakura WHAT!

the enemy ninja launches at sasuke he swings with a kunai but misses by a mile
sasuke stop i don't want to hurt you
enemy battalion: there he is kill him
sasuke damn im sorry naruto
sasuke activates the enternal mangenko sharingan and unleashes amatasaru

hope you like the spoiler it will be released some time tonight around 10 or 11
here is the links to the previous chapters
ch1

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ch2

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ch3p1

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[izinagi54]

umm i on the side note if have tips pm me please

 

[Makeril]

I don't see Sasuke talking like that. He's more of a "You raise that blade at me and you'll regret it" kinda guy.

 

[izinagi54]

I don't see Sasuke talking like that. He's more of a "You raise that blade at me and you'll regret it" kinda guy.

yeah your right thank you ill change it how bout this

sasuke: make one move and ill gut from inside out

 

[Makeril]

yeah your right thank you ill change it how bout this

sasuke: make one move and ill gut from inside out

Perfect, lol.

 

[izinagi54]

ninja did not hid warning
damiyo ninja: die brat
sasuke: i warned you
grabs enemy ninja
sasuke i said i would gut ya now im going to cook ya
sakura sasuke stop