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MANGA 663 : THE LEFT EYE
KARIN : ( crying ) Sa.. Sasuke is.. Sasuke is really going to... Will really....
SAKURA : ( eyes fill with tears ) At this rate... Naruto will...
( Naruto and Sasuke are shown at the doors of afterlife )
SAKURA/KARIN : DIE-
SFX : DRIP!! SSSSFSFSSSFSS!!
( Sakura's tears falls from her eyes )
( They are about to fall on Naruto's face but are blown away by the wind as they are moving at high speed )
SFX : CLASH!!!
( Minato is shown in mid air, above Black Zetsu )
( Black Zetsu blocks Minato's kunai by a black rod emerged from Obito's right arm )
( The ground is covered by Mokuton spikes everywhere around them )
SFX : RETURN...
( Wood branch returns back to Obito's body which was rooted into the ground from his leg )
( Kakashi, knelt on the ground around the wood spikes, is shown breathing heavily )
KAKASHI : ( panting ) [ This is Obito's Mokuton ninjutsu... ]
SFX : TREMBLE!!
BZ : ( body trembling while blocking Minato's kunai ) You're quite a troublesome guy, Yondaime Hokage.
MINATO : ( serious ) .....
OBITO : St...op it!!
BZ : ( moves the rinnegan eye towards Obito's right part ) You were a fool from the start.
SFX : GROW!!
( chakra arm emerges out of Minato's back and grows in size )
BZ : ( turns his head quickly ) I- ?!!
SFX : FUUU!!!
( Minato is about to slam the chakra arm on Obito )
OBITO : ( twitches his MS eye ) ....
SFX : SWISH!! TURN!!
( Chakra arm changes path and moves from one side to grab Obito )
SFX : SLIDE!!
( Obito's leg moves a little back )
SFX : DASH!!
( Obito dashes through the chakra arm and leaps towards falling Minato )
BZ : [ You could have won your battle against your sensei if you have used your Mokuton abilities. ]
SFX : STRETCH!!
( Obito's right hand aims at Minato )
MINATO : ( moves his eye to dashing Obito on his right ) ....
SFX : SHOOT!!!
( A wooden branch is shot at Minato )
SFX : THUD!!!
( The branch is pierced into Minato's handicapped arm and partly emerges out from Minato's back )
MINATO : ?!!
( Minato is thrown in the direction of the wooden branch )
BZ : [ You cannot escape from this with your shunshin. ]
( A shadowy image of Minato is shown, the wood is shown pierced into his body, and a black rod is shown inside the wood )
( Obito holds a seal )
SFX : KRAAAHH
BZ : [ Mokuton Sashiki no Jutsu!! ]
( The jutsu activates when Minato is being thrown )
( Kyuubi chakra mode gets switched off )
MINATO : [ I can't... build up my chakra.. ]
BZ : Another half of Kyuubi's chakra has been captured. It's time for me to take your rinnegan.
SFX : BARK!!! BARK!! CHIRPPPP!!!!
( A lightning hound comes out running and is connected to Kakashi's raikiri )
SFX : LEAP!!
( The hound leaps )
BZ : ....
SFX : BARK!!!! CHIRP!!!!!! PIERCE!!!!
( Three cross panels shows the hound piercing through Minato from different perspectives )
MINATO : ?!!
BZ : [ He attacked him?!! ... to destroy those rods... Damn. ]
( Kakashi shakes his arm )
( The hound approaches BZ )
SFX : THROW!!
( A black rod is shot at the hound, dispersing it )
( Minato falls on the ground and is regenreating )
KAKASHI : [ Damn it... He's far away ]
BZ : ( moves his hand to gouge out the rinnegan ) It's over.
OBITO : ( widened his eye ) ....
( The fingers moves close to the rinnegan )
GAI : Leaf Hurricane Kick!!!
( Gai lands a high speed kick on Obito )
BZ : ?!!
GAI : ....
BZ : .....
( The kick passes through Obito's head )
GAI : ?!!
( Gai lands at a close distance from Obito )
( Kakashi stands near Gai )
KAKASHI : You're a life saver. Gai.
