Format of predictions:
Rikudou Madara: You failed me, Black Zetsu
[Black Zetsu is shown looking at Madara in corner of his eye]
BZ Obito: Not at all Master. (Keep smirk on his face)
Rikudou Madara(narrows his eye): explain now (demanding and dangerous voice)
BZ Obito: Well I have present for you and ?! (senses some danger incomming)
[Space disorting violently while spinning around Madara is shown]
Rikudou Madara: ?!
Kakashi: *You will pay* Kamui ! (dangerous tone)
[Black Zetsu rushes to Madara at fast speed]
BZ Obito: Master, I will stop it for y!-(get interrupted)
Rikudou Madara: There is no need for that zetsu
[Rikudou Madara is shown holding staff glowing as Space stop disorting and spinning slowly.]
Rikudou Madara: You have impressive occular power, brat. (smirks in evil way)
Rikudou Madara: but no Ninjutsu will work on me as long as I have Onmyoudon. (increasing his dangerous and menacing tone of voice )
[Minato is shown still facing the ground with his arms shaking from anger as he is turned back to Rikudou Madara and BZ Obito.]
Minato: Damn !.... *Impossible... in the end I failed my son... how could this happen*
[Gaara and Sakura pull their attention to Minato as he is gathering and rising his chakra in anger]
[Kakashi is shown watching his Sensei in bad mood as never before.]
Rikudou Madara: Now Zetsu what did you try to say ?
[BZ Obito still looking at Madara in corner of his Rinnegan eye]
BZ Obito: It took long but I finally took full control over Obito's body and also I captured Kyuubi !
Rikudou Madara(raises his brow in question): Kyuubi ? I already extracted Kyuubi from that boy (points in Naruto direction) so what are you blabbering about ?
BZ Obito: Well Obito used Kyuubi long time ago and then Fourth Hokage split it in two halves. One half was sealed in that boy Naruto and other in his father.
[Minato's body stop shaking as he turns to Kakashi]
Minato: Kakashi !, I am teleporting to Orochimaru to fix my arms right away. Fight them with all your might but not die as I will come back soon ! (serious glare)
[Kakashi is shown nodding with his head while keeping serious expression]
Kakashi: I will stall them but about your son...
Minato: I am sorry but there is nothing we can do anymore...(anger mixed with sadness over face) Hir -!(get interrupted)
[Minato is shown dragged inside strange white dimenssion as Black Kurama is standing in front of him.]
Black Kurama: Don't get me wrong Minato I am inside that damned black shit guy
Minato(return to sad mood ): I see...
Black Kurama: This is not time to be heartbroken Minato. There is last way possible to save your son but this is risky method and complex one.
Minato(shows surprise on his face): risky and complex one...
Black Kurama: Exactly, Now I will take my time and explain it to you. Be sure to not skip any steps !
Minato(narrows his eyes): bring it on !
[Mysterious person's legs are moving in his direction as cloud of smoke is blowing away slowly]
[Mysterious person entire figure from back is shown stopping right in front of Sasuke. Tobirama is shown looking at back of mysterious person]
Tobirama(serious trying to sound dangerous tone): Who are you and what do you plan to do to him ?
??????: You are in not position to give me orders Second Hokage. Besides we have never met so it would be pointless (mysterious person keep his back turned to Second Hokage)
[Shot on myserious person's lower face is shown]
??????: to find you in that state, Sasuke... Madara must be really off limits now. (put his arm on his face as to adjust something)
??????: I am responsible for this. *Well this time I will return a favour, Itachi*
[Mysterious person kneel next to Sasuke as his hands are enveloped with glow]
[Suddenly four pair of legs are shown landing in behind mysterious person kneeling next to Sasuke. ]
[Orochimaru, Karin, Juugo and Suigetsu are shown on ground.]
Karin(spot stranger): Get the hell out from Sasuke ! (rushes towards Sasuke as suddenly feel stopped as someone grab her arm)
Juugo: wait... Lord Orochimaru has strange face expression on his face.
