Format of predictions:
Gai: *What a monster to stand after all these attacks. There is no choice... (pants), I have to afford(pants) to this technique*(pants)
[Gai is shown panting and sweating heavily as water is all over his face. In front of him Madara is standing with smile on his face as he is wiping blood around his mouth]
Rikudou Madara: You have danced very well(pauses) red blooded friend. Do you have anything else to entertain me or should I finish you
[The cloud of massive dust is moving behind both Gai and Madara.]
Kakashi(barerly see): I used the Kamui technique too many times. *I had no problem with my vision until I had a bit of Kurama chakra in myself. Since Naruto lost Kurama my vision get worse and worse, damn !*
[Gaara and next to him Lee shrouded in flaming aura are shown from Kakashi's point of view. ]
Kakashi: *Looking at them I can say that Gaara is at his limit while Lee will not last too long using gates*
Gaara(heavy breathing): Ha... he... ha..., This battle is beyond anything I could imagine....
Lee: ha... he.. ha (closes his right eye almost completly as he feel pain and tiredness getting to him) *It is hard to maintain use of even six gates but I am getting used to. However *
Lee(shocked and sad face): I can not even imagine what Gai-sensei is feeling now, what kind of pain he experiences... *You are great Gai-sensei, please finish Madara !*
[The scene shifts back to Madara and Gai staring at each other]
Gai: ?! *Did he say "finish you"... Could he really finish me then all this show was just a play.... No he must be bluffing anyway I have still one move left*
Gai: You are very impressive and formidable opponent, Madara (rasies his crossed arms in front of his chest). You deserves to see my final move (covers his head behind his crossed arms) *I bet everything on it, It has to work or nothing will work* Night Moth !
Rikudou Madara(smiles): Here he comes. ?! (heavy blows of wind appears from nowhere)
Rikudou Madara: Impressive, his power doubled or even tripled in seconds (raises one hand bracing himself from the powerfull shockwave) *Should I go all out as well ?!*
[Suddenly Gai disappears from the place he was before leaving just blood steam's trails where he was]
[Gai appears in front of Madara as he delivers powerfull punch to Madara's guts]
[Madara vomits the blood as the powerfull shockwave created by Gai's punch continue it's way behind Madara's back anihilating everything on it's way around few kilometres.]
[Gai spins around delivering powerfull kick to Madara's stomach sending him flying into rock.]
[Gai's spining kick creates powerfull schokwaves which following Gai's leg moves creates powerfull Tornado destroying surroudings.]
[The Rock bust completly as Gai is shown charging at Madara at incredible speed]
[Madara is shown blocking and dodging some of punches and kicks while some of them still land on his body, make him more and more messed and wounded with blood comming from the wounds.]
Rikudou Madara: *Damn ! This time I understimated him a bit !*
[Gai's skin shrouded in fire begin to peel off as more and more blood is coming out into air]
Rikudou Madara: ?! *What is this ?!*
[Gai's skin literally get ripped apart by blood blowing out of his body ]
Gai: The morning: larva !
Rikudou Madara: ?!
[Madara is shown pummeled by incomming many strikes from the larva shaped Gai]
Rikudou Madara: Argh !! (forms black shield in front of him)
[Crack after crack appear on the black shiled]
[Black shield breaks as Madara get pierced in many vital points by sharp end of the larva limbs]
[Madara's sage clothes are shown torned up in many places as Larva shaped Gai pierces through a lot of points on Madara's body]
Rikudou Madara: You are incredible, but I am afraid I have to end this -?!(get interrupted)
Gai: The afternoon: Cocoon
[The bloody aura solidifies as it begin to encloses Gai and Madara in sphere resembling cocoon.]
[Trails of the bloody flaming aura fade away in thin air as only solid red cocoon is shown around them.]
[The scene shifts to Naruto getting up in Kamui dimenssion shocking Sakura and Obito, who is no longer in posession of the black staff.]
Naruto(getting up): Obito, Sakura ?!
Sakura(tears form in her eyes): Naruto...,
Obito: You are finally back (smiles as he pulls Naruto to his feet)
Obito(ashamed a bit): Don't need to thank me, after all I only return a favour.
