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The juubi is fully absorbed into obito and he reveals his right eye
Page 1
Obito : haha (let's out maniacal laugh) at last my goal is accomplished .
Minato
remembers obito young) i'm gonna become hokage .
what are you talking about obito ? your dream was to become hokage . this isn't what you wanted .
rin wouldn't gonna accept this .
Obito : (coldly shouts) shut up .(calms down a bit) you wasn't there to help me or rin . now you come to lecture me .
Minato : (shocked looks down) obito . you are right . i failed to protect you or rin . i failed to do anything right .
Sasuke : yes . it's because of you couldn't tell anyone about kyubi attack that my clan had to die .
Narutoangrily) sasuke . how dare you talk to my dad like that .
page 2
Minato : (sad) naruto . that's the truth . if i was able to save them and do things right . it wouldn't come to this .
Naruto : no . dad you didn't .
Sakura : (thinks) naruto !
Obito : no. sensei . it's not your fault .
Naruto,minato and sasuke : .......
other edo hokages and alliance : .......
Madara : ....
Obito : i was created by this hell of the world .
page 3
Minato : obito !
Obito : i wanted this power to destroy this world and create a new one .
Naruto : bastard . you still blabbering about that crap .
Obito : hm . how can you stop me doing it naruto .
(in naruto's mind )
kurama : he is right naruto . we can't fight him .
Naruto : we have to fight him some how .
Kurama : naruto go to the beast mode and let me talk to others .
Page 4
Hashirama : deactivate the barrier it's useless .
Tobirama : you are right brother .
Hiruzan : i can't believe it's obito .
Tobirama : what's matter saru .
Hiruzan : he is called hero of the sharingan . he gave his life to help us win the last war . how he turn out like this .
Tobirama : if he died then how can he be alive ?
Page 5
Madara : (slices hashirama's clones with his susanoo sword and slowly walk forword ) i saved him and taught him . how to achieve peace in a genjutsu world .
Hashirama : you are the one who made him like this?
Madara : no . i wanted the infinite tsukoyomi but who knew he had other goals to achieve .
Hashirama : do you know what he is going to do madara ?
Madara : who knows but he is not your opponent i am .
(madara suddenly get pulled)
Obito : bansho tenin
Page 6
(madara uses the same technique and stops getting him pulled)
Madara : obito did you think it would be easy .
Obito : bastard . i didn't trust you . i knew you gonna use me when you doesn't need me .
Madara : (smiles) that's how you gonna repay one who saved you .
Obito : saved ? don't make me laugh . after this i will send you to the hell .
Madara : that's my eye that i gave to nagato in your left eye .
Page 7
sasuke and sakura : his eyes ?
Naruto : it's your eyes how then nagato had them ?
Hashirama : you awakened the rinnegan ?
Madara : thanks to your dna .
(hashirama flash backs to moment he killed madara)
hashirama : i will take care of him first . later madara .
Madara : (jumps in front of hashirama) you gonna fight me. obito do what you have to do .
Page 7
(to kages )
Tsunade : i'm feeling a very foul chakra . katsuyu what happening in the battlefield .
Katsuyu : it's look like fake madara become the juubi's jinchuraki .
Tsunade : (shocked).....
A : ...
Mei : ...
Gaara : ...
Onoki : one madara is hard enough to handle . now there is someone like sage .
Page 8
Tsunade : grandpa will take care of madara . we have to come up with a some plan to defeat the other one .
Mei : is there anyway to stop him .
Gaara : knowing naruto ! he want gonna give up no matter what .
(remembers his fight with naruto)
Gaara :there's that sasuke too .
Meiremembers sasuke and with strange look in her face) can we really trust him ?
Tsunade : hm . if naruto trust him . i trust him too .
Page 9
(scene changes to orichimaru and others)
karin : shouldn't we head to battlefield as well .
Suigetsu : to be close sasuke .
Karin : i.. idiot it's not that . (thinks) what this strange chakra that i sense ?
Orichimaru : what's it karin ?
Karin : i feel some evil chakra that can't be measured .
Orichimaru : did madara succeeded . let's hurry to the other place where sasuke told us .
(they changes the way they travels)
Page 10
(in battlefield there is dust clouds everywhere . many ninja's are dead )
(in mind)
Naruto : what power we can't even make a single scratch on him .
Kurama : let focus on the fight .
(they are hiding behind a rock as edo hokages fight obito and madara)
Naruto : everyone . attack from every direction but don't get closer .
Kurama naruto : sasuke brat . go and attack him with susanoo .
Sasuke: kyubi . what happen to naruto .
Page 11
Kurama : we are friends now . i can talk through naruto . now focus on the battle .
