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This is s conclusion to my 674 Pred " Obito's redemption/Konoha's white Wolf.
Here we go.
* First page shows a silver/white wolf susanno, with Kakashi standing inside of it in a posture simmilar to Gai-s start of Night Guy. Condensed raiton chakra starts revolving faster and faster, spreading from the wolf's limbs and enveloping the whole susanno in raiton armor, chakra is spinning so fast that it's producing thunder like sounds
Kamui vortex in susanno's eye is also contributing the SFX, violently increasing its speed. Kakashi jumps off leaving a small crater on the ground beneath, flash of white light is seen few meters from SZ*
Hiruzen/SA/Kages: *Confused*
Tsunade: Sakumo!?
*SZ avoids Kakashi's opener, and backs away*
SZ:Uh? *Turns to face Kakashi* Mokuton: Hijutsu: Jukai Koutan
*I got to keep him at long range, if he closes the gap, I'm screwed. I will not dissappoint you Madara-sama*
*Kamui vortex appears behind SZ, Susanno wolf head is seen with hundreds of raiton chakra hounds emerging from it*
Kakashi: Raiton: Dogou no Hekireki! (Angry Roars of Thunder)
*Hundreds of raiton hounds are impaling and electrocuting SZ from all directions, and producing deafening Thunder strikes SZ is shown doing a Moku Bunshin and leaving the clone to take the rest of the attack. The Moku Bunshin disperses, last panel shows SZ fairly burned by the immense raiton attack*
Kakashi:He is endurable, hmm.
Raiton Bunshin!
*Kakashi's clone turns to a Raiton Hound Dog and dissapears underground*
*Page shows SA utterly confused*
Hiruzen: It is Kakashi! But how could he possibly awaken...?
Ay: Is that Susanno?
Tsunade: Yeah.
Sakura: Yes, Obito gave him his sharingan before dying, we destroyed the rinnegan.
Hiruzen: *Kakashi....*
*SZ yet again approaches*
SZ: Space Style:Meteor Barrage
*Panel shows SA looking up, anticipating the attack. Some are running away, SZ just sits down and starts laughing like a maniac*
Kakashi: This guy is the one that was controling Obito back than!
Hiruzen: Kakashi! I will distract him, go!
Kakashi: Understood
Hiruzen: Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu
*SZ jumps 20 feet in the air holding his ass*
SZ: ach ach ach, it buuurns, your mean!
Hiruzen : Kakashi, now!
*Before mentioned raiton dog emerges near Kakashi who is now outof susano, holding s raikiti in each hand, the dog turns to a bunshin.
Kakashi/Kakashi Bunshin:Raikiri/Suiton: Mizo no Tatsumaki.
* 2 attacks merge, creating a huge water tornado spiked with raiton chakra hitting SZ head on*
Hiruzen: He made it?
*SZ shows up, all messed up with visible electric currents all around his body*
SZ: Thanks! I needed a shower.
Kakashi: That is enough!
SZ:Not yet.
Mokuton: Hijutsu: Kajukai Korin!
Hiruzen: Kakashi! That is the 1sts genjutsu pollen, try attacking from a high altitude!
*Hiruzen looks up and sees Kakashi already in mid air, in activated susanno*
Kakashi: Susanno:Kamui!
* Susanno's black void eye starts spinning in uncomprehendable speed creating a humming like sound, sucking in Kajukai Korin instantly, SZ manages to avoid the attack but the upper left side of his mask gets sucked in, revealing a Konoha headband*
*Kakashi deactivates the susanno and lands on some rock debris visibly exhausted, kneeling on one knee, SZ lands across him, sits down and crosses his hands*
Kakashi: Huh?
SZ: I wont play anymore!
Mokuton: Anbureikaburudomu
*A thick dome envelops SZ, he starts yelling from the inside*
SZ: Go away!
Kakashi: *This guy is wrecking my nerves, he than stands up and starts weaving handsigns*
Doton: Dochu Eigyu no Jutsu
*He vanishes underground, the panel is showing his index fingers put together while he acummulates immense raiton chakra to his hands*
Kakashi: Oi Zetsu, still interested in human digestive tract and pooping?
*SZ excitedly opens a small hole in the wooden dome, but Kakashi is nowhere to be seen?*
SZ: You will show me?!
Kakashi: I will make you!
* Kakashi bursts up trough the wooden dome, white raiton chakra flash occurs; the dome is blown to smitherins, SZ is seen flying up lifelessly*
Raiton: Sennen Goroshi (1000 years of death)
* SZ is seen falling, Kakashi jumps up towards him with crossed hands
Kaimon: Kai! ( 1st gate, gate of opening release)
* Grabs onto SZ turning him face down*
Omote Renge: Kage Buyou ( Front Lotus: Shadow of the dancing Leaf)
*They hurl into the ground with immense speed, last panel is showing Yamato taichou unconcious near nearly dead kakashi. SZ is shown all around them broke in pieces*
Here we go.
