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Despair
Page 1
( hiruzan puts naruto down slowly , tobirama looking the destruction god tree caused , minato staring at obito , sasuke and juugo looking at naruto)
( Naruto is very angry with obito for killing his comrades )
Obito : no need to suffer anymore . just be where you are .
Naruto : ( shouting ) shut up ..... all this
( Naruto looking around . many fodder ninja has died )
Naruto : you killed this people just for what ?
Obito : this is the only way to bring peace to this world . now stay put .
Naruto : I won't let you ( tries to stand up but fails ) damn not now .
Minato : son ! ( turns to naruto ) calm down .
Page 2
Tobirama : listen to your father . naruto ! this is what war is ninja just die like trash .
Naruto : ( remembers )
Nagato : Dying like trash… never ending hatred… pain that never heals… that is war…
Naruto… this… is what you must face… The book… and you .
Naruto : I get it now . what you said nagato .
konan : This time… I hope for you these will be flowers of hope that never die .
Fodder ninja 1 : it absorbed my chakra .
Foddar ninja 2 : It killed my friends .
Foddar ninja 3 : How can we fight something like this . we are doomed .
Page 3
Naruto : you are right . there is no hope in this world .
( everyone look at naruto )
Obito : so you finally you understand ?
Naruto : ( looking at the ground and thinking ) hmmm .
Hiruzan : naruto ! what are you saying ?
Tobirama : we have no time for this . naruto !
Naruto : Yeah . i understand . this is what war is .
( panel shows medics trying to save injured fodder )
Medic ninja : This is much as i can do .
Medic Ninja 2 : this one died as well .
Page 4
( naruto shedding tears )
( Sasuke jumps infront of naruto . juugo follows )
Sasuke : I will take charge from here .
Naruto : ( just stares at sasuke )
Sasuke : I know somethings . you guys don't know .
Hiruzan : !?
Tobirama : Uhiha . what are you talking about ?
Sasuke : i gonna stop him . if you gonna come .. come
( starts running toword the tree , juugo follows )
Page 5
Obito : then give up . you will be happy in the dream world .
Minato : shut up . obito . ( turns to naruto ) i believe in you . don't give in
Naruto : but
( he remembers what jiraiya said )
Jiraiya : Even I can tell that hatred is spreading . I wanted to do something about it …
but I don't know what … but I believe… that someday the day will come
when people truly understand one another!! If I can't find the answer ,
it will be up to you to do it !!
Obito : but what ?
Naruto : if there is no hope in this world . i will give this world hope .
Page 6
Obito : ( angrily ) give hope to this world ? how you gonna stop me and all this ?
( three panels shows the tree and it's flower . obito and madara distance away )
( Sasuke jumping root to root fast and juugo follows )
Naruto : ( grins )
Page 7
Naruto : ( stands up ) if i can't stop you then i will take you down with me .
Hiruzan : heh . you have not changed at all naruto .
Minato : I'm proud of you . son !
Tobirama : What guts ( thinks ) you are just like my brother . Naruto !
( Orichimaru , karin , suigetsu arrive in the battlefield )
Orichimaru : kuku . naruto - kun . you never change do you ?
Hiruzan : orichimaru ?
Tobirama : What happened to tsunade and kages ?
Karin : we healed them .
Suigetsu : ( looks in horror the destruction tree caused ) What the ?
Page 8
( scene changes )
( sakura on the ground )
Sai : sakura - san
sakura : ( looks at sai from corner of her eye ) s.. sai
sai : are you . ok .
( helps her sit )
Sakura : katsuyu - sama . help them .
Katsuyu : they are already dead .
Sakura : if Tsunade - sama was here . she would -
Katsuyu : This roots sucked all the chakra from their body . even tsunade - sama can't help them .
Sakura : ( tears glowing in her eyes ) but
Page 9
Tsunade : but what sakura ?
Sakura : ( turns in surprise ) Tsunade - sama !!
( kages has arrived in the battlefield )
Tsunade : what happened here ?
Sakura : this tree killed Many shinobi of the alliance . i couldn't
Tsunade : how can my student whining in a situation like this ?
Sakura : I'm sorry but i thought ?
Tsunade : you could have done a better job ? this is war . sakura . death comes being a shinobi .
( sakura is wiping her eyes )
Page 10
Bee : ( panting ) brother !!
Ay : Are you . ok . bee
Bee : yea . brother ! but it suck my power .
Minato : ay ?