Suigetsu: Is something wrong Lord Orochimaru ?!
Orochimaru: I am surprised that you are still alive (smirks draw on his face)
[Mysterious person turns slightly his head around as his hands keep glowing while placed above Sasuke's heart]
Orochimaru: Kabuto (smirks draws on his face in twisted way)
Kabuto: It can be same about you, Orochimaru. (strange expression on his face)
Shinobi: take this (throws many explosive Kunai around statue)
Shinobi 2,3,4,5,6: Argh ! ?! (surprised)
[Small version of buddha smash one of the fists at shinobi but get stopped by Adamantine staff extended blooking it]
Hiruzen: Do not loose your focus, guys ! (keep blocking buddha) ?!
[Hiruzen jumps away as other fists of small buddha keep smashing where he was]
Spiral Zetsu: It looks you are shitting already again (in singing but taking pleassure from their pain tone of voice)
Spiral Zetsu: Are you ready now or do you need my help to take shit again ?
Hiruzen: Now get ready and prepare formation !
Shinobi: yes !
[Five kages are looking with deep respect at Hiruzen convincing people to fight while gettin back on their feet]
Onooki: heh, Sarutobi will never cease to amaze me (smirks as he rises to his feet)
A: I have to admit it but I am about to join this fierce battle ! (activates his lightining shroud)
Mei: We should follow his example to keep our titles with respect (fire in eyes)
Tsunade: as expected after great Hokage*heh Sarutobi Sensei*, now we can stay behind ! (rises her arm with hand closed in fist)
Minato: I know it (smile draw on his face)
[Kakashi, Gaara and Sakura look at Minato confused and as he would grow other head]
Kakashi: Why do you smile now, Sensei (sweatdropping while panting)
Minato(awake for his happiness state): There is still hope to save Naruto but I don't have time to explain. Keep strong there I will come back as soon possible.
Minato: Flying Thunder God technique !
Rikudou Madara: They can not admit their loss even when it happens, so sad. (shake his head in disappointment as he watches Minato not present any more.)
BZ Obito: As you wish, Madara-sama.
Kakashi: Gaara, I need your help
Gaara: I am on it ! (throws his arms in front of him)
[BZ Obito is shown reaching with his right hand for Rinnegan in his left eyesocket]
[Suddenly sand wall block his way separating his face from his hand.]
BZ Obito: ?! (turns his sight to Gaara) *Cursed brat never know when to give in*
BZ Obito(looks in Madara's direction): *Where did he go ?!*
[Suddenly Gaara is sent flying into debriss as explosion goes off]
Kakashi, Sakura: ?! (spot Rikudou Madara floating just above ground)
Rikudou Madara: You should learn already that going in my way is unwise at least. (dark and menancing tone)
[Suddenly Rikudou Madara appears next to BZ Obito]
Rikudou Madara: I will take my Rinnegan myself... no time need to be wasted
[Rikudou Madara painfully takes out Rinnegan from Obito's eye socket]
[There is no pain shown on Obito's face as Madara plug his other Rinnegan into his eyesocket as Madara places his hand covering side of his face.]
Orochimaru: Minato- kun ?!
Minato: Orochimaru-san I need a favour from you
Orochimaru: and that would be (narrows his eyes taking serious face)
Minato: I ask you to regenerate my destroyed arm.
Orochimaru: Ok, I will do it (places his one hand on Minato's shoulder where arm is missing)
Minato: so not just my son... but Sasuke also... (faces ground with worried and angry expression)
Orochimaru: ?! *so Naruto-kun also... it means kyuubi was extracted by Madara... at this rate he may even became Juubi Jinchurki already. This is no good...* (Orochimaru's hand glow as he forms handseals with other hand.)
[Dust is shown mering with each other reforming his arm]
Minato: Thanks you very much, Orochimaru-san
Orochimaru: Alright *It would be better to have all four hokages at full power and complete in case I would have to use that...*
[Minato disappears from Sasuke's area]
[Minato appears next to cut big tentacle of eight tails laying on ground.]
