Format of predictions:
[Zoom out on thick chakra filled ring schockwave created from Sasuke using Sussano to slash Kaguya.] [Schockwave spread around anihilating anything in it's way. Under shockwave affected area of lava is shown]
[Heavy wind blows instantly.Walls and ceiling of cave shake violently and crumble ]
[Schockwave fade leaving wind blows and lava splashing which slowly wear off]
Naruto(corcerned): *Did he get her ?!* (floating)
[Schocked Sasuke within Sussano struggles to move his Sussano's blade any further].
Sasuke: *Tell me this is bad joke* Impossible...
[Naruto and Naruto clones in company of Kakashi and Sakura are shown with widden eyes watching the scene]
Naruto/Kakashi/Sakura: How ?!
Kaguya(eyes Sasuke in front of her): You couldn't think it could work, Could you ?
[Shot on Kaguya's hand grabbing and stopping Sussano's blade which Sasuke use to keep overpower her]
Naruto(serious face): damn you witch ! (clenches his fists in anger)
Kaguya(eyes Naruto with serious face): Watch your toungue or our fan will end faster then I planed.
Sasuke: ?! *Oppening, now I wil try to push my Sussano's blade to slash her !*
[Shot on Sussabo's blade barerly moves further cutting external layer of skin on her palm]
Kaguya(without even taking look at Sasuke): ?! I thought you could be more wise Indra
[Kaguya's eyes meet with Sasuke's own with great determination]
Kaguya: *This look... that face*
[Flashback of Hagoromo with deadly expression pointing his left palm with crescent moon mark at her]
Kaguya(getting angry): *You never know when to give up Hagoromo, my son. To even try to power up these brats, hmpf* Time to end it !
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
[Kaguya extend her free right arm with opened palm aiming at Sussano
[Kaguya pushes away Sussano's blade with her busy left hand ]
[Kaguya takes Gentle fist battle stance as veins bulge around her eyes being sign of Byakugan]
Naruto: Sasuke, get away from her !(moves a bit forward)
Sasuke: *She couldn't break Sussa.?!*
[Kaguya stops striking Sussano with her hand barerly extended as 256 white dots on Sussano glow]
[Cracks spread around entire Sussano form as Sasuke watches with horrified face while Kaguya keep smilling]
[Sussano breaks apart in dissolving chakra pieces as Sasuke try to jump away from her]
Naruto: Sasuke ! (charges at full speed at Kaguya behind her at her back)
Sasuke: ?! *SO fast !*
[Kaguya's hair are shown streeched a lot while being enveloped around him keeping him in air]
Kaguya(calm down): Where did you think you were going ? (tighten her grip of her hairs)
[Kaguya is shown calm as Naruto is shown enclosing towards her from behind her]
Kaguya: Do you want really so badly to die too, Ashura ?
Naruto(schocked): ?! (shaking a bit)
[Sasuke keep looking on as Kaguya closes her eyes just for moment]
Sasuke: ?! *Now is my chance* Chidori Nagashi !
[Crescent Moon on Sasuke's left hand glow as black lightining strucks Kaguya going through her hair]
Kaguya(open her eyes instantly): ?!
Sasuke: Naruto, now !
Naruto: Yosh ! *That is Sasuke I known, just one moment of guard down and he can use it, great work !*
[Naruto shoot off one giant chakra arm hitting Kaguya]
[In two seconds before she get dipped into lava pool she points at Sasuke with her three fingers of right hand]
Sasuke: ?!
[Suddenly Sasuke feel immense pain going up around his left eye as he keep falling down in slow motion]
Sasuke: ARGH ! *Clutches his closed left eye in pain*
[Lava's surface get disrupted then splash a bit as it wears off signaling Kaguya just get dipped into it.]
[Sasuke land suddenly at Naruto's turth seeking ball flattened to platform shape.]
[Naruto is shown breathing with relief as Naruto's clone is shown flying away in tower's direction in background.]
