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Obito(keep smilling): I am glad I got in time. You used your time well before so do it again.
[Close up panel on Obito's stomach as his stomach crumbles spread around crumbling effect]
Obito: I hope you will live, my friend.
[Sasuke's yin Mark placed on Obito's left shoulder and Naruto's yang mark on other shoulder]
Obito(shocked): ?!
Naruto(determined): You will not die either !
Sasuke(serious): You can die but not until we get rid of Kaguya...
Black Zetsu: Mother, attack them before they complete bringing him back to life !
Obito(smiles): I am relieved that you want me to stay, but I can leave the world in your hands.
[Yin and yang marks glow fade away on Obito's shoulder as crumbling spread again]
Kaguya: ... (freezes her hands stopping bones from shooting)
Obito(turns to Naruto): Naruto, Thank you for bringing my real self back from bottom of darkness.
Naruto(sad): Obito...
[Sakura forces herself to stand up as she walks in Obito's direction]
Obito(dying): Sakura you proved yourself to me. Watch over them like Rin has done to us.
BZ(enraged): Why can't you finally ****ing die Obito ?!
Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura/Kakashi(angry look): !
Obito: I didn't forget about you. It seems I won't be the only one leaving...
Kaguya(suspicious): ....*Child no it is trap !*
Obito: Right now ! (focus last chakra in left MS eye)
Kaguya(schocked): ?! (Sidestep in flash then watches as spiral pattern form and envelopes around BZ pulling him in as it spins in second later)
BZ(serious): No !
[BZ completly drawn inside hole as spiral pattern decrease fading away in thin air]
[Close up Obito's face crumbling reaching his eyes]
[MS pattern is shown crumbling away along with whole eyes]
[Silence last for moment as to respect honorable death of Obito Uchiha]
Kaguya: My child ! (looks around herself)
Naruto(shouts guilty): No ! Obito comes back. I should save you ... Why didn't it work ?!
Sasuke(shows a bit of sadness): I may not like him but I admit he died as true hero just like Itachi.
Sakura(wipes out tears): Damn you Obito, You make me cry again...*I promise to watch over them*
Kakashi(calm): You may hold power of God, Naruto and Sasuke, but you can not force anyone to live
[Kaguya is shown locking her eyes filled with rage at Naruto and Sasuke]
Kakashi(strongly): You have to respect Obito's decision. Just never forget him and...
Kakashi:She may got distracted so you were released from gravity... watch out she is comming !
[Kaguya closes distance flying at imensse speed aproaching them]
Naruto: *Shit* Sasuke ! (order goudama to create shield)
[Naruto and Sasuke jump in front of Kakashi and Sakura as Kaguya is few inches from them]
Kaguya: Die ! (thrust sticked out ash bones from her hands in Perfect God Sussano)
[Kaguya pushes through as Perfect God Sussano envelopes everyone with goudama sphere closing them in]
Naruto(smiles): You won't get us, witch !
[Kaguya pierces fully through Perfect Sussano as she thrust her hands in goudama sphere as Sussano recover]
Naruto: Shit, I can feel her few inches from us. We have to do something !
Sasuke: Let's try out marks on our hands then
Sasuke: *Impressive, his mind has grown over time. He improved* Hmpf, as you would read my mind
[Kaguya begin to strive hole inside Goudama sphere as she thrust harder and harder in rage ]
Kaguya(serious): *I also use nature energy, it won't stop me* This time I make sure you die !
[Close up view on Naruto and Sasuke's marks putting together as they glow ]
Kakashi/Sakura: What is happening ?!
Kaguya: ?! *That chakra I feel, Hagoromo ?!*
[As schockwave spreads Kaguya crashes in ice block hard behind her]
Sakura: *Wow, what a amazing power...* (walks out first with Kakashi next to her)
Kakashi: *They are realy something else* (Kakashi walks next to Sakura)
[Light glow slowly fades away as Sakura and Kakashi turn their head to it]
Naruto: Yosh, I can feel more complete now (tiny yin mark on Naruto's other hand)
[Sasuke and Sasuke emerges out of fading away glow as dust floats around]
Kakashi(widden eyes): That look ?!
Sakura(puzzled): Can they change even more ?!