Sasuke : humph . all ways need help . you never gonna change beside I'm no brat .
Kurama: just go brat .we are coming behind you .
Sakura : what about me .
kurama : come here girl . (take her into his cloak) you analyze the situation from here .
Sakura : nine tails talking through naruto .
(sasuke and naruto charging towards obito as they go in susano'o and beast mode)
Page 12
Choji : what they gonna do .
Ino : they can't handle him alone .
shikamaru : let them . they have a plan . connect me to naruto .
Shikamaru : naruto . what you gonna do .
naruto : kurama has a plan . we gonna try it .
(panel shows more ninja get killed)
Page 13
Guy : we can't wait here . 7th gate open .
Lee : i'm coming too sensei . 7th gate open .
tenten : i will use my weapons to distract him .
(throws hundred of weapons at madara as guy and lee is covered in red)
hashirama : madara . you has become more powerful .
Madara : i didn't show you half my power yet . bansho tenin .
Page 14
Hinata : naruto-kun is attacking that guy . we must help too .
kiba : let's go akamaru .
Shino : I'm gonna come too because he evade my jutsu last time . (thinks) i must do this time right .
Kiba : now that's some grudge to have .
Shino : what ?
Kiba : oh .nothing .
Hinata : you two don't starts fights we need to help naruto-kun .
Page 15
(changes to kages)
Gaara : almost there .
Mei : can't see anything . dust covering the area .
A : bee . you better be fine .
Onoki : madara . i can sense him even from mile away .
Tsunade : looks like grandpa and grand uncle giving madara a good fight .
A : let's hurry gaara .
Gaara : yes . I'm coming . naruto !
(swirl appears in battlefield . kakashi comes out.)
Kakashi : (sees lot of dead bodies) Naruto ! was i too late .(falls down on his knees)
Page 16
(orichimaru and others arrive where they were headed)
Orichimaru : sasuke - kun . better be right .
(remembers)
Sasuke : orichimaru i want you to go to somewhere .
Orichimaru : where ?
Sasuke :there some people i want you to revive .
(in present)
Karin : what we are doing here , orichimaru -sama
Suigetsu : this place is creepy .
Orichimarulicks his lips) kuku . i will do what you said sasuke -kun if it give me some benefits .
(where did orichimaru go to . what's his intentions)
The end .
i made it quickly so sorry if last parts are bit off .
Page 1
Obito : haha (let's out maniacal laugh) at last my goal is accomplished .
Minato
remembers obito young) i'm gonna become hokage .what are you talking about obito ? your dream was to become hokage . this isn't what you wanted .
rin wouldn't gonna accept this .
Obito : (coldly shouts) shut up .(calms down a bit) you wasn't there to help me or rin . now you come to lecture me .
Minato : (shocked looks down) obito . you are right . i failed to protect you or rin . i failed to do anything right .
Sasuke : yes . it's because of you couldn't tell anyone about kyubi attack that my clan had to die .
Naruto
angrily) sasuke . how dare you talk to my dad like that .page 2
Minato : (sad) naruto . that's the truth . if i was able to save them and do things right . it wouldn't come to this .
Naruto : no . dad you didn't .
Sakura : (thinks) naruto !
Obito : no. sensei . it's not your fault .
Naruto,minato and sasuke : .......
other edo hokages and alliance : .......
Madara : ....
Obito : i was created by this hell of the world .
page 3
Minato : obito !
Obito : i wanted this power to destroy this world and create a new one .
Naruto : bastard . you still blabbering about that crap .
Obito : hm . how can you stop me doing it naruto .
(in naruto's mind )
kurama : he is right naruto . we can't fight him .
Naruto : we have to fight him some how .
Kurama : naruto go to the beast mode and let me talk to others .
Page 4
Hashirama : deactivate the barrier it's useless .
Tobirama : you are right brother .
Hiruzan : i can't believe it's obito .
Tobirama : what's matter saru .
Hiruzan : he is called hero of the sharingan . he gave his life to help us win the last war . how he turn out like this .
Tobirama : if he died then how can he be alive ?
Page 5
Madara : (slices hashirama's clones with his susanoo sword and slowly walk forword ) i saved him and taught him . how to achieve peace in a genjutsu world .
Hashirama : you are the one who made him like this?
Madara : no . i wanted the infinite tsukoyomi but who knew he had other goals to achieve .
Hashirama : do you know what he is going to do madara ?
Madara : who knows but he is not your opponent i am .
(madara suddenly get pulled)
Obito : bansho tenin
Page 6
(madara uses the same technique and stops getting him pulled)
Madara : obito did you think it would be easy .
