NARUTO MANGA GAIDEN PREDICTION 10 "Conclusion, bigger threat's appear" [by KCMNaruto]
Format of predictions:
kids- Shin kids version
[Shin's clones are shown being thrown backwards around]
Shin's clones: Argh !
Naruto(annoyed): like mother like daughter
Sakura(smirks): That my daughter
Sasuke(smirks): well done.
ChoCho: That it, my abilities should give me proof who my mother and father could be !
[Some's shins clones are shown keep footing after landing on ground]
Sarada(raising her heads from ground while pulling her arm back): I am not done yet !
[Close up on MS pattern in their eyes]
Shin's(angry): *Bastard* You will pay for that !
[Shin's clones strike at Sarada ]
Sarada(scared): I won't make it ?!
[The schockwave from the attack instantly kill some Shin while some other are shown thrown backwards]
[Screen is filled with smoke expanding in all directions]
[Screen clears]
[Shin's clones crush in ground dying instantly while Sakura glares at them with her marking glowing]
Sakura(angry): Never think about laying your finger on my daughter !
Shin's father: After all the evolution failed...
Shin: I will take you away with me !
Naruto(senses him): That enough ?!
[Naruto stops right next to Chocho while ChoCho increase size of hand while smashing Shin' s dying.]
[Everyone turns their attetion to ChoCho and last of Shin's clones dying.]
Sarada(smilling): As I said you are Chouji's daughter
[Close up on Shin's MS pattern swirling in eyes]
[Naruto in Kurama cloak appears to block blades with Kurama's arm ]
Shin(shocked): so fast ?!
[Everyone look towards Shin laying on the ground.]
Naruto(pity look): The evolution doesn't work like that, Shin
Shin(watching on): ...
Naruto: just look at yourself.
Sakura(angry): watch your tangue, Shin !
Sasuke: It may seem we were caught off guard but...
Shin: ?!
Sasuke: actually this was our plan from the begining.
ChoCho(eating chips): well back then it didn't look like they were in control of situation, whatever.
Sarada: Hey, don't bad mouth my parents or Hokage in my pressence, got it ?
Naruto: It could be coincidence that Sasuke couldn't use Susanoo but to use your own body to save your children have more meaning then you could understand, Shin.
Shin: I don't care about morals, values and other high kinds of acting. All I am interested in is efficency of action and that what bring evolution.
Naruto(ignoring Shin): Noone can live forever and although we die in the end we leave part of us living inside our children who are growing up and taking after us.
Sasuke: Naruto, stop this it is not use.
Naruto(ignoring them): It can not be avoided that we will die and this will be time of children. That why we should use this time to show children our love and will to be with them instead of making them hating you.
Shin: ?!
Naruto: In the end Children will pay you back as you treated them, that is general principle of family.
Shin(Tsk): *he is right, but I have to just wait for them to arrive...*
[Suddenly mini Juubi appear from nowhere enclosing around our heroes]
Everyone: ?!
[Close up on mini's Juubi MS being to rotate]
Juubi's monsters: Gah !
[Instantly all Juubi's monsters get vaporized.]
[Angry Shin is shown looking at Naruto's back turned back to him.]
Shin: Die ! *The evolution will not fail !*
[PS's sword is shown going through chest of Shin with it's end impaled in ground]
Shin(screams): argh !
[Shin closes his eyes as he dies. The blood keep flowing from his mouth.]
ChoCho: Can we go back to village ?
Sarada: *Father..., 7th..., they are great rivals it seems.*
Naruto(looks towards Sasuke): Let's talk about Sarada and other stuff then
Sasuke(emotionless): What do you mean
Saukra(feeling tension): Let's leave Kaguya's dimenssion for now and then we can talk.
[Juugo and Suigetsu are shown following after Orochimaru]
Orochimaru: Interesting architecture(moves his hand against wall.)
Suigetsu(bored): Why we are even here... ?
Juugo(scolding): Stop complaining Suigetsu. You could stay in base if you wanted.
[Perfect Susanoo holding everyone is shown flying across the clouds]
Sakura: That why I said to keep him under watch all the time
Naruto: That what we have been doing until now.
Sasuke: He just can not stop cunning against us.
Sakura: Let's just leave him for now, it wouldn't be bad, don't you think.
Naruto(sigh): Forget him, he is not threat anyway.
Sasuke: so be it... (make handseal)
[Close up on Sasuke's 6 tomoe Rinnegan]
[Sussano disappears as blured figure]
[Somewhere close to Konha's gates]
[Perfect Susanoo appears along with everyone landing on ground]
[Slowly Perfect Susanoo decreases in size as it disperses]
[The purple aura keep diminishing into Sasuke revealing Naruto, Sakura and kids]
Naruto: Yo, guys It's me.