Ay : minato ! what happened to your arm ?
Minato : what happened to your's ?
Ay : ( thinks ) he's a pain in the a.. ( looking around ) what happpening here ?
Minato : juubi is in it's final form and about to cast the infinite tsukoyomi .
Page 11
Gaara : Naruto ! are you . Ok .
Naruto : Yeah but we have to stop this tree and obito .
Mei : where is madara ?
Tobirama : My brother is fighting him .
Mei : you are the second hokage . you are handsome for a old man .
( tobirama ignores )
Tobirama : We have to come with a plan to stop this tree .
Mei : ( angrily thinks ) he just ignored me .
Hiruzan : How can we stop this . only sage attacks works .
Page 12
( scene changes to hashirama and madara )
Madara : I'm enough having fun with you .
Onoki : don't you like to dance with me . madara .
Hashirama : you have got old . onoki . although you are same height as before .
Madara : Hmph . you didn't die then did that senju women survived as well ?
Hashirama : tsunade . did you kill her madara ?
( hashirama tries to attack him in anger but madara jumps away and land on a root near obito )
onoki : she is fine but we have to stop madara .
Hashirama : ( tear goes down from his eyes . he looks down and sees her ) Tsunade .
Page 13
( sasuke and juugo arrive near Madara as well )
Sasuke : so you are madara ?
Madara : a uhiha . didn't you kill them all . obito ?
Obito : traitors . what are you doing here ?
Madara : I'm here to help but i wonder he has the same intentions .
( onoki and Hashirama arrive as well )
Onoki : fighting three uhiha's will be troublesome
Sasuke : ( hatefully look at both ) to help you ? you f...... kidding with me .
Hashirama : onoki ! he is on our side .
( sasuke's susano'o cloak begins to appear around him )
page 14
( scene change's to kages , naruto and co )
Naruto : Dad . go help . sasuke . i will come there soon as i restore my chakra .
Tobirama : then kages let's go in and destroy this tree .
Orichimaru : karin , suigetsu stay with naruto - kun .
Karin : OK . orichimaru - sama .
Suigetsu : ( melts ) yeah .
Gaara : i will stay with naruto and catch up later
Ay : bee . stay here as well .
Bee : but brother .
Ay : do you want my iron claw .
Bee : ( scared ) OK . brother .
( tobirama and others head toward the tree )
Page 15
Bee : yeah . bro . i got ya . i will stay with this fools . yea .
Karin : ( angry ) stop that annoying raps .
Bee : they are the best . ya fool .
Naruto : heh . ( looks at her ) hey . are you a uzumaki ?
Karin : ( thinks ) he is different than before . i can't sense it ( to naruto ) I don't know . my
parents died when i was young .
Naruto : you probably a one . red hair is the trade mark of the uzumaki .
Karin : your name is uzumaki then why do you have a blond one .
Naruto : heh . ( scratch his head ) i hope i had my mom's hair .
Suigetsu : why don't you let him bite your hand as well .
page 16
Karin : ( thinks ) i feel safe around him . ( to suigetsu ) shut up . suigetsu . (to naruto ) I'm
not good at this like your friend but i will be able to restore some of your chakra .
( she uses mystical palm technique on naruto )
Naruto : you mean sakura . that will be enough . thanks .
Karin : ( smiles ) that's nothing .
Gaara : Let's head there as well .
Naruto : wait till i go to sage mode .
( he makes 4 clones to gather sage energy and gather energy himself )
Naruto : OK . let's go .
( naruto take the lead and others follows )
Page 17
( sasuke and madara fighting with their susano'o cloak activated . hashirama and onoki joins
as well )
Madara : Three against one ?
Hashirama : we has to stop you somehow .
Onoki : payback madara . let's see how well you can dance with us .
Madara : Obito . i can use some help here .
Obito : ( not concerned ) you handle them . i will focus on the tree and genjutsu .
Madara : Damn you . obito . listen kid . join me . you know nothing about anything .
Sasuke : i know enough . you are the reason my clan got slaughtered . you and him .
Madara : OK . i will show you how powerful uhiha's are and your are a insect in front of my
power
( Madara begins stabilize his susano'o and sasuke activate his full susano'o )
Page 18
Obito : OK . while they are preoccupied with each other . i will continue the moon eye .
Minato : ( from behind ) you didn't forgot about us . obito .
