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Note: I decided to make this chapter's structure a little different from the first one. It's also a bit smaller.
Naruto: New Generation! Chapter 2
Someone pulling the strings...
Kuromo - When I get out of this!!!...
Hisaki - Kuromo, close your eyes, I'm going to use one of my genjutsu techiniques...
Kuromo tightly closes his eyes, expecting it all to be over when he opens them.
Hisaki activates her two tomoes sharingan.
Hisaki - Jūyōsei Kone no Jutsu!
Jūyōsei Kone no Jutsu, an illusion that convinces the target's mind that they are getting heavier and heavier, as if gravity is increasing only on them. They become slower, weaker, and are forced to use more chakra for taijutsu techniques.
Old Man - Ahh, what... what's going on?! Why is it becoming hard to move?! WHY?!
Hisaki - Are you desperate? You were caught in my genjutsu, in 5 minutes you will be unable to move, and you will become very weak. If you release us I will let you off of my genjutsu!
Old Man - Ahhahahaha, ahahaha, aha... Don't be so confident, I'm joking, I wouldn't fall for such a cheap trick like that, I'm... I'm the greatest shinobi alive! Ahaha! Now hold still, it will all be over in a minute, eheh.
Hisaki - I failed... Kuromo, I... Love... You!
Hisaki vanishes in tears, while the old man is approaching with his scalpel.
Kuromo - Stop, Stop!! Let her live, kill me first!
Old Man - I'm afraid I can't do that kid, but I can kill you first, ahahahahaha!
All of a sudden, a big explosion sound is heard, and a mist appears in the room, Kuromo uses his Byakugan and senses someone in the middle of the mist.
Old Man - Did someone follow you? Show yourself!
??? - You've done enough don't you think? Creepy wrinkled old guys like you should be resting at home!
Old Man - Ahaha, What did you call me?
The mist vanishes, and the enemies stare at eachother, they get in a fighting stance...
??? - I've been following you for quite a while, you're wanted for killing multiple people, Akimichi Kureiji!
Kureiji - So you're a bounty hunter huh? Such an insignificant insect like you wouldn't be able to capture me!
??? - Well at least give me a chance!
Kureiji - Aha very funny, what's your name?
??? - Kosei, remember it when you die, the name of the one who killed you.
Kureiji - You couldn't be dumber, you're the one who's going to die!
Kuromo - Hisaki, that guy, Kosei, he has a nice amount of chakra, I think he has a big chance of beating that old guy.
Kureiji (Thinking) - I can't win this fight, my best chance is to flee and capture someone else...
Kureiji - I've got something more important to do, consider yourself very lucky!
The Old man suddenly disappears.
Kuromo - Get us out of here!
Kosei - Yeah, sure.
Hisaki - Who was that guy?
Kosei - Akimichi Kureiji, he ran away from Konohagakure months ago, going out to streets and killing a bunch of villagers. It's very disappointing, when someone from such a ranked family, the Akimichis, suddenly goes mad and tarniches his family reputation. He was a nice guy, but one day he went for a walk in the woods, and went missing for a day. After that he returned home, but he was never the same.
Kuromo - What do you think that happened?
Kosei - Well it's not the first time that something like this happens, I believe there is someone behind it all, someone that has the ability to control people. I would say it would be a rinnegan user, but there are at least two facts that eliminate that possibility. The first one is that rinnegan users have been dead for around 200 years, being the last ones Uchiha Madara and Uchiha Obito. The second fact is that when people are being under the control of the mighty rinnegan, their eyes become rinnegans too. It could also be something new that no one knows about...
Another secret message huh, well done, how 'bout you let me know what you think of this chapter xD
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Note: I decided to make this chapter's structure a little different from the first one. It's also a bit smaller.
Naruto: New Generation! Chapter 2
Someone pulling the strings...
Kuromo - When I get out of this!!!...
Hisaki - Kuromo, close your eyes, I'm going to use one of my genjutsu techiniques...
Kuromo tightly closes his eyes, expecting it all to be over when he opens them.
Hisaki activates her two tomoes sharingan.
Hisaki - Jūyōsei Kone no Jutsu!
Jūyōsei Kone no Jutsu, an illusion that convinces the target's mind that they are getting heavier and heavier, as if gravity is increasing only on them. They become slower, weaker, and are forced to use more chakra for taijutsu techniques.
Old Man - Ahh, what... what's going on?! Why is it becoming hard to move?! WHY?!
Hisaki - Are you desperate? You were caught in my genjutsu, in 5 minutes you will be unable to move, and you will become very weak. If you release us I will let you off of my genjutsu!
Old Man - Ahhahahaha, ahahaha, aha... Don't be so confident, I'm joking, I wouldn't fall for such a cheap trick like that, I'm... I'm the greatest shinobi alive! Ahaha! Now hold still, it will all be over in a minute, eheh.
Hisaki - I failed... Kuromo, I... Love... You!
Hisaki vanishes in tears, while the old man is approaching with his scalpel.
Kuromo - Stop, Stop!! Let her live, kill me first!
Old Man - I'm afraid I can't do that kid, but I can kill you first, ahahahahaha!
All of a sudden, a big explosion sound is heard, and a mist appears in the room, Kuromo uses his Byakugan and senses someone in the middle of the mist.
Old Man - Did someone follow you? Show yourself!
??? - You've done enough don't you think? Creepy wrinkled old guys like you should be resting at home!
Old Man - Ahaha, What did you call me?
The mist vanishes, and the enemies stare at eachother, they get in a fighting stance...
??? - I've been following you for quite a while, you're wanted for killing multiple people, Akimichi Kureiji!
Kureiji - So you're a bounty hunter huh? Such an insignificant insect like you wouldn't be able to capture me!
??? - Well at least give me a chance!
Kureiji - Aha very funny, what's your name?
??? - Kosei, remember it when you die, the name of the one who killed you.
Kureiji - You couldn't be dumber, you're the one who's going to die!
Kuromo - Hisaki, that guy, Kosei, he has a nice amount of chakra, I think he has a big chance of beating that old guy.
Kureiji (Thinking) - I can't win this fight, my best chance is to flee and capture someone else...
Kureiji - I've got something more important to do, consider yourself very lucky!
The Old man suddenly disappears.
Kuromo - Get us out of here!
Kosei - Yeah, sure.
Hisaki - Who was that guy?
Kosei - Akimichi Kureiji, he ran away from Konohagakure months ago, going out to streets and killing a bunch of villagers. It's very disappointing, when someone from such a ranked family, the Akimichis, suddenly goes mad and tarniches his family reputation. He was a nice guy, but one day he went for a walk in the woods, and went missing for a day. After that he returned home, but he was never the same.
Kuromo - What do you think that happened?
Kosei - Well it's not the first time that something like this happens, I believe there is someone behind it all, someone that has the ability to control people. I would say it would be a rinnegan user, but there are at least two facts that eliminate that possibility. The first one is that rinnegan users have been dead for around 200 years, being the last ones Uchiha Madara and Uchiha Obito. The second fact is that when people are being under the control of the mighty rinnegan, their eyes become rinnegans too. It could also be something new that no one knows about...
Another secret message huh, well done, how 'bout you let me know what you think of this chapter xD
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