[Naruto flies next to Sasuke who still keep his eye in pain]
[Surface of lava under them begin to boil violently]
Sasuke: ?!
Naruto: Just Hurry up and do it !
[Sasuke stick his opened palm of left arm with Naruto's right palm as their marks connect to each other]
Nauto/Sasuke: ?!
[Suddenly They feel burst of each other power going through their bodies. It feels as being struck by lightining]
[Crescent Moon on Sasuke's hand and Sun on Naruto's hand keep glowing as they pull their hands back]
[Suddenly pillars of the lava shoot off around them enclosing them in shape of prison]
Kaguya: My turn, prepare yourseleves Ashura, Indra!
[Heat of air increases terrible in just mere seconds as lava blows into air melting ground around]
[Lava fall down melting a part of ceiling as it comes in contact with it due to heat of lava.]
[Lava fully sink back into lava pool reforming it as surface of lava slowly calm down after some splashing]
[Sasuke within Perfect Sussano even bigger with Naruto within Ashura's avatar floating next to him.]
Naruto: Great timming, Sasuke !
Sasuke: nicely done, Naruto
[Kaguya emerges from lava pool flying up as she notices them within their chakra avatars about same size]
Kaguya: ?! How ? *Indra shouldn't be able to use Sussano after my attack... and Ashura should be limited a bit too... Could it be work of my son...*
Naruto(smiles): The Old Man Hagoromo, he made us even resistant to your power
Sasuke: hmpf, Naruto is right. It seems you are indeed the stronger one but Hagoromo was much more skilled then you, he was true genious and considering your expression he had to be close to you at some point in power
Kaguya(enraged): ?! *so they realized it already...*
Kaguya(calm down but still serious): I will tell you before I end your lives, you deserve it. It is true that Once Hagoromo was threat even to me.. it was when he became Ten tails host.
[Flashback of Kaguya recalling past in her mind]
Prime Hagoromo(sad): Mother, Hamura died in fight against Ten tails is there any way to bring him back
Kaguya(with obsessed look): There is no point even if there is way
Kaguya: Let me explain to you, my dear son(smirks). Your fight against Ten tails was mere test to check if you are worthy to help me in my goal.
Prime Hagoromo: You can not be serious, Mother is that so joke... Hamura was very strong and has crystal heart ?!(get interrupted)
Kaguya: this is why.(slowing down) This is why he had to be killed anyway at some point. Hamura put too much faith in filthy humans who destroy this beautifull planet which is my nursery.
Prime Hagoromo(enraged and sad): Mother..., Did you mean you wanted to kill Hamura yourself if he didn't die ?!
[Kaguya is shown landing on her ass as Hagoromo with anger in his eyes is shown with staff extended in her direction]
Hagoromo: I will stop you at any cost !
Kaguya: You the only my son, in who I trusted that you would follow me... If you insist on stopping me then I have to kill you (open her all eyes along with Third eye glowing violently)
Hagoromo: I have never believed that I will be the one to kill you mother, but I will save this world from your madness !
[Flashback breaks as kaguya stop recalling her flashback]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (take battle stance within their chakra avatars)
[Kaguya burst huge chakra which glow violently. Air condense and heat in air rise instantly]
Naruto: *Shit, It becomes to hard to breath... and my chakra avatar...*?!
Sasuke: *Shit, This heat so incredible that even my Sussano...* ?!
[Both Ashura's avatar and Sussano keep melting. Naruto and Sasuke pressure to maintain]
[Slowly huge amount expelled by Kaguya recedes back in her body as she eyes them]
[Suddenly Black flames violently waving appear on Sussano and Ashura's avatar]
Sasuke(smirks): This time you chose wrong (focus his left eye at flame on Sussano)
[Black Flame emitting incredible heat keep burning through Sussano.
[Sasuke struggle to control it as flames do not respond to his control/power]
[Naruto brings Truth seeking balls in black flames as they burn through his avatar]
Kaguya(eyes both of them): It is futile, Indra and Ashura.