( obito looks around kages and Orichimaru has surrounded him )
Hiruzan : You were a great ninja . obito . everyone honored you as hero of the sharingan
but you have fallen to eternal pit of hell .
Obito : shut up . third hokage . you loved this scum here . orichimaru . what did that gave
you . you died by your pupil's hands just like minato died by my hand . you all are just
scum .
Orichimaru : i won't be so cocky in a situation like this that's the different between you and
me .
Page 19
( scene changes to tsunade and sakura )
Tsunade : I'm going to help my grand father . sakura . come with me .
( they sees naruto and others climbing the roots up )
Sakura : I'm going to help . naruto and sasuke - kun .
Tsunade : OK . then let's get going .
( Both of them follows others )
Tsunade : ( while climbing up thinks ) you have come a long way . sakura . I'm glad that
you are my student .
Sakura : i won't let your faith down . tsunade - sama . wait for me . naruto and sasuke - kun.
Page 20
( scene changes to obito )
( Separate himself from the tree and stab the tree with a chakra rod )
Obito : ( thinks ) I will be able to control this tree with this ( turns to others ) While we fight
this flower will bloom this world will end .
Naruto : we can see about that until one of us standing there will be hope .
Minato : This time all gonna end for you . obito .
Obito : you are a dead zombie . minato . I will finish you all first then continue with my plan .
( spiral appear near obito and kakashi come out )
Kakashi : ( looking down ) then i will be first to die .
Tobirama : who are you ?
Naruto : Kakashi - sensei !!!
Minato : ( shocked a little ) Kakashi !!!
Page 21
( Last page in color )
Obito : ( thinks ) What's this i feeling . he is different than before . doesn't matter i can still kill him .
Kakashi : you feel it . don't you obito . your end .
( Lifts his head . his right side on darkness and other side on light . his sharingan glows in red )
Kakashi : be ready to die . obito .
( two panels show tsunade arrive on right side of hashirama and sakura arrive on right side of naruto )
( in one panel naruto , kakashi and others ready to fight obito )
( in other one Hashirama , sasuke and others ready to fight madara )
( in last panel flower is shown with moon in the background )
( battle between light and darkness . battle between Despair and hope . The ultimate battle begins )
The End
( sorry guys for taking too much time and for missing 6th page . these days I'm busy with lot of things )
Page 1
( hiruzan puts naruto down slowly , tobirama looking the destruction god tree caused , minato staring at obito , sasuke and juugo looking at naruto)
( Naruto is very angry with obito for killing his comrades )
Obito : no need to suffer anymore . just be where you are .
Naruto : ( shouting ) shut up ..... all this
( Naruto looking around . many fodder ninja has died )
Naruto : you killed this people just for what ?
Obito : this is the only way to bring peace to this world . now stay put .
Naruto : I won't let you ( tries to stand up but fails ) damn not now .
Minato : son ! ( turns to naruto ) calm down .
Page 2
Tobirama : listen to your father . naruto ! this is what war is ninja just die like trash .
Naruto : ( remembers )
Nagato : Dying like trash… never ending hatred… pain that never heals… that is war…
Naruto… this… is what you must face… The book… and you .
Naruto : I get it now . what you said nagato .
konan : This time… I hope for you these will be flowers of hope that never die .
Fodder ninja 1 : it absorbed my chakra .
Foddar ninja 2 : It killed my friends .
Foddar ninja 3 : How can we fight something like this . we are doomed .
Page 3
Naruto : you are right . there is no hope in this world .
( everyone look at naruto )
Obito : so you finally you understand ?
Naruto : ( looking at the ground and thinking ) hmmm .
Hiruzan : naruto ! what are you saying ?
Tobirama : we have no time for this . naruto !
Naruto : Yeah . i understand . this is what war is .
( panel shows medics trying to save injured fodder )
Medic ninja : This is much as i can do .
Medic Ninja 2 : this one died as well .
Page 4
( naruto shedding tears )
( Sasuke jumps infront of naruto . juugo follows )
Sasuke : I will take charge from here .
Naruto : ( just stares at sasuke )
Sasuke : I know somethings . you guys don't know .
Hiruzan : !?
Tobirama : Uhiha . what are you talking about ?
Sasuke : i gonna stop him . if you gonna come .. come
( starts running toword the tree , juugo follows )
Page 5
Obito : then give up . you will be happy in the dream world .
