[Predictions] NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 655 "Forgotten" [by KCMNaruto]

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655 - Forgotten​
The hole he thoughts he had filled...
PAGE ONE​
[First scene shows Obito laying in the hole made in ground with his hand extended towards sky while dust fall down around]
Obito: Rin...
Obito(frown his forehead and closes his eyes): What should I do ? (clench his fitst)
[Obito get suddenly some flashbacks recalling in his mind]
[Flashback]
[Flashback of young Obito crouching down over ground holding Rin's dead corpse]
Obito: I see... I am in the hell !
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Madara: The longer you live... The more you realize that reality is just made of pain, suffering and emptiness
[/Flashback]
Obito: That right, I can not stop now...(still keep his eyes closed with clenched fist)
PAGE TWO​
[Naruto and Sasuke are shown dispeling Sussano's and Kurama's shroud around them]
Naruto: (spot tailed beasts being free) It worked ! We won ! (throws his arms towards sky in joy)
Sasuke: I knew that we could win (cold expression)
[Entire Alliance of Shinobi Army is shown enjoying their victory by smilling, jumping with hands up.]
A: We did it !
Onooki: Alright !
Tsunade: Great Job everyone (looks around while noding his head)
Mei: The war's end is close (smiles)
Gaara: Another step towards new future (keep grip on Shukaku's chakra)
PAGE THREE​
Gai: Yosh !!!! (explode with his youth energy)
Rock Lee: We did it ! (follows after his master)
Ten ten: *For you Neji* (smiles)
Kiba: Now I can really become Hokage, can't I (cocky smirks while puting his finger close to his nose)
Shino: Do not fool yourself, Kiba. (emotionless look)
Hinata: (Looking at Kiba arguing against Shino ) Everything will return to normal *Thanks to you Naruto*(smiles)
Shikamaru: Great Work everyone ! (rise his hand in triumph's gesture)
Chouji: That right, Shikamaru
Ino: Our teamwork is the best (smiles)
PAGE FOUR​
Sakura: This nightmare finally ends (smiles)
Darui: Finally I can rest (fall down slowly on rock sitting down.)
Kitsuchi: This is the end of this war (confident look with smile)
Shizune: Our World is saved (breath with relief)
Minato: We could not fail *Great work Naruto and everyone* (keep his smile)
Hiruzen: It was great to fight along rest of Shinobi World for once
Orochimaru: .... (emotionless expression with narrowed eyes) *So Obito is done... what will you do now Sasuke*
Tobirama: This guy is finished (smirks) *It looks like you were right my brother, the day people will understand each other is very close...*
PAGE FIVE​
[Giant Perfect Sussano is shown clashing with Shin SuuSenjuu]
SFX: CLASH !
[Madara is shown inside Perfect Sussano's shroud]
Madara: ?!(spot tailed beasts free with no sign of Obito) *I was playing too much, shit !*
[Hashirama is shown standing on Shin SuuSenjuu's statue ]
Hashirama: ?! (spot tailed beasts free with no sign of Obito) *They really did it... together !*
[Perfect Sussano and ShinSuuSenjuu are shown both pushing each other away in opposite directions]
Madara: Tsk ! *Did I really fail with my plan ?!*(angry look)
Hashirama(look confident towards Madara): It looks like your student failed, only you are left for me to deal with and then peace will finally come.
Madara(focused as he closes his eyes): ?! *No... I still feel his chakra... he is alive but very weak...*
PAGE SIX​
Hashirama: ?! (approaches Perfect Sussano with Madara inside) give up, Madara.
Madara(focused and serious expression as he opens his eyes): No, I am not done yet Hashirama.
[Perfect Sussano dissolves completly in thin air as Madara floating is shown]
Madara: It is now or never ! (forms handseal)
Hashirama: ?!
Madara: Animal path: Summoning technique !
[Smoke burst out as Many strange animals emerges out of it ]
Hashirama: *summoning animals... why even bother with that*
[Huge Shin Suu Senjuu's thousand arms are shown moving towards animals summoned with Rinnegan]
[Suddenly Animals scatter in different directions trying to get out of Thousand arms's range with some of them being hit and puffed in smoke while scream]
PAGE SEVEN​
[Madara is shown avoiding terryfing thousand arms's incomming attack by flying up]
Madara: *Flying technique of deva path is not easy to control... so Ten tails chakra boost Rinnegan techniques I see* (extends his both arms) Asura Path: Cannon of destructions !
[powerfull beams of chakra shoot of from Madara's both hands connected with barrage of missles flying around it comming towards Shin Suu Senjuu arms]
Hashirama: Shit ! (Shin Suu Senjuu arms are hit by chakra blasts followed by missles)
[Huge explossion occurs around battlefield]
[Huge dust cloud forms covering upper part of Shin Suu Senuu completly.]
SFX: Cover !
[Madara is shown falling down on ground exhausted from chakra usage]
Madara: Damn... even as Edo Tensei I have my limit *But anyway my chakra regenerates so fast that I can use next technique just in next few seconds*
PAGE EIGHT​
[Madara lands on ground then extends his one arms towards sky]