[Sasuke creates his own black flames to overpower or push Kaguya's black flames]
[Truth seeking balls keep diminishing black flames upon contact]
[Getting weaker black flames burn almost completly inside Sussano and chakra avatar]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (cancel their chakra avatar and Sussano instantly)
Kaguya: Now (send incredible gravity push at them)
[Suddenly Naruto and Sasuke are hit by push force as they send flying into lava]
[They fly up to get away from lava as Kaguya appear between them. Hands ignited by incredible heat and steaming a lot]
Kaguya(smirks): You are done
[Kaguya punches and kicks them as their skin get burnt each time due to heat filled strikes]
Naruto/Sasuke: ARGH ?! (cover themselves with hands)
[Kaguya finishes deadly assault striking Naruto at chest with her nails piercing in flesh]
[Kaguya's POV Nails hitting chakra release point inside Naruto near heart]
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681 - Hagoromo and Hamura Ootsutsuki
Thrust and slashl!PAGE ONE
[Shot on the lava bursting and splashing while rising a bit into air ][Zoom out on thick chakra filled ring schockwave created from Sasuke using Sussano to slash Kaguya.] [Schockwave spread around anihilating anything in it's way. Under shockwave affected area of lava is shown]
[Heavy wind blows instantly.Walls and ceiling of cave shake violently and crumble ]
[Schockwave fade leaving wind blows and lava splashing which slowly wear off]
Naruto(corcerned): *Did he get her ?!* (floating)
[Schocked Sasuke within Sussano struggles to move his Sussano's blade any further].
Sasuke: *Tell me this is bad joke* Impossible...
[Naruto and Naruto clones in company of Kakashi and Sakura are shown with widden eyes watching the scene]
Naruto/Kakashi/Sakura: How ?!
PAGE TWO
[Zoom in Kaguya pretty face with evil smirk draws on her face]Kaguya(eyes Sasuke in front of her): You couldn't think it could work, Could you ?
[Shot on Kaguya's hand grabbing and stopping Sussano's blade which Sasuke use to keep overpower her]
Naruto(serious face): damn you witch ! (clenches his fists in anger)
Kaguya(eyes Naruto with serious face): Watch your toungue or our fan will end faster then I planed.
Sasuke: ?! *Oppening, now I wil try to push my Sussano's blade to slash her !*
[Shot on Sussabo's blade barerly moves further cutting external layer of skin on her palm]
Kaguya(without even taking look at Sasuke): ?! I thought you could be more wise Indra
[Kaguya's eyes meet with Sasuke's own with great determination]
PAGE THREE
[Kaguya is shown being moved to right side by Sussano's blade but it can not cut through her]Kaguya: *This look... that face*
[Flashback of Hagoromo with deadly expression pointing his left palm with crescent moon mark at her]
Kaguya(getting angry): *You never know when to give up Hagoromo, my son. To even try to power up these brats, hmpf* Time to end it !
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
[Kaguya extend her free right arm with opened palm aiming at Sussano
[Kaguya pushes away Sussano's blade with her busy left hand ]
[Kaguya takes Gentle fist battle stance as veins bulge around her eyes being sign of Byakugan]
Naruto: Sasuke, get away from her !(moves a bit forward)
Sasuke: *She couldn't break Sussa.?!*
PAGE FOUR
[Kaguya strikes Sussano many times over and over as in some loop with only her stances changing][Kaguya stops striking Sussano with her hand barerly extended as 256 white dots on Sussano glow]
[Cracks spread around entire Sussano form as Sasuke watches with horrified face while Kaguya keep smilling]
[Sussano breaks apart in dissolving chakra pieces as Sasuke try to jump away from her]
Naruto: Sasuke ! (charges at full speed at Kaguya behind her at her back)
Sasuke: ?! *SO fast !*
[Kaguya's hair are shown streeched a lot while being enveloped around him keeping him in air]
Kaguya(calm down): Where did you think you were going ? (tighten her grip of her hairs)
[Kaguya is shown calm as Naruto is shown enclosing towards her from behind her]
Kaguya: Do you want really so badly to die too, Ashura ?