GAI : He's controlling Obito.
KAKASHI : He calls himself as Madara's Will. He's after the Rinnegan. Don't underestimate him.
BZ : ( holding his hand close to the eye ) ....
GAI : .....
BZ : As I said....
KAKASHI/GAI : ?!!
BZ : ( moves his hand close to the rinnegan eye ) It's over.
( Kakashi and Gai blitzes to Obito )
( The fingers moves over the rinnegan eye )
( Gai's speed increases within that small distance )
( Kakashi is shown shocked )
( Gai raises his leg to kick on the face )
BZ : I'll gouge out the rinnegan...
( Gai's leaps towards Obito and his kick makes contact but passes through Obito's head and hand )
BZ : ...in the another dimension.
( Obito's head and fingers are shown in the Kamui dimension )
GAI : ?!!
( Gai is in mid air with a shocked face )
OBITO : ?!!
( An evil smile on BZ's face )
( Gai turns in the mid air and attempts a side kick on the face from back on Obito's right side of the face )
BZ : It's usele-
SFX : THUD!!
( Three cross panels showing distorted face of Obito/BZ when the kick makes contact )
BZ : ( while getting kicked ) ...how?
GAI : ( shocked ) ?!!
OBITO : Gyahhh!! [ Nice one... my friend! ]
( Two panels are shown, one for Gai, for his kick, and the other for Kakashi, with MS active )
( a smile appears on Obito's face )
KAKASHI : [ It worked ]
( Kakashi falls on his knees )
( remembers the move when he attempted to Kamui Gedo Mazo's head but Obito's counter kamui stops it )
SFX : SPAT!!
( As Obito falls in pain, Black Zetsu falls on the ground and spreads as a fluid all over the ground )
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( Gai lands on the ground )
( Gai dashes towards Obito )
( Kakashi on his knees )
( Obito lying on the ground, blood coming out from his mouth, and his face is swollen )
( The ground near Obito covered by black fluid )
( A hope still burning... Will Madara crush this as well? )
KARIN : ( crying ) Sa.. Sasuke is.. Sasuke is really going to... Will really....
SAKURA : ( eyes fill with tears ) At this rate... Naruto will...
( Naruto and Sasuke are shown at the doors of afterlife )
SAKURA/KARIN : DIE-
SFX : DRIP!! SSSSFSFSSSFSS!!
( Sakura's tears falls from her eyes )
( They are about to fall on Naruto's face but are blown away by the wind as they are moving at high speed )
SFX : CLASH!!!
( Minato is shown in mid air, above Black Zetsu )
( Black Zetsu blocks Minato's kunai by a black rod emerged from Obito's right arm )
( The ground is covered by Mokuton spikes everywhere around them )
SFX : RETURN...
( Wood branch returns back to Obito's body which was rooted into the ground from his leg )
( Kakashi, knelt on the ground around the wood spikes, is shown breathing heavily )
KAKASHI : ( panting ) [ This is Obito's Mokuton ninjutsu... ]
SFX : TREMBLE!!
BZ : ( body trembling while blocking Minato's kunai ) You're quite a troublesome guy, Yondaime Hokage.
MINATO : ( serious ) .....
OBITO : St...op it!!
BZ : ( moves the rinnegan eye towards Obito's right part ) You were a fool from the start.
SFX : GROW!!
( chakra arm emerges out of Minato's back and grows in size )
BZ : ( turns his head quickly ) I- ?!!
SFX : FUUU!!!
( Minato is about to slam the chakra arm on Obito )
OBITO : ( twitches his MS eye ) ....
SFX : SWISH!! TURN!!
( Chakra arm changes path and moves from one side to grab Obito )
SFX : SLIDE!!
( Obito's leg moves a little back )
SFX : DASH!!
( Obito dashes through the chakra arm and leaps towards falling Minato )
BZ : [ You could have won your battle against your sensei if you have used your Mokuton abilities. ]
SFX : STRETCH!!
( Obito's right hand aims at Minato )
MINATO : ( moves his eye to dashing Obito on his right ) ....