Minato: Bee-san !
Killer Bee: Fourth Hokage ? (emerging dying and very weak from tentacle.)
Fourth Hokage: I need your help, Bee-san (pick Killer Bee lifeless/weak body over his shoulder)
Rikudou Madara: so you returned, Fourth... too bad eight tails Jinchurki will also die.
[Suddenly Black Zetsu is thrown away from Obito's body as Obito disappear in swirling vortex]
[Obito appears next to Kakashi standing face to face]
[Gaara is shown remerging next to Minato as he is covered by blood and bruises]
Minato: I need your help. Kazekage and Killer bee-san so listen.
[Last panel shows Sasuke and Naruto drifting through white space as Jirayia's ghost/soul appearance on the left side and Sasuke's parents ghost/souls appearance on the right side with Black silhouette in the center behind them emerge in front of them]
Mysterious shadow: I was waiting for you my children.
Side text: Naruto and Sasuke left world of living... who is mysterious black silhouette in front of them
END
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665 - Unending despair
Rikudou Madara shows up...!!PAGE ONE
[First panel shows Rikudou Madara glaring at Black Zetsu with his extended arm holding staff pointing in direction of Black Zetsu]Rikudou Madara: You failed me, Black Zetsu
[Black Zetsu is shown looking at Madara in corner of his eye]
BZ Obito: Not at all Master. (Keep smirk on his face)
Rikudou Madara(narrows his eye): explain now (demanding and dangerous voice)
BZ Obito: Well I have present for you and ?! (senses some danger incomming)
[Space disorting violently while spinning around Madara is shown]
Rikudou Madara: ?!
PAGE TWO
[Zoom in Kakashi's Mangenkyou eye widdening]Kakashi: *You will pay* Kamui ! (dangerous tone)
[Black Zetsu rushes to Madara at fast speed]
BZ Obito: Master, I will stop it for y!-(get interrupted)
Rikudou Madara: There is no need for that zetsu
[Rikudou Madara is shown holding staff glowing as Space stop disorting and spinning slowly.]
Rikudou Madara: You have impressive occular power, brat. (smirks in evil way)
PAGE THREE
[Suprised face of Kakashi is shown as he is sweating]Rikudou Madara: but no Ninjutsu will work on me as long as I have Onmyoudon. (increasing his dangerous and menacing tone of voice )
[Minato is shown still facing the ground with his arms shaking from anger as he is turned back to Rikudou Madara and BZ Obito.]
Minato: Damn !.... *Impossible... in the end I failed my son... how could this happen*
[Gaara and Sakura pull their attention to Minato as he is gathering and rising his chakra in anger]
[Kakashi is shown watching his Sensei in bad mood as never before.]
PAGE FOUR
[Rikudou Madara doesn't pay any attention to Minato as he resumes talking with BZ Obito]Rikudou Madara: Now Zetsu what did you try to say ?
[BZ Obito still looking at Madara in corner of his Rinnegan eye]
BZ Obito: It took long but I finally took full control over Obito's body and also I captured Kyuubi !
Rikudou Madara(raises his brow in question): Kyuubi ? I already extracted Kyuubi from that boy (points in Naruto direction) so what are you blabbering about ?
BZ Obito: Well Obito used Kyuubi long time ago and then Fourth Hokage split it in two halves. One half was sealed in that boy Naruto and other in his father.
PAGE FIVE
Rikudou Madara: Well these are interesting news(smirks) *so that why I felt something was missing*[Minato's body stop shaking as he turns to Kakashi]
Minato: Kakashi !, I am teleporting to Orochimaru to fix my arms right away. Fight them with all your might but not die as I will come back soon ! (serious glare)
[Kakashi is shown nodding with his head while keeping serious expression]
Kakashi: I will stall them but about your son...
Minato: I am sorry but there is nothing we can do anymore...(anger mixed with sadness over face) Hir -!(get interrupted)
[Minato is shown dragged inside strange white dimenssion as Black Kurama is standing in front of him.]
