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I messed up the section last time so here it is in the right one....
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Legend-
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[] - Actions
I know it's too big,but that's my short version,lol. I still have some more from where I left,but that will be too big,as it's actually quite a big prediction anyways. So do you want me to do more? VOTE the poll as well.
Sequel of above is up -
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Legend-
{} - Thoughts
[] - Actions
Chapter 664 - True Despair
{A mysterious figure approaches Sasuke.....
.....Madara about to crash Kakashi's party}
(The scene starts with Kakashi,Minato,Obito and Black Zetsu)
Minato : {Something is not right....I can feel it...it's as if....} Naruto....
Kakashi : {Sensei is not like his usual self,and I am just too tired as well,with things going like this....} Dammit! We can't hit him,unless we are ready to hurt Obito. [breathing heavily]
Obito : [breathing heavily]{Damn,for me to be controlled like this!,heh,well I guess it's as they say,"life comes full circle in the end",(Shocked!!)Tsk,what's this ? Naruto's and Sasuke's chakra are gone,it's as if they just....} Kakashi,Sensei...forget about my safety and just destroy "My Rinnegan" and......
[Madara Suddenly lands near the company]
Madara : What do you mean by "My Rinnegan",heh Obito?
Minato\Kakashi\Obito : {Shocked} Shit!...
Obito : You bastard,you just became like me and.....
[Gaara along with Naruto and Sakura land beside Minato and Kakashi]
Minato/Kakashi : {Shocked!!} Naruto!!!{shout}
Sakura : his heart beat has nearly stopped.We need to hurry....
Gaara : Fourth,Kurama said that you can save Naruto using your other half that's inside you so please.....
Madara : Other half,you say? Hmm,interesting!! So you divided the Yin-Yang part of that beast and sealed one half inside yourself.
Gaara/Sakura : {Surprised and Shocked} You were here,dammit!......
Madara : Not noticing me at all.Well I gues,in your condition even I would've failed to notice anyone else either.Anyway I can't allow you all to do as you please,so....
[Madara uses the same jutsu to bind them of their movement completely,just like Sasuke,to stop them from healing Naruto at all]
Minato/Kakashi/Gaara/Sakura : !!! What the hell !!!?
(Scene switches to Sasuke and Mysterious figure)
??? : To think even you were put in this condition,I made a big mistake of Reviving him.(Figure revealed to be Kabuto)
[Kabuto starts healing Sasuke,but quickly realises it's of no use.]
Kabuto : Dammit!,no choice then..
[/B][Kabuto uses chakra scraples and stops the pain sensation completely,then concentrate solely on healing and recovering Sasuke's pierced heart][/B]
(Karin,Suigetsu and Jugo arrive near him)
Karin : What the hell are you....?Get away from him.{shouts}
Kabuto : Just calm down and come here quick,nothing is making him better,we might need your chakra.
Karin/Jugo/Suigetsu : !!!!
[Karin runs towards sasuke and starts healing him alongside Kabuto]
Karin : It's no use,he is not in the position to bite my hand at all.{shocked}[Quickly places her head on Sasuke's chest]No sign of life,no heartbeat at all. [She cuts her hand and pour a little blood on Sasuke's mouth] That should work dammit. [She starts CPR treatment immediately] Nothing is working [She concentrate all of her chakra in healing with no results].Shit,Shit,Shit..........
Suigetsu : {It's too late,he is already dead} Karin stop [Karin continuously kept on healing sasuke ignoring Suigetsu ,in her shocked state] KARIN !!! {shouts}
Karin : {Comes out of shocked with tears in her eyes}...
Suigetsu : It's too late,he is gone...
(Scene changes to Madara )
Madara : So where were we? Ah right,"My Rinnegan".
Obito : Bastard,you killed Naruto and Sasuke...
Sakura : {Shocked!! Sasuke too} It can't be....{remembers when Naruto told sasuke that if he dies,they both die} No that can't be true...[tears starts flowing from her eyes]
[Madara ignoring everyone,comes near Obito,whom BZ held in leash,and take his eyes out]
Obito : AAAAAHHHHH !!!!! {Shouts in Pain}
Minato : {Dammit,can't move or perform even a sigle jutsu,not even Hirashin} Obito......