Gate guards: Hokage- sama, You are back !
Sasuke(get serious): Tsk..., Always the same
Shinobi: Lady Sakura.
Shinobi(schocked): Lord Sasuke ?!. That is honor to see you again.
[Angry ChoCho is shown pulling Sarada behind her in front of others ]
ChoCho: hey, we are back too.
Shinobi: nice to see you back, kids
Sarada(sad): *Nothing changed* still ignored huh...
[Sakura and Sasuke are shown looking at her from back]
Sasuke(calm): You are not alone. I will spend some time with you while for some time I will keep comming back to Kaguya dimenssion watching what is happening.
Sasuke: and about test done by Suigetsu. Karin injected a bit of her flesh in me and it discovered her DNA, but In true Sakura is your true mother and my wife
[Sakura smiles as she throws her arms around Sasuke]
[Hinata along with Himwari and Bolt is shown comming towards Naruto]
Himwari(cheerfull): Welcome back dad
Bolt(turns his head to side): Yo, big boss
[Naruto smiles as he returns kiss and put his arms on his children]
[Meanwhile in Kaguya's dimenssion]
[Small mini monster is shown in front of dead shins, juubi's ]
Mini Juubi: Time to send report to him. (disappears)
[Dark space around with Mysterious people about to step outside of darkness]
END
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Format of predictions:
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- techniques
flashbacks
kids- Shin kids version
10 - Conclusion, bigger threat's appears
Overhelming army of Shin's clones !. charge of Sarada ! PAGE ONE
[Sarada crushes her fist in ground cause detruction around][Shin's clones are shown being thrown backwards around]
Shin's clones: Argh !
Naruto(annoyed): like mother like daughter
Sakura(smirks): That my daughter
Sasuke(smirks): well done.
ChoCho: That it, my abilities should give me proof who my mother and father could be !
PAGE TWO
[The destruction of ground stops as a bunch Shin's clones are shown dead not moving at all][Some's shins clones are shown keep footing after landing on ground]
Sarada(raising her heads from ground while pulling her arm back): I am not done yet !
[Close up on MS pattern in their eyes]
Shin's(angry): *Bastard* You will pay for that !
[Shin's clones strike at Sarada ]
Sarada(scared): I won't make it ?!
PAGE THREE
[Sakura is shown smashing her leg on the ground causing horyffing earthquake while massive destruction ][The schockwave from the attack instantly kill some Shin while some other are shown thrown backwards]
[Screen is filled with smoke expanding in all directions]
[Screen clears]
[Shin's clones crush in ground dying instantly while Sakura glares at them with her marking glowing]
Sakura(angry): Never think about laying your finger on my daughter !
Shin's father: After all the evolution failed...
PAGE FOUR
[One of the Shin's clones appear behind ChoCho]Shin: I will take you away with me !
Naruto(senses him): That enough ?!
[Naruto stops right next to Chocho while ChoCho increase size of hand while smashing Shin' s dying.]
[Everyone turns their attetion to ChoCho and last of Shin's clones dying.]
Sarada(smilling): As I said you are Chouji's daughter
[Close up on Shin's MS pattern swirling in eyes]
PAGE FIVE
Sakura: ?! (feel incomming danger)[Naruto in Kurama cloak appears to block blades with Kurama's arm ]
Shin(shocked): so fast ?!
[Everyone look towards Shin laying on the ground.]
Naruto(pity look): The evolution doesn't work like that, Shin
Shin(watching on): ...
Naruto: just look at yourself.
PAGE SIX
Shin: Should I remind you I was the one wining last your battleSakura(angry): watch your tangue, Shin !
Sasuke: It may seem we were caught off guard but...
Shin: ?!
Sasuke: actually this was our plan from the begining.
ChoCho(eating chips): well back then it didn't look like they were in control of situation, whatever.
Sarada: Hey, don't bad mouth my parents or Hokage in my pressence, got it ?
PAGE SEVEN
Naruto: Back to explanation. I allowed sword to pierce me but make it more real Sasuke casted genjtusu for some time so it looked like my reactions got dull.Naruto: It could be coincidence that Sasuke couldn't use Susanoo but to use your own body to save your children have more meaning then you could understand, Shin.
Shin: I don't care about morals, values and other high kinds of acting. All I am interested in is efficency of action and that what bring evolution.
Naruto(ignoring Shin): Noone can live forever and although we die in the end we leave part of us living inside our children who are growing up and taking after us.
Sasuke: Naruto, stop this it is not use.