* First page shows a silver/white wolf susanno, with Kakashi standing inside of it in a posture simmilar to Gai-s start of Night Guy. Condensed raiton chakra starts revolving faster and faster, spreading from the wolf's limbs and enveloping the whole susanno in raiton armor, chakra is spinning so fast that it's producing thunder like sounds
Kamui vortex in susanno's eye is also contributing the SFX, violently increasing its speed. Kakashi jumps off leaving a small crater on the ground beneath, flash of white light is seen few meters from SZ*
Hiruzen/SA/Kages: *Confused*
Tsunade: Sakumo!?
*SZ avoids Kakashi's opener, and backs away*
SZ:Uh? *Turns to face Kakashi* Mokuton: Hijutsu: Jukai Koutan
*I got to keep him at long range, if he closes the gap, I'm screwed. I will not dissappoint you Madara-sama*
*Kamui vortex appears behind SZ, Susanno wolf head is seen with hundreds of raiton chakra hounds emerging from it*
Kakashi: Raiton: Dogou no Hekireki! (Angry Roars of Thunder)
*Hundreds of raiton hounds are impaling and electrocuting SZ from all directions, and producing deafening Thunder strikes SZ is shown doing a Moku Bunshin and leaving the clone to take the rest of the attack. The Moku Bunshin disperses, last panel shows SZ fairly burned by the immense raiton attack*
Kakashi:He is endurable, hmm.
Raiton Bunshin!
*Kakashi's clone turns to a Raiton Hound Dog and dissapears underground*
*Page shows SA utterly confused*
Hiruzen: It is Kakashi! But how could he possibly awaken...?
Ay: Is that Susanno?
Tsunade: Yeah.
Sakura: Yes, Obito gave him his sharingan before dying, we destroyed the rinnegan.
Hiruzen: *Kakashi....*
*SZ yet again approaches*
SZ: Space Style:Meteor Barrage
*Panel shows SA looking up, anticipating the attack. Some are running away, SZ just sits down and starts laughing like a maniac*
Kakashi: This guy is the one that was controling Obito back than!
Hiruzen: Kakashi! I will distract him, go!
Kakashi: Understood
Hiruzen: Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu
*SZ jumps 20 feet in the air holding his ass*
SZ: ach ach ach, it buuurns, your mean!
Hiruzen : Kakashi, now!
*Before mentioned raiton dog emerges near Kakashi who is now outof susano, holding s raikiti in each hand, the dog turns to a bunshin.
Kakashi/Kakashi Bunshin:Raikiri/Suiton: Mizo no Tatsumaki.
* 2 attacks merge, creating a huge water tornado spiked with raiton chakra hitting SZ head on*
Hiruzen: He made it?
*SZ shows up, all messed up with visible electric currents all around his body*
SZ: Thanks! I needed a shower.
Kakashi: That is enough!
SZ:Not yet.
Mokuton: Hijutsu: Kajukai Korin!
Hiruzen: Kakashi! That is the 1sts genjutsu pollen, try attacking from a high altitude!
*Hiruzen looks up and sees Kakashi already in mid air, in activated susanno*
Kakashi: Susanno:Kamui!
* Susanno's black void eye starts spinning in uncomprehendable speed creating a humming like sound, sucking in Kajukai Korin instantly, SZ manages to avoid the attack but the upper left side of his mask gets sucked in, revealing a Konoha headband*
*Kakashi deactivates the susanno and lands on some rock debris visibly exhausted, kneeling on one knee, SZ lands across him, sits down and crosses his hands*
Kakashi: Huh?
SZ: I wont play anymore!
Mokuton: Anbureikaburudomu
*A thick dome envelops SZ, he starts yelling from the inside*
SZ: Go away!
Kakashi: *This guy is wrecking my nerves, he than stands up and starts weaving handsigns*
Doton: Dochu Eigyu no Jutsu
*He vanishes underground, the panel is showing his index fingers put together while he acummulates immense raiton chakra to his hands*
Kakashi: Oi Zetsu, still interested in human digestive tract and pooping?
*SZ excitedly opens a small hole in the wooden dome, but Kakashi is nowhere to be seen?*
SZ: You will show me?!
Kakashi: I will make you!
* Kakashi bursts up trough the wooden dome, white raiton chakra flash occurs; the dome is blown to smitherins, SZ is seen flying up lifelessly*
Raiton: Sennen Goroshi (1000 years of death)
* SZ is seen falling, Kakashi jumps up towards him with crossed hands
Kaimon: Kai! ( 1st gate, gate of opening release)
* Grabs onto SZ turning him face down*
Omote Renge: Kage Buyou ( Front Lotus: Shadow of the dancing Leaf)
*They hurl into the ground with immense speed, last panel is showing Yamato taichou unconcious near nearly dead kakashi. SZ is shown all around them broke in pieces*
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