[Adventure] Naruto Rebirth Ch 4

Espadara Uchiha

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The sun shone brightly on the small village, and Madara looked at all of his villagers talking happily to one another. The former Uchiha Head cracked his aging bones and hobbled back into his house, taking care to walk slowly with his wooden cane, and sat down as a few of his joints popped.

Madara had founded this village nearly Thirty-seven years ago, back when he was still Seventy-seven years old. He had accepted those who were orphaned by the war, and those who had decided to abandon the constant fighting of their clans. He had spread the teachings of chakra to them, and had watched them surpass the limits placed on them by 'Magic'.

Chakra is defined as the energy made up of both Physical and Mental energies. Magic, however, employs only the Mental side of the equation, making it both weaker and more draining than chakra.

As Madara continued his thoughts, a white head came up from the ground, with moss-green hair and a large smile. "Madara-Sama. Naruto-chan is coming to talk." The White Zetsu clone said, as it sank back into the ground. Madara nodded, as the door to his house slid open.

The youth standing in the doorway was around eighteen years of age, dressed in a fancy orange kimono, and orange hakama pants. A black obi was strapped around his waist, keeping his kimono fastened and covering the bandages surrounding his chest. He was wearing white socks and geta slippers, and a small smile was on his face as he looked at the old man in front of him. His blond hair was about chin length, and he featured a handsome face.

But the strangest thing about this boy were his eyes. His eyes were entirely a light, eerie purple, with black rings layered out in them. These were the eyes of the Rikudo Sennin, the Rinnegan.

The youth spoke up. "You called for me, Madara-Jiji?"

Madara patted the pillow in front of him with his cane, and the boy sat down. Madara looked into the boys eyes, almost losing himself in the Eyes of Samsara before recovering. He spoke quietly, in a gruff voice. "Yes...Naruto, the time for you to bring Peace to this world is at hand...soon, very soon...you shall start your journey."

The look on Naruto's face was priceless. He had been told of his eventual journey ever since he was a young child, when he had first awakened the Rinnegan. They had told him that he would be the one to 'lead a Revolution'. Naruto had trained as hard as he could, trained in every single art the members of his village could provide. He had eventually started to lose faith in the possibility of going on his journey, but now...

"You mean it, Madara-Jiji?! I'm ready?" Naruto asked excitedly, waving a fist in the air. He kept this up for about two seconds before Madara slammed his cane on his head.

"Yes, I believe it is time for you to begin the mission of spreading the teachings and Religion of the Rikudo Sennin and the Juubi. You have been training hard these past few years, and I believe that you may survive in the world...however..." Madara paused in his speech, and looked off into the distance, remembering the days of his youth. "There are clans who believe you to be a false prophet. Many believe in the one known as Kami, and will fight everything that says otherwise. Especially the Senju...that cursed clan may never be trusted. Understand, Naruto?"

"But, aren't the Senju related to the Rikudo Sennin too? Shouldn't we try to help them too?"

Madara yelled in outrage. "Help those bastards?! No! Just listen to me, Naruto, and you'll be fine. Now where was I...Oh yes. The Senju are evil. They are never to be trusted. Ever. The Uchiha are fine, just tell them I sent you. But the Senju...no. Now repeat after me, Naruto. I, the Rikudo Sennin, hereby disown the Senju Clan."

Naruto scrunched his face in confusion, but repeated it word for word. "Are you sure that would work, Jiji?"

Madara chuckled. 'Take that, Hashirama and all you Senju bastards! Disowned! Boom!' he thought to himself, but aloud he said, "I don't know, Naruto. Maybe. It makes me feel better to think it did. Would you like a candy?" Madara offered, holding out a small wooden bowl filled with what appeared to be cough drops.

The young Sage declined the offer, wondering whether his Grampa really had gone senile. "Uh, shouldn't we be, you know, discussing my journey?"

Madara frowned and popped a cough drop in his mouth. "One thing you should know, Naruto, is that there is always time for candy. Another thing, is that you should always resist a woman's temptations. And Men too, I guess. Basically, no ***. Your job is to bring peace. Not babies."

Naruto nodded with his eyes closed. He had absolutely no idea what Madara was rambling on about now, but he would pretend he did. "Yep, you got it. But, ah...what is ***, Jiji?"

Madara paused, as his 114 year old mind raced to find a way to explain *** to Naruto. This was far more difficult than one would expect, because Izuna was the one Madara would always go to advice, and a lot of that advice kind of disappeared over the years. "Why, Naruto, *** is oh look time to start your journey, remember don't trust the Senju K thanks bye!" Madara threw Naruto out of his house, and sat back down rubbing his face.

