flyboyissac
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- May 27, 2012
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Bold= action
()=thoughts
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Page 1
Kakishi's group in sight
Garra: Yes!!! Were here
Sakura stares left
Sakura: what is that!?
Garra: Wh....!!!!!
Page 2
madara zooms by undetected
Garra: What the hell was that. It looks like its heading towards the 4th hokage's group
garra and sakura looks down as madara stands there
garra lands and looks over at minato
Sakura: who is this a new enemy?
Page 3
minato looks over and see naruto knocked out with a madish sad look
Sakura: 4th hokage!!!!!!!
sakura runs towards minato while running time slows down between sakura and madara
Sakura: (Madara!!!)
Madara looks at sakura and less then a second madara kicks sakura as time speeds up again
Page 4
Sakura flys towards a rocky bolder and clashes in it
With surroundings super quiet chills hits everyone spines eyes open looking at sakura
Madara: sorry but party time is over no more dancing...
Madara: fuhaha... it seems your having a hard time
Page 5
Garra: :NO: sakurrraaa!!!
Minato kunai flies by madara head, teleports to it and charges up a rasengan and hits madara
Minato jumps back and stare as the smoke clears
Garra: Minato hokage there's no time
Page 6
As the smoke clears Minato shakes with a surpries
Madara stands unhurt
Minato: impossible he took my rasengan head on
Page 7
kakashi appears behind madara he straight shot, madara blocks his back with with his staff
the kunai gets t turned into dust slowly kakashi jumps back before he hits the ground madara appears behind him with a smirk
Page 8
???: I see something unpleasant here.
???: It seems madara got to you...
Face shows
Kabuto: Sasuke!!!
Page 9
Tobirama: (Who is this a new enemy?)
Kabuto: after waking up it seems I lost my power and returned to normal
Kabuto: that only means orochimaru here as well.
Tobirama: Who are you an enemy or an ally to sasuke.
Page 10
Kabuto: I'm a.....
As talking he looks over at 2nd hokage with a surprised look
Kabuto: ohh! What do we have here
Kabuto: 2nd hokage tobirama senju
Page 11
Kabuto: (edo tensi no justu only a few know how no question this is orouchimaru's doing)
kabuto lifts his hands up and surrounds his hand in charka blade and jumps at tobirama
Tobirama:!!!
Page 12
kabuto cuts down the stakes in tobiramas back and removes them
Kabuto: now to get sasuke on his feet if possible
Tobirama asks kabuto who is he kabuto smirks
Page 13
Tusande: (What happened to naruto?)
Spiral zestu: its over for sasuke
White zestu: It seem they got you hahahah.
Spiral zestu: shut up!!!
Page 14
Madara stabs his hand threw kakashi
Page 15
Garra uses giant sand hand and grabs Minato
garra drops minato behind naruto
Garra: hurry hokage what are you doing!!!
Garra: the other kyuubi said you can save naruto by transferring the current 9 tails to naruto
Minato: Y...Yes!!! (I can still save my son)
Page 16
Madara drops kakashi and walks towards obito
Madara: obito your day is here nothing you or anybody can do to stop me at my current form
Madara: as soon as black zestu deattaches from you its over you won't last a minute over
Madara: And as so as I get my other eye its the end of this world!!!!!
Page 17
Madara stands over obito and reaches over for his eye as black zestu deattaches himself
Madara: Its over!!!
Page 18
Madara rinnegan in hands black zest u stand firm
THE END? OBITO'S DEATH?
I never ask for rep but if I did a good enough job can u rep+!?
Bold= action
()=thoughts
-------------------------------------------------------------
Page 1
Kakishi's group in sight
Garra: Yes!!! Were here
Sakura stares left
Sakura: what is that!?
Garra: Wh....!!!!!
Page 2
madara zooms by undetected
Garra: What the hell was that. It looks like its heading towards the 4th hokage's group
garra and sakura looks down as madara stands there
garra lands and looks over at minato
Sakura: who is this a new enemy?
Page 3
minato looks over and see naruto knocked out with a madish sad look
Sakura: 4th hokage!!!!!!!
sakura runs towards minato while running time slows down between sakura and madara
Sakura: (Madara!!!)
Madara looks at sakura and less then a second madara kicks sakura as time speeds up again
Page 4
Sakura flys towards a rocky bolder and clashes in it
With surroundings super quiet chills hits everyone spines eyes open looking at sakura
Madara: sorry but party time is over no more dancing...
Madara: fuhaha... it seems your having a hard time
Page 5
Garra: :NO: sakurrraaa!!!
Minato kunai flies by madara head, teleports to it and charges up a rasengan and hits madara
Minato jumps back and stare as the smoke clears
Garra: Minato hokage there's no time
Page 6
As the smoke clears Minato shakes with a surpries
Madara stands unhurt
Minato: impossible he took my rasengan head on
Page 7
kakashi appears behind madara he straight shot, madara blocks his back with with his staff
the kunai gets t turned into dust slowly kakashi jumps back before he hits the ground madara appears behind him with a smirk
Page 8
???: I see something unpleasant here.
???: It seems madara got to you...
Face shows
Kabuto: Sasuke!!!
Page 9
Tobirama: (Who is this a new enemy?)
Kabuto: after waking up it seems I lost my power and returned to normal
Kabuto: that only means orochimaru here as well.
Tobirama: Who are you an enemy or an ally to sasuke.
Page 10
Kabuto: I'm a.....
As talking he looks over at 2nd hokage with a surprised look
Kabuto: ohh! What do we have here
Kabuto: 2nd hokage tobirama senju
Page 11
Kabuto: (edo tensi no justu only a few know how no question this is orouchimaru's doing)
kabuto lifts his hands up and surrounds his hand in charka blade and jumps at tobirama
Tobirama:!!!
Page 12
kabuto cuts down the stakes in tobiramas back and removes them
Kabuto: now to get sasuke on his feet if possible
Tobirama asks kabuto who is he kabuto smirks
Page 13
Tusande: (What happened to naruto?)
Spiral zestu: its over for sasuke
White zestu: It seem they got you hahahah.
Spiral zestu: shut up!!!
Page 14
Madara stabs his hand threw kakashi
Page 15
Garra uses giant sand hand and grabs Minato
garra drops minato behind naruto
Garra: hurry hokage what are you doing!!!
Garra: the other kyuubi said you can save naruto by transferring the current 9 tails to naruto
Minato: Y...Yes!!! (I can still save my son)
Page 16
Madara drops kakashi and walks towards obito
Madara: obito your day is here nothing you or anybody can do to stop me at my current form
Madara: as soon as black zestu deattaches from you its over you won't last a minute over
Madara: And as so as I get my other eye its the end of this world!!!!!
Page 17
Madara stands over obito and reaches over for his eye as black zestu deattaches himself
Madara: Its over!!!
Page 18
Madara rinnegan in hands black zest u stand firm
THE END? OBITO'S DEATH?
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