Uzumaki Menma
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Naruto and Sasuke awaken from their temporary slumber. Meanwhile, Gai has given up his life to try and defeat Madara, but his attack failed, leaving him at the mercy of the old Uchiha who is countered by the arrival of Naruto!!!
Madara: Hmm... I don't know what happened to you Uzumaki brat but it is a peculiar thing indeed. Obito, did you do something to him in that other world of yours?
Obito: [Next to Kakashi] [Shakes Head] Something else has occurred with him and it's beyond me. Heh, perhaps it's beyond even you!
Madara: Tch!
Obito: You can feel it can't you?! This new aura that follows him, as if it's a lingering soul from some beautiful past meant to protect him! Give up! You're about done now anyway and Naruto didn't even have to do anything to you! It's over, Madara!
Madara: [Silent] IT'S NOT OVER YET!!!
Madara begins scrambling up the Shinju, trying to reach it's peak and consume the God Fruit.
Sakura: He's going for the --- !!!
Kakashi: Shit! We've gotta stop him! I'll use Kamui!
Minato: No! You're low on chakra! It can kill you if you try and use it again!
Kakashi: But it's not like you can use the Flying Thunder God! Wait, Obito! Can you try?!
Obito: I don't have the stamina either. I had to transfer some of the Bijuu over to Naruto, and because of I'm not adept in Fuuinjutsu, it took a lot out of me.
Kakashi: Can you get to him Lee?!
Rock Lee: I can try! But he's so far away! I'll have to open the fifth gate!
Naruto: [Smiles] All of you, calm down.
Kakashi, Obito, Sakura, Minato, Rock Lee: ?!!!
Naruto: I've got this.
Madara flips over roots and dodges crevices as he approaches the top of the Shinju. Just as he nears the flower bud, a massive explosion occurs directly on his spot!
Naruto: [In a new chakra cloak, kicking Madara in his back] [A panel shows Madara's back breaking, blood flying out his mouth] Not so fast! [Naruto back-flips in front of Madara and swings his foot upward kicking Madara back down the tree]
Madara: Guh! This brat!
Naruto races towards Madara, flying, splitting the wood with his intense speed. He pulls his arm back creating a Rasengan as he plummets towards his foe.
Naruto: Rasen Taio (Spiral Sun)!!! [Huge Rasengan Size of Spirit bomb]
Madara: !!!!!!?
Naruto: Take this!!! [Throws it]
Madara: [Terrified] [Smiles sadistically] [Absorbs it with Rinnegan] HAHAHAHAHAHA! GOOD TRY! [Lands on Ground]
Naruto: [Lands in front of him] [Turns his back to Madara] It's over!!!
Madara: ?!! [Coughs and blood flies out of his mouth everywhere] [His other arm is destroyed and a leg too as his body begins to self destruct leaving only a mangled thing in it's ruin] What... the hell... did you just do?!!
Naruto: [Holds up hand] [Shows Sun symbol] I can tap into chakra with this seal. I made my Rasengan react to your sinister chakra. All that's left of you is this pitiful state...
Madara: [Wheezing]
Naruto: It's over, Madara!
Madara: Damn you!
Elsewhere
Karin: Where are we going, Sasuke?!
Sasuke: We need to get to Naruto's location. Madara plans to eat the God Fruit and become like Kaguya.
Orochimaru: [Turns to look at Sasuke] You know about her?
Sasuke: Yes. [Presses lips into thin line]
Orochimaru: [Thinking] With the way he's become, I'll have to go to plan B. It's always good to have a back-up plan! I would've never believed my trump card could stay so hidden after all this time... and soon, I'll have a body greater than that of even yours... Sasuke-kun! [Flicks Tongue Out]
Juugo: [Watching Orochimaru intently]
Karin: [Stops surprised] Ahh, wait! Madara's chakra; it feels extremely low!
Suigetsu: Eh?! Than is he already defeated?! Well damn! We sat around and did shit!
Kabuto: I can feel it too. He's in critical condition. We should take advantage of this situation and seal him for good.
Orochimaru: [Shocked]
Sasuke: Hmph. [Closes Eyes] Naruto, what's going on over there?
Naruto: Eh?! Sasuke? Wow, this is weird. Are you in my head?!
Sasuke: Just answer the damn question baka! Are thoughts became linked when we joined hands with Hagoromo...