Naruto stood up, rubbing his back, and began walking off to say goodbye to his family. A small smile worked its way on his face, as he started thinking about everything he would do once he was out in the world. He would get the clans to stop fighting, show them the truth of chakra, and help everyone connect with one another.

Naruto approached his house and opened the door, seeing his mom, a forty-seven year old woman with long red hair and a rather plump face named Kushina finishing the dishes. "Hey Mom! Where's dad?" Naruto asked seating himself at the table.

Kushina turned her head to look at him. "Hm? Oh, he woke up only a few minutes ago. Just give him a few minutes to get ready." Kushina placed the last dish on the rack, and sat down at the table and looked at Naruto. "Sochi, what did Madara-san want?"

At this point, Naruto's dad Minato walked in, his shaggy blonde hair wet showing the signs of having just taken a shower. He ruffled Naruto's hair, kissed Kushina on the cheek, and sat down. "So, what's going on?"

Naruto puffed his chest out a bit, and grinned. "Madara-Jiji said that it's time I go on my journey!" The room was stunned into silence, before Kushina squealed.

"Woohoo! See, I told you it would be soon Naruto!" Kushina jumped out of her chair, and Minato was chuckling and ruffling Naruto's hair. "That's my boy. Make us proud, Naruto!"

Naruto gave a wide smile, and held out a thumbs up. "You got it, Mom, Dad!"

***

Naruto strapped the large bag to his back, as the village stood watching him. Minato, Kushina, and Madara were at the very front of the crowd, all three of them smiling. Naruto felt tears in the corner of his eyes, and grinned again at the crowd as he began making his way out of the village. A loud shout suddenly broke him from his thoughts, however...

"YOSH! DYNAMIC ENTRY!" Naruto swung his black staff to block the kick from the strange smiling man with a black bowl haircut. The man jumped off the staff and shot a perfectly white smile at the young Sage. "Hello, Naruto-Kun!"

Naruto grimaced. "Uh, hi, Gai-Sensei." Gai was a thirty year old man wearing a green kimono and Obi, along with a green Hakama.

Gai continued speaking. "I've heard that you were beginning your journey today! That is why, I have a gift for you! LEE!" A nineteen year old boy soon arrived, wearing a green robe and a black belt with green hakama pants. His hair was also in a bowl cut, and his eyebrows were just as thick as Gai's. Green armor plating covered some parts of his robe, and he had a massive bag strapped to his back.

Gai motioned to the boy. "You remember Lee, right? He is to be your bodyguard!" The general reaction of the crowd was sweat drops everywhere. Rock Lee shot a Nice Guy pose at Naruto.

Naruto stared at Lee for a few seconds, before shooting a Nice Guy pose back. "You got it! Come one, Lee!"

Lee cheered. "I won't fail you, Naruto-Kun! I will devote all of my Youthful Energy in protecting you!" The two friends high fived, and Gai brought the two boys in a hug with him. "Be careful you two! And remember! True Peace can be brought with The Flames of Youth! Understand, students?!" Lee and Naruto saluted Gai, and began their walking out of the small village as everyone cheered them on.

When the village was far enough away that Naruto could hardly see it, he turned to Lee. "Hey...do you know what *** is?"

Lee scratched his cheek in wonder. "Gai-Sensei told me it is the ultimate representation of Youth Energy, and that he had yet to perform it. All I know is that you must both be nude, but you need protection of some sort. But you have no need to worry, Naruto-Kun! If you should perform this youthful act, I will be your protection!"

Naruto smiled at Lee. "Wow...thanks Lee. That means a lot!"

As the two comrades continued speaking of rather useless things, they never noticed the hooded figure watching them from a nearby hill, before disappearing in the shadows. While watching the sage was important...he had an Uchiha elder to kill.

Welp. Tell me what you think, will you kindly!
 

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I have seven chapters up on Fanfiction.net, so until I get all seven up on Narutobase than it'll update one a day. After that, I'll probably update on Narutobase first, get any reviews or things I need to change, than I'll update on fanfiction.

And I'm going to do quite a bit of messing around with canon characters. A lot. I'm hoping for a world where you honestly can't say 'A' is the good guy while 'B' is a bad guy. Even Madara is doing this for a selfish reason; he doesn't care about the world, it's more of him still feeling guilty over his wife's death.

Also, should I post any of my other stories up here?

Roots of Sacrifice: Danzo fakes infant Naruto's death, raises him in Root. Naruto gets Kagami's left sharingan, and a Female Deidara is a part of his team. Currently at Twelve chapters.

Heir of Gato: A fic where Naruto is raised by Gato of all people. Jugo and Kimimaro are his bodyguards, currently at 4 chapters. Just updated it a few minutes ago, actually.
 
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