Kishi Uzumaki
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[] naruto's flashbacks
A devastating blow
( Chapter starts with panel of obito . who is severed in half by naruto and sasuke )
( Obito falls to the ground . naruto and sasuke lands on other side )
Kakashi : ones who gonna win is the one with friends bonds. friends make you strong like
you made me strong .
Obito : ( body have been severed off he is looking at it ) no this can't be .
Shikamaru : you guys did it . naruto !
( shikamaru and others land in front of naruto and sasuke )
Naruto : ( smirks ) no . we did it .
Sasuke : hmph . let's finish him off .
( spiral appears and kakashi comes out )
Kakashi : i will do it .
Naruto : Kakashi - sensei .
Sasuke : kakashi .
Kakashi : you guys have surpassed me for sure .
Obito : ( tries stand up but realizes his body is cut in to two ) damn you kakashi .
Kakashi : I told you obito only death is waiting . when you betrayed your friends
and ideals you destined to meet a end like this .
( Naruto , sasuke and others comes where kakashi is )
Obito : do you think you won the war ? Flower will bloom sooner this world gonna end .
( Panel of alliance attacking the god tree )
Naruto : i won't let that happen .
Obito : i have a one question for you naruto .
( everyone looking questioningly at obito )
Naruto : what ?
Obito : what will you do if one you loved died ?
( naruto looks shocked for a moment . both naruto and obito begins to flashback )
( panels in next two pages )
{ rin giving entrance papers to obito }
[naruto standing in front of his friends alone at the entrance of academy ]
{ panel shows rin and obito talking after kakashi ignores rin }
[ naruto getting scolded by sakura after sasuke ignores her ]
{ obito and rin talking after graduation while kakashi stands alone }
[ naruto after failed to graduate . sasuke is praised by everyone and by sakura ]
{ rocks falling on obito after been crushed by rocks and rin calling his name }
[ sakura hugging naruto after the end of pains invasion )
{ Rin getting killed by kakashi's raikiri }
[ naruto saving sakura from sasuke's chidori ]
( to the real world )
( obito in ground dying and naruto standing with his friends )
Obito : ( remembers his friends ) Did i took the wrong path ?
( scene changes to hashirama and madara )
Madara : this is the end of our battles hashirama .
( hashirama is stabbed by a chakra rod through chest )
Hashirama : this can't hold me ( realize he can't move ) what ?
Madara : these rods are special through them i can control you . let's move hashirama .
( Both jumps toword where obito and naruto )
Madara : you brats done your job .
Kakashi : ( shocked ) Madara !
Naruto : madara you basterd . 1st hokage what are you ?
( we see rinnegan appeared on hashirama's eyes )
Sasuke : ( realizing madara going attack ) naruto ! let's fall back .
Madara : too late . shinra tensei .
( everyone gets pushed away by the techniques )
Obito : Madara ?
Madara : i told you not to be so haste obito . look at you the ten tails jinchuraki losing to brats .
Obito : shut up . bastard .
( naruto and others on their backs )
Naruto : everyone all right . damn . what he is up to ?
Sasuke : he took control over 1st hokage .
Kakashi : He is controlling him like pain did . he can be a more trouble than obito .
( scene changes to madara )
Madara : obito . you are going to die anyway so revive me now . i'll tell you something .
( begins taking control of obito's one side . it turns black )
Madara : ( to controlled hashirama ) Take control of the other side .
( hashirama activates his sage mode and take control of the senju side )
Obito : ( angrily shouts as he realized something and begins performing the seal )
Madara : ( to obito ) I was the one behind everything . i was the one made that girl get killed .
The one behind rin's death is madara
(Obito is in brink of death . Madara reveals he was the one behind everything )
The End .
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