flyboyissac
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This is is a update from my last one i made it longer i dont know bout better feedback anyone? Thank you
Page 1:
(Fighting Hashirama vs Madara)
Madara: Obito lost uh!? [But i feel enough time has past by since the juubi's revival]
Hashirama: Madara you lost everything you done up to this moment was for nothing. what are you going now?
Madara: ....
Hashirama: Madara you have to face reality things changes as time past by why are you continuing this.
Madara: Your right hashirama...
Madara: Things do change when time past by.
Hashirama: ...
Page 2
(Obito Minato Kakishi, alliance)
Minato: ...
kakishi: What are you going to Now obito your defeated will you help us finish this completely or will you still follow Madara to the end where you die for false revenge.
Obito: :'( How can i face the world, now that i Cut myself away from it i done alot to hurt the leaf and started war against the 5 nations i can never turn back now
kakishi: You can change accept that rin is dead and going for revenge isn't a way to bring her back or destroy ur feeling for rin even tho rin was your ray of light you can always find another.
Page 3
(Obito Minato Kakishi, alliance)
Alliance: what are they doing over there!?
Alliance: HEY WHAT ARE YOU DOING FINISH HIM!
Alliance: Yes finish him.
(Minato looks over)
Minato: ...
Page 4
(Obito Minato Kakishi, alliance)
Obito: Do you see kakishi they all want me dead and at this moment i cant blame.
Kakishi: We can see about that after you find out what i told you you have to change and prove to the world you changed come with us and accept your fate.
(Couple of shinobi's runs towards obito with weapons in they hands)
Minato: ...!
Minato: I cant let you do that
Alliance: he's down now's our chance.
Page 5
(Naruto)
(Naruto charging up a oddama rasengan)
Naruto: Ok now that i found him and My attack is charged
(Naruto closes his eyes for sage mode)
Naruto: :heh: time to hit him hard without him noticing
(Naruto Stops in a state of shock)
Naruto: whats happening what is this i feeling.
Page 6
Madara and Hashirama
Madara: Now that time pasted by it's time to show what i been waiting for it's already begun =D
Hashirama: what has beg...!
(Ground Shaking)
Madara its to late for anyone to turn back
(Madara deactivates susanoo and runs towards the tree)
Page 7
(Everyone)
Alliance: why is the ground turning bright it seems it no end to the light on the floor
Sasuke: What's happening... Ugh! i feel weaker like i lost a bit of strength
(Camera zooms out onto the earth Showing how bright it looks)
Minato: Ugh!!! i sense a huge compressed charkra growing
Kakishi: O_O whats happening Obito?
Obito: i dont know.
Kages Tsunada: Kage's we have to attack the tree somthing bad is happening
Page 8
(Naruto)
Naruto: Whats happening karuma?
Karuma: To tell you the truth i dont know
Naruto: :Omg:
Sasuke: NARUTO!!!
Naruto: Sasuke...!?
Sasuke: We got to do something about the tree. We lost a little bit of charkra meaning this tree is absorbing charkra still without a host controlling it
Naruto: :erm: Ok i got an idea...
Sasuke: ...!?
Page 9
(Madara while charging towards the tree looks up)
Madara: {uzamiki naruto you to late to take the real Problem seriously Obito was just a pawn to revive me}
Naruto: He running this way surely he didn't know i was up here before
Sasuke: We got to stop him it seems all of the shinobi are ready to attack the tree let them handle it.
Page 10
Naruto: Ugh! my attack what happen i didnt lose enough charkra for it to disappear the tree its.....
tsunada: everyone we have to destroy the tree completely now its taking all types of charkra
Alliance: its all his fault this is happening mabe if we kill him it will stop right?
Alliance: yes you might be right?
Minato: No your Wrong Obito no longer have control over the tree what ever happens it doing it on its own
Page 11
(The light emitting from the tree around the world starts turning Pitch black and drawing it back into it)
Page 12
Sasuke: Ok Right lets do it...
Naruto: go sasuke
Madara: its to late i win ill finish what Kaguya Ootsutsuki Failed to really do...