Obito : bastard . i didn't trust you . i knew you gonna use me when you doesn't need me .
Madara : (smiles) that's how you gonna repay one who saved you .
Obito : saved ? don't make me laugh . after this i will send you to the hell .
Madara : that's my eye that i gave to nagato in your left eye .
Page 7
sasuke and sakura : his eyes ?
Naruto : it's your eyes how then nagato had them ?
Hashirama : you awakened the rinnegan ?
Madara : thanks to your dna .
(hashirama flash backs to moment he killed madara)
hashirama : i will take care of him first . later madara .
Madara : (jumps in front of hashirama) you gonna fight me. obito do what you have to do .
Page 7
(to kages )
Tsunade : i'm feeling a very foul chakra . katsuyu what happening in the battlefield .
Katsuyu : it's look like fake madara become the juubi's jinchuraki .
Tsunade : (shocked).....
A : ...
Mei : ...
Gaara : ...
Onoki : one madara is hard enough to handle . now there is someone like sage .
Page 8
Tsunade : grandpa will take care of madara . we have to come up with a some plan to defeat the other one .
Mei : is there anyway to stop him .
Gaara : knowing naruto ! he want gonna give up no matter what .
(remembers his fight with naruto)
Gaara :there's that sasuke too .
Mei
remembers sasuke and with strange look in her face) can we really trust him ? Tsunade : hm . if naruto trust him . i trust him too .
Page 9
(scene changes to orichimaru and others)
karin : shouldn't we head to battlefield as well .
Suigetsu : to be close sasuke .
Karin : i.. idiot it's not that . (thinks) what this strange chakra that i sense ?
Orichimaru : what's it karin ?
Karin : i feel some evil chakra that can't be measured .
Orichimaru : did madara succeeded . let's hurry to the other place where sasuke told us .
(they changes the way they travels)
Page 10
(in battlefield there is dust clouds everywhere . many ninja's are dead )
(in mind)
Naruto : what power we can't even make a single scratch on him .
Kurama : let focus on the fight .
(they are hiding behind a rock as edo hokages fight obito and madara)
Naruto : everyone . attack from every direction but don't get closer .
Kurama naruto : sasuke brat . go and attack him with susanoo .
Sasuke: kyubi . what happen to naruto .
Page 11
Kurama : we are friends now . i can talk through naruto . now focus on the battle .
Sasuke : humph . all ways need help . you never gonna change beside I'm no brat .
Kurama: just go brat .we are coming behind you .
Sakura : what about me .
kurama : come here girl . (take her into his cloak) you analyze the situation from here .
Sakura : nine tails talking through naruto .
(sasuke and naruto charging towards obito as they go in susano'o and beast mode)
Page 12
Choji : what they gonna do .
Ino : they can't handle him alone .
shikamaru : let them . they have a plan . connect me to naruto .
Shikamaru : naruto . what you gonna do .
naruto : kurama has a plan . we gonna try it .
(panel shows more ninja get killed)
Page 13
Guy : we can't wait here . 7th gate open .
Lee : i'm coming too sensei . 7th gate open .
tenten : i will use my weapons to distract him .
(throws hundred of weapons at madara as guy and lee is covered in red)
hashirama : madara . you has become more powerful .
Madara : i didn't show you half my power yet . bansho tenin .
Page 14
Hinata : naruto-kun is attacking that guy . we must help too .
kiba : let's go akamaru .
Shino : I'm gonna come too because he evade my jutsu last time . (thinks) i must do this time right .
Kiba : now that's some grudge to have .
Shino : what ?
Kiba : oh .nothing .
Hinata : you two don't starts fights we need to help naruto-kun .
Page 15
(changes to kages)
Gaara : almost there .
Mei : can't see anything . dust covering the area .
A : bee . you better be fine .
Onoki : madara . i can sense him even from mile away .
Tsunade : looks like grandpa and grand uncle giving madara a good fight .
A : let's hurry gaara .
Gaara : yes . I'm coming . naruto !
(swirl appears in battlefield . kakashi comes out.)
Kakashi : (sees lot of dead bodies) Naruto ! was i too late .(falls down on his knees)
Page 16
(orichimaru and others arrive where they were headed)
Orichimaru : sasuke - kun . better be right .
(remembers)
Sasuke : orichimaru i want you to go to somewhere .
Orichimaru : where ?
Sasuke :there some people i want you to revive .
(in present)
Karin : what we are doing here , orichimaru -sama
Suigetsu : this place is creepy .
Orichimaru
licks his lips) kuku . i will do what you said sasuke -kun if it give me some benefits .(where did orichimaru go to . what's his intentions)
The end .
i made it quickly so sorry if last parts are bit off .
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