Naruto: [Smiling] Ohh, okay! Yeah, I took him out. He tried to break for the super fruit, but I got him. You're late by the way!!!
Sasuke: Hmph. I have to take care of some business before I get there, so, hold on! You know what's coming next, right. If Madara is truly finished...!!!
Naruto: [Beaming] Heh. Hell yeah!
Sasuke: Then prepare yourself!
(Back to group) It seems we are not needed anymore. We'll go and help the Shinobi Alliance with their problem. Also, I have to pay back that First Hokage for something he did for me. After that, we'll meet up with Naruto's group and end this damn war.
Orochimaru: [Serious Face] Alright then. Let's get a move on shall we.
Juugo: . . .
Everyone jumps past Orochimaru who stares after them. He jumps behind them, following loosely as he contemplates his next move eagerly.
Orochimaru: [Slowly lags behind group] [Eyes close]
Madara: ?!!! [Pulled into black abyss]
Orochimaru: [Appears in front of Madara] Listen well....
Back to Naruto
Naruto: [Walking over to Kakashi's group] Alright! Let's seal him and go get some Ramen--- !!!
A massive explosion occurs behind Naruto who spins around quickly. Madara stands back on two feet, seemingly healed, with dark marks all over his body
Madara: It's not over yet!!!
Obito: That's Orochimaru's ... ?!
Kakashi: The curse mark?!
Sakura: That's right! It sorta looks like the one Sasuke had, but it's somehow different!
Naruto: Madara!!! [Back in new Bijuu Mode cloak]
Kurama: Woah, Naruto! Be careful. His chakra is sinister! It feels even darker than what it used to.
Shukaku: Yeahh~ and that Sasuke-brat when he was younger and pulled this thingie out too --- it feels eerily similar to that, but somehow different...
Gyuuki: Regardless, don't get too cocky now that you have this new form! Remember what Hagoromo-dono said! It won't last long since you don't have us physically!!!
Madara: Incredible! Now, let's try this again shall we? [In mind] I'll play your game for now little snake. [Panel zooms out and focuses on neck to see a new Curse Mark]
Orochimaru: [Smiling] Kukukukuku, it's my time now!
Orochimaru begins to make his move! What is his new plan? And why is he helping Madara? Please continue to keep reading Naruto!
Madara: Hmm... I don't know what happened to you Uzumaki brat but it is a peculiar thing indeed. Obito, did you do something to him in that other world of yours?
Obito: [Next to Kakashi] [Shakes Head] Something else has occurred with him and it's beyond me. Heh, perhaps it's beyond even you!
Madara: Tch!
Obito: You can feel it can't you?! This new aura that follows him, as if it's a lingering soul from some beautiful past meant to protect him! Give up! You're about done now anyway and Naruto didn't even have to do anything to you! It's over, Madara!
Madara: [Silent] IT'S NOT OVER YET!!!
Madara begins scrambling up the Shinju, trying to reach it's peak and consume the God Fruit.
Sakura: He's going for the --- !!!
Kakashi: Shit! We've gotta stop him! I'll use Kamui!
Minato: No! You're low on chakra! It can kill you if you try and use it again!
Kakashi: But it's not like you can use the Flying Thunder God! Wait, Obito! Can you try?!
Obito: I don't have the stamina either. I had to transfer some of the Bijuu over to Naruto, and because of I'm not adept in Fuuinjutsu, it took a lot out of me.
Kakashi: Can you get to him Lee?!
Rock Lee: I can try! But he's so far away! I'll have to open the fifth gate!
Naruto: [Smiles] All of you, calm down.
Kakashi, Obito, Sakura, Minato, Rock Lee: ?!!!
Naruto: I've got this.
Madara flips over roots and dodges crevices as he approaches the top of the Shinju. Just as he nears the flower bud, a massive explosion occurs directly on his spot!
Naruto: [In a new chakra cloak, kicking Madara in his back] [A panel shows Madara's back breaking, blood flying out his mouth] Not so fast! [Naruto back-flips in front of Madara and swings his foot upward kicking Madara back down the tree]
Madara: Guh! This brat!
Naruto races towards Madara, flying, splitting the wood with his intense speed. He pulls his arm back creating a Rasengan as he plummets towards his foe.