Madara: Now... Deva Path: Great Bansho Tenin ! (extends his one arm with opened palm towards sky ) *I have to distract Shinobi alliance with something and make them busy while I act*
[Dust clear up around Shin Suu Senjuu Statue. Almost all Wooden arms are shown broken completly]
SFX: Clear Up !
Hashirama: ?! Impossible ! He even managed to break wooden arms of statue *The Rinnegan is very powerfull indeed*
Hashirama: ?! (spot Rinnegan controlled animals approaching him from all sides) Wood release: Human hands !
[Giant massive hands made of wood are shown catching all Rinnegan controlled animals.]
SFX: Catch !
[Suddenly great disturbance can be feel in the sky as the clouds shake and get torn apart by something ]
SFX: Emerges !
PAGE NINE​
[Giant shadow fall on ground at exhasuted Alliance Shinobi's army]
[Some people sense something odd and rise their heads towards sky.]
[Terrified look of exhausted Alliance Shinobi Army's faces is shown ]
Shinobi 1: Oh no !
Shinobi 2: Shit !
[Tailed beasts are shown looking around then at each other]
One tails: Hell Yeah ! I am free finally ! (screams)
Two tails: It looks like we are free
Three Tails: Nice to be out again
Four tails: So... he really did it (smiles)
Five tails: He proved his worth
Six tails: Yeah
Seven tails: huh
[Naruto and Sasuke tired and panting are shown on ground.]
Naruto: ?! (look towards sky as he feel something) Oh no ! this again (scared look)
Sasuke: ?! (rise his head towards sky) Shit ! (scared look)
PAGE TEN​
One tails: Let's destroy something and wreck a havoc here, YEAH ! (crazy roar)
[All tailed beasts with Kurama and Gyuuki essenses are showng standing in One tails's way towards Naruto]
One tails: ?! (suprised look)
Two tails: I can't allow you to do that my sibiling
Four tails: He is reincarnation of you father and creator
One tails: (Recalls his meeting with Sage of six paths)Old man ?!
Five tails: He was the one who tried to save us and he did it.
One tails: ... *That child back then... he was old man all the times...*(widden his eyes)
Gaara: Not only him, I was your host back then but I will to free you if you are no against us (serious honest look)
One tails: ?! Even... Gaara... *It seems Humankind changed a lot exactly how our father foresaw it* Very well ?!
Four tails:) (sense something then look towards sky), Hurry up brother and sisters we have to stop this assault !
All tailed beasts: Yeah ! Let's do it
PAGE ELEVEN​
[Huge couple of meteorites are shown passing through clouds and becoming visible to eyes ]
Naruto(try to stand up): Ugh !
Sasuke(rise to his knees): Damn ! *It seems new Sussano takes a lot of chakra from me...*
All tailed beasts: You don't need to do everything yourself Naruto, leave it to us (smiles)
Naruto: Thanks, guys (stand up while puffing)
Sasuke: ... (glares at tailed beasts)
[All tailed beasts are shown charging tailed beast bombs towards Sky]
SFX: Charge !
[Meanwhile Madara is shown flying towards Hashirama]
Madara: *It should work * (focused)
Hashirama: ?! (spot Madara incomming) (forms handseal)
Madara(extends both his arms with opened palms towards Shin SuuSenjuu Statue): I will show you my power ! (black rods emerges from Madara's opened palms) Deva Path: Great Shinra Tensei !
[Branches emerge out from Shin SuuSenjuu as they approaches Madara then suddenly get crushed as very bright light covers everthing]
SFX: Blind
Hashirama: ?! (cross his arms in front of his face as defence)
PAGE TWELVE​
[Huge shockwave occur affecting entire battleground from impact of attack]
SFX: Schockwave !
[Dust clear up and Hashirama is shown unaffected with black rods impaled all around his body]
Hashirama: Huh (lower his arms carefully) *Is that all* ?! (feel something crumbles)
[Shin Suu Senjuu statue is shown deformed and very damaged as it begin o crumble]
SFX: Crumble !
[Shin Suu Senjuu statue completly break apart into pieces cause Hashirama to falling down ]
Hashirama: Impossible ! *My strongest technique* ?! (feel disturbance in his chakra) Ugh
Hashirama: (try to control himself) I am loosing control over my body (spot Rinnegan eyes behind him) What the ?!
[Hashirama's eyes flashes to Rinnegan]
SFX: Turns !
PAGE THIRTEEN​
[Madara is shown with smirk on his face]
Madara: Finally it worked...
[Madara is shown dashing in fast speed in Obito's direction with Hashirama following him up.]
SFX: Dashes !
[Tailed beasts finish charging their huge tailed beast bombs as they aim them at incomming big meteorites.]
SFX: finish !
All Tailed beast: Full power Tailed beast bomb !
[Huge disturbance occurs in air as massive chakra filled black spheres are shoot off towards incomming meteorites]
SFX: Shoot off !
[Everyone try to get away and run]
[Meteorites clash with tailed beast bombs]
SFX: Explosion !
PAGE FOURTEEN​
[Huge Eplosion occur at the sky shown from Obito's point of view]
Obito: Tsk..., I
[Flashback of young Obito holding Rin with his arms ]
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Words reflecting from all sides: In a dream everything goes the way you want...
You can even make dead people come back to life...