Madara: The time has come for me, the power that Grows every millennium
Madara: THE FORBIDDEN FRUIT
Page 1:
(Fighting Hashirama vs Madara)
Madara: Obito lost uh!? [But i feel enough time has past by since the juubi's revival]
Hashirama: Madara you lost everything you done up to this moment was for nothing. what are you going now?
Madara: ....
Hashirama: Madara you have to face reality things changes as time past by why are you continuing this.
Madara: Your right hashirama...
Madara: Things do change when time past by.
Hashirama: ...
Page 2
(Obito Minato Kakishi, alliance)
Minato: ...
kakishi: What are you going to Now obito your defeated will you help us finish this completely or will you still follow Madara to the end where you die for false revenge.
Obito: :'( How can i face the world, now that i Cut myself away from it i done alot to hurt the leaf and started war against the 5 nations i can never turn back now
kakishi: You can change accept that rin is dead and going for revenge isn't a way to bring her back or destroy ur feeling for rin even tho rin was your ray of light you can always find another.
Page 3
(Obito Minato Kakishi, alliance)
Alliance: what are they doing over there!?
Alliance: HEY WHAT ARE YOU DOING FINISH HIM!
Alliance: Yes finish him.
(Minato looks over)
Minato: ...
Page 4
(Obito Minato Kakishi, alliance)
Obito: Do you see kakishi they all want me dead and at this moment i cant blame.
Kakishi: We can see about that after you find out what i told you you have to change and prove to the world you changed come with us and accept your fate.
(Couple of shinobi's runs towards obito with weapons in they hands)
Minato: ...!
Minato: I cant let you do that
Alliance: he's down now's our chance.
Page 5
(Naruto)
(Naruto charging up a oddama rasengan)
Naruto: Ok now that i found him and My attack is charged
(Naruto closes his eyes for sage mode)
Naruto: :heh: time to hit him hard without him noticing
(Naruto Stops in a state of shock)
Naruto: whats happening what is this i feeling.
Page 6
Madara and Hashirama
Madara: Now that time pasted by it's time to show what i been waiting for it's already begun =D
Hashirama: what has beg...!
(Ground Shaking)
Madara its to late for anyone to turn back
(Madara deactivates susanoo and runs towards the tree)
Page 7
(Everyone)
Alliance: why is the ground turning bright it seems it no end to the light on the floor
Sasuke: What's happening... Ugh! i feel weaker like i lost a bit of strength
(Camera zooms out onto the earth Showing how bright it looks)
Minato: Ugh!!! i sense a huge compressed charkra growing
Kakishi: O_O whats happening Obito?
Obito: i dont know.
Kages Tsunada: Kage's we have to attack the tree somthing bad is happening
Page 8
(Naruto)
Naruto: Whats happening karuma?
Karuma: To tell you the truth i dont know
Naruto: :Omg:
Sasuke: NARUTO!!!
Naruto: Sasuke...!?
Sasuke: We got to do something about the tree. We lost a little bit of charkra meaning this tree is absorbing charkra still without a host controlling it
Naruto: :erm: Ok i got an idea...
Sasuke: ...!?
Page 9
(Madara while charging towards the tree looks up)
Madara: {uzamiki naruto you to late to take the real Problem seriously Obito was just a pawn to revive me}
Naruto: He running this way surely he didn't know i was up here before
Sasuke: We got to stop him it seems all of the shinobi are ready to attack the tree let them handle it.
Page 10
Naruto: Ugh! my attack what happen i didnt lose enough charkra for it to disappear the tree its.....
tsunada: everyone we have to destroy the tree completely now its taking all types of charkra
Alliance: its all his fault this is happening mabe if we kill him it will stop right?
Alliance: yes you might be right?
Minato: No your Wrong Obito no longer have control over the tree what ever happens it doing it on its own
Page 11
(The light emitting from the tree around the world starts turning Pitch black and drawing it back into it)
Page 12
Sasuke: Ok Right lets do it...
Naruto: go sasuke
Madara: its to late i win ill finish what Kaguya Ootsutsuki Failed to really do...
Madara: The time has come for me, the power that Grows every millennium
Madara: THE FORBIDDEN FRUIT
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