Naruto: Rasen Taio (Spiral Sun)!!! [Huge Rasengan Size of Spirit bomb]
Madara: !!!!!!?
Naruto: Take this!!! [Throws it]
Madara: [Terrified] [Smiles sadistically] [Absorbs it with Rinnegan] HAHAHAHAHAHA! GOOD TRY! [Lands on Ground]
Naruto: [Lands in front of him] [Turns his back to Madara] It's over!!!
Madara: ?!! [Coughs and blood flies out of his mouth everywhere] [His other arm is destroyed and a leg too as his body begins to self destruct leaving only a mangled thing in it's ruin] What... the hell... did you just do?!!
Naruto: [Holds up hand] [Shows Sun symbol] I can tap into chakra with this seal. I made my Rasengan react to your sinister chakra. All that's left of you is this pitiful state...
Madara: [Wheezing]
Naruto: It's over, Madara!
Madara: Damn you!
Elsewhere
Karin: Where are we going, Sasuke?!
Sasuke: We need to get to Naruto's location. Madara plans to eat the God Fruit and become like Kaguya.
Orochimaru: [Turns to look at Sasuke] You know about her?
Sasuke: Yes. [Presses lips into thin line]
Orochimaru: [Thinking] With the way he's become, I'll have to go to plan B. It's always good to have a back-up plan! I would've never believed my trump card could stay so hidden after all this time... and soon, I'll have a body greater than that of even yours... Sasuke-kun! [Flicks Tongue Out]
Juugo: [Watching Orochimaru intently]
Karin: [Stops surprised] Ahh, wait! Madara's chakra; it feels extremely low!
Suigetsu: Eh?! Than is he already defeated?! Well damn! We sat around and did shit!
Kabuto: I can feel it too. He's in critical condition. We should take advantage of this situation and seal him for good.
Orochimaru: [Shocked]
Sasuke: Hmph. [Closes Eyes] Naruto, what's going on over there?
Naruto: Eh?! Sasuke? Wow, this is weird. Are you in my head?!
Sasuke: Just answer the damn question baka! Are thoughts became linked when we joined hands with Hagoromo...
Naruto: [Smiling] Ohh, okay! Yeah, I took him out. He tried to break for the super fruit, but I got him. You're late by the way!!!
Sasuke: Hmph. I have to take care of some business before I get there, so, hold on! You know what's coming next, right. If Madara is truly finished...!!!
Naruto: [Beaming] Heh. Hell yeah!
Sasuke: Then prepare yourself!
(Back to group) It seems we are not needed anymore. We'll go and help the Shinobi Alliance with their problem. Also, I have to pay back that First Hokage for something he did for me. After that, we'll meet up with Naruto's group and end this damn war.
Orochimaru: [Serious Face] Alright then. Let's get a move on shall we.
Juugo: . . .
Everyone jumps past Orochimaru who stares after them. He jumps behind them, following loosely as he contemplates his next move eagerly.
Orochimaru: [Slowly lags behind group] [Eyes close]
Madara: ?!!! [Pulled into black abyss]
Orochimaru: [Appears in front of Madara] Listen well....
Back to Naruto
Naruto: [Walking over to Kakashi's group] Alright! Let's seal him and go get some Ramen--- !!!
A massive explosion occurs behind Naruto who spins around quickly. Madara stands back on two feet, seemingly healed, with dark marks all over his body
Madara: It's not over yet!!!
Obito: That's Orochimaru's ... ?!
Kakashi: The curse mark?!
Sakura: That's right! It sorta looks like the one Sasuke had, but it's somehow different!
Naruto: Madara!!! [Back in new Bijuu Mode cloak]
Kurama: Woah, Naruto! Be careful. His chakra is sinister! It feels even darker than what it used to.
Shukaku: Yeahh~ and that Sasuke-brat when he was younger and pulled this thingie out too --- it feels eerily similar to that, but somehow different...
Gyuuki: Regardless, don't get too cocky now that you have this new form! Remember what Hagoromo-dono said! It won't last long since you don't have us physically!!!
Madara: Incredible! Now, let's try this again shall we? [In mind] I'll play your game for now little snake. [Panel zooms out and focuses on neck to see a new Curse Mark]
Orochimaru: [Smiling] Kukukukuku, it's my time now!
Orochimaru begins to make his move! What is his new plan? And why is he helping Madara? Please continue to keep reading Naruto!
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