[Predictions] NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNaruto]

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NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNaruto]

THIS IS SEQUEL OF IT:

SORRY FOR MISLEADING TITLE... I POSTED IT TOO FAST...


Legend:

  • (actions)
  • (emotions)
  • [descriptions of scenery/surrondings]
  • *thoughts*
  • characters
  • jutsu
  • SFX : Sound effects

=DLet's enjoy reading now=D
643 - Full power of The greatest rivals​
Full of power of the greatest rivals !
PAGE ONE
[The big scan shows Naruto and Sasuke burst/explode in great amount of chakra]
SFX: BURN ! FLARE ! BURN !
[Shots on Sussano forming around Sasuke ]
[Bones forms arround Sasuke]
SFX: FORMS !
[Get covered by Skin]
SFX: COVER !
[Armor of chakra forms around sussano which grows massively in size.]
SFX: APPEAR ! ENVELOPES ! GROWS !
[Sasuke's mouth moving are only shown in last bottom left panel]
Sasuke: Fixate !
PAGE TWO
[Shots on Naruto changing into giant Kurama covered in orange fur]
[Orange fur begin spreading on Naruto's skin covering his body as Naruto grows in size]
SFX: SPROUTS ! SPREAD ! GROWS !
[Kurama head is shown forming in Naruto head's place as orange fur finish covering Naruto's entire body.]
SFX: FORMS ! CHANGES ! COVER ! GROWS !
[Bottom left panel shows Kurama tails are weaving covered by orange skin.]
SFX: WEAVES ! MOVES !
[Last bottom panel shows Naruto's mouth moving]
Naruto: Finally !
PAGE THREE& FOUR
[Giant panel on entire page shows Full Kurama beast and Perfect Sussano from front towering over battlefield ]
[Obito is shown levitating with his back turned to readers. Some of his black orbs are shown expanding ]
SFX: PULSATE ! EXPANDS ! PULSATE !
[Side text shouts: "expierience Our full power"]
PAGE FIVE
[Zoom on Naruto ghost face is shown visible through Kurama full transformation and Sasuke face is shown]
Naruto: Let do it !
Sasuke: his end is close.
[Cross panel of Naruto and Sasuke are shown smirking]
Naruto/Sasuke: Win !
[Wide panel of Minato and Tobirama smilling is shown.]
Minato: They really do that, heh
Tobirama: It looks like hidden village in leaves is strong as always
[Hiruzen is shown smilling with proud face]
Hiruzen: To think that they both could work together..., *such powerfull duo*
[Zoom on Obito's mouth is shown ]
Obito: Full power... ehh
PAGE SIX
[Big wide panel shows Obito levitating high in sky facing Naruto and Sasuke ]
[Black orbs are shown forming and pulsating in front of Obito covering all 180 degrees from front.]
SFX: FLOAT !
[Zoom on Obito's face is shown with calm but serious face]
Obito: Very well.. I just began to get used to Juubi power... but give me some time and I will crush all of you with my full power !
[Giant wide panel Obito still levitating with giant black orbs finish forming in front of him]
SFX: FINISH ! CHARGE !
PAGE SEVEN
[Minato and Tobirama are shown with very serious faces as they being to panicking a bit]
Minato: All seven giant black orbs..., it is not possible to teleport all of them
Tobirama: You are right fourth , that why we will have to take as many we can with yourselves sacrifing for army. ?! *Come up with new idea...*
[Tobirama weaves through many handseals]
Tobirama: but let's me try something... first (focus, gather chakra)
Tobirama: Water release: Seven pillars of Water God technique !
SFX: FORMS ! RELEASE ! shot off !
[Seven big streams of water are shown shot off into sky.]
[Each stream of water is shown covering each Obito's giant black orb with radius of each stream. ]
Obito(surpised): *What he is trying to do* futtile atempt second (try to move seven black orbs)
Tobirama: It is not futtile, young Uchiha (smirks)
PAGE EIGHT
[All seven streams of water containing each of black orb changes their shape into giant sphere while decreasing temperature of water]
SFX: SHAPES ! CHANGE ! FORMS ! DECREASE !
[Minato suprised is shown while holding his special kunais in both hands ]
Minato: That is truelly usurrprased mastery over Water release, which only Lord Second had
Tobirama: My master over water release is special, because I can manipulate ingredients from water is made of, as well as I can freely increase or decrease temperature of water, same with shape, that why.
[Zoom on Shocked Obito's face is shown ]
Obito: Impossible..., how ?!
PAGE NINE
[Seven frozen spheres containing each black orb are shown in front of surpised Obito. ]
SFX: FROZEN ! FROZEN !
Obito: ice...-[get interrupted]
[Shot on Admantine staff expanding is shown]
SFX: EXPANDS !
[Admantine staff is shown expanding almost hitting Obito]
[Obito catches easily adamantine staff with his right hand]
Obito: Pathetic attempt !
[Shot on Obito pulling adamantine staff along with Hiruzen keeping that staff]
SFX: PULL !
[Hiruzen is shown flying into ground along with adamantine staff coming back to it's original size.]
SFX: FLY ! CRASH !
[A lot of dust rise in air where Hiruzen crush into ground. ]
[Suddenly Black orbs teleports outisde of frozen spheres still in front of Obito]
[Obito figure is shown levitating high in sky ]
Obito: Die !!!
PAGE TEN
[All giant black orbs shot off in shape of giant beams flying at all 180 angles in different directions]
SFX: SHOT OFF ! SHAPES ! FLY !
[Another panel shows giant black beam being very close to ground]
