Naruto: Regashī | Chapter 1: Returning

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Naruto: Regashī
Chapter 1: Returning



A gentle breeze blew upon the outskirts of a village surrounded by trees from all sides, a village hidden by the leaves of those trees, the Hidden Leaf Village, located in the heart of the forest. A peaceful village the Hidden Leaf turned out to be again, after 18 years since the 4th Great Ninja War. Harmony was ruling its streets and villagers, the latter, however, had no way of knowing what was to come, hidden by the outside’s gentle breeze…

???: A few more steps and we will be there, dad!

???: Yeah… The Hidden Leaf…

???: This breeze… It’s so calm and peaceful… It almost looks like the village is irradiating its harmony through the wind itself!

???: It feels good! After all these years fighting… This peace…

???: It’s all thanks to you! At least that’s what the villagers say…

???: It feels even better to return to them after all these months… Especially to our family!

???: Mom is going to cry… Again…

???: Heh… Hmm...

???: What is it, dad?

???: I can smell ramen from here! Heh heh…

???: You don’t change! I’m not even going to ask how’s that possible… Hmph…

The two travelers kept heading towards the Hidden Leaf, although they were still miles away from it, they kept their slow and synced pace…

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At the village’s main gate, a woman was seen, waiting. At her side, there was someone whose scarf appeared to be longer than his body height… A leaf headband was seen in his forehead…

???: Relax, they will be here soon!

The leaf shinobi with the long scarf tried to comfort the woman, whose white dress with her clan’s symbol on its back was dancing with the wind’s flow…

???: I know… I can see them!

???: So, are they far? I’m afraid my scarf will take off with this breeze…

???: A little…

Two were waiting as two were arriving… Love ones were about to meet… After months being apart… The hope of seeing each other filled their hearts…

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Meanwhile, on top of the Hokage Mountain, two young genin were standing, facing the main gate, as well.

???: So… She’s coming back…

???: Yeah… She said she was leaving for 9 months… They’ve just ended…

???: Akemi… She left right after we graduated…

???: And because of that we’re the only genin without a sensei…

???: Worry not… And don’t blame her… We’re comrades!

???: Sorry!

???: And once she gets here, our team is completed!

???: With some luck, she’ll get her dad to teach us! That would be nice!

???: Heh?

???: What? You don’t want it?

???: It’s not that, Makoto! Look! There she is!

The young genin had spotted the two travelers reaching the village’s main gate as his index finger was pointing towards that place.

Makoto: Yeah! It’s her!

???: Come! Let’s go!

The two youngsters jumped off the monument and head towards the gate.

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At the gate, the anxiety of the two persons waiting was about to vanish into the breeze…

???: It’s them!

As she finished her claim, the woman of the Hyuga Clan whose symbol was marked on her dress, ran towards the travelers.

???: Ni-san! Finally!

???: Hi mom!!!!

???: Hinata!!!!!!

Hinata: Naruto-kun! Akemi! Welcome home!

The three hugged each other looking like they weren’t planning to let go.

Naruto: You’re here as well, Konohamaru?

Konohamaru: Of course, ni-san!

Akemi: Mom! The trip was actually pretty fun! We got to kick some rogue ninjas in the…

Hinata: Um, um… Please don’t talk that way…

Akemi: Sorry, mom!

Naruto: So, Konohamaru, what’s new?

Konohamaru: Nothing… It’s peaceful as ever around here…

???: Akemi! Akemi!

Akemi: Uh? Makoto? And…

Makoto: Akemi! You’re here!

Akemi: Hi! Where’s…

???: Right here! We’ve been waiting!

Akemi: Isamu!

Isamu: Akemi.

Akemi: Heh…

Akemi: Dressed in black as always, I see… Both of you…

Isamu: It’s to go with the hair!

Makoto: Well, that's actually true!

Isamu and Makoto, both have black hair, although arranged in different styles, and both wear black outfits. They belong to Akemi’s team, decided by Iruka Umino at their graduation.

Naruto: So, these are my students, Akemi?

Three young shinobi are about to enter an experience of a lifetime!!!

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Guys, this is my first FF so go easy on it, ok? XD

CnC is always appreciated!

Author's notes:
Here are some pics on each new character revealed so far!

Akemi

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Although Akemi has Hyuuga Blood she doesn't have her eyes white like Hinata's... I'll explain that later...


Makoto

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Isamu
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Another note: All names I use (characters and FF title) mean something!

Regashi means The Legacy, for example! So, feel free to google their meaning! =D




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Good job! Keep me updated when the next one comes out. I may be busy with school but that doesn't mean I wont read it! XD I really like it. Akemi must be really, really strong. o_o
 

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Interesting chapter... Could you link me to future chapters
Of course! I'm writing #2 as we speak XD

Good job! Keep me updated when the next one comes out. I may be busy with school but that doesn't mean I wont read it! XD I really like it. Akemi must be really, really strong. o_o
Yosh, will do! Oh, she is!
 

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Not bad at all, especially it being your first FF. It started off in a similar fashion as other next-gen FFs, including one of mine. So, I'd suggest you make it a story unlike no other. Dang, I can't see the pictures. I'm curious to how they look exactly.
I won't be able to follow it because I won't be a member for much longer, but good luck with it.
 

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Not bad at all, especially it being your first FF. It started off in a similar fashion as other next-gen FFs, including one of mine. So, I'd suggest you make it a story unlike no other. Dang, I can't see the pictures. I'm curious to how they look exactly.
I won't be able to follow it because I won't be a member for much longer, but good luck with it.
Thanks bro! I'll try to do that :p That's a shame... They're working, though...

Why? O_O
 
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