PAGE SIX
Minato(sign of happiness flashes over his face): Kurama ?! how ?!Black Kurama: Don't get me wrong Minato I am inside that damned black shit guy
Minato(return to sad mood ): I see...
Black Kurama: This is not time to be heartbroken Minato. There is last way possible to save your son but this is risky method and complex one.
Minato(shows surprise on his face): risky and complex one...
Black Kurama: Exactly, Now I will take my time and explain it to you. Be sure to not skip any steps !
Minato(narrows his eyes): bring it on !
PAGE SEVEN
[Scene shifts to Sasuke laying on ground unconscious as blood comming from his mouth congeal now. ][Mysterious person's legs are moving in his direction as cloud of smoke is blowing away slowly]
[Mysterious person entire figure from back is shown stopping right in front of Sasuke. Tobirama is shown looking at back of mysterious person]
Tobirama(serious trying to sound dangerous tone): Who are you and what do you plan to do to him ?
??????: You are in not position to give me orders Second Hokage. Besides we have never met so it would be pointless (mysterious person keep his back turned to Second Hokage)
[Shot on myserious person's lower face is shown]
??????: to find you in that state, Sasuke... Madara must be really off limits now. (put his arm on his face as to adjust something)
PAGE EIGHT
[Sasuke laying on ground looking dead is shown from Mysterious person's eyes point of view. The wind is blowing away moving Mysterious person's silver hair asides as hood is removed while it is going through Sasuke.]??????: I am responsible for this. *Well this time I will return a favour, Itachi*
[Mysterious person kneel next to Sasuke as his hands are enveloped with glow]
[Suddenly four pair of legs are shown landing in behind mysterious person kneeling next to Sasuke. ]
[Orochimaru, Karin, Juugo and Suigetsu are shown on ground.]
Karin(spot stranger): Get the hell out from Sasuke ! (rushes towards Sasuke as suddenly feel stopped as someone grab her arm)
PAGE NINE
[Juugo is shown holding Karin's arm in in his strong hand]Juugo: wait... Lord Orochimaru has strange face expression on his face.
Suigetsu: Is something wrong Lord Orochimaru ?!
Orochimaru: I am surprised that you are still alive (smirks draw on his face)
[Mysterious person turns slightly his head around as his hands keep glowing while placed above Sasuke's heart]
Orochimaru: Kabuto (smirks draws on his face in twisted way)
Kabuto: It can be same about you, Orochimaru. (strange expression on his face)
PAGE TEN
[Scene shifts to remaining forces of shinobi alliance assiting Third Hokage in fight against Spiral Zetsu]Shinobi: take this (throws many explosive Kunai around statue)
Shinobi 2,3,4,5,6: Argh ! ?! (surprised)
[Small version of buddha smash one of the fists at shinobi but get stopped by Adamantine staff extended blooking it]
Hiruzen: Do not loose your focus, guys ! (keep blocking buddha) ?!
[Hiruzen jumps away as other fists of small buddha keep smashing where he was]
Spiral Zetsu: It looks you are shitting already again (in singing but taking pleassure from their pain tone of voice)
PAGE ELEVEN
Hiruzen(turns to shinobi as he tell them plan ): ....Spiral Zetsu: Are you ready now or do you need my help to take shit again ?
Hiruzen: Now get ready and prepare formation !
Shinobi: yes !
[Five kages are looking with deep respect at Hiruzen convincing people to fight while gettin back on their feet]
Onooki: heh, Sarutobi will never cease to amaze me (smirks as he rises to his feet)
A: I have to admit it but I am about to join this fierce battle ! (activates his lightining shroud)
Mei: We should follow his example to keep our titles with respect (fire in eyes)
Tsunade: as expected after great Hokage*heh Sarutobi Sensei*, now we can stay behind ! (rises her arm with hand closed in fist)
PAGE TWELVE
[Scene shifts back to Kakashi, Minato and rest facing Rikudou Madara and BZ Obito]Minato: I know it (smile draw on his face)
[Kakashi, Gaara and Sakura look at Minato confused and as he would grow other head]
Kakashi: Why do you smile now, Sensei (sweatdropping while panting)
Minato(awake for his happiness state): There is still hope to save Naruto but I don't have time to explain. Keep strong there I will come back as soon possible.