[Big wide cross panel shows Full kyuubi/Kurama along with Perfect Sussano covering as much people as possible ]
Naruto/Sasuke: don't understimate us !
[Shots of many explosions occuring around at battlefield are shown]
SFX: EXPLODE ! DESTROY !
[Four of them hit where Perfect Sussano and Full Kyuubi are]
SFX: HIT ! EXPLODE !
[Two of them fly randomely in different directions ]
[Last one is shown flying at Madara fighting against Hashirama ]
Madara/Hashirama: ?!
PAGE ELEVEN
[Giant panel on entire page shows all explosions created by black orbs hitting ground.]
SFX: KABOOM ! SHOCKWAVE ! PUSH ! EMIT !
PAGE TWELVE
[A lot shots panels with great shockwaves with great repullsion force comming from explosions are shown]
SFX: PUSH ! REPELL ! SCHOCKWAVE ! DESTROY !
[Giant craters are left where giant two of black orbs hit ground.]
[Perfect Sussano and Full Kyuubi covered with all his tails are shown concealed by great amount of dust floating around.]
SFX: SMOKES ! CONCEAL ! FLOAT !
[Madara in Perfect Sussano and Hashirama standing on Thousand arms statue with all of it's arms enveloped around itself in defence state.]
[Madara Perfect Sussano has some big cracks on it, which slowly disappear while regenerating]
Madara(serious): so he knows... *No... he probably tried to destroy everyone in his way. It is about time for me to use my trump card.*
Hashirama: Amazing power..., really dangerous(notice lack of around hundred of arms around Satute's back.)
PAGE THIRTEEN
[Obito is shown looking with curosity throught thick smoke created from explosions's impact. Frozen spheres are broken apart on ground changing back into water.]
Obito: Are they ?
[Giant panel of Sasuke/Naruto is shown withing Perfect Sussano and full Kurama transformation]
[Full Kyuubi/Kurama is shown injured and damaged around slowly regenerating]
[Perfect Sussano is all cracked in many places with Sasuke inside]
Naruto/Sasuke: Dead ?! (smirks)
Obito(enraged): persistant brats... I will ?! (spot many Special Kunai floating around in ring shape, covering all his sides) that it !
[Minato is shown smilling on ground as he call name of his technique]
Minato: Spiralling Flash Super Round Dance Howl Participate Formula !(serious)
PAGE FOURTEEN
[Big panel shows Obito suprised with Minato appearing to each kunai while holding rasengan in his right hand.]
Minato: Here I go !
[Obito is shown being smashed by many rasengans from all angles/degrees.]
Obito: damn you sensei(mad) Shinra Tensei !
[All special kunai are pushed away by powerfull repulsion force]
[Minato appear on ground, next to Tobirama and Hiruzen]
Minato(angry and worried): It doesn't work on him(notice no damage at all)... It means I will have to use that mode...
Tobirama(serious): Unfortunetly...not even single scratch on his body. It looks like he tanked is with no efforts. All of us have to use our full power, there is no more excusses to not use it.
Hiruzen: I agree.. I can't find even single weakness in his current state. *To think he is able to use that black matter and keep it in any form he wishes as long as he want... formidable* Amount of time he could kept black matter formed in some form was his weakness in previous state, but now... I am afraid he has noone. (pauses)I agree with Second Hokage !
PAGE FIFTEEN
[Madara is shown inside of Perfect Sussano looking at Naruto and Sasuke with interest]
Madara: (looks at Full Kyuubi)so that Kyuubi Jinchurki... finally he got all his full power *I would like to test him.., * (lock his eyes at Sasuke) To use Perfect Sussano... he is very talented Uchiha *Unfortunetly I can't play around... Obito become very dangerous*
[Hashirama is shown standing on his thousand arms statue as he looks at Full Kyuubi and Perfect Sussano]
Hashirama: That kids... *at such young age to have such power... formidable duo* They just surprassed us, don't you think Madara ?
Madara(smilling): heh well partially. They indeed surprassed my power in my golden age even with kyuubi on my side, You admited yourself that they surrprassed you in your current state, but they are not yet on my level... currently I am even stronger then you, Hashirama !(smirks)
Madara: Unfortunetly I can't waste my time...(focus as he closes his eyes) It is about time to act(very serious)
PAGE SIXTEEN
[Full Kurama beast and Perfect Sussano are shown standing ]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
Hiruzen: It is me Third Hokage... I am using Yamanaka clan telepathy to contact you... Please don't interrupt me as I will say what I have to say. I along with rest of Hokages are gonna to use our full power... unfortunetly it will take some for us do it. Could you buy some time for us, of course if you can defeat him that ok..., but do not overdo it guys.
[Crosspanel of confident Naruto/Sasuke is shown]
Naruto/Sasuke: You can count of us !
[Shots of Edo Hokages ]
[Minato is standing in place with his hands formed as Naruto enter Sage mode]
[Tobirama is shown standing still with handseal formend in front of his chest]
[Hiruzen is shown focused while keeping one of his arms on Enma, forming handseal with another hand.]
PAGE SEVENTEEN & EIGHTEEN
[Huge panel of Madara is shown forming handseal]
Madara: That your end Obito... Rinnengan: Almighty mind entrance technique !
[Obito' back are shown in background as he keep levitating in one place.]
End !

