Uzumaki Menma
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Okay, I am severely bored and when I have nothing else to do I think or write. Trudging through some notebooks to find some paper, I came across an old Naruto story I had written. It was mainly the plot and the characters weren't completely fleshed through, but I thought I'd post some of it and see what you guys thought.
Story:
*Note - This was written when Sasuke first left Tobi's cave after implanting Itachi's Sharingan so things might not be accurate.
Okay, so the story would take place years after the war.
Obito is dead, Madara is dead, . . . and Sasuke is dead as well, perishing in the fight him and Naruto are destined to have (this would need to change obviously, but he would still need to end up dead as this would impact my story greatly).
-Naruto has become the sixth Hokage. He has a son with Hinata who would be the main character.
-Shikamaru ended up with Temari and know is in head of intel division and is a proctor at the Chuunin exams. He has a son as well.
-Neji (damn) married Tenten and they had a boy.
-Ino and Sai ****ed and had a boy, too. Sai is ahead of the ANBU and is Naruto's most trusted soldier/lapdog.
-Sakura and (gasp) Rock Lee had a girl. She is also head of the science and medial division. Rock Lee runs a dojo for Taijutsu. Their relationship is very strained as Sakura really doesn't love love Lee (she loves him though if you know what I mean).
The rest of the cast also had children with invisible people as I haven't created their spouses backgrounds. I found it stupid to create a completely new generation when Naruto's wasn't even fleshed out all that well (Shippuden), but I DID include some new families like;
-Shinobu Kagura: From a family that fled Mizugakure when they were hunting down all the people with Kekkei Gekkai's. Eventually, some people came looking for her parents and they dropped Shinobu off at Konoha to be underneath their care. Her bloodline limit is Blood Style
. By drinking someone's blood, she can gain their affinity or kekkai gekkai (I know! She's haxxed)
-Another ninja I created was a boy named Tetsuya. He and his sister had to flee the Iron Country where their father was a famous blacksmith because he was accused of crafting a dark blade that possessed it's wielder and caused them to almost slaughter everyone in the country. His sister dropped him off at Konoha as well. His bloodline limit is Steel Style.
-The last newcomer is a boy named Hibari. He is son of a man named Sousuke that tried to run against Naruto in the Hokage elections. Nobody knows much about him except that he's extremely powerful despite just graduating the Academy.
So yeah, it would focus on Naruto's son; we'll call him Haru for now. His sensei would be . . . yup, you guessed it; Konohamaru. His two other squad members would be a boy from the Hibachi clan (famous for their fire style and cooking) and also be Sakura's daughter with Rock Lee.
I feel the need to explain Daisuke Hibachi slightly, so here goes: He is the son of Ryu and Ayami Hibachi. His personality is almost Obito-ish. He's not really adept at Ninjutsu but his effort is what makes him formidable. He knows Scorch Style (think Pakura as he is a distant relative of her).
His parents own a buffet that they are extremely proud of and Daisuke used to be a dish washer for them, but his dream of becoming Hokage pushed him to secretly learn Ninjutsu and he passed the graduation exam becoming a ninja. His parents weren't happy about this and almost disowned him.
His parents don't want him to be a ninja because his brother was also a ninja (special black ops anbu) and he died in a terrible incident. Since then, they became pacifist and started following the political leader Sousuke who is a famous political figure who has garnered much support amongst Konoha's backwater people. He wants to overthrow Naruto and everything he stands for.
I've given the heroes and what not so onto the villains!!!
The main villain is a masked man with long red flowing hair. His name is Shinto. He is an Uzumaki who was in charge of Uzushiogakure before the village was entirely destroyed and wants to get revenge on all of the great nations, including Konoha for not retaliating well enough. He is actually Mito's brother and was on the same level as Hashirama and Madara. Remember, Uzumaki's are famous for their long lives and he's the village leader so he's really strong at sealing and stuff (he can casually seal kekkai gekkai's and element natures as well as easily rip a bijuu form it's host).