Minato : shut up . obito . ( turns to naruto ) i believe in you . don't give in
Naruto : but
( he remembers what jiraiya said )
Jiraiya : Even I can tell that hatred is spreading . I wanted to do something about it …
but I don't know what … but I believe… that someday the day will come
when people truly understand one another!! If I can't find the answer ,
it will be up to you to do it !!
Obito : but what ?
Naruto : if there is no hope in this world . i will give this world hope .
Page 6
Obito : ( angrily ) give hope to this world ? how you gonna stop me and all this ?
( three panels shows the tree and it's flower . obito and madara distance away )
( Sasuke jumping root to root fast and juugo follows )
Naruto : ( grins )
Page 7
Naruto : ( stands up ) if i can't stop you then i will take you down with me .
Hiruzan : heh . you have not changed at all naruto .
Minato : I'm proud of you . son !
Tobirama : What guts ( thinks ) you are just like my brother . Naruto !
( Orichimaru , karin , suigetsu arrive in the battlefield )
Orichimaru : kuku . naruto - kun . you never change do you ?
Hiruzan : orichimaru ?
Tobirama : What happened to tsunade and kages ?
Karin : we healed them .
Suigetsu : ( looks in horror the destruction tree caused ) What the ?
Page 8
( scene changes )
( sakura on the ground )
Sai : sakura - san
sakura : ( looks at sai from corner of her eye ) s.. sai
sai : are you . ok .
( helps her sit )
Sakura : katsuyu - sama . help them .
Katsuyu : they are already dead .
Sakura : if Tsunade - sama was here . she would -
Katsuyu : This roots sucked all the chakra from their body . even tsunade - sama can't help them .
Sakura : ( tears glowing in her eyes ) but
Page 9
Tsunade : but what sakura ?
Sakura : ( turns in surprise ) Tsunade - sama !!
( kages has arrived in the battlefield )
Tsunade : what happened here ?
Sakura : this tree killed Many shinobi of the alliance . i couldn't
Tsunade : how can my student whining in a situation like this ?
Sakura : I'm sorry but i thought ?
Tsunade : you could have done a better job ? this is war . sakura . death comes being a shinobi .
( sakura is wiping her eyes )
Page 10
Bee : ( panting ) brother !!
Ay : Are you . ok . bee
Bee : yea . brother ! but it suck my power .
Minato : ay ?
Ay : minato ! what happened to your arm ?
Minato : what happened to your's ?
Ay : ( thinks ) he's a pain in the a.. ( looking around ) what happpening here ?
Minato : juubi is in it's final form and about to cast the infinite tsukoyomi .
Page 11
Gaara : Naruto ! are you . Ok .
Naruto : Yeah but we have to stop this tree and obito .
Mei : where is madara ?
Tobirama : My brother is fighting him .
Mei : you are the second hokage . you are handsome for a old man .
( tobirama ignores )
Tobirama : We have to come with a plan to stop this tree .
Mei : ( angrily thinks ) he just ignored me .
Hiruzan : How can we stop this . only sage attacks works .
Page 12
( scene changes to hashirama and madara )
Madara : I'm enough having fun with you .
Onoki : don't you like to dance with me . madara .
Hashirama : you have got old . onoki . although you are same height as before .
Madara : Hmph . you didn't die then did that senju women survived as well ?
Hashirama : tsunade . did you kill her madara ?
( hashirama tries to attack him in anger but madara jumps away and land on a root near obito )
onoki : she is fine but we have to stop madara .
Hashirama : ( tear goes down from his eyes . he looks down and sees her ) Tsunade .
Page 13
( sasuke and juugo arrive near Madara as well )
Sasuke : so you are madara ?
Madara : a uhiha . didn't you kill them all . obito ?
Obito : traitors . what are you doing here ?
Madara : I'm here to help but i wonder he has the same intentions .
( onoki and Hashirama arrive as well )
Onoki : fighting three uhiha's will be troublesome
Sasuke : ( hatefully look at both ) to help you ? you f...... kidding with me .
Hashirama : onoki ! he is on our side .
( sasuke's susano'o cloak begins to appear around him )
page 14
( scene change's to kages , naruto and co )
Naruto : Dad . go help . sasuke . i will come there soon as i restore my chakra .
Tobirama : then kages let's go in and destroy this tree .
Orichimaru : karin , suigetsu stay with naruto - kun .
Karin : OK . orichimaru - sama .
Suigetsu : ( melts ) yeah .
Gaara : i will stay with naruto and catch up later
Ay : bee . stay here as well .
Bee : but brother .