Everyone is about to unleash full power !
Madara uses his trump card finally !


Preview: Madara's trump card! Can Rinnegan secret technique stop Juubi Jinchurki overhelming power?!
[END]

644 - Madara's trump card !

So, what do you think about my prediction guys ?
Sorry for any grammar or typing mistakes

I hope you enjoy reading it ;) :cool:
 
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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

why you did this? instead of doing it the 642? :S
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

why you did this? instead of doing it the 642? :S

Why what ?, It sequel to my previous prediction. Sorry for misleading title but I noticed it too late...

Now it sounds as my previous and current prediction is same, all blames for wrong title I will say.

Sorry for that once again and please stay on topic ;)

Thanks !
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

Great work Man + Rep
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

great predication
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

Great! Keep up the good work!
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

Great prediction , i really like it but one thing i didn't like is Minato's SM , but you deserve + rep and 4.5/5
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

As expected from you. Keep up the good work! + rep
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

Great prediction , i really like it but one thing i didn't like is Minato's SM , but you deserve + rep and 4.5/5

Thanks a lot ;), Well Minato's SM could be ass-pull, but I think Kishi could find way to explain it.

Considering that Minato was Jirayia Student, Who Jirayia believed to be saviour

As expected from you. Keep up the good work! + rep

thank you very much ;)
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

Very good prediction as always
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

keep up the good work
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

You are obviously a good writer but I just cant stand to read it.

All those sfx effects and descriptions of what happens. I dunno, it just hurts the eyes and I just want to know what
all the characters do, but I feel i am getting lost in all the effects.
Would it be possible to create more clear predictions.

Some people might like it, but I picture the battle myself while reading it, and having someone describe everything for me feels a bit forced.

To keep a long story short. I dont like the
(actions)
(emotions)
[descriptions of scenery/surrondings]
SFX : Sound effects

I rather read it without, to give me more freedom in my mind (turning the prediction into a film in my mind).
 

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Re: NARUTO MANGA PREDICTION 643 "Withstanding Overhelming Juubi Jinchurki" [BY KCMNar

keep up the good work

^^ Thanks :)

You are obviously a good writer but I just cant stand to read it.

All those sfx effects and descriptions of what happens. I dunno, it just hurts the eyes and I just want to know what
all the characters do, but I feel i am getting lost in all the effects.
Would it be possible to create more clear predictions.

Some people might like it, but I picture the battle myself while reading it, and having someone describe everything for me feels a bit forced.

To keep a long story short. I dont like the
(actions)
(emotions)
[descriptions of scenery/surrondings]
SFX : Sound effects

I rather read it without, to give me more freedom in my mind (turning the prediction into a film in my mind).

Ok, sorry then for that I will try to at least decrease amount of different formatting styles...

Thanks for honest feedback ;)
 
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