His sidekick/apprentice is an Uchiha boy. The only Uchiha of this day and age. His name is Toharu and is told by Shinto to be Sasuke's son. Shinto told Toharu that his mother was secretly killed by Konoha ninja that found about his existence and that his father was betrayed by Konoha. Really, Sasuke had no son. Toharu is actually Itachi's son ( gasp O_O) and we would find that out later as a plot twist. Itachi (before he died) had a secret lover and wanted to ensure his clan would survive even if Sasuke remained evil and died (he was always planning ahead). He left the Yata mirror shield within his son as well as Totsuka blade).
Now, really Shinto killed Toharu's mother. Shinto had been observing all of the events on Naruto behind the scene and had discovered Itachi's son. He brainwashes Toharu into believing Sasuke is his dad and that he should destroy Konoha. In order to do this, Toharu goes around and finds Karin, Suigetsu, and Juugo who are all scattered around the world and convinces them to join him by saying he's Sasuke's son. Toharu then forms an organization called Takatsuki (after his father's group Taka which means "hawk", and tsuki which means "moon". So it would mean "Hawks-moon and refers to the night where he would get his revenge.
They recruit rogue ninja to help them and yada yada yada. Obviously it goes into much more detail but I'm tired and don't want to much for ya'll to read so I'll post again tommorow.
SUMMARY FOR U LAZY BASTERDS!!!
- Story would be based on Naruto's generations kids!
- The main villain would be an Uzumaki from the past named Shinto who haves a grudge against five great nations and Konoha for what they did to his clan!
- Toharu Uchiha is also a main villain. He is the son of Itachi but was tricked by Shinto into believing he is Sasuke's son! He wants to destroy Konoha for supposedly killing his mother and father and his entire clan.
- He spawns a criminal organization named Takatsuki which means, Hawk's Moon (after his supposed dad's old group Taka) which consist of Juugo, Suigetsu, and Karin as well as other rouge shinobi.
- Sousuke is a man who participated in the fourth ninja war. He tried to become sixth Hokage but lost to Naruto who he despises and hates all of his policies. He's plotting from within the village to launch a cou de tah.
PEOPLE HAVE BEEN WONDERING ABOUT OROCHIMARU.
-Toharu being Itachi's son was secretly handed down Yata shield and Totsuka blade. When he learns from Shinto that Oro was sealed within the blade, he free's him who then turns his back on Toharu and goes to start a new sinister life and wreck mother ****ing havoc
Story:
*Note - This was written when Sasuke first left Tobi's cave after implanting Itachi's Sharingan so things might not be accurate.
Okay, so the story would take place years after the war.
Obito is dead, Madara is dead, . . . and Sasuke is dead as well, perishing in the fight him and Naruto are destined to have (this would need to change obviously, but he would still need to end up dead as this would impact my story greatly).
-Naruto has become the sixth Hokage. He has a son with Hinata who would be the main character.
-Shikamaru ended up with Temari and know is in head of intel division and is a proctor at the Chuunin exams. He has a son as well.
-Neji (damn) married Tenten and they had a boy.
-Ino and Sai ****ed and had a boy, too. Sai is ahead of the ANBU and is Naruto's most trusted soldier/lapdog.
-Sakura and (gasp) Rock Lee had a girl. She is also head of the science and medial division. Rock Lee runs a dojo for Taijutsu. Their relationship is very strained as Sakura really doesn't love love Lee (she loves him though if you know what I mean).
The rest of the cast also had children with invisible people as I haven't created their spouses backgrounds. I found it stupid to create a completely new generation when Naruto's wasn't even fleshed out all that well (Shippuden), but I DID include some new families like;
-Shinobu Kagura: From a family that fled Mizugakure when they were hunting down all the people with Kekkei Gekkai's. Eventually, some people came looking for her parents and they dropped Shinobu off at Konoha to be underneath their care. Her bloodline limit is Blood Style
. By drinking someone's blood, she can gain their affinity or kekkai gekkai (I know! She's haxxed)-Another ninja I created was a boy named Tetsuya. He and his sister had to flee the Iron Country where their father was a famous blacksmith because he was accused of crafting a dark blade that possessed it's wielder and caused them to almost slaughter everyone in the country. His sister dropped him off at Konoha as well. His bloodline limit is Steel Style.
-The last newcomer is a boy named Hibari. He is son of a man named Sousuke that tried to run against Naruto in the Hokage elections. Nobody knows much about him except that he's extremely powerful despite just graduating the Academy.
