[Predictions] Naruto Manga 694: "The Meaning of Revolution"

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Editor's text: What does it means for Sasuke to be Hokage?

Naruto: Enough Sasuke! Let's start this already!

Sasuke: Before we start, Let me tell you what my revolution is about.

Naruto: As you wish....

Sasuke: You said my brother told you that a Hokage is not one who has strength, He is the one who protects his people.

Naruto mutely stared at Sasuke.,With a cold breeze swinging his hair.

Sasuke: As you already know, My goal is to change the way this current Shinobi system works. As a result, I've already captured all the tailed beast. The one who is lying in my way is

Naruto: ME!

Scene changes to Hagoromo Kakashi and Sakura.

Kakashi(In a sad tone) : Is there something we can do about those two?

Hagoromo: All we can do now is wait. They both have chosen their own way, Besides none of us has much power or Chakra left to do something about them.

Kakashi: What about this girl(Points towards Sakura)

Hagoromo: She is trapped in an eternal Genjutsu. You can say she is trapped in Mugen Tsukoyomi...

Kakashi: Does it mean that she cannot be released until...

Hagoromo: Until the caster releases the Genjutsu.

Kakashi: Which means..

Hagoromo: Sasuke has to come back.

Kakashi:......

Hagoromo: Don't worry, I have seen Naruto for some time now. He has the ability to change people's mindset. I'm pretty sure he will bring Sasuke back.

Kakashi: Until then?

Hagoromo: Let me tell you my story..

Hagoromo: As you must be knowing, I had two sons. Indra, who was the ancestor of the Uchiha Clan and Ashura, the ancestor of the Senju and Uzumaki clan. They fought due to me. I made Ashura my successor, and that's what made all the difference.

Kakashi:[The famous brothers that fought due to one's betrayal]

Hagoromo:They have transmigrated into you two students, Naruto and Sasuke

Kakashi: What!???! Really?

Hagoromo: Indeed!




With Naruto and Sasuke

Sasuke: My goal is to bring about a change in this Ninja world..To shun all hatred in this world and bring peace.

Naruto(smirks): Do you think killing me, The Five Kage, The tailed beast and starting a revolution will bring Peace? People before you have tried this and failed. What's the difference between you and Kaguya then? You both desired for destruction and then rebuild the Shinobi world of ours...

Sasuke: My ways are better then hers.

Naruto(Opens his eyes, Revealing sage mode with Kyuubi eyes): Then prove it!

Sasuke(smirks): [So all this time he was gathering that energy of his Huh?] Certainly I will

Naruto enters his Rikudou mode

Naruto: Sasuke, long ago when you left I made a promise to someone. And I NEVER GO BACK ON MY WORD! I will bring you back to Konoha, and this time we will walk together as Team-mates not as Rivals.

Sasuke: Hmph! As I will!

On the last panel, The both run towards each other while yelling their names

Editor's text: The Final fight is about to begin!

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Valiant attempt but poor outcome. The dialogue was stale. The characters were completely unlike themselves. And realistically I don't see kishi going back to explain anything to kakashi. Not at this point in time. Especially considering he touched on the whole reincarnation thing in kakshi's presence last chapter. Its just a poor and result man. You should try rereading the previous chapter as you do these and feel where the story goes instead of free balling it.
 

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Valiant attempt but poor outcome. The dialogue was stale. The characters were completely unlike themselves. And realistically I don't see kishi going back to explain anything to kakashi. Not at this point in time. Especially considering he touched on the whole reincarnation thing in kakshi's presence last chapter. Its just a poor and result man. You should try rereading the previous chapter as you do these and feel where the story goes instead of free balling it.
I'll try again inspiration Lol
 

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I skimmed first but went back to read through and I realize there are some fine details out of place...kakashi knowing the ashura Indra story but not knowing about sasuke and naruto being their reincarnations, naruto gathering nature energy also seems unnecessary.
 

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It also lacks imagination. You repeat a lot of the stuff from last chapter. Say what you think sasuke's plan is because as it stands it has no resolution. Say what his definition of homage is and not just take about killing the kage.there is no new info in the prediction as it is now. That just ngates the purpose of the post.
 
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