SFX : SHOOT!!!
( A wooden branch is shot at Minato )
SFX : THUD!!!
( The branch is pierced into Minato's handicapped arm and partly emerges out from Minato's back )
MINATO : ?!!
( Minato is thrown in the direction of the wooden branch )
BZ : [ You cannot escape from this with your shunshin. ]
( A shadowy image of Minato is shown, the wood is shown pierced into his body, and a black rod is shown inside the wood )
( Obito holds a seal )
SFX : KRAAAHH
BZ : [ Mokuton Sashiki no Jutsu!! ]
( The jutsu activates when Minato is being thrown )
( Kyuubi chakra mode gets switched off )
MINATO : [ I can't... build up my chakra.. ]
BZ : Another half of Kyuubi's chakra has been captured. It's time for me to take your rinnegan.
SFX : BARK!!! BARK!! CHIRPPPP!!!!
( A lightning hound comes out running and is connected to Kakashi's raikiri )
SFX : LEAP!!
( The hound leaps )
BZ : ....
SFX : BARK!!!! CHIRP!!!!!! PIERCE!!!!
( Three cross panels shows the hound piercing through Minato from different perspectives )
MINATO : ?!!
BZ : [ He attacked him?!! ... to destroy those rods... Damn. ]
( Kakashi shakes his arm )
( The hound approaches BZ )
SFX : THROW!!
( A black rod is shot at the hound, dispersing it )
( Minato falls on the ground and is regenreating )
KAKASHI : [ Damn it... He's far away ]
BZ : ( moves his hand to gouge out the rinnegan ) It's over.
OBITO : ( widened his eye ) ....
( The fingers moves close to the rinnegan )
GAI : Leaf Hurricane Kick!!!
( Gai lands a high speed kick on Obito )
BZ : ?!!
GAI : ....
BZ : .....
( The kick passes through Obito's head )
GAI : ?!!
( Gai lands at a close distance from Obito )
( Kakashi stands near Gai )
KAKASHI : You're a life saver. Gai.
GAI : He's controlling Obito.
KAKASHI : He calls himself as Madara's Will. He's after the Rinnegan. Don't underestimate him.
BZ : ( holding his hand close to the eye ) ....
GAI : .....
BZ : As I said....
KAKASHI/GAI : ?!!
BZ : ( moves his hand close to the rinnegan eye ) It's over.
( Kakashi and Gai blitzes to Obito )
( The fingers moves over the rinnegan eye )
( Gai's speed increases within that small distance )
( Kakashi is shown shocked )
( Gai raises his leg to kick on the face )
BZ : I'll gouge out the rinnegan...
( Gai's leaps towards Obito and his kick makes contact but passes through Obito's head and hand )
BZ : ...in the another dimension.
( Obito's head and fingers are shown in the Kamui dimension )
GAI : ?!!
( Gai is in mid air with a shocked face )
OBITO : ?!!
( An evil smile on BZ's face )
( Gai turns in the mid air and attempts a side kick on the face from back on Obito's right side of the face )
BZ : It's usele-
SFX : THUD!!
( Three cross panels showing distorted face of Obito/BZ when the kick makes contact )
BZ : ( while getting kicked ) ...how?
GAI : ( shocked ) ?!!
OBITO : Gyahhh!! [ Nice one... my friend! ]
( Two panels are shown, one for Gai, for his kick, and the other for Kakashi, with MS active )
( a smile appears on Obito's face )
KAKASHI : [ It worked ]
( Kakashi falls on his knees )
( remembers the move when he attempted to Kamui Gedo Mazo's head but Obito's counter kamui stops it )
SFX : SPAT!!
( As Obito falls in pain, Black Zetsu falls on the ground and spreads as a fluid all over the ground )
( LAST PAGE )
( Gai lands on the ground )
( Gai dashes towards Obito )
( Kakashi on his knees )
( Obito lying on the ground, blood coming out from his mouth, and his face is swollen )
( The ground near Obito covered by black fluid )
( A hope still burning... Will Madara crush this as well? )
