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Madara: Gwooooooaaaah !
[Madara's veins blacken as Black Zetsu's essence flows inside of him. Blackness spread around Madara's body].
Madara(with clenched left eye as move pupil To Black Zetsu): *Damn you* Why, Zetsu ?
[Black Zetsu is shown behind badly struggling Madara]
Black Zetsu: You earned my respect Madara but it was actually Kaguya-sama order to get rid of you
[Madara is shown getting angrier by each second passed]
Madara: Since when ?
[Madara's struggles to overcome pain while his body blacken out]
Black Zetsu(widden sharingan eye): Since the very begining of my creation
Madara(widden his eyes): ?!
Madara: Impossible. I was the one who created you. It was me who give birth to you... how Kaguya could be involved ?
[Naruto, Sasuke, Kakashi and Sakura stand on guards as they listen to conversation]
Naruto: We have to do something(Kakashi's grab his shoulder)
Kakashi: Do not be so hasty, it would be better to prepare ourselves to the progress of events
Naruto: Yeah, let's do it Sasuke
[Both Naruto and Sasuke rush towards Madara but suddenly they sense/notice something blocking their way]
Naruto(sense)/Sasuke(see): ?! *Madara's shadows !*
Black Zetsu(eyes both Naruto and Sasuke): Kaguya-sama will just not keep imobilizing Madara but also she can control Madara's shadows. There is no way for you to interrupt unavoidable.
Naruto/Sasuke(clench their fists): *Damn*
[Both Naruto and Sasuke charge at Madara's shadows ]
Madara: Arghh !, curse you Kaguya !
[The moon is shown with Nine tomoes Rinnegan reflecting on it]
[Kaguya's face reflects on the moon's surface]
Madara: ?!
[Zoom in Madara's eyes with Kaguya laughing in evil way reflecting on Madara's cornea]
[Zoom into Madara's insides]
[Madara appear at surface of void as he catches image of woman in front of him]
Madara: You !
[Zoom in Woman's face showing two white blank eyes with no pupils and third eye barerly opened]
Kaguya: You have done enough mortal. It is time for goddess to end it
Madara: I will never surrender to your's will !
Kaguya: You are just like that other man, Obito was it ?(smile gently) Anyway I wanted to thank you for trying to save humankind but noone mortal is flawless that why you need to leave this world also.
Kaguya(harden her pretty face): I will take overs your body. Consider it as reward from Goddess for your actions.
Madara: I refuse !
[Entire darkness filled void begin to fade away and Kaguya along with it]
[Back in real word]
Black Zetsu: You already talked with Kaguya-sama. Explanation is done so is our talk, now surrender to goddess's will !
[Madara's face feel sudden surge of pain]
[Madara's blood fall down on ground as Madara screams abruptly]
[ Horns and deadly sharp claws get sprouted. ]
Madara(in excruciating pain while his eyes shut down slowly): Is that my end ?! (vision get more blurry by each second passed)
??????: Wake up, mortal
Madara(snaps his eyes open): Where am I ?!
[This is the smilliar looking darkness filling void as before]
??????: It is dimenssion of Kami.
Madara(notices/catches view of well built up man): Who are you ?!
Madara: what do you want from me ?!
Jashin: Watch your tounge mortal. Anyway I am sure you know that Kaguya plan to enslave people to change their minds forever... However actually I don't believe it will work instead I suggest to kill everyone of this Planet.
Madara: You are God, so why bother with human ?
Madara(narrows his eyes): and what did you decide to do ?!
Jashin: Kaguya decided to bind human's will to our will so people will never rebel against us. However this is where our ways parted. Istead of enslaving people I decided to get rid of them completly as failed creation. Kaguya gave birth to our sons soon also, sadly neither of them followed my steps.
Madara: Ok, I get it... why did you choose me ?!
Madara: that harsh, but I am also human so what is the catch ?
Jashin: Actually, You become very powerfull among humans and still you posses so much hate in yourself. Let me merge my power with you and in return I will grant you immortality and let you surivive also letting you adivce me about my next creation. Your answer ?
Madara(glows his eyes): deal *I will never surrender to woman !* (shakes his hand with Jashin-sama)
[Back in real world]
[Madara's body begin to crack while suffering horribly]
Black Zetsu: Lady Kaguya will finally arise ?!
[Sudden blast of incredible powerfull burst from Madara's body]
[Cracks begin to close as all wounds are healed in rapid speed]
Madara: I will never surrender ! GARH !!!
Kaguya(in subconsciousness): ?! *How can mortal repel my will, will of goddess ?!*
Kaguya: Haaa !!! (fighting back)
[Back in real world]
Madara: HAAAA (emits dark/black chakra around flaring !)
Naruto: They are tough !
Sasuke: hmpf
[Kakashi and Sakura watch Screaming Madara's body with Black Zetsu hand being pulled by some invisible force]
Sakura: What is happening to him ?!
Kakashi: Black Zetsu mentioned Kaguya... it may be some powerfull woman....