[Naruto wears Sage robes on him with his eyes having three tomoes]
[Sasuke wears Sage robes as well with goudama behind him]
Sasuke: Idiot, we just shared a bit of our power to each other.
[Suddenly imense explosion occurs from ice block as chunks of ice fly at them]
Naruto: ?! *I can see movement of ice chunks !* (dodges one of them)
Sasuke: ?! *I can sense attack comming !* (dodges other one)
[Naruto and Sasuke dodges all of them ince chunks as they stop looking at each other with respect]
Naruto/Sasuke: *You have impressive power Naruto/Sasuke*
Kaguya(mad):
[Fully body of Kaguya emerges as she land on ground glaring at Naruto and Sasuke]
Kaguya: ?! *I can feel and see change in them* (spot goudama behind Sasuke)
Kaguya: *How can he have goudama* (spot three tomoes in Naruto's eyes)
[Naruto and Sasuke tense up their bodies as they lock their eyes with kaguya's eyes]
Naruto/Sasuke: *What is she up to ?*
[Naruto and Sasuke smirk towards each other for second while easy their muscles]
Naruto: We completed our power !
Sasuke: We will get you this time, Kaguya !
Kaguya: I will teach you how to treat goddes boys !
Hagoromo: Get ready, everyone ! (extends both hand in Hokage direction)
[Close up view on each Hokage charging chakra]
[Hashirama and Minato enter each other respective Sage mode]
Hagoromo: ?!(notices marking on Hashirama/Minato's faces) so you can use nature energy
Hiruzen: Great Sage, What do you know about nature energy ? What did you mean ?
Hagoromo: Both, me and my brother Hamura mastered use of nature energy to degree that we could mold out own chakra with added nature energy to it creating new chakra.
Minato: Wow, Impressive but afterall you are The Sage of six paths. (focused in SM)
Hiruzen(schocked): I didn't know Minato-kun that you have learnt Senjutsu
Hashirama: It seems we were unaware of many things(focused in SM)
Hagoromo: Don't blame yourself. Lately I myself have found out about creature existence which changed my writtings on stone I wanted Indra to read and follow.
Tobirama: Who do you mean ?!
Hashirama: Don't blame yourself, Lord Hagoromo. If you didn't know so it is ok. Besides Madara wasn't such bad it was fun while it lasted (cheering)
Tobirama(face palm): At least you could get serious this time, brother
[Hashirama laughs as Minato smiles admiting Hashirama is right. Hiruzen and Tobirama stay quiet]
Hagoromo(smiles): You are ineed Ashura's former reincarnate. Hashirama. Anyway It seems animals I taught use of nature energy took my words to heart. How is Royal Slug Karyuu, White Snake Sage Ommaru and of course Great Toad Sage Gammaru ?!
Minato: Sorry I have never opportunity to thank Great Toad Sage Gammaru, right ?!
Hashirama: I was long time dead, but last time I saw Karyuu she was in good shape.
Hagoromo: I see. Enough of talk, Now I will absorb all of your chakra, get ready !
Side text: Naruto and Sasuke connected sharing a bit of each other powers with themselves, Can they stop Pissed Kaguya ?! What role will have Hagoromo in it ?!
Find out in next Naruto manga !
END
688 - The battle from Other World !
Thanks for reading !
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687 - The Power of Will
Just like that day !PAGE ONE
[Obito's body begin to crumble comming from ash bone piercing his stomach]Obito(keep smilling): I am glad I got in time. You used your time well before so do it again.
[Close up panel on Obito's stomach as his stomach crumbles spread around crumbling effect]
Obito: I hope you will live, my friend.
[Sasuke's yin Mark placed on Obito's left shoulder and Naruto's yang mark on other shoulder]
Obito(shocked): ?!
Naruto(determined): You will not die either !
Sasuke(serious): You can die but not until we get rid of Kaguya...
PAGE TWO
[Naruto and Sasuke put their hands away as both yin and yang marks glow on Obito's body immensly.]Black Zetsu: Mother, attack them before they complete bringing him back to life !
Obito(smiles): I am relieved that you want me to stay, but I can leave the world in your hands.