PAGE EIGHT
Sakura(sigh): Sasuke is right, it is pointless to talk with him about it. Just finish him and come back.Naruto(ignoring them): It can not be avoided that we will die and this will be time of children. That why we should use this time to show children our love and will to be with them instead of making them hating you.
Shin: ?!
Naruto: In the end Children will pay you back as you treated them, that is general principle of family.
Shin(Tsk): *he is right, but I have to just wait for them to arrive...*
[Suddenly mini Juubi appear from nowhere enclosing around our heroes]
Everyone: ?!
[Close up on mini's Juubi MS being to rotate]
PAGE NINE
[The Juubi's monsters are shown attacked with each Kurama's hand smashing TBB in each them. ]Juubi's monsters: Gah !
[Instantly all Juubi's monsters get vaporized.]
[Angry Shin is shown looking at Naruto's back turned back to him.]
Shin: Die ! *The evolution will not fail !*
[PS's sword is shown going through chest of Shin with it's end impaled in ground]
Shin(screams): argh !
PAGE TEN
Sasuke: You talked too much.[Shin closes his eyes as he dies. The blood keep flowing from his mouth.]
ChoCho: Can we go back to village ?
Sarada: *Father..., 7th..., they are great rivals it seems.*
Naruto(looks towards Sasuke): Let's talk about Sarada and other stuff then
Sasuke(emotionless): What do you mean
Saukra(feeling tension): Let's leave Kaguya's dimenssion for now and then we can talk.
PAGE ELEVEN
[The scene shows Orochimaru walking around reaching castle destination ][Juugo and Suigetsu are shown following after Orochimaru]
Orochimaru: Interesting architecture(moves his hand against wall.)
Suigetsu(bored): Why we are even here... ?
Juugo(scolding): Stop complaining Suigetsu. You could stay in base if you wanted.
[Perfect Susanoo holding everyone is shown flying across the clouds]
PAGE TWELVE
Sasuke(annoyed): Damn that snake. I can not locate him.Sakura: That why I said to keep him under watch all the time
Naruto: That what we have been doing until now.
Sasuke: He just can not stop cunning against us.
Sakura: Let's just leave him for now, it wouldn't be bad, don't you think.
PAGE THIRTEEN
[Everyone pull their's atention to Naruto who is watchng on]Naruto(sigh): Forget him, he is not threat anyway.
Sasuke: so be it... (make handseal)
[Close up on Sasuke's 6 tomoe Rinnegan]
[Sussano disappears as blured figure]
[Somewhere close to Konha's gates]
[Perfect Susanoo appears along with everyone landing on ground]
PAGE FOURTEEN
[Gate guards shit in their pants at the view of terryfing chakra monster.][Slowly Perfect Susanoo decreases in size as it disperses]
[The purple aura keep diminishing into Sasuke revealing Naruto, Sakura and kids]
Naruto: Yo, guys It's me.
Gate guards: Hokage- sama, You are back !
Sasuke(get serious): Tsk..., Always the same
PAGE FIFTEEN
[Other shinobi arrive as they land in front of Naruto]Shinobi: Lady Sakura.
Shinobi(schocked): Lord Sasuke ?!. That is honor to see you again.
[Angry ChoCho is shown pulling Sarada behind her in front of others ]
ChoCho: hey, we are back too.
Shinobi: nice to see you back, kids
Sarada(sad): *Nothing changed* still ignored huh...
PAGE SIXTEEN
[Sarada feel both hands placed on both of her shoulders ][Sakura and Sasuke are shown looking at her from back]
Sasuke(calm): You are not alone. I will spend some time with you while for some time I will keep comming back to Kaguya dimenssion watching what is happening.
Sasuke: and about test done by Suigetsu. Karin injected a bit of her flesh in me and it discovered her DNA, but In true Sakura is your true mother and my wife
[Sakura smiles as she throws her arms around Sasuke]
[Hinata along with Himwari and Bolt is shown comming towards Naruto]
PAGE SEVENTEEN
Hinata(smiles): Nice to see you back dear (kiss him on cheek) Himwari(cheerfull): Welcome back dad
Bolt(turns his head to side): Yo, big boss
[Naruto smiles as he returns kiss and put his arms on his children]
[Meanwhile in Kaguya's dimenssion]
[Small mini monster is shown in front of dead shins, juubi's ]
Mini Juubi: Time to send report to him. (disappears)
[Dark space around with Mysterious people about to step outside of darkness]
END
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8/10 thread, I like the characterization that you got and captured nicely. But Naruto should've benn able to sense orochimaru from a distance, Sasuke can only use sharnningan genjutsu because only Tomoe rinnegan can do rinnegan:genjutsu. And sharnningan genjutsu would've been noticed by shin. Other that, great thread mate