[Naruto and Sasuke are shown having hard time against Madara's clones]
[Madara catches Black Zetsu arm piercing through him and squeeze with his strong grip]
Black Zetsu(clenches his eye): Argh !!! *It can not be, how ?!*
[Black Zetsu pull his hand back while feeling pain from crushed bones]
[Madara seems to regain his control as he elbows Black Zetsu send him flying]
[Madara let himself another very loud scream of pain and suffering]
[Madara's body looks like being on black fire with flames flaring dangerously around him]
[Both Rinnegan and Third eye glow violently]
[The last powerfull blast comes from Madara as Kaguya's half part of soul/spriti is out of Madara's body ]
[Kaguya get thrown away from Madara landing on ground with schocked expression]
Kaguya: Impossible ?!, How dare you
[Horns on Madara's head keep sticking out from both sides ]
[Long nails retreat back inside of Madara's fingers]
[Madara's body keep black/dark colour as white symbols spread around his body]
[Madara suddenly snaps his eyes open]
Madara: You failed Kaguya, Now I will finish my part
Kaguya: You already casted genjtusu on humankind, so what is left for you to do ?!
Madara/Jashin: destroy everything and everyone, until noone is alive on the planet !
Kaguya(widden her eyes): Impossible, Jashin !
Madara/Jashin(turns in Kaguya's way): Your time ends here. Extinction of humankind begins now.
Side text: Terrible thick shadow fall on the Naruto world... What hope is left for our main heroes and his friends ?
END
680 - The Real Nightmare approaches
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678 - The Pact with Kami
Extreme betrayal!PAGE ONE
[Zoom in Madara's painfull face with all three eyes widden from the pain and suffering]Madara: Gwooooooaaaah !
[Madara's veins blacken as Black Zetsu's essence flows inside of him. Blackness spread around Madara's body].
Madara(with clenched left eye as move pupil To Black Zetsu): *Damn you* Why, Zetsu ?
[Black Zetsu is shown behind badly struggling Madara]
Black Zetsu: You earned my respect Madara but it was actually Kaguya-sama order to get rid of you
[Madara is shown getting angrier by each second passed]
Madara: Since when ?
PAGE TWO
Black Zetsu: Well if you mean Kaguya's order then it was just after you casted IT on humankind. However if you mean since when I was serving Kaguya-sama then [Madara's struggles to overcome pain while his body blacken out]
Black Zetsu(widden sharingan eye): Since the very begining of my creation
Madara(widden his eyes): ?!
Madara: Impossible. I was the one who created you. It was me who give birth to you... how Kaguya could be involved ?
[Naruto, Sasuke, Kakashi and Sakura stand on guards as they listen to conversation]
Naruto: We have to do something(Kakashi's grab his shoulder)
Kakashi: Do not be so hasty, it would be better to prepare ourselves to the progress of events
PAGE THREE
Sasuke(narrows his eyes in Madara, BZ direction): Well this time, Naruto is right. Let's kill two birds with one stoneNaruto: Yeah, let's do it Sasuke
[Both Naruto and Sasuke rush towards Madara but suddenly they sense/notice something blocking their way]
Naruto(sense)/Sasuke(see): ?! *Madara's shadows !*
Black Zetsu(eyes both Naruto and Sasuke): Kaguya-sama will just not keep imobilizing Madara but also she can control Madara's shadows. There is no way for you to interrupt unavoidable.
Naruto/Sasuke(clench their fists): *Damn*
[Both Naruto and Sasuke charge at Madara's shadows ]
PAGE FOUR
Black Zetsu: Comming back to your question, Madara. The moment you connected yourself to Ten tails's empty husk was the moment you was under influence of Kaguya-sama. Over time her influence over you has grown. She forced you to expel her's will which sticked to White Zetsu, yes that is me.Madara: Arghh !, curse you Kaguya !
[The moon is shown with Nine tomoes Rinnegan reflecting on it]
[Kaguya's face reflects on the moon's surface]
Madara: ?!
[Zoom in Madara's eyes with Kaguya laughing in evil way reflecting on Madara's cornea]
[Zoom into Madara's insides]
PAGE FIVE
[Darkness filled void is shown with Pretty white-haired woman standing there][Madara appear at surface of void as he catches image of woman in front of him]
Madara: You !
[Zoom in Woman's face showing two white blank eyes with no pupils and third eye barerly opened]
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Madara: I will never surrender to your's will !
Kaguya: You are just like that other man, Obito was it ?(smile gently) Anyway I wanted to thank you for trying to save humankind but noone mortal is flawless that why you need to leave this world also.
Kaguya(harden her pretty face): I will take overs your body. Consider it as reward from Goddess for your actions.
PAGE SIX
Madara(shocked): ?!Madara: I refuse !
[Entire darkness filled void begin to fade away and Kaguya along with it]
[Back in real word]
Black Zetsu: You already talked with Kaguya-sama. Explanation is done so is our talk, now surrender to goddess's will !