Naruto(turns to Sakura): Thank you Sakura-chan trying to save me and staying with me. (hugs her)
Sakura(wipes her tears from face with hand): You are my dear friend, Naruto (respond to his hug, hug him too )
Obito: I don't want to break your beautifull reunion but I am afraid you need to know what did happen when you was unconcious, Naruto. (serious looking)
Naruto: ?!
Naruto(Get serious): I know, Madara has became the Ten tails host and he is currently fighting against Bushy-brow sensei, who was forced to use 8th gate and sacrifice his life.
Obito: *so this is how did he know about me saving him and all what happened* ?! (feel pain)
[Obito falls on one knee while coughing blood]
Naruto/Sakura: ?!
Obito: I am sorry but transfering the chakra of Eight tails and one tails along with Yin Kurama took incredible toll on my body... I have barerly life force in myself *speaking of which I wonder why Black Zetsu is not trying anything... Anyway I have limited amount of time left...*
Naruto(sadly looking): I see...
[The scene shifts to Sasuke getting up with Kabuto, Orochimaru, Karin, Suigetsu and Juugo close to him.]
Sasuke: Kabuto ?!
[Kabuto pull Sasuke on his feet as he smiles at him]
[Karin throws her arms around Sasuke huging him tightly ]
Karin: Oh, you are alive ! I was so scared !
Sasuke(hugs her softly): Well I am fine, let me go now.
[Karin moves from Sasuke as she blushing hardly]
Suigetsu/Juugo: Welcome back, Sasuke.
Sasuke: Nice to see both of you again .
Orochimaru: How are you feeling ?!, What did happen when you were unconcious ? I can feel that you changed, Sasuke-kun
Sasuke:Thanks you for saving me, Kabuto. I am glad you finally found out yourself. Looks like Itachi was right about you.
Kabuto: I only returned a favour, Sasuke. (get serious) You should know about what did happen when you were unconcious, so -?!(get intrrupted)
Sasuke: There is no need, I know about everything already.
Sasuke: It is time to make Someone a visit. (get serious)
Karin: We will help you, you can not fight Madara again or you will die this time for real.
Sasuke: I will not die (in harsh voice), I have still purpouse to fulfill .
[The scene shifts back to Naruto in Kamui Dimenssion]
Sakura: Did you loose your mind Naruto, You can not go and fight him again, I don't want to loose you ! (worried)
Kabuto/Obito: ?!
Kabuto/Obito: Something changed about him. This odd feeling of new power emitting from them... what is this ?!
[Both Naruto's and Sasuke's bodies get enveloped by bright glow of in Sasuke's case purple light and in Naruto's case yellow's light ]
[Naruto and Sasuke both turns their faces slightly back to the their's company showing trails of new design. Naruto has black bolded whiskers, while his hair are more spiky. Part of The white coat with two tomoes on the collar resembling Ashura 's cloak. Sasuke's hair begin more spiky as well as the white coat with two tomoes on the collar resembling Indra's cloak.]
[The scene shifts back to The battlefield showing Kakashi, Gaara and Lee watching the Cocoon standing in distant.]
Kakashi: What is this technique ? *Only screams of Madara are cooming out of it.*
Gaara: Is it the end ?!
Rock Lee: No..., I have never seen this technique but I heard that it was supposed to be made of three stages. To even think Gai's sensei can use this holy technique makes me proud as never. The last stage probably will be....
[Suddenly black beam erupts from one side of the cocoon ]
[Beam dies down as entire half of the coccon iis filled with hole from where a lot of dust blows into air.]
[Rikudou Madara covered by blood and with Sage's clothes ripped completly from his upper body is shown flying backwards from the cocoon.]
[Dust calm down as it solowy fall down on ground as Madara stop his movement]
Rikudou Madara: He has surprassed all my expections *To bring me to that state, Time for pay back*
Rikudou Madara: ?!
[Red filled blank eyes open up in the cocoon placed few meters from Madara]
Gai: The evening: moth !