Ay : do you want my iron claw .
Bee : ( scared ) OK . brother .
( tobirama and others head toward the tree )
Page 15
Bee : yeah . bro . i got ya . i will stay with this fools . yea .
Karin : ( angry ) stop that annoying raps .
Bee : they are the best . ya fool .
Naruto : heh . ( looks at her ) hey . are you a uzumaki ?
Karin : ( thinks ) he is different than before . i can't sense it ( to naruto ) I don't know . my
parents died when i was young .
Naruto : you probably a one . red hair is the trade mark of the uzumaki .
Karin : your name is uzumaki then why do you have a blond one .
Naruto : heh . ( scratch his head ) i hope i had my mom's hair .
Suigetsu : why don't you let him bite your hand as well .
page 16
Karin : ( thinks ) i feel safe around him . ( to suigetsu ) shut up . suigetsu . (to naruto ) I'm
not good at this like your friend but i will be able to restore some of your chakra .
( she uses mystical palm technique on naruto )
Naruto : you mean sakura . that will be enough . thanks .
Karin : ( smiles ) that's nothing .
Gaara : Let's head there as well .
Naruto : wait till i go to sage mode .
( he makes 4 clones to gather sage energy and gather energy himself )
Naruto : OK . let's go .
( naruto take the lead and others follows )
Page 17
( sasuke and madara fighting with their susano'o cloak activated . hashirama and onoki joins
as well )
Madara : Three against one ?
Hashirama : we has to stop you somehow .
Onoki : payback madara . let's see how well you can dance with us .
Madara : Obito . i can use some help here .
Obito : ( not concerned ) you handle them . i will focus on the tree and genjutsu .
Madara : Damn you . obito . listen kid . join me . you know nothing about anything .
Sasuke : i know enough . you are the reason my clan got slaughtered . you and him .
Madara : OK . i will show you how powerful uhiha's are and your are a insect in front of my
power
( Madara begins stabilize his susano'o and sasuke activate his full susano'o )
Page 18
Obito : OK . while they are preoccupied with each other . i will continue the moon eye .
Minato : ( from behind ) you didn't forgot about us . obito .
( obito looks around kages and Orichimaru has surrounded him )
Hiruzan : You were a great ninja . obito . everyone honored you as hero of the sharingan
but you have fallen to eternal pit of hell .
Obito : shut up . third hokage . you loved this scum here . orichimaru . what did that gave
you . you died by your pupil's hands just like minato died by my hand . you all are just
scum .
Orichimaru : i won't be so cocky in a situation like this that's the different between you and
me .
Page 19
( scene changes to tsunade and sakura )
Tsunade : I'm going to help my grand father . sakura . come with me .
( they sees naruto and others climbing the roots up )
Sakura : I'm going to help . naruto and sasuke - kun .
Tsunade : OK . then let's get going .
( Both of them follows others )
Tsunade : ( while climbing up thinks ) you have come a long way . sakura . I'm glad that
you are my student .
Sakura : i won't let your faith down . tsunade - sama . wait for me . naruto and sasuke - kun.
Page 20
( scene changes to obito )
( Separate himself from the tree and stab the tree with a chakra rod )
Obito : ( thinks ) I will be able to control this tree with this ( turns to others ) While we fight
this flower will bloom this world will end .
Naruto : we can see about that until one of us standing there will be hope .
Minato : This time all gonna end for you . obito .
Obito : you are a dead zombie . minato . I will finish you all first then continue with my plan .
( spiral appear near obito and kakashi come out )
Kakashi : ( looking down ) then i will be first to die .
Tobirama : who are you ?
Naruto : Kakashi - sensei !!!
Minato : ( shocked a little ) Kakashi !!!
Page 21
( Last page in color )
Obito : ( thinks ) What's this i feeling . he is different than before . doesn't matter i can still kill him .
Kakashi : you feel it . don't you obito . your end .
( Lifts his head . his right side on darkness and other side on light . his sharingan glows in red )
Kakashi : be ready to die . obito .
( two panels show tsunade arrive on right side of hashirama and sakura arrive on right side of naruto )
( in one panel naruto , kakashi and others ready to fight obito )
( in other one Hashirama , sasuke and others ready to fight madara )
( in last panel flower is shown with moon in the background )
( battle between light and darkness . battle between Despair and hope . The ultimate battle begins )
The End
( sorry guys for taking too much time and for missing 6th page . these days I'm busy with lot of things )
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