Hey guys, since I got some positive feedback on my prologue for this, I decided to post a new chapter here!
Prologue can be found here:
As they were walking towards where they would meet Sasuke, Naruto bumps into Sakura who is holding her 7 year old eldest sons hand. “Oh, hey Sakura-chan! How are you today?” “We're doing fine Naruto.” She said with a smile on her face. “And how is the little guy doing?” Naruto said while patting the young Uchiha on the head. “You know, you look just like your dad. You'll probably grow up to be just as, if not, stronger than your dad. When you're a Jounin we should have a spar.” “Y-y-yeah, sure. But, uncle Naruto, can I show you something?” The little boy answered. “Of course you can! What is it, I'm curious now.” The boy closes his eyes and re-opens them to show a fully developed 3-tomoe sharingan. Naruto knew that some Uchiha from Sasuke's family were exceptionally skilled with the sharingan, but to unlock one at the age of seven, Naruto never knew. “Wow! That's amazing, Itachi, at 7 years old already a fully developed Sharingan. Sasuke must've trained you well, eh?” “Dad even had me do the Fireball Jutsu! And he said he expected as much from his son.” “Yeah, the Fireball Jutsu is the Uchiha clans right of passage, and Sasuke has pretty high standards, but I'm sure you'll live up to them.” He said, comforting the young child. “Anyway Sakura-chan, we should be on our way. Sasuke wanted to help Obito with some jutsus” “Alright Naruto, but remember no fighting between you two, especially not in the village. We know how hot headed you both still can get around eachother. Even after the war.” “Oh don't worry Sakura-chan, we'll make sure we stay out of eachother's hair.” They said while waving Sakura and Itachi goodbye.
“So Dad, you've known uncle Itachi since you were kids right? Did you always get along?” Obito asked, but he knew the answer already, he asked it so many times before. Naruto sighed “Obito, you know this story already, do you really want to hear it again?” “I can't help it Dad, I just love the story, ehehe” “Ok, have it your way, but we'll keep walking okay?” Naruto inhaled for a bit and started his story. “As you know the Uchiha clan was decimated about 21 years ago, and Sasuke and his brother being the only survivors of that event.” “Yeah, but who killed them all, you never told me.” “And I never will, I promised uncle Sasuke that I wouldn't.” “Oh come on dad!” Obito said with a frown on his face. “No, Obito, a promise is a promise, and I intend to keep it. All you need to know is that before the war Sasuke exacted his revenge and vowed to restore the clan.” “Is it true that Sasuke was as strong as a Kage-level ninja at 17?” “Oh yes, he was strong, stronger than I was at that time. Even with my sage mode I would probably not stand a chance against his Mangekyou Sharingan.” “Wow,” Obito exclaimed with big eyes “stronger than you, Dad? That's impossible, right? You're the strongest there is!” “Ehehe, I may be now, but that wasn't always the case.” “And Sasuke, you also said he had a rinn..rinne....rinnegan?” “Yes, at first he had one with similair tomoe in it, much like the sharingan.” “The SHARINNEGAN!” “Well, we don't call it that, but I guess that's right.” Naruto said with a big smile on his face, Obito had the same kind of humor as his dad. “And what about now? Does he still have it, like you are still a jinchuriki for Kurama and the others?” “Oh yes, he even developed a second 'sharinnegan' in his right eye and became much more stronger.” “Wow, I'm going to ask uncle Sasuke if he could show it to me. That would be the best thing ever!” “And do you want to fight him like that?” “OF COURSE I DO, I'm the son of Naruto Uzumaki, the strongest ninja there is, after all!” Obito shouted while laughing with that same grin his father has. “Well, you could try...” “What? Are you saying I can't do it, Dad?” “No, not at all, but Sasuke has more experience than you, so you might lose.” “We'll see about that Dad.” Naruto sighed once more, luckily they're almost at the old training field where Team 7 trained for the first time.
“Hiya Sasuke, or should I say: Lord Hokage?” Naruto said with a grin. “Naruto, just my name is good enough, you don't have to call me Lord Hokage.” Sasuke said, being the same person he always was, though he is a better person to be around with now, less cold and more caring for his fellows. You could say that he outgrew the minority-majority complex. “Hehe, well then, Obito here is keen on sparring with you, though he has a request. A really...really...bad one. He wants you to fi-” “I WANT YOU TO FIGHT ME USING YOUR SHARINNEGAN!” Obito shouted. “Y-y-you...want to fight me, while I'm using my sharinnegan? You mean rinnegan, right?” Sasuke looked slightly concerned at Naruto, while thinking that the kid was the exact same knucklehead as his dad. “Naruto, haven't you tried to talk him out of that?” Naruto walks up to Sasuke and whispers: “Just go easy on him, show him the rinnegan, but don't use any of the Sage's powers, can you do that?”
“Yeah, sure I'll do that, but you do realize that this is a stupid idea right? The kid is exactly like you when we were kids.” “Of course I know, and I'm proud that he's like me. It only means he'll be a great ninja one day, perhaps even Hokage, after you resign, or I have to take over for you, hehe.”
“Well then, young Uzumaki.” Sasuke closes his eyes. “Are you sure you want this, because I just wanted to practice some jutsu with you, since you're a lightning type like me.” “Of course this is what I want, I'm so excited I can barely stand.” Obito says while shaking with excitement. “Alright then...” Sasuke suddenly teleports behind Obito and knocks backwards slightly. “H-h-how did you do that!”