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Young Obito: I want to create the world of just that
Young Obito: I will...
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Young Obito: I will create a world where you are alive !
Young Obito: I will change the fate of this world !
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PAGE FIFTEEN​
[Obito rise up on his feet as he glares at explosion in background]
Obito: I will finish what I have began long time ago -! (Get interrupted)
Obito(Blackness emerges on Obito's skin as it began taking over one of his half): ?! This again ! ARGHH !
[Blackness takes over completly half of his body then begin to flows at another half of Obito's body]
Obito: Shit ! (forms handseal) I refuse *Damn you Madara... I forgot completly about you*
[Madara is shown along with Hashirama controlled by black rods impaled all over his body]
Madara: I said it once, It is time for pay back, Obito ! (serious look)
Obito(turns his head back towards Madara while forming handseals): *Bastard !* ?! (spot Black Markings forming on madara's forehead and around his eyes as cracks disappear while Madara's body is enveloped bu light) *Sennin mode... how*
[Hashirama controlled body is shown with one black rod impared in Madara's revived body]
PAGE SIXTEEN​
[Cracks begin to fade away complety peeling of his skin as Light around Madara's body begin to fade away]
Obito: No... (forms last handseal)
[Obito Fall down on ground with his arms lowered]
Madara(fully ressurected is shown): It is great feeling to be alive again after all these times (smirks)
[Madara looks at Obito with delighted look]
Madara: You filled your purpouse Obito, Now I can end you life once and for all (extends black rod from his opened palm)
Obito: ... *rise his hand to his eye...* No...
[Madara moves forward to finish Obito but it pass through Obito's body]
Madara(Narrows his eyes): Kamui... *I could finish him anyway, especially with the Rinnegan Kamui is no problem but I can't loose any time here. They may deal with my meteorites about now and then attack me.*
[Madara dashes away from Obito as Hashirama out of Sage mode with Rinnegan eyes is shown standing still]
PAGE SEVENTEEN​
[Dust clear up and everyone is shown alive along wit tailed beasts being very tired]
Naruto: You did it, my friends !
Everyone: Thanks beasts !
Sasuke: (restore his calmness and normal rate breath) *Should I attack them now and finish them... even after they saved us along with this world* (inner conflicted)
[Scene changes to Madara piercing black rods comming from one of his opened palm into dying God Tree.]
Madara: ?! *It is slowly dying... It is bad* ?!
Madara: *Yes Senin mode uses nature energy as God Tree uses nature energy... maybe I can fill it up with it so it won't die*
[Small signs of God tree moving and reacting to Nature energy in Madara]
SFX: Reacts !
PAGE EIGHTTEEN​
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[Suddenly Main trunk opens up making hole inside as roots shoot towards Madara enveloping around him]
Madara: Shit ! (try to withstand)
[Madara is dragged inside dark hole as Main trunk closes completly after dragging him inside.]
SFX: Drags !
[Hashirama is shown suddenly loosing Rinnegan eyes as he snaps out. Obito is nowhere to be seen]
[Suddenly many roots shoot off from Tree God and envelops around Tailed beasts along with two comes after Naruto and Killer Bee. Naruto avoids in last second while Killer bee is too slow and get caught.]
[Killer bee along with rest tailed beasts get absorbed into God Tree but before Naruto bump fist with Shukaku and Gyuuki as he recieves some chakra from them.]
SFX: Absorbed !
[Last scene shows New God Treen turns into small devil/demon figure resembling Madara's body]
Ten tails possesed Madara's body: Your judgement finally came ! (dark tone voice)
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END

Tailed beasts are absorbed once again !
Naruto recieves a bit from all tailed beast charka !
New threat appears !

656 - Final Judgement

So, what do you think about my prediction guys ?
Sorry for any grammar or typing mistakes

I hope you enjoy reading it
 

Madara mhm

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It Wont happen, why would kishi go through the same shit again, Re-pulling the beasts out of madara? obito was enough if you ask me. time for naruto to become the host.
 

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nice, but getting sage mode through staabing a rod through someone is utterly and completely retarded. nice rinnegan techniques, but again... Madara knowing all those techniques is downright bad writing even if kishi does it. You can't master something when your body is being kept alive and you can't master somethign when you're dead and you can't master something when you're simply waging war the second you are alive again.
 

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It was pretty awesome...but it seems to me like u are undoing what kishi just did...he just got the bijus out...now u are sending them all back in..
 
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