PAGE FIVE
[Naruto stops suddenly as he freezes in air]Naruto(schocked): ?! (shaking a bit)
[Sasuke keep looking on as Kaguya closes her eyes just for moment]
Sasuke: ?! *Now is my chance* Chidori Nagashi !
[Crescent Moon on Sasuke's left hand glow as black lightining strucks Kaguya going through her hair]
Kaguya(open her eyes instantly): ?!
Sasuke: Naruto, now !
Naruto: Yosh ! *That is Sasuke I known, just one moment of guard down and he can use it, great work !*
[Naruto shoot off one giant chakra arm hitting Kaguya]
PAGE SIX
[Before Kaguya get smashed by Chakra arm and pushed in lava Kaguya widden her third eye freezing Naruto][In two seconds before she get dipped into lava pool she points at Sasuke with her three fingers of right hand]
Sasuke: ?!
[Suddenly Sasuke feel immense pain going up around his left eye as he keep falling down in slow motion]
Sasuke: ARGH ! *Clutches his closed left eye in pain*
[Lava's surface get disrupted then splash a bit as it wears off signaling Kaguya just get dipped into it.]
[Sasuke land suddenly at Naruto's turth seeking ball flattened to platform shape.]
[Naruto is shown breathing with relief as Naruto's clone is shown flying away in tower's direction in background.]
[Naruto flies next to Sasuke who still keep his eye in pain]
PAGE SEVEN
Naruto: ?![Surface of lava under them begin to boil violently]
Sasuke: ?!
Naruto: Just Hurry up and do it !
[Sasuke stick his opened palm of left arm with Naruto's right palm as their marks connect to each other]
Nauto/Sasuke: ?!
[Suddenly They feel burst of each other power going through their bodies. It feels as being struck by lightining]
[Crescent Moon on Sasuke's hand and Sun on Naruto's hand keep glowing as they pull their hands back]
[Suddenly pillars of the lava shoot off around them enclosing them in shape of prison]
Kaguya: My turn, prepare yourseleves Ashura, Indra!
PAGE EIGHT
[Suddenly Intensive stream of lava erupts from lava pool filling all space around earlier formed pillars of lava][Heat of air increases terrible in just mere seconds as lava blows into air melting ground around]
[Lava fall down melting a part of ceiling as it comes in contact with it due to heat of lava.]
[Lava fully sink back into lava pool reforming it as surface of lava slowly calm down after some splashing]
[Sasuke within Perfect Sussano even bigger with Naruto within Ashura's avatar floating next to him.]
Naruto: Great timming, Sasuke !
Sasuke: nicely done, Naruto
[Kaguya emerges from lava pool flying up as she notices them within their chakra avatars about same size]
Kaguya: ?! How ? *Indra shouldn't be able to use Sussano after my attack... and Ashura should be limited a bit too... Could it be work of my son...*
PAGE NINE
[Armor of Perfect Sussano and Armor of Ashura's avatar melt a bit as steam still come from some parts]Naruto(smiles): The Old Man Hagoromo, he made us even resistant to your power
Sasuke: hmpf, Naruto is right. It seems you are indeed the stronger one but Hagoromo was much more skilled then you, he was true genious and considering your expression he had to be close to you at some point in power
Kaguya(enraged): ?! *so they realized it already...*
Kaguya(calm down but still serious): I will tell you before I end your lives, you deserve it. It is true that Once Hagoromo was threat even to me.. it was when he became Ten tails host.