Minato: Flying Thunder God technique !
Rikudou Madara: They can not admit their loss even when it happens, so sad. (shake his head in disappointment as he watches Minato not present any more.)
PAGE THIRTEEN
Rikudou Madara: Getting back to business. It is time for my other Rinnegan to return to me.BZ Obito: As you wish, Madara-sama.
Kakashi: Gaara, I need your help
Gaara: I am on it ! (throws his arms in front of him)
[BZ Obito is shown reaching with his right hand for Rinnegan in his left eyesocket]
[Suddenly sand wall block his way separating his face from his hand.]
BZ Obito: ?! (turns his sight to Gaara) *Cursed brat never know when to give in*
BZ Obito(looks in Madara's direction): *Where did he go ?!*
PAGE FOURTEEN
Gaara: ?! [Suddenly Gaara is sent flying into debriss as explosion goes off]
Kakashi, Sakura: ?! (spot Rikudou Madara floating just above ground)
Rikudou Madara: You should learn already that going in my way is unwise at least. (dark and menancing tone)
[Suddenly Rikudou Madara appears next to BZ Obito]
Rikudou Madara: I will take my Rinnegan myself... no time need to be wasted
[Rikudou Madara painfully takes out Rinnegan from Obito's eye socket]
[There is no pain shown on Obito's face as Madara plug his other Rinnegan into his eyesocket as Madara places his hand covering side of his face.]
PAGE FIFTEEN
[Scene shifts to Minato appearing next to Orochimaru, Suigetsu and Juugo as Karin and Kabuto are shown healing Sasuke. ]Orochimaru: Minato- kun ?!
Minato: Orochimaru-san I need a favour from you
Orochimaru: and that would be (narrows his eyes taking serious face)
Minato: I ask you to regenerate my destroyed arm.
Orochimaru: Ok, I will do it (places his one hand on Minato's shoulder where arm is missing)
Minato: so not just my son... but Sasuke also... (faces ground with worried and angry expression)
Orochimaru: ?! *so Naruto-kun also... it means kyuubi was extracted by Madara... at this rate he may even became Juubi Jinchurki already. This is no good...* (Orochimaru's hand glow as he forms handseals with other hand.)
PAGE SIXTEEN
[Dust is shown floating around Minato's destroyed shoulder in height where the arm would be. ][Dust is shown mering with each other reforming his arm]
Minato: Thanks you very much, Orochimaru-san
Orochimaru: Alright *It would be better to have all four hokages at full power and complete in case I would have to use that...*
[Minato disappears from Sasuke's area]
[Minato appears next to cut big tentacle of eight tails laying on ground.]
Minato: Bee-san !
Killer Bee: Fourth Hokage ? (emerging dying and very weak from tentacle.)
Fourth Hokage: I need your help, Bee-san (pick Killer Bee lifeless/weak body over his shoulder)
PAGE SEVENTEEN
[Minato appears along with Killer bee in Naruto's area as Madara lower his hand revealing his face with double Rinnegan.]Rikudou Madara: so you returned, Fourth... too bad eight tails Jinchurki will also die.
[Suddenly Black Zetsu is thrown away from Obito's body as Obito disappear in swirling vortex]
[Obito appears next to Kakashi standing face to face]
[Gaara is shown remerging next to Minato as he is covered by blood and bruises]
Minato: I need your help. Kazekage and Killer bee-san so listen.
[Last panel shows Sasuke and Naruto drifting through white space as Jirayia's ghost/soul appearance on the left side and Sasuke's parents ghost/souls appearance on the right side with Black silhouette in the center behind them emerge in front of them]
Mysterious shadow: I was waiting for you my children.
Side text: Naruto and Sasuke left world of living... who is mysterious black silhouette in front of them
END
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