Prologue can be found here:
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Chapter 1: Meeting the old Rival
As they were walking towards where they would meet Sasuke, Naruto bumps into Sakura who is holding her 7 year old eldest sons hand. “Oh, hey Sakura-chan! How are you today?” “We're doing fine Naruto.” She said with a smile on her face. “And how is the little guy doing?” Naruto said while patting the young Uchiha on the head. “You know, you look just like your dad. You'll probably grow up to be just as, if not, stronger than your dad. When you're a Jounin we should have a spar.” “Y-y-yeah, sure. But, uncle Naruto, can I show you something?” The little boy answered. “Of course you can! What is it, I'm curious now.” The boy closes his eyes and re-opens them to show a fully developed 3-tomoe sharingan. Naruto knew that some Uchiha from Sasuke's family were exceptionally skilled with the sharingan, but to unlock one at the age of seven, Naruto never knew. “Wow! That's amazing, Itachi, at 7 years old already a fully developed Sharingan. Sasuke must've trained you well, eh?” “Dad even had me do the Fireball Jutsu! And he said he expected as much from his son.” “Yeah, the Fireball Jutsu is the Uchiha clans right of passage, and Sasuke has pretty high standards, but I'm sure you'll live up to them.” He said, comforting the young child. “Anyway Sakura-chan, we should be on our way. Sasuke wanted to help Obito with some jutsus” “Alright Naruto, but remember no fighting between you two, especially not in the village. We know how hot headed you both still can get around eachother. Even after the war.” “Oh don't worry Sakura-chan, we'll make sure we stay out of eachother's hair.” They said while waving Sakura and Itachi goodbye.
“So Dad, you've known uncle Itachi since you were kids right? Did you always get along?” Obito asked, but he knew the answer already, he asked it so many times before. Naruto sighed “Obito, you know this story already, do you really want to hear it again?” “I can't help it Dad, I just love the story, ehehe” “Ok, have it your way, but we'll keep walking okay?” Naruto inhaled for a bit and started his story. “As you know the Uchiha clan was decimated about 21 years ago, and Sasuke and his brother being the only survivors of that event.” “Yeah, but who killed them all, you never told me.” “And I never will, I promised uncle Sasuke that I wouldn't.” “Oh come on dad!” Obito said with a frown on his face. “No, Obito, a promise is a promise, and I intend to keep it. All you need to know is that before the war Sasuke exacted his revenge and vowed to restore the clan.” “Is it true that Sasuke was as strong as a Kage-level ninja at 17?” “Oh yes, he was strong, stronger than I was at that time. Even with my sage mode I would probably not stand a chance against his Mangekyou Sharingan.” “Wow,” Obito exclaimed with big eyes “stronger than you, Dad? That's impossible, right? You're the strongest there is!” “Ehehe, I may be now, but that wasn't always the case.” “And Sasuke, you also said he had a rinn..rinne....rinnegan?” “Yes, at first he had one with similair tomoe in it, much like the sharingan.” “The SHARINNEGAN!” “Well, we don't call it that, but I guess that's right.” Naruto said with a big smile on his face, Obito had the same kind of humor as his dad. “And what about now? Does he still have it, like you are still a jinchuriki for Kurama and the others?” “Oh yes, he even developed a second 'sharinnegan' in his right eye and became much more stronger.” “Wow, I'm going to ask uncle Sasuke if he could show it to me. That would be the best thing ever!” “And do you want to fight him like that?” “OF COURSE I DO, I'm the son of Naruto Uzumaki, the strongest ninja there is, after all!” Obito shouted while laughing with that same grin his father has. “Well, you could try...” “What? Are you saying I can't do it, Dad?” “No, not at all, but Sasuke has more experience than you, so you might lose.” “We'll see about that Dad.” Naruto sighed once more, luckily they're almost at the old training field where Team 7 trained for the first time.
“Hiya Sasuke, or should I say: Lord Hokage?” Naruto said with a grin. “Naruto, just my name is good enough, you don't have to call me Lord Hokage.” Sasuke said, being the same person he always was, though he is a better person to be around with now, less cold and more caring for his fellows. You could say that he outgrew the minority-majority complex. “Hehe, well then, Obito here is keen on sparring with you, though he has a request. A really...really...bad one. He wants you to fi-” “I WANT YOU TO FIGHT ME USING YOUR SHARINNEGAN!” Obito shouted. “Y-y-you...want to fight me, while I'm using my sharinnegan? You mean rinnegan, right?” Sasuke looked slightly concerned at Naruto, while thinking that the kid was the exact same knucklehead as his dad. “Naruto, haven't you tried to talk him out of that?” Naruto walks up to Sasuke and whispers: “Just go easy on him, show him the rinnegan, but don't use any of the Sage's powers, can you do that?”
“Yeah, sure I'll do that, but you do realize that this is a stupid idea right? The kid is exactly like you when we were kids.” “Of course I know, and I'm proud that he's like me. It only means he'll be a great ninja one day, perhaps even Hokage, after you resign, or I have to take over for you, hehe.”
“Well then, young Uzumaki.” Sasuke closes his eyes. “Are you sure you want this, because I just wanted to practice some jutsu with you, since you're a lightning type like me.” “Of course this is what I want, I'm so excited I can barely stand.” Obito says while shaking with excitement. “Alright then...” Sasuke suddenly teleports behind Obito and knocks backwards slightly. “H-h-how did you do that!”
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