[Flashback of Kaguya recalling past in her mind]
Prime Hagoromo(sad): Mother, Hamura died in fight against Ten tails is there any way to bring him back
Kaguya(with obsessed look): There is no point even if there is way
PAGE TEN
Prime Hagoromo(schocked): Why do you think like that ? If you helped us then Hamura would be along with us !Kaguya: Let me explain to you, my dear son(smirks). Your fight against Ten tails was mere test to check if you are worthy to help me in my goal.
Prime Hagoromo: You can not be serious, Mother is that so joke... Hamura was very strong and has crystal heart ?!(get interrupted)
Kaguya: this is why.(slowing down) This is why he had to be killed anyway at some point. Hamura put too much faith in filthy humans who destroy this beautifull planet which is my nursery.
Prime Hagoromo(enraged and sad): Mother..., Did you mean you wanted to kill Hamura yourself if he didn't die ?!
PAGE ELEVEN
Kaguya: I wouldn't have any other choice anyway. Besides do not worry, Hagi. His chakra would be absorbed by me as everyone of this planet so there would be no waste ?!(get hit)[Kaguya is shown landing on her ass as Hagoromo with anger in his eyes is shown with staff extended in her direction]
Hagoromo: I will stop you at any cost !
Kaguya: You the only my son, in who I trusted that you would follow me... If you insist on stopping me then I have to kill you (open her all eyes along with Third eye glowing violently)
Hagoromo: I have never believed that I will be the one to kill you mother, but I will save this world from your madness !
[Flashback breaks as kaguya stop recalling her flashback]
PAGE TWELVE
Kaguya(getting mad): You won't stop me this time, Hagoromo !Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (take battle stance within their chakra avatars)
[Kaguya burst huge chakra which glow violently. Air condense and heat in air rise instantly]
Naruto: *Shit, It becomes to hard to breath... and my chakra avatar...*?!
Sasuke: *Shit, This heat so incredible that even my Sussano...* ?!
[Both Ashura's avatar and Sussano keep melting. Naruto and Sasuke pressure to maintain]
[Slowly huge amount expelled by Kaguya recedes back in her body as she eyes them]
PAGE THIRTEEN
Kaguya(widden her third eye): Ashura, Indra prepare for your end.[Suddenly Black flames violently waving appear on Sussano and Ashura's avatar]
Sasuke(smirks): This time you chose wrong (focus his left eye at flame on Sussano)
[Black Flame emitting incredible heat keep burning through Sussano.
[Sasuke struggle to control it as flames do not respond to his control/power]
[Naruto brings Truth seeking balls in black flames as they burn through his avatar]
Kaguya(eyes both of them): It is futile, Indra and Ashura.
[Sasuke creates his own black flames to overpower or push Kaguya's black flames]
PAGE FOURTEEN
Kaguya(shake her head): It won't work. My black flames are original flames summoned from hell itself while your is just mere replica of original.[Truth seeking balls keep diminishing black flames upon contact]
[Getting weaker black flames burn almost completly inside Sussano and chakra avatar]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?! (cancel their chakra avatar and Sussano instantly)
Kaguya: Now (send incredible gravity push at them)
[Suddenly Naruto and Sasuke are hit by push force as they send flying into lava]
PAGE FIFTEEN
[Naruto freeze himself upon contact with lava same with Sasuke landing on Goudama][They fly up to get away from lava as Kaguya appear between them. Hands ignited by incredible heat and steaming a lot]
Kaguya(smirks): You are done
[Kaguya punches and kicks them as their skin get burnt each time due to heat filled strikes]
Naruto/Sasuke: ARGH ?! (cover themselves with hands)
[Kaguya finishes deadly assault striking Naruto at chest with her nails piercing in flesh]
[Kaguya's POV Nails hitting chakra release point inside Naruto near heart]
PAGE SIXTEEN
Naruto: ARGH (coughs blood)
Sasuke: Naruto ! (widden his Nine tomoe Rinnegan eye) (extends hand in Kaguya direction)
[Kaguya almost strikes Naruto's right arm but suddenly she get hit by powerfull push force]
Sasuke: Shinra Tensei !