[Madara's face feel sudden surge of pain]
[Madara's blood fall down on ground as Madara screams abruptly]
PAGE SEVEN
[ Scream turns into demonic, animalistic growling ][ Horns and deadly sharp claws get sprouted. ]
Madara(in excruciating pain while his eyes shut down slowly): Is that my end ?! (vision get more blurry by each second passed)
??????: Wake up, mortal
Madara(snaps his eyes open): Where am I ?!
[This is the smilliar looking darkness filling void as before]
??????: It is dimenssion of Kami.
Madara(notices/catches view of well built up man): Who are you ?!
PAGE EIGHT
Jashin(eyes flash in red color): I am Jashin, the God of this universe, who rules this world along with Lady Kaguya.
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Jashin: Watch your tounge mortal. Anyway I am sure you know that Kaguya plan to enslave people to change their minds forever... However actually I don't believe it will work instead I suggest to kill everyone of this Planet.
Madara: You are God, so why bother with human ?
PAGE NINE
Jashin: Well after both of us created Humans along with creation of Shinjuu which took a lot of our power then me and Kaguya were left far from full power. When creation of humankind turned out to be mistake as people couldn't even thanks us properly then Kaguya and I both decided to do something with it]Madara(narrows his eyes): and what did you decide to do ?!
Jashin: Kaguya decided to bind human's will to our will so people will never rebel against us. However this is where our ways parted. Istead of enslaving people I decided to get rid of them completly as failed creation. Kaguya gave birth to our sons soon also, sadly neither of them followed my steps.
Madara: Ok, I get it... why did you choose me ?!
PAGE TEN
Jashin: I chose people with the most hate among humankind and granted them with immortality and in return they would have to kill certain number of people each year. Madara: that harsh, but I am also human so what is the catch ?
Jashin: Actually, You become very powerfull among humans and still you posses so much hate in yourself. Let me merge my power with you and in return I will grant you immortality and let you surivive also letting you adivce me about my next creation. Your answer ?
Madara(glows his eyes): deal *I will never surrender to woman !* (shakes his hand with Jashin-sama)
[Back in real world]
PAGE ELEVEN
Madara: Arghh ![Madara's body begin to crack while suffering horribly]
Black Zetsu: Lady Kaguya will finally arise ?!
[Sudden blast of incredible powerfull burst from Madara's body]
[Cracks begin to close as all wounds are healed in rapid speed]
Madara: I will never surrender ! GARH !!!
Kaguya(in subconsciousness): ?! *How can mortal repel my will, will of goddess ?!*
Kaguya: Haaa !!! (fighting back)
[Back in real world]
Madara: HAAAA (emits dark/black chakra around flaring !)
PAGE TWELVE
[Naruto and Sasuke are shown fighting against Madara's shadows]Naruto: They are tough !
Sasuke: hmpf
[Kakashi and Sakura watch Screaming Madara's body with Black Zetsu hand being pulled by some invisible force]
Sakura: What is happening to him ?!
Kakashi: Black Zetsu mentioned Kaguya... it may be some powerfull woman....
PAGE THIRTEEN
[Shadows of Madara are shown getting stronger and faster by each second passed ][Naruto and Sasuke are shown having hard time against Madara's clones]
[Madara catches Black Zetsu arm piercing through him and squeeze with his strong grip]
Black Zetsu(clenches his eye): Argh !!! *It can not be, how ?!*
[Black Zetsu pull his hand back while feeling pain from crushed bones]
[Madara seems to regain his control as he elbows Black Zetsu send him flying]
PAGE FOURTEEN
[Black Zetsu crashes into Ground][Madara let himself another very loud scream of pain and suffering]
[Madara's body looks like being on black fire with flames flaring dangerously around him]
[Both Rinnegan and Third eye glow violently]
[The last powerfull blast comes from Madara as Kaguya's half part of soul/spriti is out of Madara's body ]
PAGE FIFTEEN
[Kaguya was shown emerging from Madara's body][Kaguya get thrown away from Madara landing on ground with schocked expression]
Kaguya: Impossible ?!, How dare you
[Horns on Madara's head keep sticking out from both sides ]
[Long nails retreat back inside of Madara's fingers]
[Madara's body keep black/dark colour as white symbols spread around his body]
PAGE SIXTEEN && SEVENTEEN
[The silver necklace with ring in center. Ring contains turned upside-down triangle][Madara suddenly snaps his eyes open]
Madara: You failed Kaguya, Now I will finish my part
Kaguya: You already casted genjtusu on humankind, so what is left for you to do ?!
Madara/Jashin: destroy everything and everyone, until noone is alive on the planet !
Kaguya(widden her eyes): Impossible, Jashin !
Madara/Jashin(turns in Kaguya's way): Your time ends here. Extinction of humankind begins now.
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Side text: Terrible thick shadow fall on the Naruto world... What hope is left for our main heroes and his friends ?
END
680 - The Real Nightmare approaches
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