[Suddenly extreme bloody red streams come off from the cocoon spreading in all directions.]
[Remaining of cocoon crumbles completly as the wall of red light shoot in the sky with blury figure flying up]
Rikudou Madara(widden his Rinnegan): *All his bloody energy is focusing inside his hearth which is about be ripped apart as it beats incredible fast !* I can not let him hit me (activates his rapid instant healing/regeneration as steam begin to evaporate from entire of his body.)
[Suddenly powerfull massive surge of black energy comes from Rikudou Madara as the air tighten while black flares of chakra fill area around Madara creating black aura around Madara's body]
Rikudou Madara: Yes, that is ?!(get shocked)
[Black aura disappears completly around him as the steams stops comming from his body]
Rikudou Madara: ?!...*I can not focus my Ten tails power... the healing /regeneration is also not working...* Could it be , What have you done to me ?! (shouts looking in air where red wall of light shrink in size towards center fading away)
[The incredible bloody red human size moth is shown flying above everyone heads at sky]
Gai: I put special posion along with incredible heat inside your body when I pierced you. I cut your access to your power or rather Ten tails 's power along with other stolen powers by you. *I could not kill him from outside, so let's see if it work from inside, farewell my friends*
Rikudou Madara: *I can not move * SHIT !
[The Bloody Red moth like blur crushes into Madara piercing him through his chest.]
[Everything around them get anihilated as the ground turns to dark color.]
Rikudou Madara: ARGH!!!!!!!!! GAH !!!!!!
[Dust fall down around fading away]
[The Bloody red moth is shown piercing Madara with antennae stretching from moth's head]
[The Bloody red moth sink into Madara's stomach causing horrible pain on Madara's face]
[Inside Madara bloody red spikes are comming close to Madara's heart protected by tight black sphere]
[Red spikes clashes with Tigh black sphere slowly moving through it]
[Suddenly we are back to the real world as Madara opens up his Rinnegan eye ]
[Rikudou Madara is shown keeping the hole in chest while blood is comming out of it.]
[Red Bloody aura fade away uncovering burnt/ripped apart body with bones visible of falling remains of Gai ]
[The sun begin to rise in background. The dawn finally comes as the sunbeams are illuminating falling Gai.]
Rikudou Madara: You will pay for this (creates in other hand and sends TBB flying at remains of Gai )
Lee: *I have to burry his body!* NO !!!
Rikudou Madara: ?! *These two incredible source of chakra... what the are ?!*
[TBB almost connect with Maito Gai then blows up suddenly ]
[The curtain of the dust forms]
[Behind the curtain of dust(from Madara's point of view) two shrouded figures lands on the ground with one holding dying Gai. Two staffs hit the ground at the same time, The one figure on the left with staff ended with crescent moon shape and other figure on the right with staff ended with sun shape]
Side text: The heroes finally arrived, Can they stop Madara ?! [/B]
END
673 - Grand Finale of Shinobi World's Fate
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672 - Night ends and Day arises
Gai reveals last Ultimate technique !PAGE ONE
[First scene shows side view on Maito Gai supporting himself in standing position by keeping rock next to him. Flaming aura around Gai is weakening as it shrink in size]Gai: *What a monster to stand after all these attacks. There is no choice... (pants), I have to afford(pants) to this technique*(pants)
[Gai is shown panting and sweating heavily as water is all over his face. In front of him Madara is standing with smile on his face as he is wiping blood around his mouth]
Rikudou Madara: You have danced very well(pauses) red blooded friend. Do you have anything else to entertain me or should I finish you
[The cloud of massive dust is moving behind both Gai and Madara.]
PAGE TWO
[Kakashi is shown watching the entire battle as he is kneeling on one knee. Kakashi can barerly keep his Sharigan eye opened. The vast amount of dust is moving behind his back as well.]Kakashi(barerly see): I used the Kamui technique too many times. *I had no problem with my vision until I had a bit of Kurama chakra in myself. Since Naruto lost Kurama my vision get worse and worse, damn !*
[Gaara and next to him Lee shrouded in flaming aura are shown from Kakashi's point of view. ]
Kakashi: *Looking at them I can say that Gaara is at his limit while Lee will not last too long using gates*
Gaara(heavy breathing): Ha... he... ha..., This battle is beyond anything I could imagine....