[Kaguya get send flying fast as she stops upon contact with lava]
[Naruto begin to fall down limbly as he closes his eyes slowly]
Kaguya: I thought I taught you to wait for your turn , Indra... Now you will pay dearly
Sasuke: *I have to shift both of us fast to somewhere else !* hold on Naruto !
[Sasuke catches Naruto with Sussano hand then spot Kaguya almost in front of him]
Sasuke: *I won't do it in time ?!*
[Kaguya thrust her hand with sharp nails into Sasuke chest as he widden his eyes]
[Sasuke get pierced a on his left arm while Naruto get pierced on his right arm protecting Sasuke]
[Just before Kaguya would finish them Naruto and Sasuke suddenly disappear]
[Suddenly Naruto and Sasuke appear on ground lying struggling to move. Their hands with marks connected as glow from Sasuke's let eye goes away]
Kakashi: Naruto/Sasuke ?!
Sakura: Sasuke-kun, Naruto. Hold on I will heal you
Kaguya: I don't think so (emerges in front of them)
[ Kakashi and Sakura sweat badly as they take few steps back]
Kaguya: Ashura/ Indra, I will let you live if you join me. Your friends too
Naruto/Sasuke: (in pain but slowly loosing hope) ... *Could it work ?*
Kaguya: It is the end
??????: I never let it happen, Mother
[Mysterious man land in front of Sasuke and Naruto. The man who wears a light, full-length haori with a high collar and dark pants. He has his sword in its sheath strapped to his left hip and strange looking staff in other hand]
Side text: Finally mysterious man make appearance ? Having connection with Kaguya and yet vow to stop her... who is he and could he succed ?![/B]
END
682 - Hamura Ootsutsuki
Naruto: ARGH (coughs blood)
Sasuke: Naruto ! (widden his Nine tomoe Rinnegan eye) (extends hand in Kaguya direction)
[Kaguya almost strikes Naruto's right arm but suddenly she get hit by powerfull push force]
Sasuke: Shinra Tensei !
[Kaguya get send flying fast as she stops upon contact with lava]
[Naruto begin to fall down limbly as he closes his eyes slowly]
Kaguya: I thought I taught you to wait for your turn , Indra... Now you will pay dearly
PAGE SEVENTEEN
[Kaguya flies fast at falling down Naruto and Sasuke]Sasuke: *I have to shift both of us fast to somewhere else !* hold on Naruto !
[Sasuke catches Naruto with Sussano hand then spot Kaguya almost in front of him]
Sasuke: *I won't do it in time ?!*
[Kaguya thrust her hand with sharp nails into Sasuke chest as he widden his eyes]
[Sasuke get pierced a on his left arm while Naruto get pierced on his right arm protecting Sasuke]
[Just before Kaguya would finish them Naruto and Sasuke suddenly disappear]
PAGE EIGHTTEEN
[Scene shifts to Kakashi and Sakura shocked as Naruto's clone burst into smoke][Suddenly Naruto and Sasuke appear on ground lying struggling to move. Their hands with marks connected as glow from Sasuke's let eye goes away]
Kakashi: Naruto/Sasuke ?!
Sakura: Sasuke-kun, Naruto. Hold on I will heal you
Kaguya: I don't think so (emerges in front of them)
[ Kakashi and Sakura sweat badly as they take few steps back]
Kaguya: Ashura/ Indra, I will let you live if you join me. Your friends too
Naruto/Sasuke: (in pain but slowly loosing hope) ... *Could it work ?*
Kaguya: It is the end
??????: I never let it happen, Mother
[Mysterious man land in front of Sasuke and Naruto. The man who wears a light, full-length haori with a high collar and dark pants. He has his sword in its sheath strapped to his left hip and strange looking staff in other hand]
Side text: Finally mysterious man make appearance ? Having connection with Kaguya and yet vow to stop her... who is he and could he succed ?![/B]
END
682 - Hamura Ootsutsuki
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