[Action] Naruto manga fanfiction part 5: will to fight.

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Here's the previous parts.
Part 1.

part 2.

part 3.

part 4

Obito: WELCOME TO MY WORLD NARUTO.

Naruto(thought): RATS! HOW'M I SUPPOSED TO GET OUT OF HERE WITHOUT KAKASHI SENSEI?

Obito: YOU WON'T SURVIVE LONG ENOUGH FOR HIM TO RECOVER. NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE IN THIS DIMENSION. CONSIDER THIS A PREVIEW OF THE INFINITE TSUKYOMI.

Naruto(thought): WE'RE IN HIS DIMENSION, HE CAN'T BECOME INTANGIBLE ANYMORE.

Naruto then dashed head on against Obito and prepared a tailed beast ransengan, but suddenly, a barrier was created. His attack was repelled, and Naruto was blocked backwards since the blast effected him instead.

Obito created an immense landslide made from the floor. Naruto used chakra arms to prevent himself from being crushed by putting one on the land slide and one on ground away from it to get over it. However, Spikes came from it, forcing Naruto to use chakra arms to move midair. He found that a huge fireball was waiting for him. He used shadow clones to block it and launch himself away. When the fireball hit them, they where instantly incinerated.

Then, when Naruto landed, Obito made the ground shoot Naruto up into the air. Naruto was then blasted with a beam of pure yin-yang energy. Naruto used shadow clones as a shield and created a cloak to make a powerful barrier between it and him, but it was easily overpowered, and Naruto was severely wounded. Naruto healed, but he was running out of options. Spheres of yin-yang chased after Naruto. He dodged them, but they managed to corner him and get him with an explosion.

Transition to Sakura and Kakashi. Kakashi is healed by Sakura.

Kakashi: WHERE'S NARUTO!

Sakura: OBITO ABSORBED HIM! WE NEED YOU TO BRING NARUTO BACK!

Kakashi: OH NO!

Sakura: WHAT IS IT?

Kakashi: SAKURA, HEAL ME AS QUICKLY AS YOU CAN! IN HIS DIMENSION, OBITO IS INVINCIBLE! HE CAN CREATE ANYTHING! THAT'S HOW HE BEAT ME AND UNDOUBTADLY HOW HE BEAT MINATO SENSEI (he says this after seeing him). NARUTO, UNLIKE MINATO, HAS A SPECIAL PROTECTION TO THE GENJUTSU OF HIS WORLD, SO HE CAN RESIST, BUT WE NEED TO GET HIM OUT AS QUICKLY AS POSSIBLE. NOT EVEN NARUTO CAN BEAT OBITO.

Then, back at the kamui dimension, Naruto looked on in horror when a fake 9 tails was created.

Kurama: THAT'S HOW I WAS BEFORE I WAS SEALED INSIDE YOU! HE'S TWICE AS STRONG AS ME!

The fake 9 tails charges. Naruto dodged its attempt to slam him by jumping. However, the fake 9 tails used a shockwave on Naruto while he was in midair. Then he swatted Naruto away with his tail. The impact shocked and hurt Naruto. The fake then used tailed beast bomb against him. Naruto managed to dash away, but he was still caught in the explosion. He was battered.

Naruto(thought): HE'S INVINCIBLE! THERE'S NO WAY TO BEAT HIM!

Then Naruto thought about his friends, and what they'll be facing if Obito goes back.

Naruto: BUT I CAN'T GIVE UP! I HAVE TO FIND A WAY TO BEAT HIM NO MATER WHAT! (he recalls the time Itachi told him that every jutsu has a weakness, and that he should remain calm) I JUST HAVE TO FIND IT! SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!

Naruto attacks head on, but the fake used its tails to get rid of his clones, but , as Naruto was knocked back, a huge batch of shadow clones appeared behind the fake. The clones used massive tailed beast ransengan barrage, a barrage of tailed beast ransengans, each the size of a biju's. They slammed all of them into the fake, and the resulting combined explosion was massive.

The fake 9 tails suffered massive damage, but Obito made it regenerate. Naruto then entered biju mode. He used Kurama cloak and charged toward it head on. They blasted into each other with equal force. They both tried to punch and claw each other. They both used rapid biju damas and perfectly countered their attacks.

Obito: MY 9 TAILS HAS COMPLETE CHAKRA. IT SHOULD BE TWICE AS STRONG AS NARUTO! UNLESS... THE FUSION OF A BIJU AND JINCHURIKI'S CHAKRA GIVES A SPECIAL CHAKRA STRONGER THAN EITHER WOULD BE ALONE.

Naruto used shadow clones. They threw massive ransenshurikens at the fake 9 tails. At the same time, the original used a huge biju dama and destroyed it. It was reforming until the blast nearly reached Obito. He made a barrier, and the 9 tails disappeared.

Naruto(thought): WHEN HE DEFENDED HIMSELF, HE DESTROYED HIS 9 TAILS.

Obito created all the biju. Naruto used shadow clones and had them use ransenshuriken to cut through them, and used rapid biju dama to keep them at bay. Obito started to make an army of bijus, but then, a shadow clone appeared at Obito's blind spot with ransenshuriken. He hits him with it.

Obito: WHAT ARE YOU?!

Naruto: I SAW THAT YOU COULDN'T KEEP YOUR MONSTERS WHEN YOU DEFENDED. THAT MEANS THAT YOU COULDN'T DEFEND WHILE YOU HAD THEM. ALL I HAD TO DO IS MAKE YOU FOCUS SO MUCH ON ATTACKING ME, AND THEN CATCH YOU OFF GUARD. TAKE THIS!

Naruto's ransenshuriken launched Obito away and then detonated. The blades ruined Obito's chakra system. The dimension was falling apart. Holes to the real world would form. Naruto picks up Obito.

Naruto: THIS IS WHAT MY DAD WANTED WHEN HE SEALED KURAMA INSIDE OF ME! LET'S END THIS ONCE AND FOR ALL!

Suddenly, Naruto appeared into the real world. He finds Kakashi panting.

Naruto(waving his arms in raging fashion): AGH! KAKSHI-SENSEI! YOU COULDN'T HAVE BUTTED IN AT A WORSE TIME! I WAS ABOUT TO END THIS!

Sakura: NARUTO! YOU WERE TRAPPED IN THERE! YOU SHOULD BE THANKING US! DON'T MAKE US WORRY ABOUT YOU LIKE THAT!(Sakura slugs Naruto in the head)

Hinata(thought, relieved): NARUTO! YOU'RE SAFE.

Kiba(thought, depressed): OH GREAT! HE TOOK OUT THE ENEMY LEADER. HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO RIVAL HIM NOW?

Naruto looks toward Sasuke and finds that he's exhausted while using perfect susanoo.




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I see. The fight scenes are more graphic. I like the way you made Obito seemed capable of creating things that powerful inside his dimension, plus the other characters remarks. Good job :win:
 
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