Lee: ha... he.. ha (closes his right eye almost completly as he feel pain and tiredness getting to him) *It is hard to maintain use of even six gates but I am getting used to. However *
Lee(shocked and sad face): I can not even imagine what Gai-sensei is feeling now, what kind of pain he experiences... *You are great Gai-sensei, please finish Madara !*
PAGE THREE
Kakashi(moves his head back to watch where Gai and Madara are with his normal eye): looks like, you can only depend on yourself... my dear rival and friend *I am with you, You can get Madara just push further* [The scene shifts back to Madara and Gai staring at each other]
Gai: ?! *Did he say "finish you"... Could he really finish me then all this show was just a play.... No he must be bluffing anyway I have still one move left*
Gai: You are very impressive and formidable opponent, Madara (rasies his crossed arms in front of his chest). You deserves to see my final move (covers his head behind his crossed arms) *I bet everything on it, It has to work or nothing will work* Night Moth !
Rikudou Madara(smiles): Here he comes. ?! (heavy blows of wind appears from nowhere)
PAGE FOUR
[Suddenly the flaming aura shrouding Gai grows in size twice as the flames begin more and more intense. The ground shakes as crater forms under Gai ripping and melting the ground from under his feet. Powerfull schockwave are spreading around carrying incredible heat along]Rikudou Madara: Impressive, his power doubled or even tripled in seconds (raises one hand bracing himself from the powerfull shockwave) *Should I go all out as well ?!*
[Suddenly Gai disappears from the place he was before leaving just blood steam's trails where he was]
[Gai appears in front of Madara as he delivers powerfull punch to Madara's guts]
[Madara vomits the blood as the powerfull shockwave created by Gai's punch continue it's way behind Madara's back anihilating everything on it's way around few kilometres.]
PAGE FIVE
Rikudou Madara: so fast ?![Gai spins around delivering powerfull kick to Madara's stomach sending him flying into rock.]
[Gai's spining kick creates powerfull schokwaves which following Gai's leg moves creates powerfull Tornado destroying surroudings.]
[The Rock bust completly as Gai is shown charging at Madara at incredible speed]
[Madara is shown blocking and dodging some of punches and kicks while some of them still land on his body, make him more and more messed and wounded with blood comming from the wounds.]
Rikudou Madara: *Damn ! This time I understimated him a bit !*
[Gai's skin shrouded in fire begin to peel off as more and more blood is coming out into air]
Rikudou Madara: ?! *What is this ?!*
[Gai's skin literally get ripped apart by blood blowing out of his body ]
PAGE SIX
[The blood comming out takes on shape of many limbs as the blood encloses around Gai in shape of larva ]Gai: The morning: larva !
Rikudou Madara: ?!
[Madara is shown pummeled by incomming many strikes from the larva shaped Gai]
Rikudou Madara: Argh !! (forms black shield in front of him)
[Crack after crack appear on the black shiled]
[Black shield breaks as Madara get pierced in many vital points by sharp end of the larva limbs]
[Madara's sage clothes are shown torned up in many places as Larva shaped Gai pierces through a lot of points on Madara's body]
Rikudou Madara: You are incredible, but I am afraid I have to end this -?!(get interrupted)
PAGE SEVEN
[The smile forms on bloody red larva shaped Gai's mouth as the bloody flaming aura thicken around as it surround both Madara and larva shaped Gai. ]Gai: The afternoon: Cocoon
[The bloody aura solidifies as it begin to encloses Gai and Madara in sphere resembling cocoon.]
[Trails of the bloody flaming aura fade away in thin air as only solid red cocoon is shown around them.]
[The scene shifts to Naruto getting up in Kamui dimenssion shocking Sakura and Obito, who is no longer in posession of the black staff.]
Naruto(getting up): Obito, Sakura ?!