[Obito falls on ground,due to pain and becomes still,like a corpse and BZ finally comes out]
Madara : Hmm,must be quite a deja vu for him,huh.[looks at naruto] It seems that kid is finally dead,so I can let you all go[releases his jutsu]
Gaara : This is not the reality...
Kakashi : Madara you'll pay. KAMUI.....
[Madara dodges KAMUI,thanks to his reaction time and speed and suddenly appear on Kakashi's side in anti-parallel position]
Madara : As much as you are a skilled one,but without the Kyubi cloak you are not so good at using the Kamui and still nothing compared to Obito.So begone pest...
[Madara pierces Kakashi's heart with his staff before he could even react. kakashi falls down dead.]
Minato : You bastard,take this....[Minato comes with Rasengan using FTG]
[Madara evades Minato's FTG and pierces him at all of his pressure points,immobilizing him completely]
Madara : I can completely erase you if I like,but that would be totally boring. I like you to suffer a little and remember that you,as a failure,failed to protect your 3 students and even your son.
Minato : [Looks at Naruto,Kakshi and Obito] Shit,Shit,Shit !!!......
Gaara : Madara,I won't let you go any further. SAND TSUNAMI!!...
[Madara evades the giant sand tsunami coming at his direction and suddenly appears infront of Gaara kicking him in his stomach with a knee,absorbing his chakra simultaneously,just so to leave him barely alive and unconscious]
Madara : For you to become a Kazekage with that level of skill and in that age,is a proof that the sand village is full of pathetic weaklings.
Madara [looks at Sakura and comes near her walking] : Now that's the look of "TRUE DESPAIR".
[Madara absorbs her little chakra as she falls barely alive,unable to move,with sadness and despair]
[ CHAPTER ENDS WITH AUTHOR'S LINE -"NO WEAKNESS AND TOTALLY BRUTAL,WHAT WILL S.A. DO WITHOUT THEIR HOPE !!?
{A mysterious figure approaches Sasuke.....
.....Madara about to crash Kakashi's party}
(The scene starts with Kakashi,Minato,Obito and Black Zetsu)
Minato : {Something is not right....I can feel it...it's as if....} Naruto....
Kakashi : {Sensei is not like his usual self,and I am just too tired as well,with things going like this....} Dammit! We can't hit him,unless we are ready to hurt Obito. [breathing heavily]
Obito : [breathing heavily]{Damn,for me to be controlled like this!,heh,well I guess it's as they say,"life comes full circle in the end",(Shocked!!)Tsk,what's this ? Naruto's and Sasuke's chakra are gone,it's as if they just....} Kakashi,Sensei...forget about my safety and just destroy "My Rinnegan" and......
[Madara Suddenly lands near the company]
Madara : What do you mean by "My Rinnegan",heh Obito?
Minato\Kakashi\Obito : {Shocked} Shit!...
Obito : You bastard,you just became like me and.....
[Gaara along with Naruto and Sakura land beside Minato and Kakashi]
Minato/Kakashi : {Shocked!!} Naruto!!!{shout}
Sakura : his heart beat has nearly stopped.We need to hurry....
Gaara : Fourth,Kurama said that you can save Naruto using your other half that's inside you so please.....
Madara : Other half,you say? Hmm,interesting!! So you divided the Yin-Yang part of that beast and sealed one half inside yourself.
Gaara/Sakura : {Surprised and Shocked} You were here,dammit!......
Madara : Not noticing me at all.Well I gues,in your condition even I would've failed to notice anyone else either.Anyway I can't allow you all to do as you please,so....
[Madara uses the same jutsu to bind them of their movement completely,just like Sasuke,to stop them from healing Naruto at all]
Minato/Kakashi/Gaara/Sakura : !!! What the hell !!!?