[Yin and yang marks glow fade away on Obito's shoulder as crumbling spread again]
Kaguya: ... (freezes her hands stopping bones from shooting)
Obito(turns to Naruto): Naruto, Thank you for bringing my real self back from bottom of darkness.
Naruto(sad): Obito...
PAGE THREE
Obito(turn to Sasuke): Sasuke, I am glad you came back from darkness. Never let darkness takeover your heart again...[Sakura forces herself to stand up as she walks in Obito's direction]
Obito(dying): Sakura you proved yourself to me. Watch over them like Rin has done to us.
BZ(enraged): Why can't you finally ****ing die Obito ?!
Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura/Kakashi(angry look): !
Obito: I didn't forget about you. It seems I won't be the only one leaving...
Kaguya(suspicious): ....*Child no it is trap !*
PAGE FOUR
BZ(enraged): Mother, let me get rid of him by myself ! (emerges from Kaguya's sleeve)Obito: Right now ! (focus last chakra in left MS eye)
Kaguya(schocked): ?! (Sidestep in flash then watches as spiral pattern form and envelopes around BZ pulling him in as it spins in second later)
BZ(serious): No !
[BZ completly drawn inside hole as spiral pattern decrease fading away in thin air]
[Close up Obito's face crumbling reaching his eyes]
[MS pattern is shown crumbling away along with whole eyes]
PAGE FIVE
Obito(happy): Farewell my friends (crumbles into nothing as wind blows ashes away)[Silence last for moment as to respect honorable death of Obito Uchiha]
Kaguya: My child ! (looks around herself)
Naruto(shouts guilty): No ! Obito comes back. I should save you ... Why didn't it work ?!
Sasuke(shows a bit of sadness): I may not like him but I admit he died as true hero just like Itachi.
Sakura(wipes out tears): Damn you Obito, You make me cry again...*I promise to watch over them*
PAGE SIX
[Kakashi is approaching Naruto and Sasuke after straighten up]Kakashi(calm): You may hold power of God, Naruto and Sasuke, but you can not force anyone to live
[Kaguya is shown locking her eyes filled with rage at Naruto and Sasuke]
Kakashi(strongly): You have to respect Obito's decision. Just never forget him and...
Kakashi:She may got distracted so you were released from gravity... watch out she is comming !
[Kaguya closes distance flying at imensse speed aproaching them]
Naruto: *Shit* Sasuke ! (order goudama to create shield)
PAGE SEVEN
Sasuke: I am already on it ! (burst massive amount of sussano flames as he put up arms in defence)[Naruto and Sasuke jump in front of Kakashi and Sakura as Kaguya is few inches from them]
Kaguya: Die ! (thrust sticked out ash bones from her hands in Perfect God Sussano)
[Kaguya pushes through as Perfect God Sussano envelopes everyone with goudama sphere closing them in]
Naruto(smiles): You won't get us, witch !
[Kaguya pierces fully through Perfect Sussano as she thrust her hands in goudama sphere as Sussano recover]
Naruto: Shit, I can feel her few inches from us. We have to do something !
Sasuke: Let's try out marks on our hands then
PAGE EIGHT
Naruto: Yeah, Why not grab each other and let's see what happen !Sasuke: *Impressive, his mind has grown over time. He improved* Hmpf, as you would read my mind
[Kaguya begin to strive hole inside Goudama sphere as she thrust harder and harder in rage ]
Kaguya(serious): *I also use nature energy, it won't stop me* This time I make sure you die !
[Close up view on Naruto and Sasuke's marks putting together as they glow ]
Kakashi/Sakura: What is happening ?!
Kaguya: ?! *That chakra I feel, Hagoromo ?!*
PAGE NINE
[Goudama sphere explodes blowing Kaguya backwards as whole area get flatten and blasted by blinding blast spreading around][As schockwave spreads Kaguya crashes in ice block hard behind her]
Sakura: *Wow, what a amazing power...* (walks out first with Kakashi next to her)
Kakashi: *They are realy something else* (Kakashi walks next to Sakura)
[Light glow slowly fades away as Sakura and Kakashi turn their head to it]
Naruto: Yosh, I can feel more complete now (tiny yin mark on Naruto's other hand)
PAGE TEN
Sasuke: Complete word fits it perfectly. (tiny yang mark on Sasuke's other hand)[Sasuke and Sasuke emerges out of fading away glow as dust floats around]
Kakashi(widden eyes): That look ?!