Sakura(tears form in her eyes): Naruto...,
Obito: You are finally back (smiles as he pulls Naruto to his feet)
PAGE EIGHT
Naruto: Thank you, Obito. I am glad that you finally opened your eyes to see the truth. Obito(ashamed a bit): Don't need to thank me, after all I only return a favour.
Naruto(turns to Sakura): Thank you Sakura-chan trying to save me and staying with me. (hugs her)
Sakura(wipes her tears from face with hand): You are my dear friend, Naruto (respond to his hug, hug him too )
Obito: I don't want to break your beautifull reunion but I am afraid you need to know what did happen when you was unconcious, Naruto. (serious looking)
Naruto: ?!
Naruto(Get serious): I know, Madara has became the Ten tails host and he is currently fighting against Bushy-brow sensei, who was forced to use 8th gate and sacrifice his life.
PAGE NINE
Naruto: I met the legendary Sage of six paths so I kow a lot of stuff (smirks)Obito: *so this is how did he know about me saving him and all what happened* ?! (feel pain)
[Obito falls on one knee while coughing blood]
Naruto/Sakura: ?!
Obito: I am sorry but transfering the chakra of Eight tails and one tails along with Yin Kurama took incredible toll on my body... I have barerly life force in myself *speaking of which I wonder why Black Zetsu is not trying anything... Anyway I have limited amount of time left...*
Naruto(sadly looking): I see...
[The scene shifts to Sasuke getting up with Kabuto, Orochimaru, Karin, Suigetsu and Juugo close to him.]
Sasuke: Kabuto ?!
PAGE TEN
Kabuto/Orochimaru/Kain/Suigetsu/Juugo: ?![Kabuto pull Sasuke on his feet as he smiles at him]
[Karin throws her arms around Sasuke huging him tightly ]
Karin: Oh, you are alive ! I was so scared !
Sasuke(hugs her softly): Well I am fine, let me go now.
[Karin moves from Sasuke as she blushing hardly]
Suigetsu/Juugo: Welcome back, Sasuke.
Sasuke: Nice to see both of you again .
Orochimaru: How are you feeling ?!, What did happen when you were unconcious ? I can feel that you changed, Sasuke-kun
PAGE ELEVEN
Sasuke: There is no need for you to know. (turns towards Kabuto)Sasuke:Thanks you for saving me, Kabuto. I am glad you finally found out yourself. Looks like Itachi was right about you.
Kabuto: I only returned a favour, Sasuke. (get serious) You should know about what did happen when you were unconcious, so -?!(get intrrupted)
Sasuke: There is no need, I know about everything already.
Sasuke: It is time to make Someone a visit. (get serious)
Karin: We will help you, you can not fight Madara again or you will die this time for real.
Sasuke: I will not die (in harsh voice), I have still purpouse to fulfill .
[The scene shifts back to Naruto in Kamui Dimenssion]
Sakura: Did you loose your mind Naruto, You can not go and fight him again, I don't want to loose you ! (worried)
PAGE TWELVE
[Cross panel shows both Naruto and Sasuke taking few steps forward with their back turned to the friends ]Kabuto/Obito: ?!
Kabuto/Obito: Something changed about him. This odd feeling of new power emitting from them... what is this ?!
[Both Naruto's and Sasuke's bodies get enveloped by bright glow of in Sasuke's case purple light and in Naruto's case yellow's light ]
[Naruto and Sasuke both turns their faces slightly back to the their's company showing trails of new design. Naruto has black bolded whiskers, while his hair are more spiky. Part of The white coat with two tomoes on the collar resembling Ashura 's cloak. Sasuke's hair begin more spiky as well as the white coat with two tomoes on the collar resembling Indra's cloak.]
PAGE THIRTEEN
Naruto/Sasuke: Time for payback, Madara ![The scene shifts back to The battlefield showing Kakashi, Gaara and Lee watching the Cocoon standing in distant.]
Kakashi: What is this technique ? *Only screams of Madara are cooming out of it.*
Gaara: Is it the end ?!
Rock Lee: No..., I have never seen this technique but I heard that it was supposed to be made of three stages. To even think Gai's sensei can use this holy technique makes me proud as never. The last stage probably will be....