(Scene switches to Sasuke and Mysterious figure)
??? : To think even you were put in this condition,I made a big mistake of Reviving him.(Figure revealed to be Kabuto)
[Kabuto starts healing Sasuke,but quickly realises it's of no use.]
Kabuto : Dammit!,no choice then..
[/B][Kabuto uses chakra scraples and stops the pain sensation completely,then concentrate solely on healing and recovering Sasuke's pierced heart][/B]
(Karin,Suigetsu and Jugo arrive near him)
Karin : What the hell are you....?Get away from him.{shouts}
Kabuto : Just calm down and come here quick,nothing is making him better,we might need your chakra.
Karin/Jugo/Suigetsu : !!!!
[Karin runs towards sasuke and starts healing him alongside Kabuto]
Karin : It's no use,he is not in the position to bite my hand at all.{shocked}[Quickly places her head on Sasuke's chest]No sign of life,no heartbeat at all. [She cuts her hand and pour a little blood on Sasuke's mouth] That should work dammit. [She starts CPR treatment immediately] Nothing is working [She concentrate all of her chakra in healing with no results].Shit,Shit,Shit..........
Suigetsu : {It's too late,he is already dead} Karin stop [Karin continuously kept on healing sasuke ignoring Suigetsu ,in her shocked state] KARIN !!! {shouts}
Karin : {Comes out of shocked with tears in her eyes}...
Suigetsu : It's too late,he is gone...
(Scene changes to Madara )
Madara : So where were we? Ah right,"My Rinnegan".
Obito : Bastard,you killed Naruto and Sasuke...
Sakura : {Shocked!! Sasuke too} It can't be....{remembers when Naruto told sasuke that if he dies,they both die} No that can't be true...[tears starts flowing from her eyes]
[Madara ignoring everyone,comes near Obito,whom BZ held in leash,and take his eyes out]
Obito : AAAAAHHHHH !!!!! {Shouts in Pain}
Minato : {Dammit,can't move or perform even a sigle jutsu,not even Hirashin} Obito......
[Obito falls on ground,due to pain and becomes still,like a corpse and BZ finally comes out]
Madara : Hmm,must be quite a deja vu for him,huh.[looks at naruto] It seems that kid is finally dead,so I can let you all go[releases his jutsu]
Gaara : This is not the reality...
Kakashi : Madara you'll pay. KAMUI.....
[Madara dodges KAMUI,thanks to his reaction time and speed and suddenly appear on Kakashi's side in anti-parallel position]
Madara : As much as you are a skilled one,but without the Kyubi cloak you are not so good at using the Kamui and still nothing compared to Obito.So begone pest...
[Madara pierces Kakashi's heart with his staff before he could even react. kakashi falls down dead.]
Minato : You bastard,take this....[Minato comes with Rasengan using FTG]
[Madara evades Minato's FTG and pierces him at all of his pressure points,immobilizing him completely]
Madara : I can completely erase you if I like,but that would be totally boring. I like you to suffer a little and remember that you,as a failure,failed to protect your 3 students and even your son.
Minato : [Looks at Naruto,Kakshi and Obito] Shit,Shit,Shit !!!......
Gaara : Madara,I won't let you go any further. SAND TSUNAMI!!...
[Madara evades the giant sand tsunami coming at his direction and suddenly appears infront of Gaara kicking him in his stomach with a knee,absorbing his chakra simultaneously,just so to leave him barely alive and unconscious]
Madara : For you to become a Kazekage with that level of skill and in that age,is a proof that the sand village is full of pathetic weaklings.
Madara [looks at Sakura and comes near her walking] : Now that's the look of "TRUE DESPAIR".
[Madara absorbs her little chakra as she falls barely alive,unable to move,with sadness and despair]
[ CHAPTER ENDS WITH AUTHOR'S LINE -"NO WEAKNESS AND TOTALLY BRUTAL,WHAT WILL S.A. DO WITHOUT THEIR HOPE !!?
I know it's too big,but that's my short version,lol. I still have some more from where I left,but that will be too big,as it's actually quite a big prediction anyways. So do you want me to do more? VOTE the poll as well.
Sequel of above is up -
You must be registered for see links
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