Sakura(puzzled): Can they change even more ?!
[Naruto wears Sage robes on him with his eyes having three tomoes]
[Sasuke wears Sage robes as well with goudama behind him]
PAGE ELEVEN
Naruto: I can feel your power flowing through my body, SasukeSasuke: Idiot, we just shared a bit of our power to each other.
[Suddenly imense explosion occurs from ice block as chunks of ice fly at them]
Naruto: ?! *I can see movement of ice chunks !* (dodges one of them)
Sasuke: ?! *I can sense attack comming !* (dodges other one)
[Naruto and Sasuke dodges all of them ince chunks as they stop looking at each other with respect]
Naruto/Sasuke: *You have impressive power Naruto/Sasuke*
PAGE TWELVE
[Upper body of Kaguya emerges out of shrouding dust cloud comming from explosion]Kaguya(mad):
[Fully body of Kaguya emerges as she land on ground glaring at Naruto and Sasuke]
Kaguya: ?! *I can feel and see change in them* (spot goudama behind Sasuke)
Kaguya: *How can he have goudama* (spot three tomoes in Naruto's eyes)
[Naruto and Sasuke tense up their bodies as they lock their eyes with kaguya's eyes]
Naruto/Sasuke: *What is she up to ?*
PAGE THIRTEEN
Kaguya(puzzled): Indra, why you have goudama ? Ashura, how can you have special eyes ? [Naruto and Sasuke smirk towards each other for second while easy their muscles]
Naruto: We completed our power !
Sasuke: We will get you this time, Kaguya !
Kaguya: I will teach you how to treat goddes boys !
PAGE FOURTEEN
[Scene shifts to Hagoromo talking with The Hokage]Hagoromo: Get ready, everyone ! (extends both hand in Hokage direction)
[Close up view on each Hokage charging chakra]
[Hashirama and Minato enter each other respective Sage mode]
Hagoromo: ?!(notices marking on Hashirama/Minato's faces) so you can use nature energy
Hiruzen: Great Sage, What do you know about nature energy ? What did you mean ?
PAGE FIFTEEN
Hagoromo: Don't loose focus. I will explain meanwhile.Hagoromo: Both, me and my brother Hamura mastered use of nature energy to degree that we could mold out own chakra with added nature energy to it creating new chakra.
Minato: Wow, Impressive but afterall you are The Sage of six paths. (focused in SM)
Hiruzen(schocked): I didn't know Minato-kun that you have learnt Senjutsu
PAGE SIXTEEN
Minato: Well I only barerly learned it,but I never actually used it in my lifeHashirama: It seems we were unaware of many things(focused in SM)
Hagoromo: Don't blame yourself. Lately I myself have found out about creature existence which changed my writtings on stone I wanted Indra to read and follow.
Tobirama: Who do you mean ?!
PAGE SEVENTEEN
Hagoromo(frown): Black Zetsu called one. It was him who helped Madara to use him as all Indra's descendants in the end. (sad) I would act faster if I knew...Hashirama: Don't blame yourself, Lord Hagoromo. If you didn't know so it is ok. Besides Madara wasn't such bad it was fun while it lasted (cheering)
Tobirama(face palm): At least you could get serious this time, brother
[Hashirama laughs as Minato smiles admiting Hashirama is right. Hiruzen and Tobirama stay quiet]
Hagoromo(smiles): You are ineed Ashura's former reincarnate. Hashirama. Anyway It seems animals I taught use of nature energy took my words to heart. How is Royal Slug Karyuu, White Snake Sage Ommaru and of course Great Toad Sage Gammaru ?!
Minato: Sorry I have never opportunity to thank Great Toad Sage Gammaru, right ?!
Hashirama: I was long time dead, but last time I saw Karyuu she was in good shape.
Hagoromo: I see. Enough of talk, Now I will absorb all of your chakra, get ready !
Side text: Naruto and Sasuke connected sharing a bit of each other powers with themselves, Can they stop Pissed Kaguya ?! What role will have Hagoromo in it ?!
Find out in next Naruto manga !
END
688 - The battle from Other World !
Thanks for reading !
Enjoy
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