[Suddenly black beam erupts from one side of the cocoon ]
[Beam dies down as entire half of the coccon iis filled with hole from where a lot of dust blows into air.]
[Rikudou Madara covered by blood and with Sage's clothes ripped completly from his upper body is shown flying backwards from the cocoon.]
PAGE FOURTEEN
Rikudou Madara: Argh ! *This Time It was very dangerous, I have to go all out and anihilate him completly !*[Dust calm down as it solowy fall down on ground as Madara stop his movement]
Rikudou Madara: He has surprassed all my expections *To bring me to that state, Time for pay back*
Rikudou Madara: ?!
[Red filled blank eyes open up in the cocoon placed few meters from Madara]
Gai: The evening: moth !
[Suddenly extreme bloody red streams come off from the cocoon spreading in all directions.]
[Remaining of cocoon crumbles completly as the wall of red light shoot in the sky with blury figure flying up]
Rikudou Madara(widden his Rinnegan): *All his bloody energy is focusing inside his hearth which is about be ripped apart as it beats incredible fast !* I can not let him hit me (activates his rapid instant healing/regeneration as steam begin to evaporate from entire of his body.)
PAGE FIFTEEN
Rikudou Madara(clench his hands and tense all muscles): I will tap into more of Ten tails's power [Suddenly powerfull massive surge of black energy comes from Rikudou Madara as the air tighten while black flares of chakra fill area around Madara creating black aura around Madara's body]
Rikudou Madara: Yes, that is ?!(get shocked)
[Black aura disappears completly around him as the steams stops comming from his body]
Rikudou Madara: ?!...*I can not focus my Ten tails power... the healing /regeneration is also not working...* Could it be , What have you done to me ?! (shouts looking in air where red wall of light shrink in size towards center fading away)
[The incredible bloody red human size moth is shown flying above everyone heads at sky]
Gai: I put special posion along with incredible heat inside your body when I pierced you. I cut your access to your power or rather Ten tails 's power along with other stolen powers by you. *I could not kill him from outside, so let's see if it work from inside, farewell my friends*
PAGE SIXTEEN
Gai: Let me show you , my final move NIGHT MOTH ! (screams)Rikudou Madara: *I can not move * SHIT !
[The Bloody Red moth like blur crushes into Madara piercing him through his chest.]
[Everything around them get anihilated as the ground turns to dark color.]
Rikudou Madara: ARGH!!!!!!!!! GAH !!!!!!
[Dust fall down around fading away]
[The Bloody red moth is shown piercing Madara with antennae stretching from moth's head]
[The Bloody red moth sink into Madara's stomach causing horrible pain on Madara's face]
[Inside Madara bloody red spikes are comming close to Madara's heart protected by tight black sphere]
[Red spikes clashes with Tigh black sphere slowly moving through it]
[Suddenly we are back to the real world as Madara opens up his Rinnegan eye ]
PAGE SEVENTEEN
Rikudou Madara: I won't let you ! (pull both antennae out of his body then kick Red Moth high in air)[Rikudou Madara is shown keeping the hole in chest while blood is comming out of it.]
[Red Bloody aura fade away uncovering burnt/ripped apart body with bones visible of falling remains of Gai ]
[The sun begin to rise in background. The dawn finally comes as the sunbeams are illuminating falling Gai.]
Rikudou Madara: You will pay for this (creates in other hand and sends TBB flying at remains of Gai )
Lee: *I have to burry his body!* NO !!!
Rikudou Madara: ?! *These two incredible source of chakra... what the are ?!*
[TBB almost connect with Maito Gai then blows up suddenly ]
[The curtain of the dust forms]
[Behind the curtain of dust(from Madara's point of view) two shrouded figures lands on the ground with one holding dying Gai. Two staffs hit the ground at the same time, The one figure on the left with staff ended with crescent moon shape and other figure on the right with staff ended with sun shape]
Side text: The heroes finally arrived, Can they stop Madara ?! [/B]
END
673 - Grand Finale of Shinobi World's Fate
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