So yeah, it would focus on Naruto's son; we'll call him Haru for now. His sensei would be . . . yup, you guessed it; Konohamaru. His two other squad members would be a boy from the Hibachi clan (famous for their fire style and cooking) and also be Sakura's daughter with Rock Lee.
I feel the need to explain Daisuke Hibachi slightly, so here goes: He is the son of Ryu and Ayami Hibachi. His personality is almost Obito-ish. He's not really adept at Ninjutsu but his effort is what makes him formidable. He knows Scorch Style (think Pakura as he is a distant relative of her).
His parents own a buffet that they are extremely proud of and Daisuke used to be a dish washer for them, but his dream of becoming Hokage pushed him to secretly learn Ninjutsu and he passed the graduation exam becoming a ninja. His parents weren't happy about this and almost disowned him.
His parents don't want him to be a ninja because his brother was also a ninja (special black ops anbu
) and he died in a terrible incident. Since then, they became pacifist and started following the political leader Sousuke who is a famous political figure who has garnered much support amongst Konoha's backwater people. He wants to overthrow Naruto and everything he stands for. I've given the heroes and what not so onto the villains!!!
The main villain is a masked man with long red flowing hair. His name is Shinto. He is an Uzumaki who was in charge of Uzushiogakure before the village was entirely destroyed and wants to get revenge on all of the great nations, including Konoha for not retaliating well enough. He is actually Mito's brother and was on the same level as Hashirama and Madara. Remember, Uzumaki's are famous for their long lives and he's the village leader so he's really strong at sealing and stuff (he can casually seal kekkai gekkai's and element natures as well as easily rip a bijuu form it's host).
His sidekick/apprentice is an Uchiha boy. The only Uchiha of this day and age. His name is Toharu and is told by Shinto to be Sasuke's son. Shinto told Toharu that his mother was secretly killed by Konoha ninja that found about his existence and that his father was betrayed by Konoha. Really, Sasuke had no son. Toharu is actually Itachi's son ( gasp O_O) and we would find that out later as a plot twist. Itachi (before he died) had a secret lover and wanted to ensure his clan would survive even if Sasuke remained evil and died (he was always planning ahead). He left the Yata mirror shield within his son as well as Totsuka blade).
Now, really Shinto killed Toharu's mother. Shinto had been observing all of the events on Naruto behind the scene and had discovered Itachi's son. He brainwashes Toharu into believing Sasuke is his dad and that he should destroy Konoha. In order to do this, Toharu goes around and finds Karin, Suigetsu, and Juugo who are all scattered around the world and convinces them to join him by saying he's Sasuke's son. Toharu then forms an organization called Takatsuki (after his father's group Taka which means "hawk", and tsuki which means "moon". So it would mean "Hawks-moon and refers to the night where he would get his revenge.
They recruit rogue ninja to help them and yada yada yada. Obviously it goes into much more detail but I'm tired and don't want to much for ya'll to read so I'll post again tommorow.
SUMMARY FOR U LAZY BASTERDS!!!
- Story would be based on Naruto's generations kids!
- The main villain would be an Uzumaki from the past named Shinto who haves a grudge against five great nations and Konoha for what they did to his clan!
- Toharu Uchiha is also a main villain. He is the son of Itachi but was tricked by Shinto into believing he is Sasuke's son! He wants to destroy Konoha for supposedly killing his mother and father and his entire clan.
- He spawns a criminal organization named Takatsuki which means, Hawk's Moon (after his supposed dad's old group Taka) which consist of Juugo, Suigetsu, and Karin as well as other rouge shinobi.
- Sousuke is a man who participated in the fourth ninja war. He tried to become sixth Hokage but lost to Naruto who he despises and hates all of his policies. He's plotting from within the village to launch a cou de tah.
PEOPLE HAVE BEEN WONDERING ABOUT OROCHIMARU.
-Toharu being Itachi's son was secretly handed down Yata shield and Totsuka blade. When he learns from Shinto that Oro was sealed within the blade, he free's him who then turns his back on Toharu and goes to start a new sinister life and wreck mother ****ing havoc
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